| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde smiled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.457 | | leniency | 0.914 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 92.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1385 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1385 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1104 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Veil | 2 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.549 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach her eyes" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from the shadows beneath the stones rather than from any mouth Rory could see" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.73 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | | 0 | "not its usual faint warmth but something steadier, more insistent, like a second heartbeat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 33.41 | | std | 22.03 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 69 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 73 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "being stretched" | | 1 | "being seen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "was beating" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora had walked through Richmond Park a hundred times—cut through it on deliveries, taken shortcuts after late shifts at the bar—but she had never found this place." | | 1 | "Their silence felt different than usual—less like choosing not to speak and more like listening to something Rory couldn't hear." | | 2 | "One moment they were just more trees, more shadows, more variations of grey and green—and then they were there." | | 3 | "Not like heat off pavement—this was cooler, almost liquid, a faint distortion that rippled like the surface of a pond disturbed by rain." | | 4 | "The stone pulsed against her palm—not its usual faint warmth but something steadier, more insistent, like a second heartbeat." | | 5 | "\"It was not meant to be.\" Isolde's mouth curved—a smile that didn't quite reach her eyes." | | 6 | "The Half-Fae's expression flickered—something old and tired moving behind those ageless features." | | 7 | "The air tasted different here—cleaner but thicker, carrying notes of something she couldn't name." | | 8 | "She thought about that now, briefly, the way she sometimes thought about a scar that no longer hurt—acknowledging it was there without letting it mean anything." | | 9 | "Nyx went next, and their passage was stranger—they didn't so much step through as pour through, their shadow-form flattening and sliding between the ripples of the boundary with an ease that made Rory's skin prickle." | | 10 | "The pendant flared warm against her chest—hot, almost, but not painful—as she crossed the threshold." | | 11 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors Rory didn't have names for—not quite blue, not quite purple, something in between that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 12 | "Now, in this place, it felt different—colder than usual, almost biting through the leather of the sheath." |
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| 91.63% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1124 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange sweet-thick air" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.042704626334519574 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011565836298932384 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 14.57 | | std | 9.43 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 70.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.46808510638297873 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it was her turn." | | 1 | "Then she was through, and" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "They hadn't spoken since they'd" | | 1 | "Their silence felt different than" | | 2 | "She'd heard Isolde and Nyx" | | 3 | "Her hand drifted to her" | | 4 | "they said, their voice a" | | 5 | "Her heart was beating too" | | 6 | "She could feel it in" | | 7 | "She thought about that now," | | 8 | "She left no footprints on" | | 9 | "They reformed on the other" | | 10 | "she paused, turning that lavender" | | 11 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "She saw a stream that" | | 13 | "She saw a patch of" | | 14 | "She looked at Isolde." | | 15 | "She felt the pendant's warmth" | | 16 | "She tilted her head, that" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks rose like" | | 1 | "Aurora had walked through Richmond" | | 2 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 3 | "The realization settled into Rory's" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying" | | 5 | "Nyx moved at her shoulder," | | 6 | "They hadn't spoken since they'd" | | 7 | "Their silence felt different than" | | 8 | "The standing stones appeared gradually," | | 9 | "The air inside that circle" | | 10 | "She'd heard Isolde and Nyx" | | 11 | "Her hand drifted to her" | | 12 | "The stone pulsed against her" | | 13 | "Isolde said, turning to face" | | 14 | "Those pale lavender eyes caught" | | 15 | "Isolde's mouth curved—a smile that" | | 16 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 17 | "they said, their voice a" | | 18 | "Rory looked at her." | | 19 | "The Half-Fae's expression flickered—something old" |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, in this place, it" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx moved at her shoulder, their form less solid here, edges bleeding into the dappled shadows that fell between the trees." | | 1 | "Seven massive oaks, their trunks carved deep with symbols that hurt to look at directly, arranged in a loose circle around a clearing that shouldn't exist." | | 2 | "Not like heat off pavement—this was cooler, almost liquid, a faint distortion that rippled like the surface of a pond disturbed by rain." | | 3 | "Nyx went next, and their passage was stranger—they didn't so much step through as pour through, their shadow-form flattening and sliding between the ripples of …" | | 4 | "She saw a patch of mushrooms that glowed faintly blue and, when she crouched to examine them, watched them dim as if shy." |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, turning to face her" | | 1 | "Isolde called back, not turning around" | | 2 | "She tilted, that ageless face unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde called back (call back)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |