Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07ME401DA1F8VK1MWG3WMY

Run Details

Duration:
28.5s
Cost:
$0.001986
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The greenneon sign flickered against the wet pavement when Aurora Carter pushed through the door, rainwater dripping from her leather jacket onto the worn carpet. The Raven’s Nest smelled of spilled whiskey and old wood, the same air she remembered from three years ago when she’d still lived above the place, walking these floors in scuffed Docs and a hoodie two sizes too big. Silas stood behind the bar polishing a glass with the slow precision of someone who had no patience for sloppy work. His auburn hair was more grey now, the beard just as neat, the limp in his left leg noticeable only when he shifted weight onto the bad knee. He didn’t look up immediately. Busy hands meant time was being wasted somewhere else, as far as Silas was concerned. Rory hesitated near the entrance, water pooling on the floorboards. The place hadn’t changed—same black-and-white photographs on the walls, same maps pinned behind the bar, one of them now yellowed at the edges. She exhaled, watching her breath mingle with the stale bar air. A regular at the far end glanced her way, then back to his drink. The room held maybe a dozen people, all absorbed in their own small worlds. Silas finally looked up, his hazel eyes sharpening when they landed on her. She walked forward, boots squeaking against the damp sole of her shoe. "You," he said, setting the glass down with a soft click. "You’re not supposed to be dressed like that." Rory stopped a few feet from the bar, hands shoved in her pockets. The leather jacket had cost her two weeks of delivery wages, but it kept the rain out. "Like what?" "Competent." A raw laugh escaped her before she could stop it. Silas never used to joke like this—sharp, brittle humor. He’d been all precision before, every word calibrated. Now it came across like he was trying on a language he hadn’t spoken in years. She studied his face—the faint lines around his eyes that hadn’t been there when she knew him, the way his gaze darted to her wrist for half a second before snapping back up. The scar was visible today, a pale crescent against her olive skin. "Could say the same about you," she replied. "You look like you’ve been properly retired. Doesn’t suit you." Silas picked up another glass, turned it in his hands. "I run a bar. What’s more retired than that?" "Running a bar is basically still being on call. Just with worse hours and better whiskey." He almost smiled. Almost. His fingers stilled on the glass. "You always were observant. Annoyingly so." Rory leaned against the bar, close enough to feel the residual heat from the illuminated optics. "Yeah, well. Turns out useful things become habits." A beat of silence. She could see the gears turning behind his eyes—the way his mind worked, categorizing, assessing. She used to love that about him, hated it when he turned it on her. "You live here now?" she asked. "Above it. Since I opened the place." "Still using the back room for everything illegal?" That got the real tilt of his mouth, the ghost of a smirk. "That back room sleeps better when people assume it’s just a bookshelf." Rory traced a finger along the bar’s edge, feeling the grooves worn by years of elbows and absentminded fidgeting. "Guess some things don’t change." "Not the important ones." She wanted to ask about the knee—whether it still gave him trouble, whether the limp had settled into his bones like a permanent tenant. But that was the old habit creeping in, reaching for the stitches before the wound had a chance to scar over. Instead, she said, "I see Eva sometimes." Silas polished the same spot on the glass, slower now. "How is she?" "Still insists she’s doing important art. Still pretends it matters." A glint in his eyes, almost a wince. "She’s got a studio down by the Thames now. Used to be a print shop. Tiny windows, good light." "You two talk about me?" "Sometimes. She says you don’t return her calls." Rory exhaled through her nose. The condensation on the glass between them blurred into nothing. "Could say the same about you." Silas set the glass down harder than necessary. "You made it clear we weren’t in touch." "That was four years ago. After—" "I know when it was." The bartender noise faded into background static. Rory felt the weight of years pressing between them, something unspoken, something fractured. She had left Cardiff abruptly, severing ties like cauterizing a wound. Silas had been one of the first people she’d fled from—not because he’d done anything wrong, but because he’d seen the worst of her before she could hide it. She flexed her left wrist without thinking, where the crescent scar peeked out from under her sleeve. Silas’s gaze flicked there before snapping back up, his expression tightening. "You look different," he said finally. "Good different?" He hesitated. "Real different." Rory rubbed her palms on her thighs, the leather squeaking. The train ride over had been long—cardboard sandwiches and blurry window reflections. She hadn’t planned this reunion. Hadn’t planned anything in months, really. Just kept moving, kept delivering, kept existing under fluorescent lights and neon signs in rundown neighborhoods. London didn’t ask questions when you paid your rent on time. "You’ve put on weight," she added. "Given up on the tailored suits." Silas touched the fabric of his rolled-up shirt sleeve—exhibit A. "Changed priorities. Suits aren’t practical when you’re crawling through ventilation shafts at 2 AM." Rory almost laughed. Almost. Instead, she watched a regular at the end of the bar slide a pound coin into the jukebox. Some sixties song crackled to life, distorted and slow. "You still do that?" she asked. "Do what?" "Whatever it was you did before. The thing with the ventilation shafts." Silas didn’t answer right away. He reached under the bar and pulled out a tumbler, splashed a finger of something amber into it. Pushed it toward her. "Careful. That’s the good stuff." Rory picked up the glass, let the liquor sit in her palm for a second. "I’m still on the cheap whiskey at eight quid a bottle." "Life gets expensive." She sipped. The burn was immediate, familiar in a way that hurt. She set the glass down. "Yeah. It does." Silas leaned in, lowering his voice just enough. "What’s this about, Aurora? Really." The use of her full name told her everything—he wasn’t just asking why she was here tonight. He was asking what had changed. What she wanted. What she was still running from. She could lie. Could spin a story about how she’d been in the neighborhood and remembered this place. Could say she just wanted to catch up. But they both knew Rory Carter didn’t do coincidences. So she told the truth, bare and bald. "I’m in trouble." Silas didn’t move. Didn’t even blink. The advantage of the MI6 training, probably—control carved into silence. She went on. "Not the kind that goes away with a good night’s sleep. Or whiskey. Or me ignoring it." "Define trouble." "Legal kind." His jaw tightened. The bartender polished a glass nearby, humming off-key. The rain had picked up, tapping against the windows like impatient fingers. "Sit," Silas said. Rory pulled out the stool, the metal screeching against the floor. She perched on the edge, ready to bolt if needed. Silas poured himself two fingers of the same whiskey, neat. Didn’t ask if she wanted more. "You going to tell me how bad?" She stared at the amber liquid, watching it catch the light. "Bad enough that I couldn’t stay in Cardiff. Bad enough that I slept on Eva’s couch for three months before I could afford my own place. Bad enough that I hid out in Plymouth for a while under a different name." His fingers curled around the glass. "Names have a way of catching up." "I know." Silas drank, slow. Measured. "And now you’re here." "Not because I want to be." "Because you have nowhere left." The words hung there, heavy and unadorned. Rory’s throat tightened. She had told herself she wouldn’t cry in front of him. Had rehearsed the moment in the mirror a dozen times. But tears weren’t the currency of this conversation. They didn’t fix what was broken. She shook her head. "I need to disappear again. Properly this time." Silas exhaled through his nose. "You want my help." "It’s why I came." "Not why you left." The silence between them wasn’t just absence. It was pressure. The kind that could rupture. Rory finally looked at him, really looked—the grey in his beard, the lines bracketing his mouth, the way his eyes still missed nothing, even after all this time. "I left because I couldn’t look at you and not see what I’d become," she said. The words stumbled out, rough and unfiltered. "I couldn’t bear the reflection." Silas didn’t flinch. Didn’t soften. The bartender’s humming stopped suddenly, as if the entire world had paused to listen. Then he set down his glass. The sound cracked through the quiet. "Where’s the scar?" he asked. Rory blinked. "What?" "Your wrist. The crescent. You always covered it when you were stressed. Always pulled your sleeves down too far. You’re not. So where is it?" She lifted her arm, exposed the thin pale line. It gleamed under the bar lights, insignificant and permanent. Silas nodded, once, sharp. "Good. Scars tell the truth even when lips lie." Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to reach across the bar. Wanted to grab his hand and say something stupid, something forgivable. But the space between them wasn’t measured in inches. It was measured in years of silence and regret. She wiped her palm on her thigh again. "I need to disappear. Before it’s too late." Silas stood straighter, the limp in his leg noticeable only when he leaned heavily on the bar. He reached under the counter and pulled out a business card—the kind with no name, just a number and a timestamp in the corner. She knew the drill. "Tomorrow. Midnight. Bring nothing. Don’t tell anyone." Rory took the card, thumb brushing the embossed edges. She thought of her flat above Silas’ bar now rented to a couple with a baby who cried through the floorboards. She thought of Eva painting sunsets on cheap canvas. She thought of Cardiff, gray and familiar and suffocating. She folded the card into her palm. "Can I ask you something?" Silas was already reaching for another glass, polishing it to a nonexistent shine. "You always do." "This thing you do now—helping people disappear. Is it penance?" The glass paused mid-polish. His gaze sharpened on her. Rory held up a hand. "Not asking for an answer. Just thought I’d ask." Silas set the glass down with deliberate care. "You got a bad habit of overestimating me, Aurora. I never did penance. I did survival." She stood, the stool scraping back. The rain still tapped against the windows, steady and relentless. Silas watched her without looking up. "Midnight. Don’t be late." Rory nodded, tucked the card into her jacket pocket. She hesitated at the door, the green neon sign flickering over her shoulder. "Silas?" He didn’t answer. Just kept polishing. "I’m sorry," she said. The word hung in the damp air between them, fragile as glass. Silas finally glanced up, hazel eyes meeting hers. "So am I." She left through the rain, the door swinging shut behind her with a soft sigh. The neon sign buzzed overhead, casting fractured green light onto the pavement where she stood for just a second, breathing before the night swallowed her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.329
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.027
89.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1965
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1965
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"calibrated"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"measured"
count3
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"calibrated"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"glint"
6"unspoken"
7"fractured"
8"flicked"
9"familiar"
10"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences213
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1952
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1438
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter2
Raven1
Nest1
Docs1
Silas24
Rory18
Cardiff2
Eva1
Didn3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.666
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1952
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs107
mean18.24
std15.41
cv0.845
sampleLengths
064
169
244
341
412
519
632
71
843
945
1018
1119
1216
1316
1424
1534
166
177
188
1925
2024
214
2245
237
2413
2510
2627
275
288
2921
3016
316
325
3360
3428
356
362
374
3860
3912
4024
4131
426
432
4412
4527
465
4726
483
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences151
matches
0"being wasted"
1"was concerned"
2"was measured"
75.62% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was trying"
1"wasn’t just asking"
2"was asking"
3"was still running"
4"was already reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences213
ratio0.056
matches
0"The place hadn’t changed—same black-and-white photographs on the walls, same maps pinned behind the bar, one of them now yellowed at the edges."
1"Silas never used to joke like this—sharp, brittle humor."
2"She studied his face—the faint lines around his eyes that hadn’t been there when she knew him, the way his gaze darted to her wrist for half a second before snapping back up."
3"She could see the gears turning behind his eyes—the way his mind worked, categorizing, assessing."
4"She wanted to ask about the knee—whether it still gave him trouble, whether the limp had settled into his bones like a permanent tenant."
5"Silas had been one of the first people she’d fled from—not because he’d done anything wrong, but because he’d seen the worst of her before she could hide it."
6"The train ride over had been long—cardboard sandwiches and blurry window reflections."
7"Silas touched the fabric of his rolled-up shirt sleeve—exhibit A."
8"The use of her full name told her everything—he wasn’t just asking why she was here tonight."
9"The advantage of the MI6 training, probably—control carved into silence."
10"Rory finally looked at him, really looked—the grey in his beard, the lines bracketing his mouth, the way his eyes still missed nothing, even after all this time."
11"He reached under the counter and pulled out a business card—the kind with no name, just a number and a timestamp in the corner."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1318
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"existing under fluorescent lights"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03566009104704097
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009104704097116844
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences213
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences213
mean9.16
std6.7
cv0.732
sampleLengths
025
139
221
328
45
515
610
723
811
914
1014
1113
1212
1311
148
1513
1617
172
181
1910
209
218
2216
2333
2412
258
2610
2710
289
2916
303
311
326
336
3416
358
364
3715
3815
396
407
418
4213
4312
4419
455
464
4724
4821
497
45.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2863849765258216
totalSentences213
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences136
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
1"Just kept moving, kept delivering,"
2"Instead, she watched a regular"
3"Then he set down his"
4"Just kept polishing."
ratio0.037
87.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences136
matches
0"His auburn hair was more"
1"He didn’t look up immediately."
2"She exhaled, watching her breath"
3"She walked forward, boots squeaking"
4"he said, setting the glass"
5"He’d been all precision before,"
6"She studied his face—the faint"
7"He almost smiled."
8"His fingers stilled on the"
9"She could see the gears"
10"She used to love that"
11"She wanted to ask about"
12"She had left Cardiff abruptly,"
13"She flexed her left wrist"
14"he said finally"
15"She hadn’t planned this reunion."
16"He reached under the bar"
17"She set the glass down."
18"He was asking what had"
19"She could lie."
ratio0.331
40.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences136
matches
0"The greenneon sign flickered against"
1"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
2"Silas stood behind the bar"
3"His auburn hair was more"
4"He didn’t look up immediately."
5"Rory hesitated near the entrance,"
6"The place hadn’t changed—same black-and-white"
7"She exhaled, watching her breath"
8"A regular at the far"
9"The room held maybe a"
10"Silas finally looked up, his"
11"She walked forward, boots squeaking"
12"he said, setting the glass"
13"Rory stopped a few feet"
14"The leather jacket had cost"
15"A raw laugh escaped her"
16"Silas never used to joke"
17"He’d been all precision before,"
18"She studied his face—the faint"
19"The scar was visible today,"
ratio0.838
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"Now it came across like"
1"What she was still running"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar polishing a glass with the slow precision of someone who had no patience for sloppy work."
1"Rory traced a finger along the bar’s edge, feeling the grooves worn by years of elbows and absentminded fidgeting."
2"Silas’s gaze flicked there before snapping back up, his expression tightening."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.151
leniency0.301
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.027
87.4156%