Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS39QGT8XNTF13Y5ZQG2WQR

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.006508
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down smelled of rust and damp concrete. Harlow Quinn clicked her torch on and swept the beam across the walls. Old tile work. Victorian, maybe older. A faded sign hung crooked above the platform edge, letters worn beyond recognition. "This way, Detective." Sergeant Caldwell stood at the bottom, clipboard in hand, his face caught between boredom and something else. Something he was trying to hide. "Who found it?" "Night shift. Maintenance crew doing a structural check on the disused lines. One of them spotted the... well. You'll see." Quinn descended the last few steps and followed him along the platform. The air grew colder. Her watch caught the light as she moved, the leather strap loose on her wrist from years of wear. Eva Kowalski was already there, crouched near the far end of the platform where it curved into darkness. Her red curls caught the beam of Quinn's torch as she turned. "You called the museum?" Caldwell shifted his weight. "Chief Superintendent's orders. Something about the symbols. Figured someone from the archives might have a clue what we're dealing with." Quinn stopped a few feet from Eva. The younger woman had her satchel open beside her, books spilling out onto the grimy concrete. Round glasses reflected the torchlight. "What have you got, Evie?" Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear and pointed. "Look at the body first. Then the surroundings." The body lay supine on the tracks. Male, mid-thirties by the look of him, dressed in clothes that cost more than Quinn's monthly rent. Grey wool coat, no visible blood. His face held an expression she'd seen before, three years ago, on DS Morris. Peaceful. Wrong. "No trauma?" "That's what I said." Caldwell flipped a page on his clipboard. "Preliminary assessment suggests cardiac arrest. bloke just dropped dead. Could be drugs, could be pre-existing condition. The tox screen will tell us." Quinn crouched at the edge of the platform. The rails beneath the body gleamed, untouched by rust. That was wrong. Everything else down here had corroded decades ago. "Anything in his pockets?" "Wallet. About three hundred quid in cash. Cards bearing the name Jonathan Ashworth. No phone." She reached down and examined his hands. Clean fingernails. No defensive wounds. No sign he'd tried to break a fall. The positioning was too neat, as if someone had laid him out like a photograph. "Eva. The symbols." Eva rose and moved her torch in a slow arc. Quinn hadn't noticed them before, but now she saw markings scored into the platform edge, hidden beneath decades of grime until someone had recently cleaned them. Circles within circles. Lines that intersected at angles that made her eyes ache. "They're binding sigils. Pre-Roman, if I'm reading the style correctly. Someone knew what they were doing." "Binding what?" "That's the question." Eva pulled a worn leather-bound book from her satchel and flipped through pages. "These aren't containment symbols. They're anchors. Whatever they're connected to, it's not here anymore." Quinn stood and walked the perimeter of the scene. Her torch caught something in the debris near the wall. A small brass compass, face etched with markings she didn't recognise, verdigris blooming across its surface. The needle spun in lazy circles, refusing to settle. "Caldwell, bag this." He glanced over. "Evidence of what?" "Just bag it." As he approached, she turned back to the body. Something about the position nagged at her. She'd seen corpses in the Tube before. Jumpers, mostly. They landed wrong, limbs at angles that made seasoned officers look away. This man looked like he was sleeping. "He didn't die here." Caldwell stopped mid-step. "Come again?" "Look at his shoes. Not a speck of dust on them. You walked down here, same as me. My boots are filthy. His are clean. And there's no disturbance to the gravel on the tracks. A body drops from platform height, there's scatter. There's nothing." Eva looked up from her book. "You think someone moved him." "Someone moved him after he died, brought him down here, and arranged him like this. The question is why." Quinn gestured at the symbols. "And why clean these markings right before dumping a body on top of them." Caldwell set the compass in an evidence bag and sealed it. "Or he walked down here himself. Clean shoes just mean he changed them. Maybe he was meeting someone. Maybe the meeting went wrong and his heart gave out. People drop dead every day, Quinn. Not everything is a conspiracy." "Three hundred quid in cash. No phone. Expensive coat. You know what that looks like to me?" "Someone who doesn't trust banks?" "Someone who was coming here to buy something. And someone who was met by a person or persons unknown who didn't want to leave evidence of the transaction." She pulled out her own notebook and sketched the position of the symbols relative to the body. The compass needle in the evidence bag had stopped spinning. It pointed directly at Jonathan Ashworth's chest. "Eva. That compass. When I found it, the needle was moving. Now it's still." Eva crossed to where Caldwell held the bag. She leaned close, squinting through her glasses. "It's a Veil Compass. Points toward supernatural energy. Rifts, portals, that sort of thing." She straightened. "If it's pointing at the body..." "Then whatever killed him left something behind." Caldwell laughed, short and sharp. "Supernatural energy. Right. And I suppose next you'll tell me ghosts did it." Quinn ignored him. She crouched again beside Ashworth and carefully unbuttoned his coat. Beneath it, his shirt bore a dark stain she'd missed before, perfectly circular, directly over his heart. Not blood. The fabric looked scorched. "That's not a cardiac arrest." Eva moved closer. Her fingers hovered over the stain without touching. "It's a burn, but not from anything chemical. The pattern's wrong. This looks like... like something reached through him. From the inside out." Caldwell's clipboard creaked under his grip. "That's not possible." "No. It isn't." Quinn met Eva's eyes. "Which means we're missing a piece. Something that explains how a man with no medical history of heart problems dies of a cardiac event that leaves a burn mark on his shirt. Something that explains why someone brought him to a disused Tube station and laid him on top of symbols that haven't been visible in a century." She buttoned the coat back up and stood. "Get me everything on Jonathan Ashworth. Bank records, phone records, known associates. And find out who had access to this station in the last seventy-two hours." Caldwell opened his mouth to argue, thought better of it, and headed for the stairs. Eva watched him go, then turned back to Quinn. "There's something else. The Market." "What about it?" "It moves every full moon. Tonight's the full moon. This station won't be abandoned for long." She tucked her hair behind her ear again. "If someone wanted to use this location for something, they'd have a small window. Before the vendors set up, before the buyers arrive." Quinn looked at the symbols on the platform edge. At the body lying between them like an offering. "Then someone wanted this found. Just not by the right people."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount636
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Caldwell"
discoveredNames
Quinn13
Caldwell9
Kowalski1
Eva10
Morris1
Tube1
Jonathan1
Ashworth2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Caldwell"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
5"Jonathan"
places
0"Tube"
1"Ashworth"
globalScore0.478
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he was sleeping"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean21.07
std15.89
cv0.754
sampleLengths
041
13
223
33
420
535
630
74
824
928
105
1118
1246
132
1433
1528
164
1715
1835
193
2049
2116
222
2330
2444
253
266
273
2844
294
305
3145
3211
3338
3450
3517
365
3728
3834
3914
4015
4122
427
4318
4436
455
4634
479
4865
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
82.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs113
matches
0"was trying"
1"was sleeping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences115
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount639
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"worn leather-bound book"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.028169014084507043
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010954616588419406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.44
std8.84
cv0.846
sampleLengths
09
113
23
33
413
53
617
76
83
920
1012
114
1219
1318
1412
154
164
1720
187
1916
205
215
2210
238
247
2517
266
2714
281
291
302
3111
3222
338
349
353
368
374
3815
397
402
413
428
4315
443
4510
4626
473
4810
4916
79.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4956521739130435
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners57
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences69
matches
0"Her watch caught the light"
1"Her red curls caught the"
2"His face held an expression"
3"She reached down and examined"
4"Her torch caught something in"
5"He glanced over."
6"She'd seen corpses in the"
7"They landed wrong, limbs at"
8"She pulled out her own"
9"It pointed directly at Jonathan"
10"She leaned close, squinting through"
11"She crouched again beside Ashworth"
12"Her fingers hovered over the"
13"She buttoned the coat back"
14"She tucked her hair behind"
ratio0.217
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"The stairs down smelled of"
1"Harlow Quinn clicked her torch"
2"Victorian, maybe older."
3"A faded sign hung crooked"
4"Sergeant Caldwell stood at the"
5"Something he was trying to"
6"Quinn descended the last few"
7"The air grew colder."
8"Her watch caught the light"
9"Eva Kowalski was already there,"
10"Her red curls caught the"
11"Caldwell shifted his weight."
12"Quinn stopped a few feet"
13"The younger woman had her"
14"Eva tucked a curl behind"
15"The body lay supine on"
16"His face held an expression"
17"Caldwell flipped a page on"
18"Quinn crouched at the edge"
19"The rails beneath the body"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Male, mid-thirties by the look of him, dressed in clothes that cost more than Quinn's monthly rent."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.8153%