| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "synchronized" | | 5 | "dance" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "absolutely" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1147 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to come from nowhere" | | 1 | "felt like the held breath before a word" | | 2 | "quite there, but was absolutely, undeniably present" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 28.68 | | std | 20.5 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 73 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 49 |
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| 99.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "been used" | | 1 | "been seven" |
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| 95.29% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't swaying" | | 1 | "were passing" | | 2 | "was rising" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.41% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1131 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.040671971706454466 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010610079575596816 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 9.18 | | std | 9.38 | | cv | 1.022 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 55.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.392 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, and the weight" | | 1 | "Instantly, as though she'd never" | | 2 | "Just the standing stones, their" | | 3 | "Still quiet, still felt more" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed against her skin" | | 1 | "She stepped between two stones." | | 2 | "She could taste it on" | | 3 | "She pulled her hand away," | | 4 | "She said it to the" | | 5 | "She counted her breaths." | | 6 | "She tilted her head back" | | 7 | "She couldn't find the moon." | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "It could have been machinery." | | 10 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 11 | "They closed behind her." | | 12 | "It pointed the same way." | | 13 | "She snapped her head left." | | 14 | "She could have sworn there" | | 15 | "She counted now." | | 16 | "She caught the impression of" | | 17 | "Her heart rate kicked up." | | 18 | "She forced her breathing steady," | | 19 | "They were pressing flat against" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 79.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had been warm" | | 1 | "Rory stood at the edge" | | 2 | "It pulsed against her skin" | | 3 | "The warmth had started small," | | 4 | "The stones formed a rough" | | 5 | "Clusters of something that might" | | 6 | "She stepped between two stones." | | 7 | "The air changed." | | 8 | "She could taste it on" | | 9 | "The city sounds she'd been" | | 10 | "The pendant flared hotter." | | 11 | "She pulled her hand away," | | 12 | "She said it to the" | | 13 | "The wildflowers swayed." | | 14 | "Rory went still." | | 15 | "She counted her breaths." | | 16 | "The flowers continued their slow," | | 17 | "The moonlight looked wrong." | | 18 | "She tilted her head back" | | 19 | "She couldn't find the moon." |
| | ratio | 0.761 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Clusters of something that might have been primroses, their yellow petals catching light that seemed to come from nowhere." | | 1 | "A hum that resonated in her chest rather than her ears." | | 2 | "They were pressing flat against the ground, petals folding closed, stems bowing as though something heavy were passing over them in a wave that originated from …" | | 3 | "She pulled her hand back and the stone's surface seemed to shimmer, grain blurring into something that looked briefly, impossibly, like the texture of a cheek." | | 4 | "Flattened, as though pressed by an invisible hand, and in their flattened state she could see something she hadn't noticed before." | | 5 | "When she tilted her head, she caught her own shape in it, distorted and wrong, her reflection showing her standing perfectly still while something behind her le…" | | 6 | "Three of her, distorted in the dark ground, and behind each one a shape that wasn't quite solid, wasn't quite there, but was absolutely, undeniably present." | | 7 | "A darkness that the moonlight-that-wasn't-moonlight couldn't penetrate, and from that darkness, something was rising." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |