Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS38BERBB2A54GRYKWETMG3

Run Details

Duration:
27.9s
Cost:
$0.005563
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks marked the boundary. Aurora had memorised their shapes from Eva's descriptions—three standing stones grown through with ancient bark, their surfaces carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly. She found them easily. The pendant at her throat had warmed half a mile back, its faint crimson glow visible through her jacket. She needed answers. Dymas had sent the thing to her flat with no note, no explanation, and Yu-Fei had gone missing three days later. The trail led here, to Richmond Park, to a grove that didn't appear on any map. The wildflowers shouldn't have been blooming. Not in November. Not at eleven at night. Yet there they carpeted the clearing beyond the stones—bluebells and foxglove and things she couldn't name, all vibrant despite the darkness. She stepped through the gap between the oaks. The temperature dropped. Not the gradual cooling of evening, but a sudden shift, like walking into a cellar. Her breath fogged. The grove stretched wider than it should have. She'd read about pocket spaces, places that existed between realms, but reading and standing inside one were different experiences entirely. The moonlight that had guided her through the park didn't reach here. Instead, a pale luminescence seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves. The pendant pulsed. Warmth spread across her collarbone. "Hello?" Her voice came out wrong. Muffled, as if the air itself was thicker. She tried again. "Is anyone here?" Nothing moved. The flowers swayed without wind. She pulled out her phone. No signal. The time read 11:04. She pocketed it and stepped further in, scanning the tree line for any sign of a path, a structure, anything that might explain why Yu-Fei had been drawn here. A sound. Behind her. She turned. Nothing but the oaks and the flowers and the wrong-coloured light. "Yu-Fei?" The silence pressed against her ears. Not absence of sound—silence as a presence, a weight. She became aware of her own heartbeat, the rustle of her jacket, the soft crunch of her boots on soil that felt too damp for the season. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Left side. She snapped her head that direction and caught only the tail end of motion—a shadow that wasn't cast by anything, sliding behind a birch tree. Rory counted to three. Kept her breathing even. Her father had taught her that in courtrooms—control the body and the mind follows. "Right." She addressed the grove directly. "I don't know what you are. I'm here to find someone. A woman, Chinese, late fifties. She might have come through here in the last few days." The flowers nearest to her closed. Not wilted—folded shut like hands clasping together. She backed up a step. The pendant's warmth flared hot enough to sting. She grabbed it instinctively, and the crimson glow brightened, throwing shadows across the clearing that moved independently of any light source. Time. Eva had warned her about the time. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. She checked her phone again. 11:04. The same minute. She stared at the screen. Waited. The seconds didn't change. "Okay. Okay, that's not good." A laugh. Soft and distant, coming from everywhere and nowhere. Not Yu-Fei's laugh. Too high, too musical, like wind chimes in a storm. Rory's hand found the small scar on her left wrist. An old habit, grounding herself with something familiar. The crescent-shaped mark from when she'd fallen through a glass table at seven. The pain had been sharp and immediate and real. Nothing here felt real. The tree line had changed. She was certain of it. The birch that the shadow had ducked behind now stood closer. Or she stood closer to it. The geometry of the grove refused to stay fixed. Another sound. Footsteps this time, unmistakable. Behind the birch. Slow. Deliberate. Circling. She pulled her jacket tighter and forced herself to stand still. Running from something you couldn't see in a place where directions didn't work—that was how people died in horror films. "You're not Yu-Fei." She kept her voice level. Practised. "You're not going to scare me into running. So either show yourself or let me leave." The footsteps stopped. The wildflowers began to bloom in reverse. Petals unfurling, then closing, then unfurling again in a rhythm that matched her pulse. The pendant burned against her palm. From somewhere deeper in the grove, past the shifting trees and the breathing flowers, something answered her. Not with words. With a sound like a name being whispered backwards, like recognition, like something that had been waiting a very long time finally hearing the right footstep on the path. Rory's cool-headedness cracked. Just a hairline fracture, but she felt it—the first cold tendril of genuine fear threading through her controlled calm. She'd come here looking for Yu-Fei. Something else had found her first. The shadows between the trees lengthened. Not from any change in light. They simply grew, stretching toward her like fingers reaching for something precious that had been dropped on the floor. Her phone screen flickered in her peripheral vision. She didn't look at it. Didn't want to know what the time read now. Didn't want to know how long she'd actually been standing here. The whispering grew louder. Still not words she could parse, but closer to language with each repetition. Learning. Adapting. The pendant's glow dimmed. The warmth faded. In the sudden grey half-light, Aurora Carter saw what stood between her and the oaks, and understood with perfect clarity that the grove had never intended to let her leave at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount936
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount936
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"structure"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"scanning"
3"structure"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"footsteps"
8"pulse"
9"flickered"
10"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences108
matches
0"d in horror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords928
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount871
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Yu-Fei"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Yu-Fei4
Richmond1
Park1
November1
Practised1
Aurora2
Carter1
Rory3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.155
wordCount928
matches
0"Not the gradual cooling of evening, but a sudden shift, like walking into a cellar"
1"not words she could parse, but closer to language with each repetition"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean20.17
std15.45
cv0.766
sampleLengths
054
140
243
321
451
58
61
716
83
97
1040
114
1213
131
1442
1535
1622
1733
1813
195
2029
2117
226
233
2410
255
2623
2740
284
2936
3012
3131
3225
333
3421
356
3649
3722
386
396
4031
4133
4219
434
443
4532
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"been drawn"
1"being whispered"
2"been dropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences114
ratio0.07
matches
0"Aurora had memorised their shapes from Eva's descriptions—three standing stones grown through with ancient bark, their surfaces carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly."
1"Yet there they carpeted the clearing beyond the stones—bluebells and foxglove and things she couldn't name, all vibrant despite the darkness."
2"Not absence of sound—silence as a presence, a weight."
3"She snapped her head that direction and caught only the tail end of motion—a shadow that wasn't cast by anything, sliding behind a birch tree."
4"Her father had taught her that in courtrooms—control the body and the mind follows."
5"Not wilted—folded shut like hands clasping together."
6"Running from something you couldn't see in a place where directions didn't work—that was how people died in horror films."
7"Just a hairline fracture, but she felt it—the first cold tendril of genuine fear threading through her controlled calm."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sudden grey half-light,"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.030439684329199548
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011273957158962795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean8.14
std7.21
cv0.885
sampleLengths
05
126
24
319
43
521
616
76
83
95
1021
118
123
1315
143
158
1620
1712
1811
193
205
211
225
238
243
253
262
275
285
292
304
3129
322
332
342
3511
361
376
389
3927
408
412
4225
434
444
4514
466
4727
486
497
66.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4336283185840708
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Instead, a pale luminescence seemed"
1"Too high, too musical, like"
2"Just a hairline fracture, but"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences90
matches
0"She found them easily."
1"She needed answers."
2"She stepped through the gap"
3"Her breath fogged."
4"She'd read about pocket spaces,"
5"Her voice came out wrong."
6"She tried again."
7"She pulled out her phone."
8"She pocketed it and stepped"
9"She became aware of her"
10"She snapped her head that"
11"Her father had taught her"
12"She addressed the grove directly"
13"She backed up a step."
14"She grabbed it instinctively, and"
15"She checked her phone again."
16"She stared at the screen."
17"She was certain of it."
18"She pulled her jacket tighter"
19"She kept her voice level"
ratio0.267
93.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences90
matches
0"The oaks marked the boundary."
1"Aurora had memorised their shapes"
2"She found them easily."
3"The pendant at her throat"
4"She needed answers."
5"Dymas had sent the thing"
6"The trail led here, to"
7"The wildflowers shouldn't have been"
8"She stepped through the gap"
9"The temperature dropped."
10"Her breath fogged."
11"The grove stretched wider than"
12"She'd read about pocket spaces,"
13"The moonlight that had guided"
14"The pendant pulsed."
15"Warmth spread across her collarbone."
16"Her voice came out wrong."
17"She tried again."
18"The flowers swayed without wind."
19"She pulled out her phone."
ratio0.733
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora had memorised their shapes from Eva's descriptions—three standing stones grown through with ancient bark, their surfaces carved with symbols that hurt to…"
1"She'd read about pocket spaces, places that existed between realms, but reading and standing inside one were different experiences entirely."
2"She pocketed it and stepped further in, scanning the tree line for any sign of a path, a structure, anything that might explain why Yu-Fei had been drawn here."
3"She became aware of her own heartbeat, the rustle of her jacket, the soft crunch of her boots on soil that felt too damp for the season."
4"She snapped her head that direction and caught only the tail end of motion—a shadow that wasn't cast by anything, sliding behind a birch tree."
5"Petals unfurling, then closing, then unfurling again in a rhythm that matched her pulse."
6"With a sound like a name being whispered backwards, like recognition, like something that had been waiting a very long time finally hearing the right footstep o…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She addressed (address)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
79.6447%