Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07S1YW5FF01TBZ73108FE8

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.029357
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven’s Nest bled through the rain-streaked front windows and turned the glass behind the bar the colour of bruised limes. Rory stood with a tea towel in one hand and a stack of tumblers in the other, turning them under the light until each rim flashed clean. Silas moved at the far end of the bar with his usual spare economy, one shoulder dipped, his silver ring catching when he reached for a bottle. The place smelled of wet wool, old wood, citrus peel, and the ghost of last night’s smoke trapped in the curtains. A taxi hissed past outside. The front door opened. Cold air rushed in, carrying the sour edge of rain and a sharper note of city exhaust. The bell over the frame gave one short shake. Rory looked up. The woman who stepped in had the kind of face you stored away and pulled out years later, half sure memory had sharpened it. For a beat, Rory only saw the shape of her jaw and the colour of her eyes, then the rest came flooding back in one hard shove: a lecture hall in Cardiff with peeling blue seats, cheap coffee in paper cups, shared cigarettes outside the library, laughter that cracked through the cold. But the woman in the doorway was not that girl. Her hair had been cut close, the dark curls Rory remembered stripped back to a pale, almost silver crop that showed the line of her skull. A scar ran from the edge of one ear down into her collar, a thin white seam that disappeared beneath the lapel of her coat. She wore black boots with city grime on the soles and carried herself with the careful stillness of someone who had learned how to keep pain from showing in her knees. Her left hand rested on the knob of a cane, though she didn’t lean on it. She scanned the room, took in the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the low amber lamps. Then her gaze hit Rory and stopped. “Ro?” The glass in Rory’s hand trembled once against the towel. No one in London called her that unless they had known her before the flats, before the deliveries, before the flat above the bar and the life she had stitched together from scraps. Rory set the glass down and looked harder, past the scar, past the haircut, into the eyes she remembered laughing over a stolen bottle of wine. “Bethan?” A sharp smile pulled at the woman’s mouth, brief and lopsided, as if it hurt to make. She stepped further inside and let the door swing shut behind her. “Cor, you still looked like a lost sixth former.” Rory let out a breath that caught between a laugh and a curse. She came round the end of the bar, wiping damp palms on her jeans. “You looked like a storm in a denim jacket and now you look like you’ve walked out of a solicitor’s office.” Bethan’s brows lifted. “You say that like it’s an insult.” Silas set a bottle down with a soft thud and studied the two of them over the top of his glasses. His hazel eyes moved once from Bethan’s scar to Rory’s face, then back again. He said nothing. The corner of his mouth shifted, not quite a smile, and he turned away to the shelves. Bethan took a slow look at Rory’s apron, the delivery jacket folded on the stool behind the bar, the crescent-shaped scar at Rory’s wrist where her sleeve had slipped up. “You’re behind a bar now?” Rory’s hand went to the stack of clean glasses. “You sound shocked.” “I sound disappointed.” “Those are expensive shoes for disappointment.” Bethan glanced down at them, then back up. “They’re cheaper than the train fare from Cardiff.” The name dropped between them and sat there, heavy and familiar. Cardiff. Rory had not heard it from Bethan in years. Not like this. Not in a room that smelled of gin and wet coats and a hundred strangers’ secrets. Rory leaned a hip against the bar. “You moved back?” “Ended up here. Same as everyone else, apparently.” “That’s not an answer.” Bethan slid onto a stool, careful with her leg. “You always did hate vague answers.” “You always did give them.” The old ease flashed and vanished. Bethan’s fingers tightened once around the cane handle, then loosened. She took in the room again, the maps with their curling edges, the grainy photos of men in hats and women with hard mouths, then let her eyes settle on Rory. “You vanished.” Rory looked at the bottles lined under the bar, at the amber and green and brown glass. “That was sort of the point.” “You changed your number.” “I moved.” “You left Cardiff in the middle of term and didn’t tell anyone where you’d gone.” Rory’s mouth went dry. She reached for the towel, folded it, unfolded it. “I told Eva.” Bethan gave a short laugh without much humour. “Eva got one message and about twenty unanswered calls. She called me because she thought you’d ended up in a canal.” Rory looked away. Silas came back with a clean tumbler and set it in front of Bethan. He poured a finger of whisky without asking. His ring flashed silver against the dark bottle. “For the reunion,” he muttered, and moved off again with his limp barely touching the floorboards. Bethan nodded once at him, then held the glass between both hands without drinking. “You still knew how to pick strange men.” “I live above the bar.” “You’re doing better than I thought, then.” Rory snorted and crossed her arms. “You came in here with a cane and a scar and that face. You don’t get to talk about expectations.” Bethan’s thumb traced the rim of the glass. “The cane’s for effect.” “Liar.” “Only about the cane.” Rory stared at her, trying to make the new shape fit the old memory. In university Bethan had filled every room. She had worn her hair long then, dark and wild, and she had always been in motion, tapping knees under desks, stealing chips from everyone’s plate, leaning too far into every argument. Rory remembered her with a chipped black nail polish and a grin that dared people to try and catch her. The woman in front of her carried none of that spill and thunder. She looked carved down to the essentials. The change sat on her shoulders like a second coat. “What happened to you?” Rory asked. Bethan lifted one side of her mouth. “You first.” Rory looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar there, pale as a moon slice. She curled her fingers until the mark disappeared. “I left.” “That much I gathered.” “I came to London.” “Again, the train fares were not subtle.” Rory’s laugh came out thin. “I got out.” Bethan watched her over the glass. “Out of Cardiff?” “Out of…” Rory stopped. The name she did not say seemed to fill the space anyway. Out of Evan. Out of the flat with its splintering door frame and the voice that had taught her to keep her keys in her hand. Out of the life that had turned every corridor into a trap. Bethan’s eyes flicked to her face and stayed there. “Right.” Rory hated how much that single word carried. No pity. No prying. Just the understanding that made the room feel smaller. “You knew,” Rory said. “I knew enough.” “You should have told me you were still in touch.” Bethan set the whisky down. “I wasn’t in touch. Not after you disappeared.” Rory huffed a breath. “That sounds dramatic.” “It was dramatic. Eva was dramatic. I was dramatic. You were a bloody exit sign with legs.” Rory barked a laugh despite herself, then looked down because it hurt more than she expected to hear it. “I was not.” Bethan tilted her head. “You were. You packed one bag, nicked that awful grey coat from the back of your door, and vanished before dawn. You left your books. You left the plant I kept watering because you swore it would die without attention. You left me with a lecture note in your handwriting and no clue whether you were dead or just rude.” The words landed hard, each one finding a place she had never put a label on. Rory leaned back against the bar and folded her arms tighter. “I didn’t know how to leave properly.” Bethan’s expression shifted, not softening, just opening a fraction. “Did anybody teach you?” Rory thought of her father with his careful suits and clipped questions, of her mother’s exhausted patience, of Evan’s hand on her elbow when he wanted her to stay put. “No.” “No,” Bethan repeated, and took a drink at last. She set the glass down with a small click. “You always did hate asking for help.” “You say that like it was charming.” “It was annoying.” Rory smiled before she could stop it. “You used to say my stubbornness was a character trait.” “It was a defect.” “You are still rude.” Bethan’s eyes moved over Rory’s face, her hair, the black shirt with the top button gone. “You’re still defensive.” “I’m behind a bar in Soho. It comes with the territory.” “Since when?” “Since I needed rent.” Bethan let that sit. The bar hummed around them. Somewhere near the back, ice rattled in a shaker. A pair of men at the far table bent over a game of cards and spoke in low, clipped bursts. Rain pressed against the windows in long grey fingers. Rory drew in a breath. “You’ve changed.” Bethan gave her a look. “You already said that.” “I mean it.” “I know.” Rory shook her head. “No, I mean it properly. You used to fill space like you were daring it to hold you. Now you look like you’ve been cut down to fit somewhere narrow.” Bethan’s jaw flexed once. The scar at her neck caught the light when she turned. “That’s what time did.” The bluntness of it made Rory go quiet. Bethan kept her gaze level. “Time, a divorce, a bad fall, a job that ate every spare hour, and a doctor who liked dramatic vocabulary. Take your pick.” Rory stared. “Divorce?” Bethan’s mouth twitched. “You look delighted.” “I’m not delighted.” “You are. A bit.” Rory reached for a bottle, more for something to do than because she wanted it, and filled a glass with water. “I didn’t know you’d married.” “Because you didn’t ask.” The answer came out calm enough to sting. Rory set the glass in front of her and took the empty stool beside Bethan. “When was I meant to ask? After you stopped answering my calls?” Bethan’s fingers tightened around the whisky glass. “You called twice. Then nothing.” Rory’s throat worked once. She stared at the water in front of her, at the candlelight caught in the surface. “I was in a bad place.” Bethan’s voice dropped a shade. “I guessed.” Rory turned her head. “You did?” “Rory, you had that look. Like if anyone touched you too quickly you’d crack in half.” The air changed. Rory held very still. Bethan saw it and looked down at her hands, then back up. “I’m not asking for names.” “Good.” “I’m not asking for details.” “Better.” “I’m asking why you never wrote back when I found you on that stupid old address.” Rory went cold. “You wrote?” Bethan blinked once. “Several times.” Rory’s fingers closed over the edge of the stool. “I never got anything.” Bethan stared at her for a long beat, then looked over at Silas as if he might have stolen the missing letters and filed them in his back room with the secrets. Silas only polished a glass and pretended not to listen. “I posted them,” Bethan said. Rory swallowed. The room seemed to tilt a fraction. “I never got them.” “No.” Bethan’s mouth flattened. “I suppose you didn’t.” The silence after that was long enough for Rory to hear the rain harden against the glass. She thought of her old flat, the useless half-packed box by the door, the months that followed, the way one day had turned into the next while she kept her head down and her phone face down and every unanswered number became easier to ignore. She had told herself she was staying alive. She had not told herself how many people she was leaving behind. Bethan turned the whisky glass in a slow circle. “You look better,” she said. Rory barked a quiet laugh. “That’s a lie.” “It isn’t. You look less like you’re running.” Rory’s mouth tightened. “I’m not.” Bethan held her gaze. “No?” Rory thought of the flat above the bar, the narrow bed, the half-open window, the alarm clock she set too early because mornings gave her something to outrun. She thought of the route she took across Soho when she delivered orders, the corners she memorised, the doors she avoided, the names she used only with strangers. “Not tonight.” Bethan nodded once, as if that answered something she had not spoken aloud. Silas moved back down the bar, set down a plate with two olives skewered through a silver pick, and gave Rory a look that asked nothing and missed nothing. Bethan glanced at the plate, then at him. “You always did attract strange men.” Silas lifted one brow. “And you always did arrive where you weren’t expected.” Bethan took the olives between two fingers and smiled for the first time properly, though it did not reach the scar at her neck. “Then I suppose we’ve both kept our talents.” Rory watched her hand, the new steadiness in it, the way the old girl’s restless tapping had gone still. She wanted to ask a dozen things and could not choose the first one. Bethan noticed, as she always had. “Go on,” Bethan said. “Ask.” Rory’s fingers brushed the scar on her wrist beneath the cuff of her shirt. “What made you come in here tonight?” Bethan’s eyes met hers and held. “Your bloody face,” she said, and reached for the whisky again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences106
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.189
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2367
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2367
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"trembled"
2"familiar"
3"traced"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences244
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2367
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions108
wordCount1730
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory52
Cardiff2
London1
Bethan41
Evan2
Silas7
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Bethan"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, and he turned away to the shelves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2367
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences244
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean17.03
std19.65
cv1.154
sampleLengths
0100
135
23
376
410
598
618
77
81
910
1059
111
1229
139
1427
1521
163
177
1855
1930
205
2112
223
236
2416
2540
2610
278
284
2915
305
3147
322
3323
344
352
3615
3716
3829
393
4030
4116
4214
438
445
457
4626
4712
481
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs291
matches
0"was staying"
1"was leaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences244
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.034722222222222224
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002976190476190476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences244
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences244
mean9.7
std8.96
cv0.923
sampleLengths
025
127
227
321
45
54
617
79
83
924
1052
1110
1226
1325
1431
1516
1618
177
181
1910
2033
2126
221
2317
2412
259
2613
2714
2821
293
307
3121
3214
333
3417
3530
365
379
383
393
406
418
428
4311
441
459
463
4716
487
493
45.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.20081967213114754
totalSentences244
uniqueOpeners49
72.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences137
matches
0"Then her gaze hit Rory"
1"Just the understanding that made"
2"Somewhere near the back, ice"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences137
matches
0"Her hair had been cut"
1"She wore black boots with"
2"Her left hand rested on"
3"She scanned the room, took"
4"She stepped further inside and"
5"She came round the end"
6"His hazel eyes moved once"
7"He said nothing."
8"She took in the room"
9"She reached for the towel,"
10"He poured a finger of"
11"His ring flashed silver against"
12"he muttered, and moved off"
13"She had worn her hair"
14"She looked carved down to"
15"She curled her fingers until"
16"She set the glass down"
17"She stared at the water"
18"She thought of her old"
19"She had told herself she"
ratio0.175
11.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences137
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rory stood with a tea"
2"Silas moved at the far"
3"The place smelled of wet"
4"A taxi hissed past outside."
5"The front door opened."
6"The bell over the frame"
7"Rory looked up."
8"The woman who stepped in"
9"Her hair had been cut"
10"A scar ran from the"
11"She wore black boots with"
12"Her left hand rested on"
13"She scanned the room, took"
14"The glass in Rory’s hand"
15"Rory set the glass down"
16"A sharp smile pulled at"
17"She stepped further inside and"
18"Rory let out a breath"
19"She came round the end"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A scar ran from the edge of one ear down into her collar, a thin white seam that disappeared beneath the lapel of her coat."
1"She wore black boots with city grime on the soles and carried herself with the careful stillness of someone who had learned how to keep pain from showing in her…"
2"She thought of her old flat, the useless half-packed box by the door, the months that followed, the way one day had turned into the next while she kept her head…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
1"Bethan repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences106
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.038
87.0757%