| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.355 | | leniency | 0.711 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1697 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "reluctantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1697 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "framework" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "measured" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1689 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1042 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | December | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 22 | | Slender | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "December" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.444 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite there" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them" | | 2 | "looked like hammered glass" | | 3 | "something like fear in those lavender eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1689 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 23.46 | | std | 19.76 | | cv | 0.842 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 80 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 56 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 49 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 45 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "was already walking" |
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| 30.08% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the stones—bluebells and snowdrops and things she couldn't name, all blooming in defiance of the season." | | 1 | "The moss beneath her feet gave slightly, like walking on a living cushion, and the sounds of Richmond Park—dogs barking, traffic on the distant road—vanished as though someone had thrown a switch." | | 2 | "The moment her skin touched the hilt, pain shot through her wrist—the crescent scar from her childhood accident flaring white-hot—and she gasped but didn't let go." | | 3 | "Not from wind or touch—the darkness simply moved, shifting like something turning over in sleep." | | 4 | "Rory felt it in her bones—a pressure, a weight, like the atmosphere itself was pushing down." | | 5 | "The grove released her reluctantly—the warm air fading, the thick quality of the atmosphere thinning, sounds of the park rushing back in a wave of barking dogs and distant engines." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1053 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.027540360873694207 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008547008547008548 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 11.11 | | std | 8.31 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 54.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3815789473684211 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She tasted honey and something" | | 1 | "Her voice came out wrong." | | 2 | "She trailed her fingers along" | | 3 | "She followed it." | | 4 | "It had stopped pulsing, but" | | 5 | "She pointed to the sky" | | 6 | "It could have been noon" | | 7 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 8 | "She smiled, and it didn't" | | 9 | "She met Rory's eyes" | | 10 | "She was already walking toward" | | 11 | "She emerged into December chill," | | 12 | "She tucked the blade into" |
| | ratio | 0.148 | |
| 33.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks rose like sentinels," | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Nyx stood at the treeline," | | 3 | "A whisper of wind through" | | 4 | "Rory looked back at the" | | 5 | "The standing stones formed a" | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground between" | | 7 | "Nyx's form flickered" | | 8 | "The air changed the moment" | | 9 | "She tasted honey and something" | | 10 | "The moss beneath her feet" | | 11 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 12 | "Warmth spreading through the silver" | | 13 | "Her voice came out wrong." | | 14 | "Wildflowers parted ahead of her," | | 15 | "A path revealed itself, winding" | | 16 | "The standing stones continued on" | | 17 | "She trailed her fingers along" | | 18 | "The path curved." | | 19 | "She followed it." |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks rose like sentinels, their bark silvered with age, gnarled branches interlocking overhead to form a canopy that swallowed the grey London sky." | | 1 | "Behind her, Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the boundary, and she heard them hiss through teeth that weren't quite there." | | 2 | "The standing stones formed a rough circle, each one taller than her by a foot, covered in spiralling patterns that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly…" | | 3 | "The moss beneath her feet gave slightly, like walking on a living cushion, and the sounds of Richmond Park—dogs barking, traffic on the distant road—vanished as…" | | 4 | "The standing stones continued on either side, their carved patterns catching light that had no source." | | 5 | "She was already walking toward the boundary, her bare feet leaving no prints, her silver hair catching light that was fading faster than it should." | | 6 | "She emerged into December chill, her breath fogging, her fingers still wrapped around the moonsilver blade that glowed faintly in the overcast light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.039 | | leniency | 0.079 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |