Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2WT7MEB4APJT7EH2Y244D

Run Details

Duration:
36.0s
Cost:
$0.005841
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gap between the standing stones barely admitted her shoulders. Rory turned sideways, the rough bark of the ancient oaks catching on her jacket, and stepped through into the Grove. She had expected stillness. The Fae-touched places she had encountered before carried a particular silence, the kind that pressed against eardrums like deep water. This was different. The air hummed with a frequency she felt more than heard, a vibration that settled in her teeth and the small bones of her wrists. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that made no sense for November. Bluebells tangled with foxglove, and something that might have been snowdrops glowed pale among the undergrowth. The moonlight that filtered through the canopy above seemed wrong too—too bright, too white, casting shadows that pooled like spilled ink. "Right then." Her voice came out flat. "Let's get this over with." She pulled the Heartstone pendant from beneath her shirt. The crimson gem caught the wrong moonlight and threw it back in shades that shifted between red and something darker. No warmth against her skin. Whatever she had come here to find, the pendant wasn't reacting. Not yet. The reason sat heavy in her jacket pocket—a folded note, the handwriting unfamiliar, the address leading here. Someone had wanted her to come. Someone who knew about the Grove, about the places between places, about the pendant she had never been able to explain. Rory started across the clearing toward the far edge, where the wildflowers thinned and a second stand of oaks marked what might have been another boundary. The ground beneath her boots felt soft, yielding in a way that grass and soil shouldn't. Each step released a scent like crushed herbs and something sweeter underneath, cloying, the kind of sweetness that turned the stomach if inhaled too long. Halfway across, she stopped. The flowers behind her had closed. Not wilted, not drooped—closed, petals folding inward like hands clenching into fists. She turned fully and watched the wave of closure spread outward from her footprints in a perfect circle. "That's new." No response but the hum, which had pitched slightly higher. She turned back toward the far oaks and kept walking. The flowers ahead of her remained open, their faces tracking her progress like an audience. A foxglove near her knee bent as she passed, its spotted throat opening wide enough to show the dark interior where something moved—wet, glistening, retreating deeper into the bloom. Rory did not look closer. She kept her eyes forward and her pace steady. The pendant remained cold. At the second stand of oaks, she found what the note had promised. A stone, no larger than her fist, half-buried in the root system. Pale grey, veined with something that caught light the way the Heartstone did. She crouched and reached for it. The sound came from behind her. Not a snap of twigs or rustle of leaves—something wetter. A dragging, like a sack of offal pulled across wet grass. She didn't turn. Her fingers closed around the stone and pulled it free. Cold, so cold it burned, and the veins pulsed once beneath her thumb. The dragging stopped. Rory straightened, pocketing the stone, and turned around. The clearing looked the same. Wildflowers open and watching. Standing stones framing the entrance she had come through. Moonlight pooling in the wrong shadows. Nothing moved. But the shadows had changed shape. They no longer matched the trees that cast them. One stretched too long, too thin, branching into shapes that suggested limbs rather than boughs. Another pooled at the base of a standing stone but crept up its surface in a way that defied the light source. "You wanted me here." She addressed the Grove itself, the shadows, whatever listened. "I'm here. What do you want?" The hum in her teeth became a buzz. The wildflowers rippled in a wind that touched nothing else, their petals fluttering to reveal dark centres that glistened. Movement at the edge of her vision. Left side. She kept her eyes straight ahead and counted to three, then snapped her gaze that direction. Nothing. Just the oak boundary, the closed flowers beyond, the darkness of Richmond Park pressing against the Fae-touched space like a fist. But something had been there. She had caught the edge of it—a shape that didn't belong, too tall, too thin, folding itself around the trunk of a tree the way a person might press against a wall to avoid being seen. The pendant stirred against her chest. Not warm. The opposite—a cold that spread through the chain and into her skin, into the small crescent scar on her left wrist that had ached on and off since she had found the note. "Right." She took a step toward the entrance stones. "I've got what I came for. We're done." The dragging sound started again. Closer this time. And something else beneath it—a voice, maybe, or the memory of a voice, words in a language she didn't know but somehow recognized. The syllables pushed against her ears like cold fingers. The shadows between her and the entrance had multiplied. They no longer avoided the moonlight but grew denser within it, taking on shapes that resolved and dissolved in the same moment. A hand. A face. Something with too many joints in its fingers. Rory pulled the pendant free and held it up. The crimson glow steadied, and the shadows recoiled—not all of them, but the nearest ones, pulling back like worms from salt. She walked forward. The shadows parted, then closed behind her like water. The dragging followed, keeping pace, always just at the edge of hearing. The flowers on either side of her path had all closed now, dark and clenched, their sweetness curdled into something that smelled of rot. The entrance stones loomed ahead. The gap between them looked narrower than before. She turned sideways and pushed through. The bark scraped her palms. The gap was definitely narrower—the stones had moved, or the trees had grown, or something had shifted in the geometry of the place. She squeezed through, felt the rough wood catch her jacket, tear the fabric, and then she was through, stumbling into the normal darkness of Richmond Park. Behind her, nothing. Just the standing stones, ancient and inert, marking what looked like an ordinary copse of oaks. No glow of wildflowers. No hum in her teeth. No wrong moonlight. Rory stood there, breathing hard, the cold stone heavy in her pocket and the pendant frozen against her skin. A fox screamed somewhere in the park. The ordinary sound of it made her flinch. She started walking toward the park gates, not looking back, listening to her own footsteps on the path and trying not to notice that there was a second set, just slightly out of rhythm with hers, that stopped every time she stopped. The stone in her pocket pulsed once, cold and eager, and something that was not quite a voice whispered from somewhere just behind her left ear: "Thank you."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"clenching"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"stomach"
3"clenching"
4"perfect"
5"glistening"
6"pulsed"
7"resolved"
8"loomed"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1142
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove3
Fae-touched2
November1
Heartstone2
Richmond2
Park2
Rory6
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed wrong too—too bright, too white, casting shadows that pooled like spilled ink"
1"looked like an ordinary copse of oaks"
2"not quite a voice whispered from somewhere just behind her left ear"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.56
wordCount1172
matches
0"No response but"
1"no longer avoided the moonlight but"
2"not all of them, but the nearest ones, pulling back like worms from salt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.3
std16.96
cv0.579
sampleLengths
030
152
249
312
447
544
667
74
836
92
1010
1154
1214
134
1444
1527
1626
173
188
1926
2052
2119
2227
2325
2422
2541
2641
2717
2840
2943
3030
3148
3213
336
3454
3531
3619
3715
3842
3928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"being seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"wasn't reacting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences102
ratio0.098
matches
0"The moonlight that filtered through the canopy above seemed wrong too—too bright, too white, casting shadows that pooled like spilled ink."
1"The reason sat heavy in her jacket pocket—a folded note, the handwriting unfamiliar, the address leading here."
2"Not wilted, not drooped—closed, petals folding inward like hands clenching into fists."
3"A foxglove near her knee bent as she passed, its spotted throat opening wide enough to show the dark interior where something moved—wet, glistening, retreating deeper into the bloom."
4"Not a snap of twigs or rustle of leaves—something wetter."
5"She had caught the edge of it—a shape that didn't belong, too tall, too thin, folding itself around the trunk of a tree the way a person might press against a wall to avoid being seen."
6"The opposite—a cold that spread through the chain and into her skin, into the small crescent scar on her left wrist that had ached on and off since she had found the note."
7"And something else beneath it—a voice, maybe, or the memory of a voice, words in a language she didn't know but somehow recognized."
8"The crimson glow steadied, and the shadows recoiled—not all of them, but the nearest ones, pulling back like worms from salt."
9"The gap was definitely narrower—the stones had moved, or the trees had grown, or something had shifted in the geometry of the place."
97.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1155
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04242424242424243
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004329004329004329
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.49
std8.44
cv0.734
sampleLengths
010
120
24
320
43
525
612
716
821
97
105
119
1220
135
1411
152
1617
176
1821
1926
2016
2125
224
236
2412
2518
262
2710
2810
2915
3029
315
329
334
3413
3512
3613
376
386
3910
4011
413
4210
4313
443
458
465
474
489
496
48.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.35294117647058826
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"Pale grey, veined with something"
1"Just the oak boundary, the"
2"Just the standing stones, ancient"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences91
matches
0"She had expected stillness."
1"Her voice came out flat"
2"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
3"She turned fully and watched"
4"She turned back toward the"
5"She kept her eyes forward"
6"She crouched and reached for"
7"She didn't turn."
8"Her fingers closed around the"
9"They no longer matched the"
10"She addressed the Grove itself,"
11"She kept her eyes straight"
12"She had caught the edge"
13"She took a step toward"
14"They no longer avoided the"
15"She walked forward."
16"She turned sideways and pushed"
17"She squeezed through, felt the"
18"She started walking toward the"
ratio0.209
64.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences91
matches
0"The gap between the standing"
1"Rory turned sideways, the rough"
2"She had expected stillness."
3"The Fae-touched places she had"
4"This was different."
5"The air hummed with a"
6"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in"
7"Bluebells tangled with foxglove, and"
8"The moonlight that filtered through"
9"Her voice came out flat"
10"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
11"The crimson gem caught the"
12"Whatever she had come here"
13"The reason sat heavy in"
14"Someone had wanted her to"
15"Someone who knew about the"
16"Rory started across the clearing"
17"The ground beneath her boots"
18"Each step released a scent"
19"Halfway across, she stopped."
ratio0.791
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Bluebells tangled with foxglove, and something that might have been snowdrops glowed pale among the undergrowth."
1"The moonlight that filtered through the canopy above seemed wrong too—too bright, too white, casting shadows that pooled like spilled ink."
2"The crimson gem caught the wrong moonlight and threw it back in shades that shifted between red and something darker."
3"Each step released a scent like crushed herbs and something sweeter underneath, cloying, the kind of sweetness that turned the stomach if inhaled too long."
4"The wildflowers rippled in a wind that touched nothing else, their petals fluttering to reveal dark centres that glistened."
5"They no longer avoided the moonlight but grew denser within it, taking on shapes that resolved and dissolved in the same moment."
6"The flowers on either side of her path had all closed now, dark and clenched, their sweetness curdled into something that smelled of rot."
7"She started walking toward the park gates, not looking back, listening to her own footsteps on the path and trying not to notice that there was a second set, ju…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She addressed (address)"
1"a voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
77.0389%