| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.158 | | leniency | 0.316 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "glint" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "constructed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 901 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Herrera" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Quinn | 1 | | Saturday | 1 | | Buck | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 8 | | Veil | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Harlow | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Street" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Buck" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Herrera" | | 6 | "Morris" | | 7 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite surrender" | | 1 | "Something like recognition crossed his featu" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 31.08 | | std | 23.1 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 76 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 60 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded the corner in time to see him heading straight for the old Tube station entrance—the one that had been closed since the Blitz, its tiled walls now plastered with faded gig posters and graffiti." | | 1 | "The smell hit her first—wet concrete and something else, something chemical and sharp that tingled the back of her throat." | | 2 | "She caught glimpses of him through the gaps in the stairwell railing—dark hair, olive skin, the glint of something metal around his neck." | | 3 | "The ceiling was lower here, forcing her to duck her head, and the amber emergency lights had given way to something else—bioluminescent strips that pulsed with a pale green glow, like the veins of something alive." | | 4 | "Stalls crowded the space—hundreds of them—constructed from salvaged materials and draped with fabrics that shifted colours when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 5 | "A vendor at the nearest stall—a woman with silver threading through her hair and eyes that reflected light like a cat's—watched their exchange without expression." | | 6 | "DS Morris's face flashed behind her eyes—his desk, still cluttered with case files the morning after he disappeared, his coffee gone cold, his car found abandoned in an alley with the engine running and the doors locked from the inside." | | 7 | "Somewhere deeper in the market, something that might have been music started up—a low, rhythmic thrumming that she felt in her sternum rather than heard with her ears." | | 8 | "\"I have a token.\" He reached into his jacket pocket and produced something that made her stomach lurch—a fragment of bone, smooth and yellowed, strung on a leather cord." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 913 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.01642935377875137 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00547645125958379 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 13.86 | | std | 10.48 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 59.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.40963855421686746 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of tracks, a narrow" | | 1 | "Somewhere deeper in the market," |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldered through them, hearing" | | 1 | "Her lungs burned." | | 2 | "She rounded the corner in" | | 3 | "He didn't slow down." | | 4 | "He went straight down the" | | 5 | "She counted the landings." | | 6 | "His footsteps didn't falter." | | 7 | "She caught glimpses of him" | | 8 | "She'd seen it in the" | | 9 | "She could hear him ahead," | | 10 | "He knew where he was" | | 11 | "It shouldn't have existed." | | 12 | "They'd descended maybe sixty feet," | | 13 | "He'd turned to face her," | | 14 | "She tapped the glass." | | 15 | "He reached into his jacket" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn sprinted past a" | | 1 | "A group of teenagers spilled" | | 2 | "She shouldered through them, hearing" | | 3 | "The suspect vaulted a bicycle" | | 4 | "Her lungs burned." | | 5 | "She rounded the corner in" | | 6 | "He didn't slow down." | | 7 | "He went straight down the" | | 8 | "Harlow hit the top of" | | 9 | "The smell hit her first—wet" | | 10 | "Emergency lighting cast the stairwell" | | 11 | "The sound of his footsteps" | | 12 | "She counted the landings." | | 13 | "The air grew colder with" | | 14 | "His footsteps didn't falter." | | 15 | "She caught glimpses of him" | | 16 | "The Saint Christopher medallion." | | 17 | "She'd seen it in the" | | 18 | "The paramedic who'd lost his" | | 19 | "The stairs ended at a" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow hit the top of the staircase at full speed, her boots splashing through puddles that had collected on each cracked step." | | 1 | "Emergency lighting cast the stairwell in a sickly amber glow that flickered at irregular intervals." | | 2 | "The paramedic who'd lost his licence under circumstances that didn't add up, the one who kept turning up on the periphery of cases she couldn't close." | | 3 | "He'd turned to face her, chest heaving, rainwater dripping from his jacket onto the stone floor." | | 4 | "Around her, the market continued its commerce, unhurried, as if a police detective stumbling into their midst was merely a mild diversion." | | 5 | "Somewhere deeper in the market, something that might have been music started up—a low, rhythmic thrumming that she felt in her sternum rather than heard with he…" | | 6 | "The silver-haired woman tilted her head, studying Harlow with an expression that bordered on hunger." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |