Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS39SQZHJV979VSW3P3Q8GQ

Run Details

Duration:
37.5s
Cost:
$0.007807
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed its broken rhythm against the evening drizzle, casting jittering light across the wet pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the walls held their usual collection of faded maps and photographs, men in outdated suits standing beside women with set mouths and uncertain eyes. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass that didn't need it, watching the door between the clink of his ring against the tumbler. The bell above the frame chimed. He looked up. The glass stopped moving in his hand. The woman who stepped inside wore a grey coat too heavy for the season, its shoulders dark with rain. Her hair had gone almost entirely white, pulled back severe against her skull. She moved differently than he remembered—not the loose-limbed confidence of someone who trusted the room, but a careful placement of each foot, as though testing for weak boards. She saw him. Stopped. Three feet from the bar. "Silas." "Margaret." The name sat between them like something pulled from deep water. Fourteen years since Prague. Fourteen years since the debrief room with its humming fluorescent lights and the way she'd refused to look at him while they took his statement, her own career already dissolving in the margins. She approached the bar. Sat on the second stool from the end—the same seat she'd always taken when they were partners, when they'd spend evenings here before he owned the place, back when it was still called something else and run by a man who owed favours to people who collected them with interest. "You kept the photographs." "Couldn't be bothered to take them down." A lie. They both knew it. The photograph behind her, third from the left on the back wall—her and him in Vienna, 1997, standing outside a café that no longer existed. Younger faces. Her hair dark then, falling past her shoulders in the way he'd once told her suited her, back when saying such things felt natural rather than loaded. She didn't turn to look at it. "Whisky. Neat." She set her hands flat on the bar. Her knuckles had swollen, the joints prominent in a way that spoke of either age or injury or both. "Surprised you're still in London." "Where else would I be?" "Anywhere. You always talked about the coast. Some cottage with bad plumbing and a view of water that made you feel small." She watched him pour. "Remember that? After Carcassonne, when we sat on the terrace and you said you wanted to disappear into somewhere that didn't matter." "I bought a bar in Soho instead." "Appears so." He slid the glass across. She picked it up with both hands, cradling it before drinking. The gesture struck him—she'd never been someone who held things carefully. Margaret had moved through the world like she had a right to touch whatever she wanted, take whatever she needed. Now she handled a glass of whisky like it might break. "Knee's worse." She nodded at his leg. "Saw the limp when you came around the bar." "Rain." "It's always rain with you. In Prague you blamed the cobblestones." The word landed. Prague. Neither of them touched their drinks. "You ever go back?" she asked. "No." "I did. Three years ago. Walked through the Old Town Square like a tourist. Bought a puppet from one of those stalls." Her mouth twisted. "Couldn't tell you why." Silas set down his cloth. The signet ring caught the low light. "How long are you in London?" "Leaving tomorrow. Connection to Dublin, then Madrid. Work." "Work." "Not the kind you're thinking." She finally drank, a measured sip. "Private security now. Corporate stuff. Boring as hell, but it pays better than government ever did, and nobody sends you into a basement with bad intel and expects you to walk out smiling." "Nobody sent you into that basement." "No. I sent myself. Following you." She set the glass down harder than necessary. "That's what they never put in the report, is it? I went in after you. When the comms went dead and the handler told us to stand down, I went in anyway." The maps on the walls seemed to pulse in the uneven light. Old borders. Old territories. Old lines drawn by people who'd never had to walk across them. "I know," Silas said. "You know." "I was conscious. On and off. Heard them bring you through." His voice stayed level, the same tone he used when discussing suppliers or inventory problems. "Heard them take you to the other room." Margaret's face didn't change, but something behind her eyes shifted. A door closing, or opening. "And you never said anything. In the debrief. In the medical reviews. You let them think I'd followed protocol, that I'd stayed with the extraction point." "Would you have preferred I told them you disobeyed a direct order? They were already looking for reasons to cut you loose. The whole operation was a political mess, and you know it. One more mark against you and they'd have made it stick." "They still pushed me out." "They pushed you out with your pension intact. With your reputation mostly salvageable." He picked up the cloth again, turned it over in his hands without using it. "I've seen what happens when they decide to make an example. You got the soft version." "The soft version." She laughed, a sound without warmth. "Fourteen years of knowing I should have gotten you killed. That's the soft version?" "You didn't get me killed." "No. I got this." She held up her left hand. The swelling he'd noticed—her ring finger bent at an angle that hadn't been there before, the knuckle misshapen. "They broke it setting the bone. Some field medic with shaking hands. Never healed right. Can't bend it past the first joint anymore." Silas looked at the finger. Looked away. "I kept waiting for you to call," she said. "First year, second year. Figured you'd reach out once things settled. Once the smoke cleared." "It was easier not to." "Easier." "For both of us." "You don't get to decide what's easier for me." The edge in her voice surfaced for the first time, something sharp beneath the careful control. "You don't get to make that choice and then dress it up as consideration." "Margaret—" "I moved to Madrid because I couldn't stand walking past places we used to go. Changed my number twice. Started running in the mornings because I couldn't sleep and running at least gave the insomnia a purpose." She picked up the glass again, drained it. "And you thought staying away was doing me a favour." Outside, the neon sign flickered. Someone passed the window, their shadow briefly crossing the photograph of Vienna, of the two of them younger and standing in a city that had been their assignment and their cover and, for a few months, something close to home. "Another?" Silas asked. "No." She stood, pulling the heavy coat tighter around her. "I shouldn't have come. I was walking past and saw the sign and thought—" She stopped. "What did you think?" "That it would feel different. Seeing you. That fourteen years would be enough to make it manageable." She pulled a few notes from her pocket, left them on the bar without counting them. "It isn't, as it turns out. But that's not your problem anymore." "Margaret." She was already turning toward the door, her careful footfalls carrying her past the stools, past the tables, past the photograph that held a version of her that no longer existed. "The puppet's on a shelf in my hallway," she said, not looking back. "Wooden thing. Painted face. I look at it every morning when I leave for work." The bell above the door chimed. The green neon stuttered against the glass as she stepped out into the rain, and then she was gone, swallowed by the wet London evening, leaving nothing but the empty stool and the untouched notes and the ghost of a name that still tasted like something he'd once known how to hold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1346
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount765
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Prague2
Vienna2
Silas5
Margaret2
London1
Old3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Margaret"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"Vienna"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as though testing for weak boards"
1"something close to home"
2"tasted like something he'd once known how"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.743
wordCount1346
matches
0"not the loose-limbed confidence of someone who trusted the room, but a careful placement of each foot, as though testing for weak"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean21.71
std20.5
cv0.944
sampleLengths
070
16
210
360
49
51
61
748
854
94
107
1160
127
1334
145
1548
167
172
1858
1916
201
2111
2210
236
241
2529
2618
278
281
2944
306
3146
3228
334
342
3534
3615
3726
3844
395
4044
4123
425
4351
447
4524
465
471
484
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"was already turning"
11.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences109
ratio0.046
matches
0"She moved differently than he remembered—not the loose-limbed confidence of someone who trusted the room, but a careful placement of each foot, as though testing for weak boards."
1"Sat on the second stool from the end—the same seat she'd always taken when they were partners, when they'd spend evenings here before he owned the place, back when it was still called something else and run by a man who owed favours to people who collected them with interest."
2"The photograph behind her, third from the left on the back wall—her and him in Vienna, 1997, standing outside a café that no longer existed."
3"The gesture struck him—she'd never been someone who held things carefully."
4"The swelling he'd noticed—her ring finger bent at an angle that hadn't been there before, the knuckle misshapen."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount771
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03631647211413749
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00648508430609598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.35
std11.57
cv0.937
sampleLengths
018
128
224
36
43
57
619
713
828
93
101
115
121
131
1411
154
1633
174
1850
194
207
212
224
2325
242
2527
267
2710
2819
295
305
3126
3222
337
342
355
3611
3711
3820
3911
407
419
421
4311
443
451
466
476
481
4925
70.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.46788990825688076
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences56
matches
0"He looked up."
1"Her hair had gone almost"
2"She moved differently than he"
3"She saw him."
4"She approached the bar."
5"They both knew it."
6"Her hair dark then, falling"
7"She didn't turn to look"
8"She set her hands flat"
9"Her knuckles had swollen, the"
10"She watched him pour"
11"He slid the glass across."
12"She picked it up with"
13"She nodded at his leg"
14"Her mouth twisted"
15"She finally drank, a measured"
16"She set the glass down"
17"His voice stayed level, the"
18"He picked up the cloth"
19"She laughed, a sound without"
ratio0.464
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences56
matches
0"The green neon hummed its"
1"Silas stood behind the bar,"
2"The bell above the frame"
3"He looked up."
4"The glass stopped moving in"
5"The woman who stepped inside"
6"Her hair had gone almost"
7"She moved differently than he"
8"She saw him."
9"The name sat between them"
10"She approached the bar."
11"They both knew it."
12"The photograph behind her, third"
13"Her hair dark then, falling"
14"She didn't turn to look"
15"She set her hands flat"
16"Her knuckles had swollen, the"
17"She watched him pour"
18"He slid the glass across."
19"She picked it up with"
ratio0.857
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now she handled a glass"
ratio0.018
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass that didn't need it, watching the door between the clink of his ring against the tumbler."
1"The woman who stepped inside wore a grey coat too heavy for the season, its shoulders dark with rain."
2"She moved differently than he remembered—not the loose-limbed confidence of someone who trusted the room, but a careful placement of each foot, as though testin…"
3"The swelling he'd noticed—her ring finger bent at an angle that hadn't been there before, the knuckle misshapen."
4"Someone passed the window, their shadow briefly crossing the photograph of Vienna, of the two of them younger and standing in a city that had been their assignm…"
5"She was already turning toward the door, her careful footfalls carrying her past the stools, past the tables, past the photograph that held a version of her tha…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, not looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.033
80.5385%