Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS31QH8Z3TRQW5JSS8XS0DK

Run Details

Duration:
45.6s
Cost:
$0.008558
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked in sequence—three sharp sounds against the quiet of the flat. Rory pulled the door open and stopped. Lucien stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the handle of his ivory cane, the other holding a paper bag from somewhere that smelled of fresh bread. His charcoal suit was immaculate despite the July heat pressing in through the open stairwell window behind him. The amber eye caught the light first. The black one swallowed it. "You're not Eva." "No." He didn't move from the threshold. "She's not expecting me either." "Brilliant. So you're just turning up at people's doors uninvited now." "I did it with your door for six months. You never complained." Rory's grip tightened on the door frame. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, sniffed in the direction of the hallway, then stalked off toward the kitchen with his tail rigid. "That was different." "Was it?" She didn't answer. The curry house downstairs had closed an hour ago, and the smell of spices had faded to something faint and sweet beneath the summer humidity. The landing felt smaller with him standing in it. "How did you get past the security door?" Lucien tilted his head. A strand of platinum hair slipped free of its careful arrangement. "The same way I do most things. Does it matter?" "It matters when my friend's flat has a broken lock because some Frenchman decided to—" "I didn't break anything. The mechanism was already faulty. I mentioned it to Eva in March." "And she didn't fix it." "You know Eva." Rory knew Eva. Eva had three deadbolts on her front door and a handwritten ward tucked into the frame and still left her windows cracked during heatwaves because she forgot. Eva collected problems the way she collected research notes—stacked them in piles and lost track of which ones needed addressing. "Come in. Before Mrs. Haseem sees you standing there and starts asking questions about another strange man visiting." Lucien stepped past her into the flat. His shoulder brushed hers—fabric against the thin cotton of Rory's t-shirt—and she moved back to give him space. The sitting room was barely large enough for the sofa and the overflowing bookshelf Eva had installed instead of a television. Scrolls spilled from a basket beside the armchair. Three mugs sat on the coffee table, two of them growing something that might have been mould. Lucien surveyed the chaos without comment. He set the paper bag on the only clear corner of the table, next to a stack of Celtic mythology texts. "Where is Eva?" "Conference. Birmingham. Three days." "Ah." He turned, and the full weight of his attention settled on Rory. "So you're housesitting." "Cat-sitting. Ptolemy doesn't like being alone." "The cat likes you more than he likes most people." "The cat likes anyone who feeds him." Lucien's mouth curved—not quite a smile, but the shape of one. The scar on his jaw caught the lamplight. Three months had done nothing to erase the details she'd tried to forget. The way he stood too still. The way his eyes tracked movement like something other than human. The way he smelled, which was stupid to notice, which was exactly the sort of thing she'd told herself not to think about anymore. "You're thinner." "Nice to see you too, Lucien." "It's not a criticism." "It's not your business either." He leaned the cane against the arm of the sofa. The ivory handle gleamed. Rory wondered if he'd ever actually needed it or if it had always been what it was—a sheath for something sharp and thin that he could draw faster than most people could blink. "Eva told you I was here." "No." "Then how—" "You deliver for Yu-Fei on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Brick Lane is on your route. You've been here four times this week." He said it without inflection, the same tone he used when pricing information for clients. "I waited until I saw you enter." Rory stared at him. The fan in the window rattled, pushing warm air through the room. "That's not creepy at all." "I needed to speak with you." "You could have called." "You changed your number." "Because I didn't want to speak with you." Lucien absorbed this. His expression didn't shift, but something in the set of his shoulders changed—a fraction of tension released, or maybe gathered. "Fair enough." "Is that all you came to say?" "No." He glanced at the sofa, then back at her. "May I sit?" Rory crossed her arms. The scar on her left wrist itched beneath the cuff of her sleeve—a nervous habit she'd never been able to break. "It's Eva's sofa." "She won't mind." "You don't know that." "I know Eva lets me sleep on that sofa when I'm too tired to cross the city after our meetings. She's made tea for me in that kitchen. She asked after my mother last week." Lucien paused. "You didn't know we still spoke." Something twisted in Rory's chest. She uncovered it, examined it, pushed it away. "No. I didn't." "Rory—" "Don't." The word came out harder than she intended. She softened, but only slightly. "You don't get to stand in my friend's flat and use my name like that. Not after what happened." "What happened was a misunderstanding." "You kissed me and then disappeared for two weeks." "I was in Avaros." "You didn't tell me that. You didn't tell me anything. I found out from Silas three days after you got back, and by then you were already—" She stopped. Started again. "You were already working another job. Something dangerous. Something you didn't think to mention." "The work is always dangerous." "That's not the point." "Then tell me the point." Rory dropped her arms. They fell to her sides, useless. "The point is you made a choice. You decided what I could and couldn't know, and you didn't ask me what I wanted. You just—acted. Like I was another client. Another piece of information to manage." Lucien moved. Not toward her—toward the window, where he stood with his back to the room and looked out at the Brick Lane lights spilling up through the evening haze. His reflection was ghostly in the glass, superimposed over the rooftops. "I have never treated you like a client." "Could have fooled me." "You want to know why I didn't tell you about Avaros." It wasn't a question. "You want to know why I left without explanation and came back the same way." "I want to know why you kissed me in the first place." He turned. The amber eye burned. The black one held something older, something that didn't reflect light the same way. "Because I wanted to. Because I'd wanted to for months. Because you were standing in my kitchen at two in the morning, arguing with me about demon contracts, and I couldn't think of a single reason not to." Rory's throat tightened. "And then you left." "And then I left." "Without a word." "There are things in Avaros that follow you back if you speak of them beforehand. My father's people. I couldn't risk—" "You could have told me after." "Yes." Lucien's voice dropped. "I could have." The fan rattled. Ptolemy yowled from the kitchen, demanding his dinner. Neither of them moved. "That's it? Yes, you could have?" "What do you want me to say, Rory? That I was wrong? That I handled it badly? I know I handled it badly. I've known since the night I came back and you wouldn't open your door." "You didn't knock." "I stood outside for twenty minutes. I heard you inside." Her pulse jumped. She remembered that night—remembered sitting on the floor of her flat above Silas' bar with her back against the door, listening to the silence in the hallway and telling herself it wasn't him, telling herself she was being paranoid, telling herself she didn't care. "You should have knocked." "I should have done a lot of things." The admission hung between them. Lucien's hands hung at his sides, loose, empty. No cane. No pretence. Just him, standing in Eva's cluttered sitting room with the smell of old curry and new bread and London summer pressing in from all sides. Rory looked at the paper bag he'd left on the table. "What's in the bag?" "Almond croissants. From the place on Old Compton Street." "I don't eat almond croissants." "Eva does. It's a peace offering. For the broken security door." "You're ridiculous." "I've been called worse." She should ask him to leave. She should point to the door and tell him that whatever this was—whatever he thought he was doing—she wasn't interested in reopening it. Three months of silence wasn't something you could undo with pastries and half-apologies. Three months of lying awake, replaying a kiss that lasted maybe ten seconds, wasn't something he could fix by showing up and looking at her with those mismatched eyes. But she didn't ask him to leave. "Eva has coffee in the cupboard above the stove. The good stuff, not the instant." Lucien's expression shifted again—that almost-smile, this time reaching further. "You're staying." "I didn't say that." "You're offering me coffee." "I'm telling you where the coffee is. What you do with that information is your choice." He moved toward the kitchen. Paused at the doorway, close enough that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the ones she'd noticed before and never mentioned. "Rory." "What?" "I'm glad you're here. Even if you wish I wasn't." She didn't respond. He disappeared into the kitchen, and a moment later she heard the cupboard open, the clink of the coffee jar, the hiss of the kettle. Ptolemy meowed again—louder this time, more insistent. Rory pressed her back against the door. The deadbolts were still undone. She should lock them. She should lock them and walk into the kitchen and tell Lucien Moreau that whatever had existed between them was finished, over, done. She pushed off the door and followed the smell of coffee into the other room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"tension"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1679
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount937
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
July1
Rory13
Eva5
Celtic1
Lucien12
Started1
Brick1
Lane1
London1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Three4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.806
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, but the shape of one"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.596
wordCount1679
matches
0"not quite a smile, but the shape of one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences168
matches
0"thin that he"
1"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs105
mean15.99
std16.92
cv1.058
sampleLengths
020
158
23
312
411
512
629
73
82
937
108
1125
1215
1316
145
153
1650
1718
1871
1927
203
214
2216
236
2410
257
2673
272
286
294
305
3147
326
331
342
3543
3616
375
386
394
404
418
4223
432
447
4513
4628
473
484
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences168
ratio0.071
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked in sequence—three sharp sounds against the quiet of the flat."
1"Eva collected problems the way she collected research notes—stacked them in piles and lost track of which ones needed addressing."
2"His shoulder brushed hers—fabric against the thin cotton of Rory's t-shirt—and she moved back to give him space."
3"Lucien's mouth curved—not quite a smile, but the shape of one."
4"Rory wondered if he'd ever actually needed it or if it had always been what it was—a sheath for something sharp and thin that he could draw faster than most people could blink."
5"His expression didn't shift, but something in the set of his shoulders changed—a fraction of tension released, or maybe gathered."
6"The scar on her left wrist itched beneath the cuff of her sleeve—a nervous habit she'd never been able to break."
7"Not toward her—toward the window, where he stood with his back to the room and looked out at the Brick Lane lights spilling up through the evening haze."
8"She remembered that night—remembered sitting on the floor of her flat above Silas' bar with her back against the door, listening to the silence in the hallway and telling herself it wasn't him, telling herself she was being paranoid, telling herself she didn't care."
9"She should point to the door and tell him that whatever this was—whatever he thought he was doing—she wasn't interested in reopening it."
10"Lucien's expression shifted again—that almost-smile, this time reaching further."
11"Ptolemy meowed again—louder this time, more insistent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount756
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03439153439153439
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010582010582010581
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean9.99
std8.92
cv0.892
sampleLengths
013
17
228
318
47
55
63
77
85
911
1012
117
1222
133
142
153
1625
179
188
194
2011
2110
2215
2316
245
253
263
2727
2820
2918
307
3118
3221
338
3417
356
3621
373
384
3913
403
416
4210
437
4411
458
4613
476
4811
4924
40.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners48
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just him, standing in Eva's"
ratio0.013
95.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences80
matches
0"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
1"He didn't move from the"
2"She didn't answer."
3"His shoulder brushed hers—fabric against"
4"He set the paper bag"
5"He turned, and the full"
6"He leaned the cane against"
7"He said it without inflection,"
8"His expression didn't shift, but"
9"He glanced at the sofa,"
10"She uncovered it, examined it,"
11"She softened, but only slightly."
12"They fell to her sides,"
13"His reflection was ghostly in"
14"It wasn't a question"
15"Her pulse jumped."
16"She remembered that night—remembered sitting"
17"She should ask him to"
18"She should point to the"
19"He moved toward the kitchen."
ratio0.313
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked in sequence—three"
1"Rory pulled the door open"
2"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
3"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
4"The amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed it."
6"He didn't move from the"
7"Rory's grip tightened on the"
8"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
9"She didn't answer."
10"The curry house downstairs had"
11"The landing felt smaller with"
12"Lucien tilted his head."
13"A strand of platinum hair"
14"Rory knew Eva."
15"Eva had three deadbolts on"
16"Eva collected problems the way"
17"Lucien stepped past her into"
18"His shoulder brushed hers—fabric against"
19"The sitting room was barely"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The black one held something older, something that didn't reflect light the same way."
1"Three months of lying awake, replaying a kiss that lasted maybe ten seconds, wasn't something he could fix by showing up and looking at her with those mismatche…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.011
leniency0.022
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0018%