Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS37880PB76M2TMYFTY6T3K

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.005593
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down smelled of rust and stagnant water. Harlow Quinn clicked her torch on and swept the beam across the tiled walls, past faded advertising posters for products that hadn't existed in sixty years. Her leather watch caught on the railing as she descended, and she tugged her wrist free without breaking stride. Twenty-three steps. She'd counted them on the way down. The body lay near the third pillar from the platform edge. A man, mid-fifties, grey hair matted with something darker than water. His arms were spread at odd angles, palms up, fingers curled as if grasping at something invisible. "Found him at half-six this morning. Night shift worker taking a shortcut through the maintenance access." DC Ffrench crouched three metres from the body, his notebook open, pen hovering. Young. Twenty-four, maybe twenty-five. Still believed the job was about justice. "Shortcut through a sealed station." "People do." "Not this one." Harlow moved closer, her torch beam tracking the ground around the body. No footprints in the dust except the victim's and what looked like Ffrench's size tens. "This station's been closed since 1941. The entry points are all welded shut." Ffrench stood, his knees cracking. "Maintenance hatch on Chalk Farm Road. Lock's been picked clean." She knelt beside the body. The man's clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, leather shoes that had barely been worn. Not the sort of person who'd wander into abandoned Tube stations at night. His face held an expression she'd seen before, three years ago, on DS Morris. Mouth slightly open. Eyes wide. Not fear, exactly. Something worse. Recognition. "Cause of death?" "Pathologist's initial guess is cardiac arrest. No visible wounds, no signs of struggle. Toxicology will take a few days." Harlow tilted her head, studying the victim's outstretched hands. In the crook of his right palm sat a small object. She pulled on nitrile gloves and lifted it carefully. A brass compass. Old. The casing had that green-blue verdigris that took decades to form. Etched into the face were symbols she didn't recognise—nested circles broken by angular lines, nothing like standard cartographic markings. "Something from his pockets?" "Didn't see it when I got here." She turned the compass over. The back was smooth, unmarked. When she flipped it again, the needle spun. Not the lazy drift of a demagnetised device. Fast. Deliberate. It stopped pointing north and instead aimed directly at the far wall of the platform, past the Victorian ironwork, into solid earth. "His wallet's in his inside pocket. Brian Ashworth, fifty-three. Address in Hampstead. Credit cards, about two hundred in cash, phone's missing." "Phone's missing." Harlow pocketed the compass. "Robbery?" "That's what I thought. Take the phone, leave the cash and cards. Doesn't make sense unless the robber got spooked." "Doesn't make sense at all." She stood and walked toward the wall the compass had indicated. The tiles here were different from the rest—newer, if you could call 1920s tile newer. The grout between them had cracked, and in the centre of the section, a dark stain spread outward like a bruise. "You see this?" Ffrench joined her. "Damp, probably. Water damage." "Water damage that avoids the grout lines." Harlow ran her gloved finger along the edge of the stain. The tile beneath was warm. "Feel that." Ffrench touched the wall and pulled his hand back. "That's—there must be a pipe behind there. Hot water main or something." "In a station that's been sealed for eighty years." Silence. Harlow turned back to the body. Ashworth's left hand had been empty when she checked, but now she noticed something else. The sleeves of his coat were pushed up past his wrists. On his left forearm, a mark. Not a tattoo—too fresh, the skin still raised and angry. A symbol that matched the etchings on the compass face. "He came here deliberately. Brought that compass, knew where to stand." "The lock on the hatch—" "Was picked by someone who knew what they were doing, or was already open when he arrived." Harlow walked the circumference of the platform, her torch picking out details Ffrench had missed. Scratch marks on the tiles near the stain. Not random—the same symbol, repeated, carved into the ceramic with something sharp. And beneath the scratch marks, fainter, older marks in the same pattern. Someone had done this before. Multiple times. "You're thinking ritual?" "I'm thinking I don't know what this is." She stopped at the platform edge and looked down into the tunnel. Dark. Silent. The rails had been removed during the war, leaving only bare sleepers rotting in the damp. "But Ashworth didn't stumble in here by accident, and whatever killed him left no evidence except that compass and a mark on his arm." "The pathologist—" "Will find cardiac arrest and write it up as natural causes." Harlow pulled the compass from her pocket again. The needle still pointed at the wall. She watched it for a long moment. "Get me everything on Ashworth. Work history, financials, social connections. And find out who reported this—your night shift worker, I want a name and a statement within the hour." Ffrench scratched something in his notebook. "And the compass?" "It's evidence." "It's not standard evidence, is it? The symbols on it, the way it moves—" "Ffrench." Harlow's voice cut through his hesitation. "It's evidence. It gets bagged, tagged, and logged. That's what we do." She crossed back to the body one more time, studying Ashworth's face. That expression of recognition. He'd seen something behind that wall. Something he'd expected to find, or maybe something that had surprised him. Either way, it had stopped his heart. The compass needle trembled in her palm, pointing at nothing she could see.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"standard"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"standard"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords948
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount638
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Ffrench7
Tube1
Morris1
Victorian1
Scratch1
Dark1
Ashworth2
Harlow9
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Ffrench"
2"Morris"
3"Scratch"
4"Ashworth"
5"Harlow"
places(empty)
globalScore0.795
windowScore0.833
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if grasping at something invisible"
1"looked like Ffrench's size tens"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount948
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.12
std20.52
cv0.887
sampleLengths
054
19
239
316
424
55
62
743
815
957
103
1119
1229
1334
144
157
1650
1721
187
1920
2052
213
227
2325
2421
259
261
2758
2811
295
3071
313
3262
332
3462
359
362
3714
3819
3941
4013
91.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"been worn"
1"were pushed"
2"been removed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"The man's clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, leather shoes that had barely been worn."
1"Etched into the face were symbols she didn't recognise—nested circles broken by angular lines, nothing like standard cartographic markings."
2"The tiles here were different from the rest—newer, if you could call 1920s tile newer."
3"Not a tattoo—too fresh, the skin still raised and angry."
4"Not random—the same symbol, repeated, carved into the ceramic with something sharp."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount648
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.030864197530864196
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean9.39
std6.86
cv0.731
sampleLengths
09
126
219
32
47
511
611
717
816
913
101
113
127
135
142
1515
1615
1713
185
1910
205
2114
2213
2314
243
252
263
272
281
293
3019
319
3211
339
343
351
3611
3719
384
397
405
415
428
438
441
451
4622
4721
486
491
90.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5544554455445545
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners56
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Still believed the job was"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her leather watch caught on"
1"She'd counted them on the"
2"His arms were spread at"
3"She knelt beside the body."
4"His face held an expression"
5"She pulled on nitrile gloves"
6"She turned the compass over."
7"It stopped pointing north and"
8"She stood and walked toward"
9"She stopped at the platform"
10"She watched it for a"
11"She crossed back to the"
12"He'd seen something behind that"
ratio0.21
80.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences62
matches
0"The stairs down smelled of"
1"Harlow Quinn clicked her torch"
2"Her leather watch caught on"
3"She'd counted them on the"
4"The body lay near the"
5"A man, mid-fifties, grey hair"
6"His arms were spread at"
7"DC Ffrench crouched three metres"
8"Harlow moved closer, her torch"
9"Ffrench stood, his knees cracking."
10"She knelt beside the body."
11"The man's clothes were expensive—tailored"
12"His face held an expression"
13"Harlow tilted her head, studying"
14"She pulled on nitrile gloves"
15"A brass compass."
16"The casing had that green-blue"
17"She turned the compass over."
18"The back was smooth, unmarked."
19"It stopped pointing north and"
ratio0.758
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Either way, it had stopped"
ratio0.016
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His arms were spread at odd angles, palms up, fingers curled as if grasping at something invisible."
1"The casing had that green-blue verdigris that took decades to form."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Harlow moved, her torch beam tracking the ground around the body"
1"Harlow walked, her torch picking out details Ffrench had missed"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7237%