| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.207 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1974 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1974 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "cascading" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "structure" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "wavered" | | 19 | "raced" | | 20 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 232 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1951 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 109 | | wordCount | 1639 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 25 | | Half-Fae | 5 | | Nyx | 19 | | Rory | 36 | | Shade | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 7 | | Veil | 1 | | Evan | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.402 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 17.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when I blinked" | | 1 | "not quite a smile" | | 2 | "burgundy that seemed to absorb light, pale violets that glowed softly from within, tiny sapphire-blue stars no bigger than her fingernail trembling on translucent stems" | | 3 | "something between amusement and calculation" | | 4 | "looked like drops of blood suspended in a" | | 5 | "looked like black glass framed by rings o" |
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| 97.49% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.025 | | wordCount | 1951 | | matches | | 0 | "not in volume, but in urgency" | | 1 | "not with storm clouds, but with a deep indigo" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 232 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 103 | | mean | 18.94 | | std | 14.02 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 290 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 232 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed violets mixed with ozone." | | 1 | "A breath anchored her feet to the ground—one step past those stones and there would be no going back." | | 2 | "One moment she stood in Richmond Park with the familiar hum of London traffic muffled by distance; the next, the ground beneath her boots wasn't grass—it was something smoother, almost spongy, yet firm enough to walk on." | | 3 | "Leaves hung everywhere—no, not leaves." | | 4 | "Not wind—more like a thousand voices murmuring at once, too quiet to distinguish words." | | 5 | "The murmuring grew louder—not in volume, but in urgency." | | 6 | "\"Something avoiding detection.\" Isolde's voice carried no weight, no fear—just a statement of fact." | | 7 | "Not from disturbance above—from beneath." | | 8 | "Then—" | | 9 | "Then the vision in the pool shifted—now showing Rory standing alone in a ruined city, fire consuming buildings around her, shadows moving where people should be." | | 10 | "The Veil— the boundary between worlds." | | 11 | "Something shifted in Isolde's face—surprise, perhaps, quickly smoothed away." | | 12 | "Beyond it, the sky darkened—not with storm clouds, but with a deep indigo that made Rory think of midnight at noon." | | 13 | "A sound like chimes—tiny bells ringing from somewhere unseen—echoed around them." | | 14 | "Not the segmented hunter from before—this was slower, deliberate." | | 15 | "Evan— but wrong." | | 16 | "Evan—or his memory given temporary flesh—grinned." | | 17 | "The memory fractured, screaming—a high, inhuman shriek that echoed through the grove and made the petals drop like stones." | | 18 | "Nyx recoiled, hands—shadow-hands—covering their ears." | | 19 | "A voice—real this time—echoed through the grove." |
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| 72.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1672 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny sapphire-blue stars" | | 1 | "same spiral-carved stones." | | 2 | "tight over sharp bones." | | 3 | "white-hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 74 | | adverbRatio | 0.04425837320574163 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011961722488038277 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 232 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 232 | | mean | 8.41 | | std | 6.27 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 43.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.2801724137931034 | | totalSentences | 232 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 63.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "everywhere and nowhere." | | 1 | "Then it was gone, swallowed" | | 2 | "Then the vision in the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached out, fingertips brushing" | | 1 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 2 | "She flexed her fingers, the" | | 3 | "They weren't oaks or chestnuts" | | 4 | "Their trunks spiraled upward like" | | 5 | "It came from..." | | 6 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 7 | "She'd expected Isolde to react," | | 8 | "They blackened instantly at her" | | 9 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 10 | "She shook her head." | | 11 | "She'd heard whispers about its" | | 12 | "She fell into step beside" | | 13 | "It dissolved into dark ash" | | 14 | "Their shadow stretched long and" | | 15 | "His eyes were all pupil," | | 16 | "He walked unnaturally, like his" | | 17 | "His teeth were too white," | | 18 | "She stepped forward, blade level." | | 19 | "She slashed downward in a" |
| | ratio | 0.133 | |
| 20.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 139 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "Moss thick as velvet carpeted" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 4 | "The Heartstone pulsed once, briefly" | | 5 | "That was new." | | 6 | "The thing had barely flickered" | | 7 | "The Half-Fae woman stepped forward" | | 8 | "She reached out, fingertips brushing" | | 9 | "Nyx hovered at Rory's shoulder," | | 10 | "Isolde's lips curled, not quite" | | 11 | "The boundary between standing stones" | | 12 | "A breath anchored her feet" | | 13 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 14 | "The Shade tilted their head." | | 15 | "Nyx existed in the boundaries" | | 16 | "Rory squared her shoulders and" | | 17 | "The world stuttered." | | 18 | "The air changed too." | | 19 | "Rory's boots sank an inch" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Clusters of them in impossible colors: deep burgundy that seemed to absorb light, pale violets that glowed softly from within, tiny sapphire-blue stars no bigge…" | | 1 | "The moonsilver dagger materialized into her grip with a cold shock that traveled up her arm." | | 2 | "The words resonated through her bones, vibrating in the pendant, making her teeth ache." | | 3 | "Then the vision in the pool shifted—now showing Rory standing alone in a ruined city, fire consuming buildings around her, shadows moving where people should be…" | | 4 | "Their shadow stretched long and thin, tapering to a point that wavered in the air like a compass gone mad." | | 5 | "The memory fractured, screaming—a high, inhuman shriek that echoed through the grove and made the petals drop like stones." | | 6 | "Rory's pendant screamed against her skin, a pulse of heat that made her vision swim." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Half-Fae stepped, her bare feet leaving no prints on the strange turf" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.069 | | leniency | 0.138 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |