| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1082 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1082 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1075 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Hel | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Didn | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hel" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them" | | 1 | "felt like five minutes" | | 2 | "sounded like footsteps" | | 3 | "not quite in sync, like a reflection in disturbed water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1075 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 26.88 | | std | 17.2 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "The address printed there made no sense—just a symbol she didn't recognise, repeated three times." | | 1 | "Evan had taught her that much, at least—how to make herself small, how to pretend she hadn't seen." | | 2 | "Something brushed against her wrist—the scar there, the small crescent from when she'd fallen through a greenhouse door at age seven." | | 3 | "Not red—something darker, thicker, pooling between the silver petals and spreading across the grass toward her feet." | | 4 | "The face she'd seen earlier—the one with the open mouth—was directly in front of her now." | | 5 | "Not words exactly—more like the memory of words, the shape language made before meaning attached itself." |
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| 95.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1046 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.044933078393881457 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008604206500956023 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 10.05 | | std | 6.8 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 71.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4672897196261682 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the standing stones, each" | | 1 | "Just the silver flowers and" | | 2 | "Even her own heartbeat sounded" | | 3 | "Slowly, grinding against each other" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, one hand rising" | | 1 | "It had only ever pulsed" | | 2 | "She said it aloud because" | | 3 | "She turned back toward the" | | 4 | "They looked the same from" | | 5 | "She was certain it hadn't" | | 6 | "It could have been a" | | 7 | "It felt like a warning." | | 8 | "It moved when she moved" | | 9 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 10 | "Its head tilted at an" | | 11 | "Her heel caught on something" | | 12 | "It stopped inches from breaking" | | 13 | "She didn't know why she" | | 14 | "They shifted in a circle," | | 15 | "Her back hit stone." | | 16 | "She hadn't realised she'd been" | | 17 | "It was growing." | | 18 | "It knew her name." |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant warmed against her" | | 1 | "She paused, one hand rising" | | 2 | "The faint inner glow cast" | | 3 | "That wasn't right." | | 4 | "It had only ever pulsed" | | 5 | "The wildflowers caught her attention" | | 6 | "Daisies and bluebells and things" | | 7 | "The moonlight made them look" | | 8 | "She said it aloud because" | | 9 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 10 | "The time read 11:47 PM," | | 11 | "The pendant's warmth spread, crawling" | | 12 | "She turned back toward the" | | 13 | "They looked the same from" | | 14 | "She was certain it hadn't" | | 15 | "Rory stuffed her phone in" | | 16 | "The address printed there made" | | 17 | "Yu-Fei had given her this" | | 18 | "The grass behind her rustled." | | 19 | "The kind of sound someone" |
| | ratio | 0.685 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Same height, same carvings, same moss clinging to their bases in patterns that resembled faces." | | 1 | "They shifted in a circle, narrowing the clearing's edge, closing in." | | 2 | "Stretching wider, the stone softening and parting like wet clay, revealing darkness behind it that wasn't the colour of absence but of something else entirely." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |