| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said mildly [mildly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.903 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 91.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "amiss" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "cascading" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 61.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1227 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 917 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Rory | 13 | | Isolde | 11 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Courts | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Courts" |
| | globalScore | 0.791 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "others that seemed to rotate slowly though no wind stirred them" | | 1 | "left — nothing obviously amiss, but somethin" | | 2 | "shapes that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 3 | "looked like captured light in different c" | | 4 | "something like reverence crept into her ridd" | | 5 | "looked like a wound fresh bled" |
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| 37.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.63 | | wordCount | 1227 | | matches | | 0 | "not pistils but something" | | 1 | "not physically, but temporally, as if the seer was looking at all the versions o" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.16 | | std | 22.22 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 83 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 73 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 28 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "been moved" | | 1 | "was — opened" | | 2 | "being seen" | | 3 | "being planted" |
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| 75.78% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "was never reassuring" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" | | 2 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Not shifted, not changed — folded, like someone had taken reality itself and creased it carelessly." | | 1 | "The air tasted of honey and something sharper underneath — ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang before a storm." | | 2 | "Like standing in a room where all the furniture had been moved two inches to the left — nothing obviously amiss, but something fundamental off-kilter." | | 3 | "The flowers changed as they walked — the familiar ones falling away until only the alien blossoms remained, petals in colors she couldn't name, shapes that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 4 | "The grove — or the between-place, or whatever this was — opened ahead into a clearing." | | 5 | "The trunk split into three main branches near the top, and from those branches hung fruit — if you could call them that." | | 6 | "Isolde turned those pale lavender eyes on her, and Rory had the uncomfortable sensation of being seen through — not physically, but temporally, as if the seer was looking at all the versions of her that had ever existed simultaneously." | | 7 | "The glow had intensified, the crimson light painting her palm, her wrist, catching on the small crescent scar there — a childhood accident, nothing more, but in this light it looked like a wound fresh bled." | | 8 | "One of the dark-red spheres swayed gently, and inside it, something that might have been light — or might have been something else entirely — pulsed once, twice, in rhythm with the Heartstone against Rory's chest." |
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| 89.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 913 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.05257393209200438 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018619934282584884 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.1 | | std | 10.31 | | cv | 0.731 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 78.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4942528735632184 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that impossible luminance pooling" | | 1 | "Just smooth passage, as if" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair caught light" | | 1 | "She sucked in a breath." | | 2 | "she heard herself whisper" | | 3 | "Their voice came from everywhere" | | 4 | "They had gone incorporeal at" | | 5 | "She looked up." | | 6 | "It was a ceiling of" | | 7 | "She stood untouched among the" | | 8 | "She left no footprints in" | | 9 | "She quickened her pace." | | 10 | "Its bark was silver-white, luminous" | | 11 | "They were translucent spheres, each" | | 12 | "She'd tucked it into her" | | 13 | "she asked, though part of" | | 14 | "She tilted her head, silver" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 66.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Aurora hesitated at the threshold," | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant had been" | | 3 | "Her silver hair caught light" | | 4 | "Rory stepped through." | | 5 | "The world folded." | | 6 | "The next, silence pressed against" | | 7 | "She sucked in a breath." | | 8 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 9 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 10 | "she heard herself whisper" | | 11 | "Their voice came from everywhere" | | 12 | "They had gone incorporeal at" | | 13 | "Rory could feel it." | | 14 | "She looked up." | | 15 | "The sky wasn't a sky." | | 16 | "It was a ceiling of" | | 17 | "She stood untouched among the" | | 18 | "Isolde smiled, which was never" | | 19 | "Nyx solidified beside a tree" |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion: bluebells alongside snowdrops alongside flowers she had no names for, blossoms that spiraled like nauti…" | | 1 | "They had gone incorporeal at the boundary, spreading through the shadows that gathered beneath the strange flowers." | | 2 | "She stood untouched among the flowers, her pale lavender eyes reflecting colors that weren't there." | | 3 | "Nyx solidified beside a tree that grew at an angle physics shouldn't allow, its trunk curving in a slow spiral toward that branch-ceiling." | | 4 | "One flower opened as she passed, revealing not pistils but something that looked uncomfortably like a small dark eye." | | 5 | "Isolde turned those pale lavender eyes on her, and Rory had the uncomfortable sensation of being seen through — not physically, but temporally, as if the seer w…" | | 6 | "The glow had intensified, the crimson light painting her palm, her wrist, catching on the small crescent scar there — a childhood accident, nothing more, but in…" | | 7 | "One of the dark-red spheres swayed gently, and inside it, something that might have been light — or might have been something else entirely — pulsed once, twice…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.355 | | leniency | 0.71 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.194 | |