Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2PGP63YQ3SNV7Z46QT1S4

Run Details

Duration:
29.0s
Cost:
$0.006344
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant warmed against her collarbone the moment Rory stepped past the standing stones. She paused, one hand rising to touch the crimson gem. The faint inner glow cast red shadows across her fingers. That wasn't right. It had only ever pulsed near Hel portals, and she hadn't come to Richmond Park looking for one of those. The wildflowers caught her attention next. Daisies and bluebells and things she couldn't name, all blooming in neat clusters despite the November chill. The moonlight made them look silver-washed, almost metallic. Beautiful, in the way that things in dreams were beautiful before they turned. "Yu-Fei said the delivery address would be past the oaks." She said it aloud because the silence in this clearing pressed against her ears like water. "Past the oaks. Right." There were no oaks. Just the standing stones, each one twice her height and carved with symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them. Beyond the clearing, the park's trees had vanished. In their place stretched an expanse of tall grass that rippled without wind. Rory checked her phone. No signal. The time read 11:47 PM, but the digits hadn't changed since she'd entered the grove five minutes ago. Or what felt like five minutes. The pendant's warmth spread, crawling up her neck like a hand. She turned back toward the standing stones. They looked the same from this side. Same height, same carvings, same moss clinging to their bases in patterns that resembled faces. One of those faces had its mouth open. She was certain it hadn't been open before. "Right. Okay." Rory stuffed her phone in her jacket pocket and pulled out the delivery receipt instead. The address printed there made no sense—just a symbol she didn't recognise, repeated three times. Yu-Fei had given her this job specifically. Had said the customer was an old friend who preferred discretion. The grass behind her rustled. Rory spun. Nothing there. Just the silver flowers and the impossible grassland stretching into darkness. But the rustling came again, closer this time, and it sounded like footsteps. Heavy. Deliberate. The kind of sound someone made when they wanted to be heard. "Who's there?" The footsteps stopped. A laugh drifted across the clearing, high and thin. It could have been a bird or a fox or the wind through branches that no longer existed. Could have been. Wasn't. Rory's hand found the pendant again. The stone burned now, hot enough that she should have felt pain, but the heat didn't register as discomfort. It felt like a warning. Like the gem was trying to tell her something she didn't want to hear. The wildflowers near her left foot began to close their petals. One by one, folding inward like dying insects. The closing spread outward in a wave, petals shutting all across the clearing, until only the silver ones near the standing stones remained open. "What do you want?" This time the laugh came from directly behind her ear. Close enough that she felt breath against her neck, cold and carrying the scent of turned earth and something sweeter underneath. Rot, maybe. Or flowers decomposing. Rory didn't turn. Turning would mean acknowledging whatever stood there, and she had spent two years learning not to acknowledge the things that haunted the edges of her vision. Evan had taught her that much, at least—how to make herself small, how to pretend she hadn't seen. But this wasn't Evan. This was worse. The pendant flared bright enough to cast her shadow long across the grass. In that light, she saw a second shadow join hers. Taller. Wrong-shaped, with too many angles where a body should have curves. It moved when she moved but not quite in sync, like a reflection in disturbed water. "I'm not here for you." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "I'm making a delivery. That's all." The shadow stretched longer. Its head tilted at an angle that would have snapped a human spine. Something brushed against her wrist—the scar there, the small crescent from when she'd fallen through a greenhouse door at age seven. The touch felt deliberate. Felt like recognition. The wildflowers behind the standing stones began to bleed. Not red—something darker, thicker, pooling between the silver petals and spreading across the grass toward her feet. Rory backed away. Her heel caught on something and she stumbled, catching herself before she fell. The ground where her foot had been rose upward, a mound of earth pushing up like something burrowing toward the surface. It stopped inches from breaking through. "Yu-Fei sent me." She didn't know why she said it. Didn't know if it was true anymore, if this job had ever been real, if the receipt in her hand meant anything at all. "If you know her—" The second shadow vanished. The silence that replaced it was worse. The kind of silence that had weight, that pressed down on her shoulders and made her lungs work harder to expand. Even her own heartbeat sounded muffled, distant, like it belonged to someone else. The pendant's glow died. In the darkness, the standing stones began to move. Slowly, grinding against each other with a sound like bones breaking. They shifted in a circle, narrowing the clearing's edge, closing in. The symbols carved into their surfaces pulsed with faint bioluminescence, forming patterns that Rory's eyes refused to focus on. Her back hit stone. She hadn't realised she'd been walking backward. The face she'd seen earlier—the one with the open mouth—was directly in front of her now. Up close, she could see that the mouth wasn't just open. It was growing. Stretching wider, the stone softening and parting like wet clay, revealing darkness behind it that wasn't the colour of absence but of something else entirely. The breath came again, cold against her face this time. The sweet-rot smell filled her nose, her throat, her lungs. And then, from somewhere deep in that stone mouth, a voice. Not words exactly—more like the memory of words, the shape language made before meaning attached itself. It knew her name. Not Rory. Not Aurora. The other one. The one she'd buried when she left Cardiff, the one that Evan had carved into her with his hands and his rules and his endless patient corrections. The stone mouth opened wider. Rory pressed her palm flat against it, felt the stone give beneath her fingers like flesh, and screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"chill"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"footsteps"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
72.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1075
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1035
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Hel1
Richmond1
Park1
November1
Evan3
Didn1
Aurora1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"November"
2"Evan"
places
0"Hel"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them"
1"felt like five minutes"
2"sounded like footsteps"
3"not quite in sync, like a reflection in disturbed water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1075
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"see that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean26.88
std17.2
cv0.64
sampleLengths
014
143
244
330
449
530
611
745
850
95
1042
112
123
1331
1444
1543
164
1736
1847
197
2051
2119
2217
2328
2426
2543
2638
274
2841
294
3050
3111
3255
3320
3427
354
364
3730
385
3918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences107
ratio0.056
matches
0"The address printed there made no sense—just a symbol she didn't recognise, repeated three times."
1"Evan had taught her that much, at least—how to make herself small, how to pretend she hadn't seen."
2"Something brushed against her wrist—the scar there, the small crescent from when she'd fallen through a greenhouse door at age seven."
3"Not red—something darker, thicker, pooling between the silver petals and spreading across the grass toward her feet."
4"The face she'd seen earlier—the one with the open mouth—was directly in front of her now."
5"Not words exactly—more like the memory of words, the shape language made before meaning attached itself."
95.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1046
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.044933078393881457
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008604206500956023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.05
std6.8
cv0.677
sampleLengths
014
110
210
33
420
56
617
78
813
926
104
114
1224
138
1413
154
162
1718
186
1911
207
217
2215
238
248
2517
2615
277
2811
295
302
312
3211
3313
341
351
3612
372
383
399
4018
413
421
436
4419
455
4614
4711
488
4924
71.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4672897196261682
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"Just the standing stones, each"
1"Just the silver flowers and"
2"Even her own heartbeat sounded"
3"Slowly, grinding against each other"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences92
matches
0"She paused, one hand rising"
1"It had only ever pulsed"
2"She said it aloud because"
3"She turned back toward the"
4"They looked the same from"
5"She was certain it hadn't"
6"It could have been a"
7"It felt like a warning."
8"It moved when she moved"
9"Her voice came out steadier"
10"Its head tilted at an"
11"Her heel caught on something"
12"It stopped inches from breaking"
13"She didn't know why she"
14"They shifted in a circle,"
15"Her back hit stone."
16"She hadn't realised she'd been"
17"It was growing."
18"It knew her name."
ratio0.207
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences92
matches
0"The pendant warmed against her"
1"She paused, one hand rising"
2"The faint inner glow cast"
3"That wasn't right."
4"It had only ever pulsed"
5"The wildflowers caught her attention"
6"Daisies and bluebells and things"
7"The moonlight made them look"
8"She said it aloud because"
9"Rory checked her phone."
10"The time read 11:47 PM,"
11"The pendant's warmth spread, crawling"
12"She turned back toward the"
13"They looked the same from"
14"She was certain it hadn't"
15"Rory stuffed her phone in"
16"The address printed there made"
17"Yu-Fei had given her this"
18"The grass behind her rustled."
19"The kind of sound someone"
ratio0.685
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Same height, same carvings, same moss clinging to their bases in patterns that resembled faces."
1"They shifted in a circle, narrowing the clearing's edge, closing in."
2"Stretching wider, the stone softening and parting like wet clay, revealing darkness behind it that wasn't the colour of absence but of something else entirely."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5096%