| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 66.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "resonated" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1371 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1057 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 5 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "November" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.838 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "quite sunlight" | | 1 | "looked like foxgloves but glowed faintly" | | 2 | "as if acknowledging her presence rather than being crushed by her weight" | | 3 | "looked like heat haze, but vertical, hang" | | 4 | "quite obey them" | | 5 | "quite identify — tall, thin, watching" | | 6 | "as if commenting on the weather" | | 7 | "something like genuine emotion flickered acr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.729 | | wordCount | 1371 | | matches | | 0 | "not the pulse it gave near Hel portals, but a gentle heat, like it was responding to something in this p" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 36.08 | | std | 24.21 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 91 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 83 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 79 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 11 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was beating" | | 1 | "was responding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.16 | | matches | | 0 | "A whisper of movement at Rory's shoulder — Nyx materializing from the shadow of an oak, their form solidifying into something roughly human-shaped but wrong in the way that oil slicks on water were wrong." | | 1 | "The transition hit her like diving into cold water — a sudden pressure against her skin, a moment where her lungs forgot how to work, and then she was through, stumbling slightly on ground that felt softer than it should." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in impossible abundance — bluebells and snowdrops and something that looked like foxgloves but glowed faintly at their throats, all blooming together despite the November chill she'd left behind in Richmond Park." | | 3 | "In this light, she looked truly otherworldly — her skin too smooth, her age too ambiguous, her silver hair moving slightly though there was no wind." | | 4 | "\"The whole grove is alive. It remembers.\" Isolde began walking deeper into the clearing, and Rory noticed what she'd missed before — the half-Fae left no footprints in the soft earth." | | 5 | "As she walked, she noticed things — the way certain flowers turned to track her passage like living eyes, the faint shimmer in the air that might have been the Veil itself, visible here in a way it never was in the mortal world." | | 6 | "They moved differently here — less fluid, more cautious, as if the shadows in this place didn't quite obey them." | | 7 | "The face that looked back at her had eyes that glowed faintly blue, brighter than they should, and behind her reflection stood shapes she couldn't quite identify — tall, thin, watching." | | 8 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt had warmed slightly — not the pulse it gave near Hel portals, but a gentle heat, like it was responding to something in this place." | | 9 | "Rory caught sight of carvings in the bark — symbols she didn't recognize, spirals and crescents and something that might have been an eye." | | 10 | "Isolde's lavender eyes met hers, and for a moment, something like genuine emotion flickered across that ethereal face — something that might have been sorrow, or guilt, or simply the weight of three hundred years of exile." | | 11 | "The hum beneath Rory's feet seemed to intensify, and she realized it wasn't just vibration — it was sound." | | 12 | "Isolde looked at her for a long moment, and though the half-Fae couldn't lie, Rory saw the careful calculation behind those strange eyes — the way she shaped the truth into something manageable." |
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| 93.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1050 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.047619047619047616 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01904761904761905 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 16.93 | | std | 10.56 | | cv | 0.624 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 44 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 63.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.41975308641975306 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 1 | "It might have been a" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 3 | "they said, their voice like" | | 4 | "She stepped through." | | 5 | "It resonated in her bones," | | 6 | "She straightened and followed, the" | | 7 | "It looked like heat haze," | | 8 | "They moved differently here —" | | 9 | "they said quietly" | | 10 | "She stepped back quickly." | | 11 | "She thought about what that" | | 12 | "she said, more to herself" | | 13 | "She traced one with her" | | 14 | "She gestured at the shimmering" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 17.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "The half-Fae woman stood at" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 4 | "Rory pulled the Fae blade" | | 5 | "Isolde's mouth twitched." | | 6 | "It might have been a" | | 7 | "A whisper of movement at" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 9 | "they said, their voice like" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped between the stones" | | 11 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 12 | "The Shade's silhouette rippled with" | | 13 | "She stepped through." | | 14 | "The transition hit her like" | | 15 | "The grove opened before her" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 17 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 18 | "Light came from everywhere and" | | 19 | "Nyx's voice came from directly" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "If a being who existed" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The half-Fae woman stood at the gap between two of the largest stones, her silver hair catching something that wasn't quite sunlight." | | 1 | "A whisper of movement at Rory's shoulder — Nyx materializing from the shadow of an oak, their form solidifying into something roughly human-shaped but wrong in …" | | 2 | "The transition hit her like diving into cold water — a sudden pressure against her skin, a moment where her lungs forgot how to work, and then she was through, …" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in impossible abundance — bluebells and snowdrops and something that looked like foxgloves but glowed faintly at their throats…" | | 4 | "Light came from everywhere and nowhere, a diffuse golden glow that had no apparent source." | | 5 | "Not a single impression, though the flowers bent slightly as she passed, as if acknowledging her presence rather than being crushed by her weight." | | 6 | "As she walked, she noticed things — the way certain flowers turned to track her passage like living eyes, the faint shimmer in the air that might have been the …" | | 7 | "The face that looked back at her had eyes that glowed faintly blue, brighter than they should, and behind her reflection stood shapes she couldn't quite identif…" | | 8 | "Rory caught sight of carvings in the bark — symbols she didn't recognize, spirals and crescents and something that might have been an eye." | | 9 | "Isolde's lavender eyes met hers, and for a moment, something like genuine emotion flickered across that ethereal face — something that might have been sorrow, o…" | | 10 | "A low, wordless singing that came from the earth itself, from the trees, from the shimmering air." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, turning to face them" | | 1 | "Isolde said, as if commenting on the weather" | | 2 | "she said, more to herself than anyone else" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |