Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07EYBWH0D6W9GM0EPH7NYR

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.024015
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven’s Nest shone through the drizzle in a sickly stripe, turning the wet pavement outside into a smear of jade and black. Rory pushed through the door with a paper bag pressed under her arm, the heat from the street still on her cheeks, and the smell of old wood, beer, and lemon polish took her straight by the throat. Silas looked up from behind the bar, one hand around a glass, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. “Back so soon?” He nodded at the bag. “You owe me for that curry sauce you keep pretending doesn’t leak.” Rory huffed a breath and lifted the bag higher. “It’s for you, not me. Yu-Fei said if you complain this time, I should throw the next order at your head.” Silas’s mouth twitched at one corner. He took the bag with the careful ease of a man who had spent a life handling things he couldn’t afford to drop. “Then I’ll suffer in silence.” Rory slipped onto the nearest stool, fingers curled around the edge of the bar. The usual clutter sat in its usual places: a line of dusty bottles, the map of old Europe pinned behind the taps, black-and-white photographs of men in suits with hard eyes and cigarette smoke hanging in the frame like weather. The room stayed half-full, a low thrum of talk and glass and music that never got loud enough to demand attention. She rubbed at the inside of her wrist where the small crescent scar sat pale against her skin, a habit she never noticed until she’d already done it. Silas was halfway to the kitchen when Rory’s attention snagged on the woman at the far end of the bar. She sat with her back straight, one ankle hooked over the other, a glass untouched in front of her. Rory caught the shape of a tailored coat, dark and expensive-looking, the sharp line of a jaw, hair cut into a blunt swing that skimmed her collar. The woman turned her head as if she’d felt the stare. Rory’s stomach dropped clean through her. The face had changed, but not enough. “Eva?” The woman’s eyes widened first, then her whole face seemed to reorganise around the name. For a second she looked younger, stripped down to some earlier version of herself Rory had almost stopped carrying around. “Rory.” Her voice came out with the same Cardiff scrape it had had at sixteen, only sanded down at the edges, like someone had spent years smoothing it against glass. Rory slid off the stool before she realised she’d moved. The floor felt slightly unsteady under her trainers. She stopped three feet away and stared. “You’ve got a cheek showing up like this.” Eva gave a short laugh that did not quite land. “I could say the same.” Rory took her in properly then. The coat, the clean nails, the neat scarf tucked at the throat. No chipped polish. No cheap hoop earrings. No frayed hem. Even her hair looked deliberate, every strand placed. The last time Rory had seen her, Eva had worn a school blazer with the sleeves rolled and ink on her hands, her backpack half-zipped and full of books she never carried home on time. This version of her looked like she belonged in a glass office tower with tinted windows and a lock on the door. Rory pointed a finger at her without meaning to. “You look like you charge people by the hour.” Eva’s mouth tugged. “And you look like you’ve been dragged backwards through a hedge.” “Cheers.” Silas’s boots crossed the floor behind Rory. He set a tumbler down at the end of the bar, then another, and let the silence hang while he looked from one woman to the other. Something in his face shifted, not surprise exactly, but interest sharpened to a blade’s edge. “You two know each other, then.” Eva’s gaze flicked to him. “Long time ago.” Silas tipped his head once, the way he did when he’d clocked more than he let on. “I’ll leave you to it.” He moved off without another word, the slight drag in his left leg soft against the floorboards. Rory watched him go, then looked back at Eva and felt the weight of everything unsaid settle between them like furniture. She folded her arms tight over her chest. “You disappeared.” Eva’s expression held, but her fingers tightened around the stem of the glass in front of her. “So did you.” “I moved to London because you told me to.” “You left because you had to.” Rory let out a sharp breath through her nose. “That’s not the same thing.” Eva looked down at the amber liquid in her glass. The light caught the edge of a scar across one knuckle, pale and thin. Rory wondered when that had happened, and why she had never known. “You vanished from Cardiff like someone had cut the tether.” “You stopped answering.” “That’s rich.” Rory leaned both palms on the bar. “I rang you.” Eva lifted her head. “Once.” Rory laughed, but there was no humour in it. “I rang you six times. You never answered the last three.” “You left a voice note the length of a sermon.” Rory blinked. “You kept that?” Eva shrugged one shoulder, a movement that looked strange on her, too restrained for the girl who used to fling herself across bus seats and stick her feet on tables. “I didn’t delete it.” The words hit harder than they should have. Rory looked away first, because she hated that. Hated that one line could crack open all the careful years she’d stacked between them. From somewhere near the front of the bar, somebody laughed too loudly. Glass tapped wood. A couple near the window argued over whose turn it was to pay. The room kept moving around them, indifferent. Rory picked at the edge of the napkin holder. “You could have come down.” Eva’s gaze sharpened. “To where? Your flat over the bar? The one you said you weren’t living in properly because you didn’t want anyone finding you?” Rory went still. “That was not an invitation to forget me.” Eva laughed once, a dry little sound. “No? Because it sounded a hell of a lot like one.” Rory opened her mouth, then shut it. She hated that too, the way Eva still knew where to poke. The way she still did it without raising her voice. She looked at Eva’s hands again. No chipped nails. No cheap rings. The woman at the end of the bar looked composed in a way that came from being watched by people who expected answers on time. Rory could not reconcile that with the girl who once stole cigarettes from her brother and cried over a dead fox on the road outside Penarth. “What happened to you?” Eva’s eyebrow lifted. “That’s a rude question.” “You turned up in my bar wearing enough money to buy the street.” Eva’s gaze slid over Rory’s face, down to the faded delivery jacket, the canvas bag slung over the stool, the scuffed trainers and wind-flattened hair. It landed on the crescent scar on her wrist when Rory shifted her hand. “You’re still wearing the mark,” Eva murmured. Rory covered the scar with her other hand before she could stop herself. “Christ. I got that when I was eight.” “I know.” Rory’s voice came out flatter than she meant. “Then stop staring at it like it means something.” Eva’s throat worked once before she drank. She set the glass down with care. “It does mean something.” Rory looked at her hard. “Don’t.” Eva held her stare. “You left Cardiff angry enough to bite through steel. I left because I couldn’t stay around and watch you get swallowed by Evan.” Rory’s jaw tightened at the name. The bar seemed to shrink around it. “I didn’t ask you to save me.” “No. You never asked for anything.” The line landed clean and mean. Rory felt it in the muscles across her shoulders, in the old reflex to brace for another hit. Silas came back with a bottle and two fresh tumblers, stopping just close enough to make his presence known without forcing it. He set the bottle down between them. The label caught the light, then darkened again. “No fighting in my bar,” he muttered, and the words came with the dry patience of a man speaking to weather. Rory did not look at him. “We’re not fighting.” Eva’s mouth twitched at that, but the expression faded before it settled. Silas poured two fingers into each glass and moved off again, leaving the bottle where it stood like a small truce. Rory took one of the fresh tumblers and turned it in her hand. The whisky in it made a slow amber line against the glass. “You’ve changed,” she said. Eva let her head tip back against the stool. “So have you.” Rory glanced at her sharp suit, the clean line of her coat, the watch flashing at her wrist. “I changed because life kicked the teeth in.” Eva gave a short, humourless smile. “That’s one way of putting it.” Rory leaned forward. “You used to hate expensive things.” “I still do.” “You’re wearing them.” Eva looked down at the coat as if she had just noticed it herself. “I borrowed it.” “From who?” Eva’s eyes lifted. “Someone who owed me.” Rory snorted into her glass. “That sounds like you’re living a different life.” Eva’s fingers tightened around her own drink. When she answered, her voice lost some of its polish and the Cardiff came through again, rough around the edges. “I am.” Rory watched her for a long moment. There was a little exhaustion in the lines beside Eva’s mouth that the old girl had never carried. There was also a caution Rory had only seen on people who’d learned to measure rooms before they stepped into them. “Why are you here?” Eva looked at the bottle on the bar, then at Rory. “Because I heard you were in London.” Rory gave a flat laugh. “You heard.” Eva’s face didn’t move. “I looked.” That shut Rory up for a beat. She gripped the glass harder than she needed to, then rested it on the bar before she cracked it. “You looked,” she repeated. “And you still let me work two streets from where you were breathing.” Eva’s jaw set. “You didn’t make it easy.” “Easy?” Rory stared at her, bright blue eyes hard and bright under the bar lights. “You told me to get out. You told me London was better than Cardiff and that I needed somewhere nobody knew my name. Then you vanished before I’d even got the keys to the flat.” Eva’s expression tightened, the first sign of strain she’d shown. “I was dealing with things.” “Right.” “I had work.” “You always had work.” The words snapped between them. Eva flinched, small and quick enough that Rory almost missed it. Silas’s glass clinked behind the bar. Somewhere near the door, someone called for another round. Eva drew in a breath through her nose and let it go. “I didn’t know how to come back.” Rory looked at her then, really looked. At the careful hair, the bruised shadow under one eye she’d missed before, the way Eva kept one hand close to her glass like it steadied her. The polished surface cracked a little, and underneath there was still the girl who had once slept on Rory’s floor after a row with her mother, who had drawn stars on the edge of lecture notes and told Rory she would get out one day. Rory’s voice came quieter. “You could have written.” Eva’s smile was thin and sad. “You still checked the post?” Rory’s laugh broke out before she could stop it, one sharp bark of disbelief. “No.” Eva’s eyes held hers. “Neither did I.” The silence that followed was not empty. It carried years in it. Bus stations. Unanswered calls. The black screen of a phone held in a hand too late at night. Things that should have been said and never got the chance. Rory picked up the bottle, checked the label, and poured herself a measure she did not need. “You look like you’ve got a life now.” Eva watched the whisky rise. “So do you.” Rory slid the bottle back. “This one’s mostly shifts, takeaway grease, and a flat with dodgy pipes.” Eva’s mouth softened a fraction. “You always did know how to dress up the romance.” Rory looked at her, then finally gave in to it, the smallest smile pulling at one side of her mouth. “You came in here looking like you belonged on the cover of something boring.” “I didn’t come for the ambience.” “Then what did you come for?” Eva held her gaze, and the noise of the bar seemed to press back around them, waiting. Silas, at the far end, stacked a clean row of glasses and looked over once, his face unreadable beneath the low light. Eva set her hand flat on the bar, right beside Rory’s scarred wrist. Not touching. Close enough to make the space matter. “I came because I needed to see if you’d still talk to me.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.048
leniency0.095
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2224
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2224
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"restrained"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"restrained"
5"eyebrow"
6"unreadable"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences144
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences224
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2224
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions104
wordCount1694
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Europe1
Rory51
Cardiff2
Eva38
Penarth1
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Europe"
1"Cardiff"
2"Penarth"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite land"
1"looked like she belonged in a glass offic"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.45
wordCount2224
matches
0"not surprise exactly, but interest sharpened to a blade’s edge"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs168
mean13.24
std15.47
cv1.168
sampleLengths
065
124
23
35
412
59
621
729
85
975
1028
1120
1257
136
147
151
1635
171
1829
1925
208
2110
225
2393
249
259
263
2711
281
2949
306
315
323
3317
345
3538
368
372
3817
393
409
416
429
435
4436
4510
463
472
487
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences144
matches
0"being watched"
1"been said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs279
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences224
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1700
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.039411764705882354
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005294117647058823
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences224
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences224
mean9.93
std8.03
cv0.809
sampleLengths
027
138
224
33
45
512
69
721
86
923
105
1114
1240
1321
1428
1520
1619
1727
1811
196
207
211
2215
2320
241
2529
2610
278
287
298
3010
315
326
3312
343
354
363
378
3835
3922
409
419
423
4311
441
457
4627
4715
486
495
47.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.20982142857142858
totalSentences224
uniqueOpeners47
48.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"Even her hair looked deliberate,"
1"Somewhere near the door, someone"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences137
matches
0"He nodded at the bag."
1"He took the bag with"
2"She rubbed at the inside"
3"She sat with her back"
4"Her voice came out with"
5"She stopped three feet away"
6"He set a tumbler down"
7"He moved off without another"
8"She folded her arms tight"
9"She hated that too, the"
10"She looked at Eva’s hands"
11"It landed on the crescent"
12"She set the glass down"
13"He set the bottle down"
14"he muttered, and the words"
15"She gripped the glass harder"
16"It carried years in it."
ratio0.124
14.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences137
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rory pushed through the door"
2"Silas looked up from behind"
3"He nodded at the bag."
4"Rory huffed a breath and"
5"Silas’s mouth twitched at one"
6"He took the bag with"
7"Rory slipped onto the nearest"
8"The usual clutter sat in"
9"The room stayed half-full, a"
10"She rubbed at the inside"
11"Silas was halfway to the"
12"She sat with her back"
13"Rory caught the shape of"
14"The woman turned her head"
15"Rory’s stomach dropped clean through"
16"The face had changed, but"
17"The woman’s eyes widened first,"
18"Her voice came out with"
19"Rory slid off the stool"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory caught the shape of a tailored coat, dark and expensive-looking, the sharp line of a jaw, hair cut into a blunt swing that skimmed her collar."
1"The woman turned her head as if she’d felt the stare."
2"The polished surface cracked a little, and underneath there was still the girl who had once slept on Rory’s floor after a row with her mother, who had drawn sta…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he muttered, and the words came with the dry patience of a man speaking to weather"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.048
leniency0.095
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.071
81.7555%