Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS3160Y991B89VK4AYTHBP5

Run Details

Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.006050
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gap between the standing stones barely admitted her shoulders. Aurora pressed through, brambles catching at her jacket, and emerged into the Grove. Moonlight struck the clearing like a searchlight. Wrong. The sky above Richmond Park had been overcast, the moon a smudge behind cloud cover, but here the heavens opened onto a vast and star-strewn black. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours that had no business existing in January—bluebells nodding beside marigolds, snowdrops tangled with foxglove. The air tasted of honey and something metallic underneath. She pulled out her phone. No signal. The time read 11:47 PM, but the digits had frozen the moment she stepped through the stones. "Brilliant." The pendant hung warm against her collarbone. She'd noticed it pulsing three days ago, that faint heat building through the silver chain until she could ignore it no longer. Whatever the thing wanted her to find, it had led her here, to this impossible clearing in the middle of London's largest royal park. Aurora started across the grove. The grass bent under her boots but made no sound. She stopped. Took another step. Silence, where there should have been the soft whisper of stalks crushing. The scar on her left wrist itched. She rubbed it without thinking. At the centre of the clearing stood an oak older than any tree had a right to be. Its roots broke the surface in great ridges, and between those roots, a hole gaped black. Not a burrow. Not rot. A perfect circle, edges smooth as worked stone, descending into nothing. The pendant's heat intensified. Aurora crouched beside the opening. No wind came from below. No smell. No sound. She held her hand over the gap and felt—nothing. Not even the displacement of air her palm should create. A twig snapped behind her. She straightened and turned. The standing stones framed the entrance she'd come through, and between them, shadows pooled deeper than the moonlight should allow. Something shifted in that darkness. A shape, or the suggestion of one, there and gone between one heartbeat and the next. "Who's there?" The grove offered no answer. The wildflowers continued their silent blooming. Aurora reached into her jacket pocket and closed her fingers around the emergency torch Eva had insisted she carry. She didn't pull it out. Not yet. Light might draw whatever watched from the shadows, and she had no intention of showing her hand before she understood the game. She turned back to the hole between the roots. The edges had moved. When she'd crouched, the opening had been the size of a dinner plate. Now it stretched wider, the smooth rim creeping outward like frost spreading across glass. She hadn't blinked. Hadn't looked away for more than a second. But the hole now gaped large enough to swallow a person. The pendant burned against her skin. "This isn't what I came for." No one answered, but laughter seemed to thread through the honey-sweet air. Not heard. Felt. A vibration in her teeth, in the bones of her skull, that arranged itself into the cadence of amusement. Aurora backed away from the oak. Her heel struck something soft. She looked down. A wildflower lay crushed beneath her boot, its petals blackened and curling. Around it, in a perfect circle six inches in diameter, every flower had died. Brown and brittle, they formed a ring of decay in the living carpet. She hadn't stepped there before. She was certain of it. The dead flowers crumbled to dust as she watched, as if months of decomposition had been compressed into seconds. The dust rose in a spiral, defying the still air, and hung suspended at knee height. It formed a shape. A hand, skeletal and reaching, rendered in particles of dead plant matter. Aurora stopped breathing. The dust-hand trembled, strained toward her, and dispersed. The cleared circle of ground where the flowers had died now bore a different colour in the soil. Darker. Richer. The colour of fresh-dug earth. Grave dirt. She moved toward the standing stones. Walking, not running. Running would mean prey. Her father had taught her that during the months Evan stalked her after she left him. Never run from something that wants to chase you. Deny it the satisfaction. The stones grew no closer. She kept walking. The oak remained at her back, the stones remained ahead, and the distance between them stretched like taffy. The wildflowers on either side of her path had stopped blooming. They watched her pass with petals like eyes, centres like pupils, tracking her movement in silent unison. "That's not real. You're not real." The ground softened underfoot. Not mud. Something organic, something that yielded and then tried to hold her boots. She pulled her foot free with a wet sucking sound and kept moving. The pendant's glow intensified until she could see its crimson light bleeding through the fabric of her shirt. Warmth spread across her chest, her shoulder, up her neck. Not comfort. Warning. A voice came from everywhere and nowhere, from the flowers and the dirt and the absent wind. "Laila." She stopped. No one called her that. No one living. The standing stones flickered. For half a second, they weren't stones at all but figures, tall and thin and wrapped in something that moved like cloth but glistened like wet membrane. Then they were stones again, ancient and grey and still. The hole between the oak roots yawned wider still. Inside it, something shifted. Not darkness. Something darker than darkness, something that moved with the slow certainty of a predator that knew its prey had nowhere left to go. Aurora's hand found the pendant and pulled it free. The crimson stone threw light across the grove, and in that light, the true shape of the place revealed itself. The flowers weren't flowers. They were fingers. Thousands of them, pale and delicate, tipped with coloured nails, pushing up through the soil in a mockery of spring. The grass wasn't grass but hair, fine and black, spreading across the ground in a pelt. The oak's roots weren't wood but bone, great curved ribs emerging from the earth to arch over the hole that wasn't a hole but a mouth, toothless and waiting. The pendant flared hot enough to blister her palm. She ran. The stones rushed toward her, impossibly close now, and she threw herself through the gap between them. Briars tore at her face, at her hands, and then she was rolling on cold mud in ordinary Richmond Park under ordinary cloud cover, gasping, the taste of honey and iron fading from her tongue. Her phone buzzed. Signal restored. The time read 11:48 PM. One minute. She'd been inside for one minute. The pendant lay cool and dormant against her chest, its faint inner glow extinguished. But when she looked down at her palm, the shape it had left was clear: a crescent-shaped burn, matching the scar on her wrist, weeping clear fluid in the cold January air. Behind her, from somewhere beyond the standing stones, something laughed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"whisper"
2"perfect"
3"trembled"
4"grave"
5"warmth"
6"flickered"
7"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1159
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Grove1
Richmond2
Park2
January2
London1
Eva1
Evan1
Aurora7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"January"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1175
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25
std19.24
cv0.77
sampleLengths
023
163
224
31
453
532
612
750
837
95
1045
112
1211
1348
149
1553
166
176
1834
1914
2039
2110
2235
2316
243
2533
262
2742
285
2949
306
3131
3231
3317
341
3510
3641
3738
3829
3972
409
412
4252
4310
448
4546
4610
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"been compressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was rolling"
98.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences128
ratio0.016
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours that had no business existing in January—bluebells nodding beside marigolds, snowdrops tangled with foxglove."
1"She held her hand over the gap and felt—nothing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay crushed beneath her"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02058319039451115
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017152658662092624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean9.18
std7.37
cv0.803
sampleLengths
010
113
27
31
426
520
69
75
82
917
101
117
1222
1324
145
1510
162
173
1812
197
205
2118
2216
233
242
2511
264
275
285
292
302
319
3210
335
344
3520
365
3716
382
395
406
4119
425
432
4422
459
464
4713
4814
493
53.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners48
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then they were stones again,"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences103
matches
0"She pulled out her phone."
1"She'd noticed it pulsing three"
2"She rubbed it without thinking."
3"Its roots broke the surface"
4"She held her hand over"
5"She straightened and turned."
6"She didn't pull it out."
7"She turned back to the"
8"She hadn't blinked."
9"Her heel struck something soft."
10"She looked down."
11"She hadn't stepped there before."
12"She was certain of it."
13"It formed a shape."
14"She moved toward the standing"
15"Her father had taught her"
16"She kept walking."
17"They watched her pass with"
18"She pulled her foot free"
19"They were fingers."
ratio0.214
71.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences103
matches
0"The gap between the standing"
1"Aurora pressed through, brambles catching"
2"Moonlight struck the clearing like"
3"The sky above Richmond Park"
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
5"The air tasted of honey"
6"She pulled out her phone."
7"The time read 11:47 PM,"
8"The pendant hung warm against"
9"She'd noticed it pulsing three"
10"Whatever the thing wanted her"
11"Aurora started across the grove."
12"The grass bent under her"
13"The scar on her left"
14"She rubbed it without thinking."
15"Its roots broke the surface"
16"A perfect circle, edges smooth"
17"The pendant's heat intensified."
18"Aurora crouched beside the opening."
19"She held her hand over"
ratio0.777
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now it stretched wider, the"
ratio0.01
72.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A vibration in her teeth, in the bones of her skull, that arranged itself into the cadence of amusement."
1"For half a second, they weren't stones at all but figures, tall and thin and wrapped in something that moved like cloth but glistened like wet membrane."
2"Something darker than darkness, something that moved with the slow certainty of a predator that knew its prey had nowhere left to go."
3"The oak's roots weren't wood but bone, great curved ribs emerging from the earth to arch over the hole that wasn't a hole but a mouth, toothless and waiting."
4"But when she looked down at her palm, the shape it had left was clear: a crescent-shaped burn, matching the scar on her wrist, weeping clear fluid in the cold J…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.0831%