Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2VCJRJKN78K03WS9SY2H0

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.008844
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual Tuesday quiet. Three patrons scattered across the dark wood tables, a jazz record crackling through the speakers mounted above the bottle shelf. Rory settled onto her usual stool at the far end of the bar, shoulders aching from the delivery run across Covent Garden. Silas placed a glass of tonic water with lime in front of her without a word, his left leg dragging slightly as he moved down to wipe down the taps. "Cheers." He grunted in response, the silver signet ring catching the low light as his hand worked the cloth in slow circles. The door swung open, letting in a slice of Soho evening air and a woman in a grey tailored coat. Rory's fingers tightened around the glass. The woman shook rain from her umbrella, folded it, and scanned the room with the practiced sweep of someone accustomed to finding specific people in crowded spaces. Her gaze landed on Rory. Stopped. "Megan Osei." Megan's mouth opened, then closed. She approached the bar with measured steps, her heels sharp against the worn floorboards. The last time Rory had seen her, Megan wore oversized jumpers and had ink-stained fingers from highlighting case law. Three years ago. A lifetime in Cardiff, before Evan's grip had tightened past the point of rationalisation, before Eva's panicked phone call, before the one-way train to Paddington. "You're here. In London." "Observant as ever." Rory swirled the ice in her glass. "Drink?" "Gin and tonic. Double." Silas glanced at Rory. She gave a small nod. He reached for the Bombay Sapphire without comment, poured, and slid the glass across the bar before retreating to the far end where he was restocking napkins. Not leaving. Listening. Megan perched on the stool beside her, shrugging off the coat to reveal a crisp white blouse underneath. A small gold pendant rested at her throat—something new, something expensive. "You look good." "You look like a solicitor." Megan laughed, the sound too sharp. "Barrister, actually. Called to the Bar last autumn. Family law." "Of course it is." Rory drained the rest of her tonic. The lime had gone bitter at the bottom. "Mum and Dad must be thrilled." "They flew in for the ceremony. Your mum sent her congratulations through mine. She asked about you." The jazz record skipped. Silas muttered something and moved to fix it. "I've called her. Twice this month." "Rory." "She never picks up." Rory flagged Silas for another drink, holding up two fingers. He raised an eyebrow at the second glass but poured regardless. "Dad probably tells her I've abandoned them. That I threw away everything they sacrificed." "Your dad's complicated." "My dad's a bastard who wanted a mini-him to parade through the courts." The words came out flatter than she intended. "How's Owen?" Megan's hand paused halfway to her glass. Owen. The name sat between them like a stone dropped in still water. Owen, who had held Rory's hand through first-year contracts revision. Owen, who had started dating Megan in second year. Owen, who had looked the other way when Evan grabbed Rory's arm too hard at that party in third year, because confrontation made him uncomfortable. "We broke up. Eighteen months ago." "Sorry." "Don't be. It wasn't working." Megan took a long sip of her gin. "He took a position with his uncle's firm in Bristol. I stayed in London. Different trajectories." "Different people." "Something like that." Megan set her glass down and turned on the stool to face Rory fully. The bar lights caught the angles of her face, sharper now, more defined. She'd lost the soft roundness of university, replaced it with something carved and deliberate. "I heard about Evan. Through the grapevine. From Sarah Chen, actually—she still talks to Priya occasionally." Rory's wrist itched. She rubbed the crescent scar through her sleeve without thinking. "Heard what, exactly?" "That you left. That it was..." Megan pressed her lips together. "That it was bad." "It was what it was." "I should have—" "Don't." Rory's voice cut clean through the ambient noise. "Don't do that. Don't stand here three years later and tell me what you should have done. You didn't. I didn't. We were twenty-two and stupid and I made my choices." Megan flinched. Good. The comfortable version of this conversation, the one where they both apologised in vague terms and exchanged numbers and promised to meet for coffee, wasn't going to happen. Rory wouldn't allow it. "You're right. I didn't." Megan straightened her spine, that barrister posture clicking into place. "I watched you pull away from everyone that last year. I watched you cancel plans and flinch when your phone rang and show up with explanations that didn't make sense. And I told myself it wasn't my place to push. That you'd come to me if you needed me." "And I didn't." "No. You didn't." Megan's voice dropped. "You disappeared. No forwarding address, no text, nothing. Eva told people you'd had a breakdown. Your parents told people you'd taken a gap year to find yourself. And I sat in our flat in Cardiff and stared at your empty room and wondered what I'd missed." The record started up again, something slow and mournful with a trumpet line that curled through the air like smoke. "I didn't want to be found." "I know that now. I didn't know it then." Megan pulled a compact from her handbag, checked her reflection, snapped it shut. The gesture was automatic, absent. "I'm not the same person, Rory. I don't think you are either." "Obviously not. You're a barrister. I deliver Chinese food." "There's nothing wrong with delivering Chinese food." "Didn't say there was." Rory finished her second tonic. The lime was fresh this time, sharp and clean. "It's honest work. I ride my bike across London, I hand people their dinner, I go home to my flat and I sleep. No one shouts. No one tells me I'm imagining things. No one—" She stopped. The words had come too close to the surface, too unguarded. Megan's hand moved toward Rory's arm, then pulled back. "I'm glad you got out." "Me too." "Are you? Really?" The question hung there, blunt and unvarnished. Rory looked at Megan's face—the carefully applied makeup, the controlled expression, the gold pendant that probably cost more than two months of rent—and saw the cost of all those years. The degrees and the ceremonies and the career trajectory, built on top of whatever guilt Megan had been carrying since third year. "Some days." "That's honest." "You asked." "I did." Megan finished her gin and placed the glass on the bar with a decisive click. "I have to be in court at nine tomorrow. Domestic violence case. Twenty-three-year-old woman, two children, husband with prior cautions that somehow never escalated to charges." The irony landed without either of them acknowledging it. "Good luck with that." "Rory." "What?" "I'm not asking for forgiveness. I'm not asking to be friends again. I just—" Megan stood, pulling on her grey coat, buttoning it with efficient movements. "I needed to see you. To know you were real. That you were okay." "I'm real." "Are you okay?" Rory considered the question. The bar, with its maps and photographs and green neon sign filtering through the window. Silas at the other end, pretending not to listen while his cloth moved in the same endless circles. The taste of tonic and lime, the ache in her shoulders, the scar on her wrist hidden beneath her sleeve. "I'm getting there." Megan nodded once, the gesture precise and final. She left a twenty-pound note on the bar and walked out into the Soho evening without looking back. The door swung shut behind her, cutting off the sound of rain and traffic. Silas limped over, collected the note, and started clearing the empty glasses. "Friend of yours?" "Used to be." He made a non-committal sound and reached for the gin bottle, topping up the dregs left in Megan's glass before pouring it down the sink. Waste not, want not. "You know," he said, still not looking at her, "people come in here sometimes looking for someone they used to know. They sit on that same stool, order that same drink, and convince themselves that one conversation can bridge three years of silence." "Did it work? For them?" "Never seen it happen yet." He finally met her eyes, his hazel gaze steady. "Doesn't mean they stop trying."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
1"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"measured"
2"eyebrow"
3"comfortable"
4"efficient"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1409
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount874
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Megan"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Megan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Covent1
Garden1
Soho2
Rory18
Megan20
Cardiff1
Evan2
Eva1
Paddington1
Silas6
Bombay1
Sapphire1
Owen4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Megan"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
7"Owen"
places
0"Covent"
1"Garden"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
4"Paddington"
globalScore0.356
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1409
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean19.85
std19.92
cv1.004
sampleLengths
051
130
21
321
453
56
62
766
84
911
104
1139
1229
133
145
1516
1625
1717
1812
196
201
2139
223
2323
2464
256
261
2729
282
2960
3016
3115
325
333
3440
3535
3663
373
3852
3920
406
4139
429
437
4453
4513
4614
472
483
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
98.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences128
ratio0.016
matches
0"A small gold pendant rested at her throat—something new, something expensive."
1"Rory looked at Megan's face—the carefully applied makeup, the controlled expression, the gold pendant that probably cost more than two months of rent—and saw the cost of all those years."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount882
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02040816326530612
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005668934240362812
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.01
std9.8
cv0.89
sampleLengths
09
120
222
330
41
521
620
76
827
95
101
112
125
1314
1419
153
1625
174
1810
191
204
214
225
2327
242
251
2618
2711
283
295
306
3110
3211
338
346
3517
364
378
386
391
4014
4111
4214
433
4421
452
467
471
4812
4910
58.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3984375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences70
matches
0"He grunted in response, the"
1"Her gaze landed on Rory."
2"She approached the bar with"
3"She gave a small nod."
4"He reached for the Bombay"
5"He raised an eyebrow at"
6"She'd lost the soft roundness"
7"She rubbed the crescent scar"
8"She left a twenty-pound note"
9"He made a non-committal sound"
10"he said, still not looking"
11"He finally met her eyes,"
ratio0.171
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Rory settled onto her usual"
2"Silas placed a glass of"
3"He grunted in response, the"
4"The door swung open, letting"
5"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
6"The woman shook rain from"
7"Her gaze landed on Rory."
8"Megan's mouth opened, then closed."
9"She approached the bar with"
10"The last time Rory had"
11"A lifetime in Cardiff, before"
12"Rory swirled the ice in"
13"Silas glanced at Rory."
14"She gave a small nod."
15"He reached for the Bombay"
16"Megan perched on the stool"
17"A small gold pendant rested"
18"Megan laughed, the sound too"
19"Rory drained the rest of"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Owen, who had held Rory's hand through first-year contracts revision."
1"Owen, who had looked the other way when Evan grabbed Rory's arm too hard at that party in third year, because confrontation made him uncomfortable."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Megan straightened, that barrister posture clicking into place"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Megan pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.03
leniency0.06
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.03
83.0023%