Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2YWZR5HYZ46SRGM4D3YHY

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Duration:
46.4s
Cost:
$0.011583
Provider:
Z.AI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open and the door swung inward before Rory could check the peephole. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, his ivory-handled cane catching the dim light from the curry house below. Three months. Twelve weeks of silence, and here he was on Eva's doorstep looking like he'd stepped out of a Savile Row catalogue rather than the supernatural underworld he prowled. "You changed your hair." Rory's hand tightened on the doorframe. "You're not Eva." "Perceptive as ever." His mismatched eyes, one amber, one black, tracked down her frame and back up with the same measured patience he applied to everything. "She's at the British Library. Mentioned you'd be here. Alone." "Eva doesn't discuss my schedule with fixers." "Information broker." A correction delivered with a faint smile that didn't reach his eyes. "I prefer information broker. Fixer implies I solve problems. I merely... facilitate outcomes." The curry smell from downstairs wafted up through the floorboards, thick with cumin and garam masala. Somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy the tabby made a sound like a question mark. "Close the door, Lucien." "Invite me in first." "That's not how flats work." "No. But it's how courtesy works." He leaned on his cane, the posture deceptively casual. The platinum blond of his hair caught the light as he tilted his head. "Three months, Rory. Not even a text." "We didn't part on texting terms." "We parted on screaming terms, if I recall correctly. You called me a manipulative bastard. I believe I called youreckless. Both accurate, in hindsight." Her jaw set. The memory of that night in Whitechapel still burned, the taste of ash and betrayal coating the back of her throat. He'd used her as bait without asking. She'd nearly died. He'd acted like the outcome justified the means, because of course he had. Lucien always played chess while everyone else played checkers. "I don't want to do this." "Nor do I. Unfortunately, wants and needs rarely align." His gaze shifted past her shoulder into the cluttered flat. Stacks of books towered on every surface. Eva's research notes formed paper mountains across the sofa. "Charming as this hovel is, perhaps we could discuss matters inside? The neighbours are beginning to stare." Rory glanced over her shoulder. Mrs. Kapoor from next door had her door ajar, the chain still on, one eye pressed to the gap. She stepped back. Lucien entered, his cane tapping a steady rhythm against the worn floorboards as he surveyed the chaos. Ptolemy emerged from beneath a pile of scrolls, assessed the intruder, and arched his back. "Devil cat." "He doesn't like strangers." "We're not strangers." Lucien set his cane against the wall with deliberate care. "That's rather the problem." The door closed behind her. Three deadbolts. Eva was paranoid, but after what she'd uncovered last year about the summoning circles appearing across East London, the paranoia had proven justified. Rory understood paranoia. She'd lived with Evan long enough to recognise the shape of it in other people. Lucien moved through the flat like water finding its level, adjusting his path around the obstacles with practised ease. His charcoal suit was immaculate, not a crease out of place. The bastard probably had someone iron his socks. "You've been asking about the disappearances in Camden." He paused by the window, his back to her. Brick Lane sprawled below, a jumble of neon signs and late-night foot traffic. "The ones the Met are calling voluntary departures." "How do you know what I've been asking about?" "Because I'm good at my job." He turned. The amber eye caught the light, glinting like a coin at the bottom of a dark well. "And because you've been asking the wrong people. Seers talk, Rory. They talk a lot, actually. It's their primary currency." Ice settled in her stomach. She'd visited a seer in Hackney two weeks ago, a woman who read tea leaves and futures with equal accuracy. The reading had been about the disappearances. About the pattern no one else seemed to see. "You had me followed." "Protected. There's a difference." "The hell there is." "Would you prefer I'd left you to stumble into something you couldn't stumble out of?" His voice remained level, but something flickered beneath the calm. "Camden isn't what you think it is. Those missing people aren't missing. They've been taken. And the ones taking them? They know you're looking." Ptolemy chose that moment to weave between Lucien's ankles. The half-demon went still, every muscle in his body locking. When he looked down at the cat, his expression held something that might have been uncertainty. Rory had never seen Lucien uncertain. "You're afraid of a cat." "I'm not afraid. I'm... cautious. Animals sense what I am. They don't typically approach." "Ptolemy approaches everyone. He has no survival instincts." She crossed her arms. "Focus, Lucien. What's in Camden?" "Something old. Older than London, older than the Romans. It sleeps in the spaces between places, and someone's been waking it up." He stepped away from the cat, putting distance between himself and the animal that had dared to touch him. "The disappearances follow a pattern. Every thirteen days, someone vanishes from the same three-block radius around the Lock. All of them had recent contact with the supernatural community. All of them had some small talent, nothing significant enough to register on anyone's radar." "How many?" "Seven so far. The eighth is due in four days." The number landed like a stone in still water. Rory counted back through what she knew, through the half-formed connections she'd been building in Eva's notes, and found the shape of something horrible waiting at the centre. "The seer." The words came out flat. "The one in Hackney. She fits your pattern." "She does." Lucien's expression didn't change. "Which is why I'm here, rather than sending a message or making a phone call. Because the thing taking these people? It knows when you're coming for it. It tastes intent like copper on the tongue. And your intent, Rory, your single-minded bloody-minded determination to throw yourself at problems until they break or you do, that intent is loud." "So you came to warn me off." "I came to warn you." He closed the distance between them, three precise steps that brought him close enough that she could smell his cologne. Something woody, with an undertone that might have been smoke or might have been something else entirely. "There's a difference." Her pulse kicked against her throat. Three months of silence, of convincing herself she'd moved past whatever this was, and one conversation had undone all of it. His presence filled the cramped flat like a physical force, pressing against her boundaries, reminding her body of things her mind had tried to forget. "I don't need your protection." "No. You don't." His hand rose, hovering near her face without touching. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sensation she hadn't felt in months. "You need my information. And perhaps, if you can stomach it, my company." "Your company nearly got me killed." "My company saved your life. The near-death was your contribution." "You used me as bait." "I used you as the only viable option in a situation with no good choices." His hand dropped. "I've replayed that night. Multiple times. I would have done it differently, if I could." "But you can't." "No. I can only offer you what I have now." He stepped back, reclaiming the distance she needed to think. "The entity in Camden has a name. Malphora." The word hit her like a slap. Not because she recognised it, but because she felt it, a resonance in her bones that made no logical sense. Lucien's mismatched eyes narrowed. "You felt that." "Feel what?" "Rory." His voice had shifted, something sharper beneath the smooth surface. "What did you feel?" The floorboards creaked. Ptolemy hissed, fur bristling, and bolted under the sofa. The temperature in the flat dropped by several degrees in the span of a heartbeat, and from somewhere deep in the walls, something began to scratch.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped away [away]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.279
leniency0.557
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.066
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1347
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1347
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"measured"
2"glinting"
3"stomach"
4"flickered"
5"pulse"
6"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1347
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount804
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Moreau1
Eva4
Savile1
Row1
Ptolemy4
Whitechapel1
Stacks1
East1
London1
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
Hackney1
Lucien9
Three3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Hackney"
globalScore0.94
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1347
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean22.45
std19.4
cv0.864
sampleLengths
016
149
24
39
436
57
627
730
84
94
105
1136
126
1324
1456
156
1652
1724
1835
192
204
2117
2248
2338
2438
259
2645
2741
284
294
304
3149
3235
336
345
3514
3617
3784
382
3910
4037
4115
4265
437
4445
4552
465
4741
486
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount808
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.027227722772277228
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0049504950495049506
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.82
std9.23
cv0.781
sampleLengths
016
119
22
328
44
56
63
726
810
97
1014
1113
1216
1314
144
154
165
1715
1814
197
206
2124
223
2321
247
253
2613
279
286
2919
307
319
3217
335
341
3518
363
3717
3815
392
404
4113
424
435
442
4523
463
4715
4819
4911
68.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4298245614035088
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners49
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy"
ratio0.015
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences66
matches
0"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
1"He leaned on his cane,"
2"Her jaw set."
3"He'd used her as bait"
4"She'd nearly died."
5"He'd acted like the outcome"
6"His gaze shifted past her"
7"She stepped back."
8"She'd lived with Evan long"
9"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
10"He paused by the window,"
11"She'd visited a seer in"
12"His voice remained level, but"
13"She crossed her arms"
14"He stepped away from the"
15"He closed the distance between"
16"Her pulse kicked against her"
17"His presence filled the cramped"
18"His hand rose, hovering near"
19"His hand dropped"
ratio0.333
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"Rory's hand tightened on the"
3"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
4"A correction delivered with a"
5"The curry smell from downstairs"
6"He leaned on his cane,"
7"The platinum blond of his"
8"Her jaw set."
9"The memory of that night"
10"He'd used her as bait"
11"She'd nearly died."
12"He'd acted like the outcome"
13"Lucien always played chess while"
14"His gaze shifted past her"
15"Stacks of books towered on"
16"Eva's research notes formed paper"
17"Rory glanced over her shoulder."
18"Kapoor from next door had"
19"She stepped back."
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd visited a seer in Hackney two weeks ago, a woman who read tea leaves and futures with equal accuracy."
1"Something woody, with an undertone that might have been smoke or might have been something else entirely."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned, the posture deceptively casual"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.9515%