| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stopped again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 96 | | tagDensity | 0.104 | | leniency | 0.208 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.021 | |
| 92.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1954 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1954 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pristine" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "lilt" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "sentinel" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 190 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1947 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 36 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 948 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Didn | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Lucien | 6 | | Silas | 1 | | French | 1 | | Close | 1 | | Drew | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Drew" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1947 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 118 | | mean | 16.5 | | std | 15.34 | | cv | 0.93 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 65 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 82.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 190 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "The movement brought him close enough that she caught his scent—something that wasn't cologne, something older, smoke and spice and something underneath that made her teeth ache." | | 1 | "A bookshelf creaked—probably the cat knocking something over, he had a talent for destruction disguised as curiosity." | | 2 | "That same something from the doorway—raw and unguarded and gone before she could name it." | | 3 | "Should protect herself the way she'd been protecting herself for years—by building walls, by keeping distance, by not letting anyone close enough to do real damage." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 952 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03466386554621849 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0063025210084033615 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 190 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 190 | | mean | 10.25 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 0.94 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 54.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3684210526315789 | | totalSentences | 190 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, the curry house" | | 1 | "Of course he'd noticed." | | 2 | "Instead, she moved past him" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 1 | "He didn't smile" | | 2 | "He repeated the words back" | | 3 | "She knew this game." | | 4 | "He straightened from the doorframe." | | 5 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 6 | "She fought the urge to" | | 7 | "Her name in his mouth." | | 8 | "She hated the way her" | | 9 | "He tilted his head." | | 10 | "She stepped back." | | 11 | "He followed, cane tapping against" | | 12 | "He moved through the chaos" | | 13 | "He turned from the window" | | 14 | "It was part of what" | | 15 | "He set his cane against" | | 16 | "She wanted to scream." | | 17 | "Her hands went cold." | | 18 | "He ran a hand through" | | 19 | "She let out a breath." |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts clicked in sequence." | | 1 | "Rory pulled the door open" | | 2 | "Lucien leaned against the doorframe," | | 3 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 4 | "The black one did not." | | 5 | "He didn't smile" | | 6 | "The question hung between them." | | 7 | "Ptolemy wound through Rory's ankles," | | 8 | "Rory kept her grip on" | | 9 | "He repeated the words back" | | 10 | "Heat crawled up the back" | | 11 | "She knew this game." | | 12 | "He straightened from the doorframe." | | 13 | "The movement brought him close" | | 14 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 15 | "She fought the urge to" | | 16 | "The silence stretched." | | 17 | "Her name in his mouth." | | 18 | "The French lilt turning the" | | 19 | "She hated the way her" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "To the scar there, the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The movement brought him close enough that she caught his scent—something that wasn't cologne, something older, smoke and spice and something underneath that ma…" | | 1 | "The French lilt turning the R into something soft, something that belonged in dark rooms and whispered conversations." | | 2 | "Wanted to close the distance between them and do something that would make this worse, that would complicate it further, that would make it impossible to ever u…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 96 | | tagDensity | 0.01 | | leniency | 0.021 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.021 | |