Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2N7TYNSAV4EPBKRVK1RVK

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.007366
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Then the second. By the time the third turned, Rory had already decided she was going to pretend she hadn't looked through the peephole, hadn't stood there for five full seconds with her hand on the chain, hadn't felt her stomach drop through the floorboards. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, backlit by the stuttering fluorescent tube the landlord still hadn't fixed. His charcoal suit was immaculate, as always, the cut sharp enough to draw blood. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light. One amber eye, one black, and both of them fixed on her face with the kind of attention that made her feel like she'd been stripped down to bone. "You moved," he said. "I didn't move. I'm staying at a friend's." "For three weeks." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, sniffing at the threshold with territorial suspicion. The smell of curry drifted up through the floorboards, warm and heavy with cumin. Somewhere on Brick Lane, a bass line thumped from a passing car. "Did you come all the way here to track my address, or is there an actual reason you're standing in my friend's hallway at—" She checked the clock on her phone. "Eleven forty-two at night." Lucien tilted his head. That slight movement, that almost imperceptible shift of weight. She'd spent too much time learning to read the small language of him. The way his gloved hand tightened on the cane meant he was choosing his words. The way his jaw sat, relaxed but set, meant he'd already chosen them and wasn't happy with what he'd found. "I came to apologize." That stopped her. Rory leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, and waited. She'd learned that too—the silence that made him fill it. He didn't fill it. Not right away. His gaze moved past her into the flat, taking in the towers of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls, the research notes layered like sediment across every available surface. Eva's life, chaotic and earnest and worn at the edges. "May I come in?" "No." Something flickered across his face. Not hurt—Lucien Moreau didn't do hurt, not visibly—but a shift in the architecture behind his eyes. The demon part, maybe. The half of him that came from Avaros and felt things in frequencies she couldn't access. "Then I'll say it here." He set the cane against the wall with deliberate care. When he straightened, he was closer than she'd expected, close enough that she could smell him—sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't have a name in English. "I was wrong." Rory held her ground. Her left wrist throbbed, the old crescent scar aching the way it always did when her pulse kicked up. Childhood accident, her mother called it. She'd stopped believing that years ago, stopped believing a lot of things she used to take for granted, but the scar still behaved like a barometer for trouble. "Which part? The part where you used me to get to the Cambion, or the part where you let me think—" She stopped herself. Bit down on the sentence and swallowed it whole. "Let you think what?" His voice was quiet. Too quiet. "Doesn't matter." "It matters to me." There it was. The thing she couldn't outrun, couldn't reason away, couldn't file under bad decisions and move past. The way he said things like that, like she mattered, like the opinion of a twenty-five-year-old delivery driver who'd fled Cardiff with a duffel bag and twelve pounds in her bank account could possibly matter to a creature who'd walked through both worlds since before she was born. Ptolemy butted his head against Lucien's ankle. Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression that might have been surprise. The cat looked back with an expression that was definitely challenge. "You're kidding," Rory said. "Your friend's cat appears to be claiming me." "Ptolemy claims everyone. It doesn't mean anything." "Unlike some claims." He met her eyes again. "Unlike mine." She should close the door. She should tell him to go back to whatever supernatural fixer hole he'd crawled out of and leave her alone. She should remember the way it felt to find out she'd been a means to an end, a convenient entry point into a world she hadn't known existed six months ago. Instead she said, "Why now?" Lucien picked up his cane. Turned it slowly in his gloved hand, the ivory catching light like old bone. "Because you've been avoiding me. Because Silas told me you moved out of the flat above his bar and wouldn't say where you'd gone. Because I've been standing outside this building for forty minutes trying to find the right words and I'm apparently not going to find them, so I'm going to have to use the wrong ones and hope you're patient enough to wait for the right ones to follow." "That's a lot of because." "I've had forty minutes to think of them." The fluorescent tube flickered again. Downstairs, someone laughed in the curry house, the sound muffled and warm and belonging to a world that had nothing to do with the one pressed against her doorframe. Rory looked at him—really looked, the way she hadn't let herself since the night everything fell apart. The sharp lines of his face. The platinum hair he kept slicked back like armor. The mismatched eyes that saw too much and revealed too little. He was tired. She could see it now, in the set of his shoulders, in the faint shadows beneath both eyes. Lucien Moreau, who controlled information the way other people controlled air, who moved through London's supernatural underworld like a shark through still water, looked like he hadn't slept in days. "Eva's not here," she said. "She's at some conference in Edinburgh. I'm just watching the cat." "I know where Eva is. I came to find you." The words landed somewhere between her ribs and stayed there, warm and sharp. She hated that. Hated the way he could still do that, could still reach past every defense she'd built and press against the soft parts she couldn't seem to harden. "Rory." He said her name like it cost him something. "I didn't use you. I should have told you what I suspected about the Cambion from the start. I should have explained why I needed someone who could think the way you think—laterally, unpredictably, in ways that things from other realms don't anticipate. But I didn't use you. I chose you. There's a difference, and I was too arrogant to think I needed to explain it." She stared at him. Ptolemy purred against Lucien's leg, a traitor to the cause. "You're really bad at this," she said. "At what?" "At whatever this is. Apologizing. Explaining. Being a person instead of a—" She gestured at him generally. "Whatever you are when you're not standing outside someone's flat at midnight looking like you haven't eaten in two days." His mouth twitched. Almost a smile. "I had a sandwich." "Convincing." "I'm out of practice." He stepped closer, and this time she didn't move back. The doorframe was behind her and he was in front of her and the hallway was narrow and she could feel the warmth of him through the careful distance he was maintaining. "I don't usually need to explain myself. People take what I give them and don't ask for more. You're the only person who's ever—" He stopped. His jaw worked. "Ever what?" "Made me want to give more." The curry smell curled up around them. Brick Lane hummed with its late-night energy, taxis and shouting and the distant pulse of music from a pub three doors down. Rory's wrist ached. Her heart ached worse. "If you're lying to me again," she said, "I'll find a way to make you regret it. I don't care what realm you're from." "I know." He said it simply, without bravado. Like he believed it. Like the possibility of her retaliation was something he carried with him willingly. "I'm not lying." She reached past him and pulled the door open wider. Stood aside. "If Eva's books get damaged, she'll kill us both. She's got wards on half of them." Lucien picked up his cane and stepped over the threshold, and Ptolemy wound between his legs like a small furry herald, and Rory closed the three deadbolts behind them with a sound like resolution.
created_at"2026-03-15T15:43:25.853Z" 3/15/2026, 3:43:25 PM
model"z-ai/glm-5-turbo-20260315"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency2095
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time25714
tokens_prompt808
tokens_completion2387
native_tokens_prompt759
native_tokens_completion2075
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning234
native_tokens_cached4
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.007365568
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"9ce3b132-3a17-4fea-8092-0e8e519ed32b"
id"20260315234326bade8d3beb9b41dc"
is_byokfalse
latency2095
model_permaslug"z-ai/glm-5-turbo-20260315"
provider_name"Z.AI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1773589405-jZG7gwgINJKvmSxn6NoP"
upstream_id"20260315234326bade8d3beb9b41dc"
total_cost0.007365568
cache_discount0.00000384
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Z.AI"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"chaotic"
4"flickered"
5"throbbed"
6"pulse"
7"could feel"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1006
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Moreau3
Ptolemy4
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien9
Avaros1
English1
Bit1
Cardiff1
London1
Like2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Avaros"
3"English"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"t do hurt, not visibly—but a shift in the"
1"looked like he hadn't slept in days"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"believing that years"
1"like that, like"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean26.24
std24.54
cv0.935
sampleLengths
054
15
270
34
48
53
638
735
861
94
1022
1147
124
131
1441
1545
1657
1733
1810
192
204
2167
2232
234
248
257
2610
2756
285
2990
305
318
3277
3351
3416
3510
3643
3776
3814
397
402
4137
4210
431
4470
455
462
476
4836
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"been stripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was choosing"
1"was maintaining"
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"She'd learned that too—the silence that made him fill it."
1"Not hurt—Lucien Moreau didn't do hurt, not visibly—but a shift in the architecture behind his eyes."
2"When he straightened, he was closer than she'd expected, close enough that she could smell him—sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't have a name in English."
3"Rory looked at him—really looked, the way she hadn't let herself since the night everything fell apart."
96.21% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1015
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04433497536945813
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007881773399014778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.32
std12.08
cv0.981
sampleLengths
09
13
242
35
418
514
69
729
84
98
103
1112
1214
1312
1431
154
164
179
1813
1915
2020
214
223
239
2410
254
263
2730
2810
294
301
315
3216
334
3416
3515
3627
373
384
3919
406
4128
4224
439
448
452
462
474
483
4916
62.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4260869565217391
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Somewhere on Brick Lane, a"
2"Instead she said,"
3"Almost a smile."
ratio0.05
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences80
matches
0"She pulled the door open."
1"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
2"She checked the clock on"
3"She'd spent too much time"
4"She'd learned that too—the silence"
5"He didn't fill it."
6"His gaze moved past her"
7"He set the cane against"
8"Her left wrist throbbed, the"
9"She'd stopped believing that years"
10"She stopped herself"
11"His voice was quiet"
12"He met her eyes again"
13"She should close the door."
14"She should tell him to"
15"She should remember the way"
16"He was tired."
17"She could see it now,"
18"She hated that."
19"He said her name like"
ratio0.35
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences80
matches
0"The first deadbolt slid back"
1"She pulled the door open."
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
6"The smell of curry drifted"
7"She checked the clock on"
8"Lucien tilted his head."
9"That slight movement, that almost"
10"She'd spent too much time"
11"The way his gloved hand"
12"The way his jaw sat,"
13"That stopped her."
14"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
15"She'd learned that too—the silence"
16"He didn't fill it."
17"His gaze moved past her"
18"Eva's life, chaotic and earnest"
19"Something flickered across his face."
ratio0.813
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"By the time the third"
ratio0.013
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"When he straightened, he was closer than she'd expected, close enough that she could smell him—sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't have a nam…"
1"The way he said things like that, like she mattered, like the opinion of a twenty-five-year-old delivery driver who'd fled Cardiff with a duffel bag and twelve …"
2"Downstairs, someone laughed in the curry house, the sound muffled and warm and belonging to a world that had nothing to do with the one pressed against her door…"
3"Lucien Moreau, who controlled information the way other people controlled air, who moved through London's supernatural underworld like a shark through still wat…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.0797%