Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS36CPK5FC82E1VB2CX7G41

Run Details

Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.006205
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant had been warm for three days straight. Rory stood at the edge of the oak standing stones, their bark silver-grey in the moonlight, and pressed her fingers against the crimson gemstone. It pulsed against her skin like a second heartbeat. The warmth had started small, barely noticeable during her delivery rounds, but by evening it had grown insistent, directional, pulling her southwest until she found herself at Richmond Park with a torch she'd bought at a petrol station and no memory of deciding to come here. The stones formed a rough circle maybe twenty feet across. Beyond them, wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that made no sense for late November. Bluebells. Foxgloves. Clusters of something that might have been primroses, their yellow petals catching light that seemed to come from nowhere. She stepped between two stones. The air changed. Thicker. Cooler. She could taste it on her tongue, something mineral and faintly sweet, like water drawn from a well that hadn't been used in decades. The city sounds she'd been ignoring all along vanished. No distant traffic. No aircraft. No dogs barking in suburban gardens. Just silence, and the weight of her own breathing. The pendant flared hotter. She pulled her hand away, flexing her fingers against the residual warmth. "You brought me here for something." She said it to the pendant, to the grove, to whatever had decided she needed to be standing in a fairy tale at half past eleven on a Tuesday. "So what is it?" The wildflowers swayed. No breeze touched her face. Rory went still. She counted her breaths. One. Two. Five. Ten. The flowers continued their slow, synchronized dance, stems bending in unison toward the centre of the clearing, then straightening, then bending again. A rhythm. Like something breathing. The moonlight looked wrong. She tilted her head back and stared at the sky, searching for the source of the illumination that painted everything in that pale, flat glow. She couldn't find the moon. Couldn't find stars either, though the sky hadn't been overcast when she'd entered the park. She checked her phone. No signal. The time read 23:47, but the numbers didn't change when she watched them. The flowers had stopped moving. Rory became aware of a sound. Low, almost below the threshold of hearing. A hum that resonated in her chest rather than her ears. It could have been machinery. Could have been wind through a gap she couldn't see. Could have been a lot of things, and she filed each possibility away and found problems with all of them. She walked toward the centre of the clearing. The ground felt soft under her boots, softer than it should have, and when she looked down she couldn't see her footprints in the carpet of flowers. They closed behind her. Not slowly. Instantly, as though she'd never stepped there at all. The pendant's heat spiked. Rory stopped walking and lifted the chain over her head. The gemstone swung gently, still pulsing, and she held it at arm's length to see if the direction changed. It pointed the same way. Forward. Deeper. Something shifted at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head left. Nothing. Just the standing stones, their bark seeming darker now, their shapes more angular than they'd appeared before. She could have sworn there had been seven stones when she entered. She counted now. Nine. A second movement, to her right this time. She caught the impression of height, of something tall and thin standing just beyond the circle's boundary. When she looked directly at it, she saw only empty air and the shadows between the oaks. Her heart rate kicked up. She forced her breathing steady, forced her hands to stay at her sides. "I can see you not-seeing you." The words came out flatter than she'd intended. "That's a new one." The hum changed pitch. Higher. Still quiet, still felt more than heard, but the shift registered like a warning bell in some primitive part of her brain. The wildflowers began to move again. This time they weren't swaying toward the centre. They were pressing flat against the ground, petals folding closed, stems bowing as though something heavy were passing over them in a wave that originated from the far side of the clearing and rolled toward her. Rory backed up. Her heel struck one of the standing stones. The stone was warm. She spun and pressed her palm flat against the bark. Warm like skin. Warm like the pendant. She pulled her hand back and the stone's surface seemed to shimmer, grain blurring into something that looked briefly, impossibly, like the texture of a cheek. The hum had stopped. The silence that replaced it was worse. A silence with weight, with intent, a silence that felt like the held breath before a word. Rory clutched the pendant in her closed fist. The heat bordered on painful now, and she could feel her own pulse in her wrist where the crescent scar sat, could feel it syncing with the gemstone's rhythm until she couldn't tell which heartbeat was which. A sound. Behind her. Not the hum. Something closer to a footstep, if a footstep could sound like the compression of wet soil and the whisper of petals being crushed and the creak of something adjusting itself to a new position all at once. She didn't turn around. The wildflowers around her feet had gone flat. Not bent. Flattened, as though pressed by an invisible hand, and in their flattened state she could see something she hadn't noticed before. The ground beneath them wasn't soil. It was too dark, too smooth, too reflective. When she tilted her head, she caught her own shape in it, distorted and wrong, her reflection showing her standing perfectly still while something behind her leaned closer. The pendant burned. Another footstep. Closer. The compression of earth, the crush of flowers, and now a new sound layered beneath it. Breathing. Slow and deep and coming from a height that didn't match anything human. Rory's fist tightened around the gemstone until the facets bit into her palm. She could feel blood welling in the cuts, could feel it running between her fingers, could feel the pendant drinking it in the way a dry cloth drinks water. The reflection shifted. Whatever stood behind her had moved again. Not closer. Around. Circling. She counted the reflections. One. Two. Three of her, distorted in the dark ground, and behind each one a shape that wasn't quite solid, wasn't quite there, but was absolutely, undeniably present. The warmth in the pendant flared one final time, and in its light she saw the centre of the clearing for what it was. Not empty. Not flowers and soft earth. A hole. A opening. A darkness that the moonlight-that-wasn't-moonlight couldn't penetrate, and from that darkness, something was rising.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"synchronized"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count5
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"synchronized"
5"dance"
6"resonated"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"whisper"
10"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1127
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
November1
Tuesday1
Rory7
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"light that seemed to come from nowhere"
1"felt like the held breath before a word"
2"quite there, but was absolutely, undeniably present"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1147
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.68
std20.5
cv0.715
sampleLengths
09
179
246
35
449
59
616
739
88
93
1035
1149
1219
135
1459
1550
164
1736
188
1939
2042
2118
2218
2327
2450
2511
264
2743
284
2924
3045
3144
324
3373
343
3533
3642
3714
3832
3949
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"been used"
1"been seven"
95.29% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs191
matches
0"weren't swaying"
1"were passing"
2"was rising"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.040671971706454466
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010610079575596816
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.18
std9.38
cv1.022
sampleLengths
09
124
29
346
410
515
61
71
819
95
103
111
121
1324
149
153
162
176
189
194
2012
2135
224
233
245
253
264
271
281
291
301
3122
322
333
344
3525
365
3715
384
392
4013
415
426
437
4411
455
4610
4720
488
4927
55.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.392
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"Just silence, and the weight"
1"Instantly, as though she'd never"
2"Just the standing stones, their"
3"Still quiet, still felt more"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences92
matches
0"It pulsed against her skin"
1"She stepped between two stones."
2"She could taste it on"
3"She pulled her hand away,"
4"She said it to the"
5"She counted her breaths."
6"She tilted her head back"
7"She couldn't find the moon."
8"She checked her phone."
9"It could have been machinery."
10"She walked toward the centre"
11"They closed behind her."
12"It pointed the same way."
13"She snapped her head left."
14"She could have sworn there"
15"She counted now."
16"She caught the impression of"
17"Her heart rate kicked up."
18"She forced her breathing steady,"
19"They were pressing flat against"
ratio0.293
79.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences92
matches
0"The pendant had been warm"
1"Rory stood at the edge"
2"It pulsed against her skin"
3"The warmth had started small,"
4"The stones formed a rough"
5"Clusters of something that might"
6"She stepped between two stones."
7"The air changed."
8"She could taste it on"
9"The city sounds she'd been"
10"The pendant flared hotter."
11"She pulled her hand away,"
12"She said it to the"
13"The wildflowers swayed."
14"Rory went still."
15"She counted her breaths."
16"The flowers continued their slow,"
17"The moonlight looked wrong."
18"She tilted her head back"
19"She couldn't find the moon."
ratio0.761
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Clusters of something that might have been primroses, their yellow petals catching light that seemed to come from nowhere."
1"A hum that resonated in her chest rather than her ears."
2"They were pressing flat against the ground, petals folding closed, stems bowing as though something heavy were passing over them in a wave that originated from …"
3"She pulled her hand back and the stone's surface seemed to shimmer, grain blurring into something that looked briefly, impossibly, like the texture of a cheek."
4"Flattened, as though pressed by an invisible hand, and in their flattened state she could see something she hadn't noticed before."
5"When she tilted her head, she caught her own shape in it, distorted and wrong, her reflection showing her standing perfectly still while something behind her le…"
6"Three of her, distorted in the dark ground, and behind each one a shape that wasn't quite solid, wasn't quite there, but was absolutely, undeniably present."
7"A darkness that the moonlight-that-wasn't-moonlight couldn't penetrate, and from that darkness, something was rising."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9979%