Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07TPVZZNKETQ8D0VCZT29P

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.001955
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down hard by the time she stepped out of The Raven’s Nest, droplets bursting into steam where the neon green sign above the door hit them. Detective Quinn adjusted her leather watch—Seiko, beaten up from use—and checked the alleyway beyond the bar. The suspect’s trail was already cold, or at least too thin for patrol eyes. She could hear him, though. The wet slap of shoes on pavement, the sharp exhale of breath caught between caution and panic. She didn’t need a radio call to tell her which way to go. Quinn moved fast down the slick cobblestones toward Berwick Street, her boots silent despite the rain. The suspect’s jacket—a faded leather thing that clung too tight to his shoulders—had been easy to spot from the bar’s window. He’d ducked inside minutes earlier, but Quinn saw him slip out the back, head down, hands shoved deep in pockets. She didn’t call for backup. Not yet. A flicker of movement near a dumpster. The suspect again, edging toward a gap in the buildings that opened into a narrow passage between the remains of an old theatre and a boarded-up kebab shop. Quinn kept to the building line, shoulders brushing wet brick, her sharp jaw angled low against the downpour. Then he turned. Quinn dropped behind a parked van just as the suspect spun, eyes darting left and right. He wasn’t looking for her—just for escape routes. He bolted down the alley, heels clicking sharp against wet paving, and vanished around a corner. She was on him in fifteen seconds. The chase cut through narrow streets slick with neon and rain, the glow from bars and strip clubs turning everything to liquid color—reds bleeding into blues, greens staining the puddles black. The suspect zigzagged west, aiming for the denser crowds of Old Compton, where tourists and locals drunk on cocktails and survival would swallow him whole. Quinn wasn’t letting that happen. She cut through a side alley, boots hitting the wet concrete with a sound like a gunshot. The suspect’s scent lingered—cheap cologne, sweat, the faint metallic note of adrenaline. He was fast, but not trained. Every sharp breath betrayed him. Every stumble. Then he stopped. Quinn skidded behind a stack of pallets outside a closed record shop, peering around the edge. The suspect stood frozen at the mouth of an alley blocked by a rusted gate. He fumbled in his pocket, produced a key, and slotted it into a padlock only half-covered by graffiti. The gate gave with a groan. A basement entrance. Quinn’s pulse quickened. Basements meant traps. Basements meant dead ends. But the suspect went down anyway, disappearing into darkness. She followed. The descent was steep, concrete stairs slick underfoot. The air changed the moment she passed the gate—thicker, cooler, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older, something that hummed beneath the rain. A green glow pulsed from below, the source unseen. Quinn slowed. Her fingers brushed the grip of her sidearm. Down here, there were no rules. No backup. No file to justify the search. Just her and the suspect and whatever waited in the dark. She took the last step. The corridor opened into a chamber lit by green neon tubes along the ceiling, casting long shadows. The walls were covered in symbols—some painted, some carved, some that looked like they’d been burned into the stone. The air crackled with energy, something unnatural that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. And then she saw him—the suspect. He stood near a central stall where a woman in a black coat with too many pockets knotted something into a bundle of cloth. The suspect turned, eyes wide, and opened his mouth to shout. Quinn moved. She cleared the distance in three strides, hand clamping over his mouth before he could make a sound. He thrashed, elbow catching her ribs hard enough to knock the air from her lungs. “Shut it,” she hissed. “You’re not worth a headline.” He went still. A cough echoed from behind them. Quinn didn’t turn, but her grip tightened. “Tomás.” The paramedic stepped forward from the shadows, Saint Christopher medallion catching the green light. His olive skin looked sallow in the glow. “You’re in deep water, Detective.” “Not as deep as he’ll be if he doesn’t start talking,” Quinn said, nodding toward the suspect, whose breath came in sharp bursts through her fingers. Tomás crossed his arms. “This isn’t a polis bust zone. You know that.” “Neither is your medical license.” She kept her voice low, steady. “But here we both are.” The market stalls buzzed around them—vendors in dark corners offering vials, books bound in something that looked like skin, jewelry that hummed when touched. A man in the next aisle counted bones into a velvet pouch, his hands steady despite the chaos. The suspect’s body relaxed fractionally under her grip. He wasn’t fighting the way he had before. He was waiting. For what? Quinn’s watch beeped. A weak battery signal. Useless now. She leaned in. “Who sent you?” Silence. She pressed harder. “Your name’s not in any system. No prints either. But you ran. That means you know.” The suspect’s eyes flicked to Tomás, then back. A flicker of recognition. “Fine,” Quinn said, pulling him closer. “Walk me to your buyer. Or I start breaking bones until you talk.” Tomás’s voice cut in, calm. “You really want to do this here?” Quinn didn’t look away from the suspect. “I don’t care where I do it.” The market stalls seemed to lean in. Vendors paused. The air thickened. The suspect swallowed. “It’s a trap.” Tomás’s head tilted. “Always is, in here.” A bell chimed somewhere deep in the market—high and clear, like a church bell underwater. The symbol-covered walls pulsed with faint light. Quinn finally broke her stare and looked deeper into the market, toward where the corridor split—one path leading to more stalls, the other vanishing into deeper dark, the green light fading into black. The suspect wriggled. “She’s not safe here. None of us are.” Quinn tightened her grip. “Then you’re coming with me.” Tomás stepped between her and the suspect, hand raised. “You follow him down that path, you’re not just crossing a line. You’re stepping off a cliff.” Quinn didn’t blink. “And staying means he walks free. I don’t do free.” The medallion glinted as Tomás shook his head. “You follow him into the Veil Market, you won’t come back the same. Maybe not at all.” The rain above them started up again, muffled by stone and earth. The suspect’s breath hitched. Quinn exhaled through her nose. She still had a suspect to catch. She still had answers to find. And if the Veil Market led to Morris’s death? Then she’d walk through hell in pursuit. Quinn holstered her weapon with a sharp click. She released the suspect and pushed past Tomás, boots hitting the green-lit floor with purpose. “Last chance,” she called over her shoulder. “Stay or run. But either way—I’m going in.” The suspect scrambled back without a word. Tomás didn’t try to stop her. She stepped past the final boundary where the green light bled into darkness, the corridor narrowing, the air growing thicker, heavier, like the earth itself wanted to swallow her. The market stalls behind her fell silent. Ahead, only the waiting dark. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She walked forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"pulsed"
4"echoed"
5"velvet"
6"silence"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
92.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1232
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1068
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Quinn21
Seiko1
Berwick1
Street1
Old1
Compton1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás8
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Quinn"
2"Seiko"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Morris"
places
0"Berwick"
1"Street"
2"Compton"
globalScore0.517
windowScore0.333
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like they’d been burned into the s"
1"looked like skin, jewelry that hummed whe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1232
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"letting that happen"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean17.6
std16.92
cv0.961
sampleLengths
081
113
257
37
453
53
640
77
856
95
1042
113
1255
133
1410
159
162
1742
1810
1925
205
2153
2241
232
2433
259
263
276
288
2927
3026
3113
3216
3342
3419
352
369
376
381
3919
4012
4119
4212
4314
4412
456
467
4722
4833
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"were covered"
1"been burned"
55.86% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs185
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"wasn’t letting"
2"wasn’t fighting"
3"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences131
ratio0.084
matches
0"Detective Quinn adjusted her leather watch—Seiko, beaten up from use—and checked the alleyway beyond the bar."
1"The suspect’s jacket—a faded leather thing that clung too tight to his shoulders—had been easy to spot from the bar’s window."
2"He wasn’t looking for her—just for escape routes."
3"The chase cut through narrow streets slick with neon and rain, the glow from bars and strip clubs turning everything to liquid color—reds bleeding into blues, greens staining the puddles black."
4"The suspect’s scent lingered—cheap cologne, sweat, the faint metallic note of adrenaline."
5"The air changed the moment she passed the gate—thicker, cooler, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older, something that hummed beneath the rain."
6"The walls were covered in symbols—some painted, some carved, some that looked like they’d been burned into the stone."
7"And then she saw him—the suspect."
8"The market stalls buzzed around them—vendors in dark corners offering vials, books bound in something that looked like skin, jewelry that hummed when touched."
9"A bell chimed somewhere deep in the market—high and clear, like a church bell underwater."
10"Quinn finally broke her stare and looked deeper into the market, toward where the corridor split—one path leading to more stalls, the other vanishing into deeper dark, the green light fading into black."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1085
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sharp against wet paving,"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.029493087557603687
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003686635944700461
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean9.4
std7.24
cv0.77
sampleLengths
029
116
214
35
417
513
616
721
820
95
102
117
1228
1318
143
1516
168
1716
187
1931
2025
215
2217
2312
246
255
262
273
2816
2915
3018
316
323
333
343
354
369
372
388
3925
409
412
428
436
442
456
4611
475
4817
4919
40.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2748091603053435
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then he turned."
1"Then he stopped."
2"Just her and the suspect"
3"Then she’d walk through hell"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences102
matches
0"She could hear him, though."
1"She didn’t need a radio"
2"He’d ducked inside minutes earlier,"
3"She didn’t call for backup."
4"He wasn’t looking for her—just"
5"He bolted down the alley,"
6"She was on him in"
7"She cut through a side"
8"He was fast, but not"
9"He fumbled in his pocket,"
10"Her fingers brushed the grip"
11"She took the last step."
12"He stood near a central"
13"She cleared the distance in"
14"He thrashed, elbow catching her"
15"He went still."
16"His olive skin looked sallow"
17"She kept her voice low,"
18"He wasn’t fighting the way"
19"He was waiting."
ratio0.275
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences102
matches
0"The rain came down hard"
1"Detective Quinn adjusted her leather"
2"The suspect’s trail was already"
3"She could hear him, though."
4"The wet slap of shoes"
5"She didn’t need a radio"
6"Quinn moved fast down the"
7"The suspect’s jacket—a faded leather"
8"He’d ducked inside minutes earlier,"
9"She didn’t call for backup."
10"A flicker of movement near"
11"The suspect again, edging toward"
12"Quinn kept to the building"
13"Quinn dropped behind a parked"
14"He wasn’t looking for her—just"
15"He bolted down the alley,"
16"She was on him in"
17"The chase cut through narrow"
18"The suspect zigzagged west, aiming"
19"Quinn wasn’t letting that happen."
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The suspect’s jacket—a faded leather thing that clung too tight to his shoulders—had been easy to spot from the bar’s window."
1"The suspect again, edging toward a gap in the buildings that opened into a narrow passage between the remains of an old theatre and a boarded-up kebab shop."
2"The air changed the moment she passed the gate—thicker, cooler, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older, something that hummed beneath the rain."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She kept, steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
78.9022%