| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "lurch" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1227 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1131 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Eva | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Welsh | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.837 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rust and rot" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1227 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 23.15 | | std | 19.53 | | cv | 0.844 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 94.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was ringed" | | 2 | "were lost" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The last delivery of the night sat heavy in the back of Rory’s rickshaw bag—a parcel wrapped in brown paper, tied with string, addressed to a name she didn’t recognize." | | 1 | "Her breath came out in short, controlled bursts—controlled being the key word." | | 2 | "A voice, barely audible, hummed a tune she knew from childhood—some Welsh lullaby her mother used to sing." | | 3 | "She recounted the turns from the last landmark—a crumbling brick wall half-swallowed by ivy." | | 4 | "The hollow must’ve been the land marker; the yew wasn’t there." | | 5 | "The low circle of earth inside was ringed with white flowers—petals like frozen tears." | | 6 | "A twig snapped beneath a heel—delicate, too precise for the wood." | | 7 | "The woman laughed—actually laughed—and the sound wrapped around Rory’s ribs like barbed wire." | | 8 | "Her eyes were bright blue—too bright, glowing slightly at the corners like streetlight reflection on frost." | | 9 | "A flicker of movement at the corner of Rory’s eye—dark shapes shifting between the stones." | | 10 | "Behind the woman, between the rotating stones, shapes emerged—tall, too thin, their limbs bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach flip." | | 11 | "Their faces were lost in shadow, but their eyes reflected back at her—small pinpricks of white light, like stars caught in a well." | | 12 | "The gap behind the yew—the hollow she’d passed minutes earlier—now yawned open like a wound." | | 13 | "Not a mouth—more like a rent in fabric, a tear stitched with pale thread that glistened." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1148 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.033101045296167246 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008710801393728223 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 8.89 | | std | 6.42 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.34057971014492755 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 94.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her name, scrawled in" | | 1 | "Just the key, cold as" | | 2 | "Then the ground beneath her" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She called Eva twice." | | 1 | "She should have taken the" | | 2 | "She pushed the gates open." | | 3 | "Her breath came out in" | | 4 | "She kept her feet light," | | 5 | "Her fingers found the pendant" | | 6 | "It burned now, hotter than" | | 7 | "She whipped her head around." | | 8 | "She yanked it out." | | 9 | "Its crimson heart pulsed once," | | 10 | "She recounted the turns from" | | 11 | "She set the rickshaw down," | | 12 | "She unwrapped the parcel." | | 13 | "She pocketed the key without" | | 14 | "She didn’t turn." | | 15 | "She wore a coat the" | | 16 | "Her hair was the same" | | 17 | "Her eyes were bright blue—too" | | 18 | "She looked familiar." | | 19 | "Her boots made no sound" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 54.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The last delivery of the" | | 1 | "The address stank of old" | | 2 | "Someone had slipped it through" | | 3 | "She called Eva twice." | | 4 | "The address led her through" | | 5 | "Streetlamps petered out." | | 6 | "The only light came from" | | 7 | "The pendant in her pocket" | | 8 | "She should have taken the" | | 9 | "She pushed the gates open." | | 10 | "The iron groaned like a" | | 11 | "The trees on either side" | | 12 | "The air thickened, sweet and" | | 13 | "Dew clung to her arms," | | 14 | "Her breath came out in" | | 15 | "She kept her feet light," | | 16 | "A rustle in the underbrush." | | 17 | "Her fingers found the pendant" | | 18 | "It burned now, hotter than" | | 19 | "A voice, barely audible, hummed" |
| | ratio | 0.811 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Shifted the rickshaw into gear with a long exhale, the streetlights flickering as if unsure whether to stay on." | | 1 | "The trees on either side of the path grew denser, their branches stitching together into a canopy that swallowed the moonlight whole." | | 2 | "She kept her feet light, knees slightly bent, scanning the darkness for movement that wasn’t tree." | | 3 | "The air vibrated against her skin, a low frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "Behind the woman, between the rotating stones, shapes emerged—tall, too thin, their limbs bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach flip." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |