Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2W66NCKJ5VSQVG1VBGDNX

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Duration:
47.2s
Cost:
$0.008815
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks rose like sentinels, their bark silvered with age, gnarled branches interlocking overhead to form a canopy that swallowed the grey London sky. Aurora stopped at the edge of the clearing, her trainers pressing into moss that shouldn't exist in December. Behind her, Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the boundary, and she heard them hiss through teeth that weren't quite there. "I can't cross." She turned. Nyx stood at the treeline, their violet eyes the only solid thing about them, the rest of their form bleeding into the shadows of the ancient oaks. "What do you mean you can't cross?" "The stones. They're warded against my kind." A whisper of wind through dead leaves. "Shades cannot enter Fae-touched ground without invitation." Rory looked back at the clearing. The standing stones formed a rough circle, each one taller than her by a foot, covered in spiralling patterns that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them. Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the stones—bluebells and snowdrops and things she couldn't name, all blooming in defiance of the season. "Isolde said—" "Isolde says many things." Nyx's form flickered. "Go. I'll wait." The air changed the moment she stepped between the first pair of stones. Warmer. Thicker. She tasted honey and something else, something green and old that coated her tongue. The moss beneath her feet gave slightly, like walking on a living cushion, and the sounds of Richmond Park—dogs barking, traffic on the distant road—vanished as though someone had thrown a switch. The pendant at her throat pulsed once. Warmth spreading through the silver chain. "Hello?" Her voice came out wrong. Muffled. Like speaking underwater. Wildflowers parted ahead of her, though no wind stirred. A path revealed itself, winding deeper into the grove toward a centre she couldn't yet see. The standing stones continued on either side, their carved patterns catching light that had no source. She trailed her fingers along one as she passed. Cold. Colder than the December air outside should have been, colder than stone had any right to be, and for a heartbeat she felt the faintest hum against her skin. Not electricity. Not vibration. Something older. The path curved. She followed it. Silver hair caught her eye first, then pale lavender irises that seemed to hold their own light. Isolde stood in the centre of the grove beside a pool of water so still it looked like hammered glass. No reflection marred its surface. No leaves floated on it. The wildflowers stopped at its edge as though forbidden to approach. "You came." "I nearly didn't find the place." "Those who need to find it, do." Isolde's bare feet left no impression in the moss. "The pendant guided you." Rory's hand went to the crimson gemstone. It had stopped pulsing, but the warmth remained, a steady heat against her collarbone. "It's never done that before." "It knows where it belongs." Isolde tilted her head, silver hair cascading over one shoulder. "As do you, perhaps." "I don't belong anywhere. I deliver Chinese food and live above a pub." "Such simple things. Such small cages." Isolde gestured toward the pool. "Look." Rory approached. The water remained perfectly still, perfectly reflective, but as she leaned closer she realised she couldn't see herself in it. Couldn't see the grove or the sky or the standing stones. The surface showed nothing but darkness, an absolute black that made her stomach lurch. "What is this?" "A door. A window. A question without an answer." Isolde moved to stand beside her, close enough that Rory caught the scent of night jasmine. "The Veil thins in places like this. Earth bleeds into other realms. Hel. The Courts. The spaces between." "That's why the pendant—" "Warms near Hel portals, yes. And chills near Fae ground." Isolde's lips curved. "You wear a contradiction around your neck, Aurora Carter. A piece of Gluttony's realm resting against skin that walks in a Fae-touched grove. Prince Belphegor would find that amusing." The name sent a prickle down her spine. "I don't know any prince." "Not yet." Rory straightened. "You said you had answers. That's why I'm here, not to trade riddles in a magic garden." "Magic." Isolde tested the word. "Such a mortal framework. This place exists because it has always existed. The grove doesn't obey your rules, your physics, your clocks." She pointed to the sky visible through the canopy. "What time do you think it is?" Rory looked up. The amber light filtering through the oaks hadn't changed since she entered. It could have been noon or midnight. She pulled out her phone. No signal. The clock read 3:47 PM, but the seconds weren't moving. "Time moves strangely here. An hour inside might be minutes outside. Or days." Isolde began to walk the perimeter of the pool, her silver hair leaving brief trails of light in the air. "The winter solstice approaches. The Veil weakens. Rift points open. The Wardens monitor them, but they are few and the cracks are many." "Wardens." "Keepers of boundaries. Mortals with sight, mostly. Some Fae-born outcasts like myself." Isolde paused at the far side of the pool. "There's a rift forming in London. Growing larger each night. Your pendant would have told you if you'd been paying attention." "I don't know how to pay attention to a necklace." "Then learn." Isolde extended her hand, and when she opened her palm, a blade rested there. Slender. Leaf-shaped. The metal glowed faintly, and even from several feet away, Rory felt the cold radiating off it. "What is that?" "A gift. A tool. A reminder." Isolde's lavender eyes held steady. "Moonsilver cuts through wards like scissors through silk. It burns demons. It will not break, cannot be lost by any who carry it with intent." "I didn't ask for a weapon." "No. You asked for answers." Isolde's hand remained outstretched. "Sometimes they are the same thing." Rory crossed to her. The cold grew more intense with each step, frost forming on her breath, the warmth of the pendant fighting against the blade's chill. When she reached for it, her fingers trembled. The moment her skin touched the hilt, pain shot through her wrist—the crescent scar from her childhood accident flaring white-hot—and she gasped but didn't let go. The blade's cold seeped into her bones, then receded, then settled into something bearable. Like holding an ice cube that refused to melt. "It knows you now," Isolde said. "The Fae Courts forged that blade three thousand years ago. It has waited for a worthy hand." "I'm not worthy of anything. I dropped out of law school." "Standards of worth vary between realms." Isolde withdrew her hand. "In Hel, they measure by hunger. In the Courts, by cleverness. Among mortals..." She smiled, and it didn't reach her eyes. "Among mortals, worth is measured by who you were before the world broke you." The pool's surface rippled. Not from wind or touch—the darkness simply moved, shifting like something turning over in sleep. Rory stepped back, the blade cold in her grip. "What was that?" "Something noticing you." Isolde's voice had lost its riddling quality. "Something on the other side of the Veil." "Hel?" "Worse. The spaces between." Isolde moved toward her, and for the first time, Rory saw something like fear in those lavender eyes. "Shades exist there. Things that were once human, once sorcerers, once—" "Nyx." "Your shadow friend? Yes. That is where Nyx was born. Where Aldric died and became what he is now." Isolde reached past her and touched the surface of the pool. The darkness recoiled. "The Veil keeps those spaces separate from Earth. When it thins, things slip through. Not all of them as benign as Nyx." The amber light in the grove dimmed. Rory felt it in her bones—a pressure, a weight, like the atmosphere itself was pushing down. "The solstice," she said. "Five days." Isolde withdrew her hand from the pool. "Five days until the Veil reaches its weakest point. Five days for that rift in London to tear open completely." She met Rory's eyes. "Five days to decide if you're going to run back to your Chinese food deliveries, or if you're going to help me close it." Rory looked down at the moonsilver blade. At the pendant still warm against her chest. At the scar on her wrist that had stopped hurting the moment she'd taken hold of the weapon. "I don't know how to close a rift." "I'll teach you. Nyx will guide you. The blade will protect you." Isolde turned toward the standing stones. "But first, you should leave. The grove doesn't like visitors who stay too long after dark." "Does it get dark here?" Isolde didn't answer. She was already walking toward the boundary, her bare feet leaving no prints, her silver hair catching light that was fading faster than it should. Rory followed, the blade's cold a counterpoint to the pendant's warmth, two opposing forces balanced against her skin. At the standing stones, she paused. Nyx waited beyond, their violet eyes bright in the grey London light. "I'll return tomorrow," Isolde said. "Same place. Same time—or what passes for time here." "And you'll explain what I'm actually supposed to do?" "I'll explain what I can." Isolde's smile returned, sharp and knowing. "The rest you'll have to learn as you go. That's how prophecies work, Aurora Carter. They don't come with instructions." Rory stepped between the stones. The grove released her reluctantly—the warm air fading, the thick quality of the atmosphere thinning, sounds of the park rushing back in a wave of barking dogs and distant engines. She emerged into December chill, her breath fogging, her fingers still wrapped around the moonsilver blade that glowed faintly in the overcast light. Nyx regarded her for a long moment. "You're different." "I feel different." She tucked the blade into her jacket, the cold seeping through the fabric. "Isolde says there's a rift forming. In London. Getting bigger before the solstice." "I know." The whisper carried something Rory had never heard in Nyx's voice before. Something that sounded almost like fear. "I've felt it. The spaces between are... restless."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.711
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"completely"
3"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurch"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"framework"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"chill"
count2
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"whisper"
2"flickered"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"cascading"
6"stomach"
7"lurch"
8"down her spine"
9"framework"
10"reminder"
11"silk"
12"chill"
13"trembled"
14"measured"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1689
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1042
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
London2
December3
Nyx6
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde22
Slender1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"December"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.444
windowScore0.333
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite there"
1"patterns that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly at them"
2"looked like hammered glass"
3"something like fear in those lavender eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1689
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean23.46
std19.76
cv0.842
sampleLengths
061
13
229
37
421
557
62
710
861
913
101
119
1280
136
146
1558
162
176
1820
1921
205
2119
2213
2312
2447
253
2643
274
2842
2913
302
3119
3243
3339
3456
351
3642
3710
3835
393
4036
416
4215
4335
4449
4523
4611
4745
4828
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was pushing"
1"was already walking"
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences152
ratio0.039
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the stones—bluebells and snowdrops and things she couldn't name, all blooming in defiance of the season."
1"The moss beneath her feet gave slightly, like walking on a living cushion, and the sounds of Richmond Park—dogs barking, traffic on the distant road—vanished as though someone had thrown a switch."
2"The moment her skin touched the hilt, pain shot through her wrist—the crescent scar from her childhood accident flaring white-hot—and she gasped but didn't let go."
3"Not from wind or touch—the darkness simply moved, shifting like something turning over in sleep."
4"Rory felt it in her bones—a pressure, a weight, like the atmosphere itself was pushing down."
5"The grove released her reluctantly—the warm air fading, the thick quality of the atmosphere thinning, sounds of the park rushing back in a wave of barking dogs and distant engines."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1053
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027540360873694207
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.11
std8.31
cv0.748
sampleLengths
024
118
219
33
42
527
67
714
87
96
1030
1121
122
137
143
1513
161
171
1814
1932
207
216
221
235
241
253
269
2716
2816
299
301
3129
322
332
342
353
363
3717
3820
395
405
4111
422
436
4416
454
467
4714
485
4915
54.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3815789473684211
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences88
matches
0"She tasted honey and something"
1"Her voice came out wrong."
2"She trailed her fingers along"
3"She followed it."
4"It had stopped pulsing, but"
5"She pointed to the sky"
6"It could have been noon"
7"She pulled out her phone."
8"She smiled, and it didn't"
9"She met Rory's eyes"
10"She was already walking toward"
11"She emerged into December chill,"
12"She tucked the blade into"
ratio0.148
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"The oaks rose like sentinels,"
1"Aurora stopped at the edge"
2"Nyx stood at the treeline,"
3"A whisper of wind through"
4"Rory looked back at the"
5"The standing stones formed a"
6"Wildflowers carpeted the ground between"
7"Nyx's form flickered"
8"The air changed the moment"
9"She tasted honey and something"
10"The moss beneath her feet"
11"The pendant at her throat"
12"Warmth spreading through the silver"
13"Her voice came out wrong."
14"Wildflowers parted ahead of her,"
15"A path revealed itself, winding"
16"The standing stones continued on"
17"She trailed her fingers along"
18"The path curved."
19"She followed it."
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The oaks rose like sentinels, their bark silvered with age, gnarled branches interlocking overhead to form a canopy that swallowed the grey London sky."
1"Behind her, Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the boundary, and she heard them hiss through teeth that weren't quite there."
2"The standing stones formed a rough circle, each one taller than her by a foot, covered in spiralling patterns that seemed to shift when she didn't look directly…"
3"The moss beneath her feet gave slightly, like walking on a living cushion, and the sounds of Richmond Park—dogs barking, traffic on the distant road—vanished as…"
4"The standing stones continued on either side, their carved patterns catching light that had no source."
5"She was already walking toward the boundary, her bare feet leaving no prints, her silver hair catching light that was fading faster than it should."
6"She emerged into December chill, her breath fogging, her fingers still wrapped around the moonsilver blade that glowed faintly in the overcast light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.039
leniency0.079
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.8600%