Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07TM22CJQZD7QEFSNPG6N9

Run Details

Duration:
15.2s
Cost:
$0.001135
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last delivery of the night sat heavy in the back of Rory’s rickshaw bag—a parcel wrapped in brown paper, tied with string, addressed to a name she didn’t recognize. The address stank of old woodsmoke and something underneath, something like rust and rot. No postmark. Someone had slipped it through the flap at the restaurant’s back door while she unloaded the latest batch of chow mein cartons. No note. Just her name, scrawled in ink that looked fresh but smelled ancient, like mildew and spilled wine. She called Eva twice. No answer. Shifted the rickshaw into gear with a long exhale, the streetlights flickering as if unsure whether to stay on. Two miles out, half the bulbs died. The address led her through Richmond’s outer lanes, past terraced houses silent as tombs and around a bend where the road narrowed into a track barely wide enough for a bicycle. Streetlamps petered out. The only light came from a sickly moon, its glow bleeding through a crust of cloud. At the end of the track, rusted gates leaned into each other like broken teeth. Beyond them, a narrow path vanished into black trees. The pendant in her pocket pulsed once, sharp as a splinter. She should have taken the tube. Should have waited for Eva to call back. But the food got cold if it waited too long, and she wasn’t about to leave a paying customer in the lurch just because the night felt wrong. She pushed the gates open. The iron groaned like a dying animal. The trees on either side of the path grew denser, their branches stitching together into a canopy that swallowed the moonlight whole. The air thickened, sweet and cloying, like overripe fruit left in the sun. Dew clung to her arms, cold as stuck ink. Her breath came out in short, controlled bursts—controlled being the key word. She kept her feet light, knees slightly bent, scanning the darkness for movement that wasn’t tree. A rustle in the underbrush. She froze. It stopped. Started again, closer. Her fingers found the pendant through her jacket. It burned now, hotter than it should, like a live coal against her thigh. A voice, barely audible, hummed a tune she knew from childhood—some Welsh lullaby her mother used to sing. But her mother wasn’t here. Eva wasn’t here. The voice wasn’t Welsh. The words slithered, consonants twisted, vowels stretched into something wet and hungry. “You’re late.” She whipped her head around. No one stood behind her. The path behind was empty. The pendant flared red in the dark. She yanked it out. Its crimson heart pulsed once, twice, then steadied into a dull thud, like a heartbeat measuring out a countdown. She recounted the turns from the last landmark—a crumbling brick wall half-swallowed by ivy. Three lefts, one right past a yew with a hollow trunk shaped like an open mouth. The hollow must’ve been the land marker; the yew wasn’t there. The trees had shifted. Branches crisscrossed where open air should have been. The hollow was gone. In its place stood a circle of standing stones, black as wet coal, lichen creeping up their sides like veins reaching for blood. The low circle of earth inside was ringed with white flowers—petals like frozen tears. The parcel in her bag felt heavier. She set the rickshaw down, the wheels wobbling against uneven ground she didn’t remember. The stones hummed. The air vibrated against her skin, a low frequency that made her teeth ache. She unwrapped the parcel. Inside lay a polished silver key. No note. No card. Just the key, cold as death, resting on rumpled black velvet. Footsteps. Slow, deliberate. Not hers. A twig snapped beneath a heel—delicate, too precise for the wood. She pocketed the key without thinking, the metal biting her palm. “Delivery’s usually before midnight,” a woman said. She didn’t turn. “The address said night.” The woman laughed—actually laughed—and the sound wrapped around Rory’s ribs like barbed wire. “Night is different here. You should know that.” Rory turned. The woman stood at the edge of the stone circle. She wore a coat the color of wet pine needles, belted tight at the waist. Her hair was the same black as Rory’s, shoulder-length, straight as a blade. Her eyes were bright blue—too bright, glowing slightly at the corners like streetlight reflection on frost. She looked familiar. The pendant warmed. Recognition flared behind Rory’s breastbone. “You’ve been here before,” Rory said. “In dreams.” “More than dreams,” the woman replied. “You were a child. You called me Laila.” The name hit like a thrown stone. Malphora. The scar on Rory’s left wrist throbbed, a phantom ache. “You’re standing inside a ring of standing stones,” Rory said. “Time moves differently. That’s what the stories say.” “They say a lot of things.” A flicker of movement at the corner of Rory’s eye—dark shapes shifting between the stones. Not shadows. Animals couldn’t move that smoothly. “You wanted me to come,” Rory said. “I needed you to.” “Why?” The woman stepped into the circle. Her boots made no sound on the blackened earth. “The key is for the door behind the yew,” she said. “Open it before the hollow fills with bone.” The parcel’s wrapping rustled in her pocket. The standing stones began to spin. Slow at first, then faster, the air compressing like a fist. The white flowers darkened, petals curling into claws. The pendant in Rory’s pocket jolted again, this time a warning: a sharp, electric shock that made her gasp. She pulled the key free. Frost bloomed along the shaft. Behind the woman, between the rotating stones, shapes emerged—tall, too thin, their limbs bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach flip. Their faces were lost in shadow, but their eyes reflected back at her—small pinpricks of white light, like stars caught in a well. One of them reached out. Its fingers stretched long, almost liquid, brushing the stone’s surface without quite touching. The woman raised her hand. A command? A greeting? Rory couldn’t tell. Then the ground beneath her rumbled. A low, resonant hum vibrated up through her boot soles, shaking loose grit into the air. The standing stones stopped spinning with a shudder that made her teeth loose. The gap behind the yew—the hollow she’d passed minutes earlier—now yawned open like a wound. Darkness poured out, thick and roiling, laced with the smell of copper and damp wool. The first of the thin figures stepped forward, boots making no sound on the newly rotten earth. The woman’s voice cut through the rising panic: “Run if you dare. Or use the key.” Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. Run where? The way back wasn’t there anymore. The rickshaw was gone. The track had sealed itself behind a curtain of ivy that looked suspiciously like fresh, pulsating veins. She gripped the key tighter. The lead figure’s empty face turned toward her. Its mouth opened. Not a mouth—more like a rent in fabric, a tear stitched with pale thread that glistened. Inside, darkness pulsed. The woman’s eyes locked onto hers. “Now would be good.” Rory lunged for the hollow. The key burned cold in her hand as she pressed it into the darkness. The darkness resisted. Then gave. She fell forward, the key still in her grip, and the world behind her swallowed the standing stones whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"lurch"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"lurch"
2"scanning"
3"vibrated"
4"velvet"
5"footsteps"
6"familiar"
7"throbbed"
8"flicker"
9"electric"
10"stomach"
11"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1131
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Eva3
Richmond1
Welsh2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore0.837
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like rust and rot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1227
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean23.15
std19.53
cv0.844
sampleLengths
087
125
27
374
411
554
656
750
842
92
1015
1130
1241
134
1449
1538
1625
171
1826
197
207
2121
222
2354
243
258
268
2714
2818
2918
306
3122
327
334
341
3515
3619
377
3844
3910
4044
4118
4212
4335
4430
4517
4616
4735
485
4930
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"was gone"
1"was ringed"
2"were lost"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences138
ratio0.101
matches
0"The last delivery of the night sat heavy in the back of Rory’s rickshaw bag—a parcel wrapped in brown paper, tied with string, addressed to a name she didn’t recognize."
1"Her breath came out in short, controlled bursts—controlled being the key word."
2"A voice, barely audible, hummed a tune she knew from childhood—some Welsh lullaby her mother used to sing."
3"She recounted the turns from the last landmark—a crumbling brick wall half-swallowed by ivy."
4"The hollow must’ve been the land marker; the yew wasn’t there."
5"The low circle of earth inside was ringed with white flowers—petals like frozen tears."
6"A twig snapped beneath a heel—delicate, too precise for the wood."
7"The woman laughed—actually laughed—and the sound wrapped around Rory’s ribs like barbed wire."
8"Her eyes were bright blue—too bright, glowing slightly at the corners like streetlight reflection on frost."
9"A flicker of movement at the corner of Rory’s eye—dark shapes shifting between the stones."
10"Behind the woman, between the rotating stones, shapes emerged—tall, too thin, their limbs bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach flip."
11"Their faces were lost in shadow, but their eyes reflected back at her—small pinpricks of white light, like stars caught in a well."
12"The gap behind the yew—the hollow she’d passed minutes earlier—now yawned open like a wound."
13"Not a mouth—more like a rent in fabric, a tear stitched with pale thread that glistened."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1148
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.033101045296167246
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008710801393728223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean8.89
std6.42
cv0.722
sampleLengths
030
114
22
322
42
517
64
72
819
97
1031
113
1216
1315
149
1511
166
178
1828
195
207
2122
2213
239
2412
2516
265
272
282
293
308
3114
3218
335
343
354
3612
372
385
395
405
417
424
4319
4414
4516
4611
474
488
494
43.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.34057971014492755
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners47
94.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"Just her name, scrawled in"
1"Just the key, cold as"
2"Then the ground beneath her"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences106
matches
0"She called Eva twice."
1"She should have taken the"
2"She pushed the gates open."
3"Her breath came out in"
4"She kept her feet light,"
5"Her fingers found the pendant"
6"It burned now, hotter than"
7"She whipped her head around."
8"She yanked it out."
9"Its crimson heart pulsed once,"
10"She recounted the turns from"
11"She set the rickshaw down,"
12"She unwrapped the parcel."
13"She pocketed the key without"
14"She didn’t turn."
15"She wore a coat the"
16"Her hair was the same"
17"Her eyes were bright blue—too"
18"She looked familiar."
19"Her boots made no sound"
ratio0.245
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences106
matches
0"The last delivery of the"
1"The address stank of old"
2"Someone had slipped it through"
3"She called Eva twice."
4"The address led her through"
5"Streetlamps petered out."
6"The only light came from"
7"The pendant in her pocket"
8"She should have taken the"
9"She pushed the gates open."
10"The iron groaned like a"
11"The trees on either side"
12"The air thickened, sweet and"
13"Dew clung to her arms,"
14"Her breath came out in"
15"She kept her feet light,"
16"A rustle in the underbrush."
17"Her fingers found the pendant"
18"It burned now, hotter than"
19"A voice, barely audible, hummed"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Shifted the rickshaw into gear with a long exhale, the streetlights flickering as if unsure whether to stay on."
1"The trees on either side of the path grew denser, their branches stitching together into a canopy that swallowed the moonlight whole."
2"She kept her feet light, knees slightly bent, scanning the darkness for movement that wasn’t tree."
3"The air vibrated against her skin, a low frequency that made her teeth ache."
4"Behind the woman, between the rotating stones, shapes emerged—tall, too thin, their limbs bending in ways that made Rory’s stomach flip."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9140%