Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2Z1DARRBM7T0HS17V22KZ

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Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.019205
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Z.AI

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. Ptolemy meowed his disapproval at the late-night visitor as I pulled open the door. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he owned the building. Charcoal suit. Ivory-handled cane. That infuriating half-smile that made my teeth ache. "Miss me?" I started closing the door. His cane stopped it. The tap of ivory against wood echoed up the stairwell, mingling with the distant clang of the curry house kitchen below. "Eva's not here." "I'm aware." "Then you have the wrong flat." "Fourteen months, Rory." His amber eye caught the dim hallway light. The black one swallowed it whole. "That's a long time to nurse a grudge." "Who said anything about grudging? I've been busy." "Delivering noodles." "It pays the bills." He stepped forward. I stepped back. Ptolemy wound between my ankles, purring like a motor. "May I come in?" "No." "The Veilborn are hunting again." My hand froze on the door. "Three missing from Camden in the past week. All women. All your age." He paused. "All with your colouring." The curry smell from below suddenly felt cloying. Grease and cumin and something metallic underneath. "That's not my problem anymore." "Your name is on their list." "I don't have a list." "Which is precisely why you should be worried." He produced a folded paper from his inner jacket pocket. Cream-coloured. Expensive. "They found this in the latest victim's flat." I didn't take it. "Rory." "My name's Aurora. And you lost the right to use the short version when you lied to me about what you are." The word hung between us. What he is. Half-demon. Son of something from a realm called Avaros. Creature of the supernatural underworld that I'd stumbled into because Eva couldn't keep her nose out of cursed manuscripts. Fourteen months ago, I'd thought Lucien Moreau was just an eccentric information broker with a taste for expensive tailoring and dramatic reveals. Then I'd seen him drain a man's life force through his palm, and the elegant facade had cracked wide open. I'd run. He'd let me. "You knew what I was from the moment we met." His voice dropped lower. "You simply preferred not to acknowledge it." "You could have told me." "And you would have believed me?" "Yes." "No." The cane tapped once against the floor. "You would have called me mad. Or worse, you would have asked questions. Dangerous questions. The kind that paint targets on backs." "I'm not some fragile thing that needs protecting." "Is that what you think happened? Protection?" "It's what you called it." "I called it survival. Yours." His jaw tightened. "There's a difference." Ptolemy stopped purring. The tabby arched his back, staring at Lucien with unblinking green eyes. Cats sense things humans can't. Evil. Magic. The particular wrongness of a soul split between two realms. I'd forgotten about that. Forgotten how animals reacted to him. "Fine." I took the paper. "Five minutes." The flat looked exactly as Eva had left it. Books stacked in precarious towers. Scrolls unfurled across every available surface. Research notes pinned to the walls like evidence in a murder investigation. The single window overlooked Brick Lane's neon signs, casting everything in alternating pink and blue. Lucien navigated the chaos without disturbing a single page. Practised. He'd been here before, then. Multiple times, probably. Back when I still trusted him. Back when his touch didn't make my skin crawl with recognition of what lived beneath it. I unfolded the paper. A list of names. Eight, crossed out. One circled in red ink. Mine. Aurora Carter. Not Rory. Not Laila. The full name, the one I'd only given to him in whispered moments, in the dark, when we'd pretended the world outside didn't exist. "They know your birth name." He stood too close. Sandalwood and something else. Something that smelled like burnt sugar. "That means someone from your past sold information. Someone human." "Evan." "Your ex?" "He knows things. Private things." "Evan Whitmore doesn't strike me as the type to consort with Veilborn." "Evan doesn't strike most people as the type to break ribs, either." I touched my left wrist without thinking. The crescent scar pulsed beneath my sleeve. "Appearances deceive." Lucien's gaze dropped to my wrist. His expression didn't change, but his fingers curled around his cane handle tight enough to whiten the knuckles. "He put his hands on you." "Not recently." "That's not what I asked." "Drop it." "The Veilborn feed on pain, Rory. Old wounds. They'll smell it on you like sharks smell blood." "I said drop it." Silence stretched between us. The neon signs flickered outside, painting his face in alternating colours. In the pink light, he looked almost human. In the blue, something ancient and hungry stirred behind those mismatched eyes. "I can protect you." "You couldn't protect me from yourself." "That's not fair." "Neither is lying to someone for eight months." "I never lied." "You omitted." "Omission is self-preservation in my world." "And what world is that, exactly?" I shoved the paper back at his chest. "The one where you suck souls through your hands? The one where creatures hunt women because some demon overlord got bored? Which one, Lucien?" "All of them." His hand closed over mine, pinning the paper between us. His skin burned. Not with heat, with something else. Something that crawled up my arm and settled in my chest like a second heartbeat. "Every single one. And you're standing in the middle of all of them with nothing but a deadbolt and a tabby cat for protection." Ptolemy hissed. "Get out." "Rory." "Get out before I call the one person in this city who actually knows how to hurt you." Something flickered across his face. Not fear. Recognition. "Eva." "She's due back any minute." "She's in Edinburgh. Researching the Rosslyn Chapel bindings." His thumb traced the edge of the paper, brushing against my knuckles. "I know because I sent her there." The second heartbeat in my chest stuttered. "You what?" "The Veilborn are connected to the original covenant. Eva's the only one who can decode the ancient text. I needed her out of London." His voice softened. "I needed you out of London too. But you refused my calls." "You didn't call." "I called eleven times. Left four messages." My phone buzzed in my back pocket. I'd stopped checking unknown numbers after Evan. Blocked half my contacts. Let the battery die more often than not. Lucien watched me reach for it. Watched the realisation settle across my face. "How long have they been hunting?" "Three weeks. I've been tracking them since the first disappearance." He released my hand. The paper fluttered to the floor between us. "Two nights ago, they found your flat above the bar. Silas sent them running, but they'll come back. They always come back." Silas. Of course Silas knew. The bartender with the uncanny ability to know things before they happened. Everyone in that building had secrets. I'd just been too naive to see them. "Why not tell me sooner?" "You wouldn't have listened." "You don't know that." "I know you." The words hung there, heavy with fourteen months of absence. "You would have gone after them yourself. Confronted them. Tried to reason with creatures that don't understand reason." "I'm not that person anymore." "Aren't you?" I opened my mouth to argue. Closed it. He was right. Fourteen months ago, I would have marched straight into danger with nothing but stubbornness and a faulty moral compass. Eva had pulled me out of that mindset. Forced me to slow down. Think. Plan. But the old instincts still burned beneath the surface. The urge to fix things. Save people. Throw myself at problems until they broke or I did. Something scraped against the window. We both turned. The glass fogged from the outside, condensation spreading in patterns that looked almost deliberate. Almost like writing. Ptolemy screamed and bolted under the sofa. Lucien's cane shifted in his grip. A soft click, and three inches of silver blade slid from the ivory handle. "Stay behind me." "Like hell." "Rory." "No." I grabbed the heaviest book I could reach. Some medieval treatise on binding spells. "You don't get to come back after fourteen months and start giving orders." The fog on the window cleared. A face pressed against the glass from the outside. Fourth floor. No ledge. No fire escape. Just a woman hanging in empty air, her mouth open in a silent scream, her eyes fixed on mine. Her eyes were bright blue. Her hair was straight and black and shoulder-length. She looked exactly like me. Lucien's blade caught the neon light. "They found you."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The cane tapped once [once]"
1"He stood too [too]"
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.045
93.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"fluttered"
count1
8
word"uncanny"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"facade"
2"navigated"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"traced"
7"fluttered"
8"uncanny"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1440
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount871
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Cream-coloured1
Avaros1
Eva3
Lucien8
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Carter1
Rory1
Laila1
Sandalwood1
Evan1
Silas2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Carter"
5"Rory"
6"Laila"
7"Evan"
8"Silas"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like burnt sugar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1440
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean12.97
std13.06
cv1.007
sampleLengths
018
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22
35
425
53
62
76
825
98
102
114
1215
134
141
155
166
1719
1815
195
206
215
2228
234
241
2522
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2742
285
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305
316
321
3330
348
357
365
3711
3832
3910
407
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4224
4316
444
4543
4629
471
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount877
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03192702394526796
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005701254275940707
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean7.09
std5.72
cv0.807
sampleLengths
04
114
211
32
42
58
62
75
84
921
103
112
126
1311
146
158
168
172
184
193
203
219
224
231
245
256
2615
274
288
297
305
316
325
3318
341
351
368
374
381
3922
405
413
421
438
4419
4522
4620
472
483
4914
71.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.458128078817734
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners93
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then I'd seen him drain"
1"Of course Silas knew."
2"Almost like writing."
3"Just a woman hanging in"
ratio0.037
92.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences107
matches
0"I started closing the door."
1"His cane stopped it."
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"He stepped forward."
4"I stepped back."
5"My hand froze on the"
6"He produced a folded paper"
7"I didn't take it."
8"He'd let me."
9"His voice dropped lower"
10"His jaw tightened"
11"I'd forgotten about that."
12"I took the paper"
13"He'd been here before, then."
14"I unfolded the paper."
15"He stood too close"
16"I touched my left wrist"
17"His expression didn't change, but"
18"I shoved the paper back"
19"His hand closed over mine,"
ratio0.318
62.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"Ptolemy meowed his disapproval at"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"That infuriating half-smile that made"
4"I started closing the door."
5"His cane stopped it."
6"The tap of ivory against"
7"His amber eye caught the"
8"The black one swallowed it"
9"He stepped forward."
10"I stepped back."
11"Ptolemy wound between my ankles,"
12"My hand froze on the"
13"The curry smell from below"
14"Grease and cumin and something"
15"He produced a folded paper"
16"I didn't take it."
17"The word hung between us."
18"Son of something from a"
19"Creature of the supernatural underworld"
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The tabby arched his back, staring at Lucien with unblinking green eyes."
1"The glass fogged from the outside, condensation spreading in patterns that looked almost deliberate."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.1128%