Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2XKW59KV1RT748WEWM4ZZ

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Duration:
27.8s
Cost:
$0.005552
Provider:
Z.AI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant burned against Rory's sternum. She stopped walking, fingers finding the crimson gem through her jumper. Warm. Too warm. The kind of heat that made you want to flinch away, but she held on, letting the sensation ground her in the strange half-light of the grove. The standing stones rose around her like broken teeth, ancient oak worn smooth by centuries of rain and wind and something else, something that left those peculiar spiral carvings too deep for any human hand. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that had no business blooming in December. Bluebells tangled with foxglove. Snowdrops nestled against marigolds. The scent cloyed at the back of her throat, sweet and rotten at once. Rory had followed the pendant's pull from Richmond Park's main path, through a gap in the hedgerow that she would have sworn wasn't there yesterday. The delivery run to Twickenham could wait. This couldn't. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. She turned, slow, tracking the sound with her eyes. Nothing. Just the stones and the flowers and the impossible garden stretching toward tree-lines that seemed farther away than they should be. The pendant's heat spiked, then settled into a steady thrum. "Right then." Her voice sounded wrong in this place. Too flat. Too human. "Here for a reason. Might as well get on with it." She stepped deeper into the grove, weaving between the standing stones. Each one had those spirals. She traced one with her fingertip and felt a faint vibration, like touching the housing of a running engine. The oak was warm too. Everything here ran warm. Another sound. Behind her this time. Rory spun. Still nothing. But the wildflowers closest to her feet had shifted. She was certain of it. The bluebells had been pointing north. Now they curled east, their delicate heads bowed as if pressed down by an invisible hand. The air tasted different. Thicker. She licked her lips and caught something metallic underneath the sweetness. Blood. Old blood. The kind that seeped into soil and stayed. She checked her wrist out of habit, thumb pressing the crescent scar there. A childhood accident, her mother always said. A fall from the garden wall. But Rory had seen the medical records once, hunting for her vaccination history before a trip to Spain. The scar predated her third birthday, and the notes mentioned "consistent with a clean incision." Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out. No signal. The time read 11:47 PM, which was wrong. She'd left the flat at half past nine. The walk to Richmond took forty minutes. Even accounting for the detour, she should have been here an hour ago. The pendant flared hot enough to make her hiss through her teeth. A whisper. Not words exactly. More like the memory of words, the shape language made before it became sound. It came from everywhere and nowhere, sliding past her ears like water over river stones. Rory's heart kicked against her ribs. She forced her breathing steady, counted to three, and kept walking. The grove opened ahead into a smaller clearing, dominated by a single standing stone twice the height of the others. Its spirals moved when she looked at them directly. Not an optical illusion. They turned, slow and deliberate, tracking her approach like eyes. The wildflowers stopped at the edge of this inner circle. Beyond the stone, the ground lay bare. Dark soil, almost black, and in the centre of that darkness, a shape. Rory crouched, keeping her distance. The shape resolved into a hand. Pale. Perfect. Severed at the wrist with that same clean precision as her childhood scar. No blood surrounded it, but the soil beneath was wet. The whispering intensified. She stood, backing away, and her heel caught on something. She stumbled, caught herself, looked down. Another hand. This one attached to an arm, buried up to the elbow. The fingers twitched. Rory moved before her mind caught up, putting three standing stones between herself and the buried thing. Her back hit oak. The vibration ran through her spine, and with it came images. Flashes. A woman in a white dress walking into the grove. Children with eyes like polished obsidian. A door opening in the air itself, and behind it, a darkness that breathed. The pendant cooled so suddenly the absence of heat felt like ice. Wrong. Wrong wrong wrong. The pendant was supposed to warm near Hel portals. Cooling meant she was moving away from one, or it meant something had changed. Something had closed. Something had noticed. The wildflowers behind her rustled. Not from wind. There was no wind here. Rory pressed her spine harder against the stone and listened. Rustling. Getting closer. A wet, dragging sound joined it, like cloth pulled through mud. She risked a glance over her shoulder. The flowers parted in a line moving toward her, though nothing visible pushed them aside. They simply folded down, crushed flat, creating a path of broken stems and bruised petals. The path led straight to her. The whispering coalesced into something almost like words. Almost like her name. "Au-ro-ra." The pronunciation was ancient. The rolling r, the three distinct syllables. No one called her that except her father, and only when he was angry. The dragging sound stopped. The flowers stopped moving. The silence that followed was worse than any noise could have been. A held breath. A paused heartbeat. The moment between the strike of a match and the flame catching. Then the standing stone against her back began to warm, and the spirals beneath her shoulder blades started to turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"resolved"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"whisper"
2"resolved"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences115
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords938
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount919
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
December1
Richmond2
Park1
Twickenham1
Spain1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"December"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Spain"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed farther away than they should be"
1"felt like ice"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount938
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.8
std18.67
cv0.697
sampleLengths
06
141
270
334
47
541
624
744
86
940
1016
1111
1259
1348
1412
1534
1660
1730
1836
193
2032
2163
2212
2333
2413
2524
267
2736
2812
291
3025
314
324
3330
3420
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.035830618892508145
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0054288816503800215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean8.02
std6.07
cv0.757
sampleLengths
06
111
21
32
427
535
613
74
84
914
1025
117
122
137
149
151
1621
1710
189
192
202
2111
2211
235
2419
255
264
272
284
292
302
319
325
336
3416
354
361
3711
381
392
408
4113
427
436
4418
4515
466
474
482
498
58.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.41025641025641024
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just the stones and the"
1"Even accounting for the detour,"
2"More like the memory of"
3"Almost like her name."
4"Then the standing stone against"
ratio0.053
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences94
matches
0"She stopped walking, fingers finding"
1"She turned, slow, tracking the"
2"Her voice sounded wrong in"
3"She stepped deeper into the"
4"She traced one with her"
5"She was certain of it."
6"She licked her lips and"
7"She checked her wrist out"
8"Her phone buzzed in her"
9"She pulled it out."
10"She'd left the flat at"
11"It came from everywhere and"
12"She forced her breathing steady,"
13"Its spirals moved when she"
14"They turned, slow and deliberate,"
15"She stood, backing away, and"
16"She stumbled, caught herself, looked"
17"Her back hit oak."
18"She risked a glance over"
19"They simply folded down, crushed"
ratio0.213
66.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences94
matches
0"The pendant burned against Rory's"
1"She stopped walking, fingers finding"
2"The kind of heat that"
3"The standing stones rose around"
4"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in"
5"Bluebells tangled with foxglove."
6"Snowdrops nestled against marigolds."
7"The scent cloyed at the"
8"Rory had followed the pendant's"
9"The delivery run to Twickenham"
10"A twig snapped somewhere to"
11"She turned, slow, tracking the"
12"The pendant's heat spiked, then"
13"Her voice sounded wrong in"
14"She stepped deeper into the"
15"Each one had those spirals."
16"She traced one with her"
17"The oak was warm too."
18"Everything here ran warm."
19"She was certain of it."
ratio0.787
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now they curled east, their"
ratio0.011
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The kind of heat that made you want to flinch away, but she held on, letting the sensation ground her in the strange half-light of the grove."
1"Just the stones and the flowers and the impossible garden stretching toward tree-lines that seemed farther away than they should be."
2"Now they curled east, their delicate heads bowed as if pressed down by an invisible hand."
3"A door opening in the air itself, and behind it, a darkness that breathed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the notes mentioned (mention)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
89.8370%