| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "Isolde said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.271 | | leniency | 0.542 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 96.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1335 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 926 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 14 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Frost | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.69 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 98.98% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like spun glass, their petals catc" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.749 | | wordCount | 1335 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 24.27 | | std | 21.45 | | cv | 0.884 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 86 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 48 | | 49 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the bracken like broken teeth, their surfaces slick with moss and something else — a faint luminescence that had no business existing in the middle of Richmond Park at dusk." | | 1 | "The air tasted different here — sweeter, thicker, carrying notes of honey and wet stone and something floral she couldn't name." | | 2 | "Wildflowers erupted in clumps around her ankles — bluebells and foxglove and blossoms that looked like spun glass, their petals catching light that didn't seem to come from any visible source." | | 3 | "The violet eyes flickered once, twice, and then Nyx was gone — swallowed by the shadows of the trees behind them as though they had never existed at all." | | 4 | "They were gemstones — rough-cut garnets and moonstones and chips of something that glowed amber from within, like embers waiting to catch." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed faster, its warmth spreading up her neck, and she thought of Evan — the way he'd always known what she was thinking before she did, the way he'd shaped her thoughts into shapes that suited him." | | 6 | "The grass changed texture beneath her feet — softer, almost velvet — and the air grew thick with the scent of night-blooming jasmine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 931 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02577873254564984 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0053705692803437165 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.84 | | std | 10.38 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 57.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3942307692307692 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the stream seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept walking." | | 1 | "They had stopped at the" | | 2 | "They were gemstones — rough-cut" | | 3 | "She crouched at the stream's" | | 4 | "Her eyes were the pale" | | 5 | "She pulled it out now," | | 6 | "She dropped the pendant into" | | 7 | "Her lilac eyes widened fractionally," |
| | ratio | 0.133 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted past her, their" | | 3 | "The violet glow of their" | | 4 | "A pressure against her eardrums," | | 5 | "The air tasted different here" | | 6 | "Rory stepped between the first" | | 7 | "The temperature dropped by several" | | 8 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 9 | "She kept walking." | | 10 | "The grass beneath her trainers" | | 11 | "Wildflowers erupted in clumps around" | | 12 | "The sky above had changed." | | 13 | "The grey-purple of an English" | | 14 | "Nyx didn't answer." | | 15 | "They had stopped at the" | | 16 | "Nyx's voice dropped lower, the" | | 17 | "The violet eyes flickered once," | | 18 | "Rory adjusted the rucksack strap" | | 19 | "The clearing opened wider with" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the bracken like broken teeth, their surfaces slick with moss and something else — a faint luminescence that had no business exist…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers erupted in clumps around her ankles — bluebells and foxglove and blossoms that looked like spun glass, their petals catching light that didn't seem …" | | 2 | "The grey-purple of an English evening had given way to something softer, neither day nor night, the clouds moving in directions that didn't track with any wind …" | | 3 | "The violet eyes flickered once, twice, and then Nyx was gone — swallowed by the shadows of the trees behind them as though they had never existed at all." | | 4 | "They were gemstones — rough-cut garnets and moonstones and chips of something that glowed amber from within, like embers waiting to catch." | | 5 | "A woman stood among the glass-flowers on the far side of the stream, silver hair falling past her waist in a sheet that caught no tangles despite the breeze." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed faster, its warmth spreading up her neck, and she thought of Evan — the way he'd always known what she was thinking before she did, the way h…" | | 7 | "The mushroom circle widened as she approached, each cap pale as bone, their gills releasing spores that caught the light like tiny stars." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's voice dropped, the whisper carrying a vibration she felt in her sternum" | | 1 | "Isolde's mouth curved, but the expression held no warmth" | | 2 | "Isolde stood, not entering it" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.021 | | leniency | 0.042 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |