| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the park entrance had sloppily [sloppily]" | | 1 | "My voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 88.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 894 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 894 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "fluttered" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 882 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 823 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.24 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Appropriate | 1 | | Poundland | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Silence | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Poundland" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like moth-eaten velvet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 882 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 22.05 | | std | 17.43 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 99.75% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "were going" | | 1 | "wasn't blowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "I fished a scrap of paper from my pocket—the order chit." | | 1 | "My boots sank into the damp earth, the rich scent of wet moss and something sweeter—wildflowers gone over in winter—filling my nose." | | 2 | "I checked my watch—11.47pm." | | 3 | "I shook it—cheap battery from Poundland—but the beam steadied." | | 4 | "The air didn't just grow colder; it grew *heavier*, pressing against my skin like wet wool." | | 5 | "A bird—too large for this season—screeched somewhere high above." | | 6 | "I touched the pot—scalding." | | 7 | "Then—whispering." | | 8 | "A figure—tall, too thin, wrapped in what looked like moth-eaten velvet." | | 9 | "Then—a whisper, from every direction at once: \"Laila...\"" |
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| 82.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 840 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "*heavier*, pressing against my" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.05357142857142857 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014285714285714285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 8.09 | | std | 5.15 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 55.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3944954128440367 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind through skeletal" | | 1 | "Too hot to pour." | | 2 | "Too many voices, overlapping, too" | | 3 | "Then—a whisper, from every direction" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 88.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "I muttered, tightening the strap" | | 1 | "It was the middle of" | | 2 | "You had to know where" | | 3 | "he'd said, rubbing his temples" | | 4 | "I fished a scrap of" | | 5 | "My boots sank into the" | | 6 | "My torch beam sliced through" | | 7 | "My voice sounded too loud," | | 8 | "I checked my watch—11.47pm." | | 9 | "I spun, torch swinging wildly." | | 10 | "I shook it—cheap battery from" | | 11 | "I stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "My breath came out as" | | 13 | "I whispered, swallowing the metallic" | | 14 | "Its wings beat like a" | | 15 | "I set the bakery boxes" | | 16 | "I touched the pot—scalding." | | 17 | "My voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 18 | "I whirled again, torch arcing" | | 19 | "I called, trying to inject" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 64.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak door groaned as" | | 1 | "The golden Empress sign above" | | 2 | "I muttered, tightening the strap" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant at my" | | 4 | "It was the middle of" | | 5 | "Richmond Park was a different" | | 6 | "The lamplights only reached so" | | 7 | "The natural order of things" | | 8 | "The sign by the park" | | 9 | "The standing stones ahead weren't" | | 10 | "You had to know where" | | 11 | "he'd said, rubbing his temples" | | 12 | "I fished a scrap of" | | 13 | "My boots sank into the" | | 14 | "The air tasted metallic somehow," | | 15 | "My torch beam sliced through" | | 16 | "The pendant grew warmer against" | | 17 | "My voice sounded too loud," | | 18 | "The stones drank the sound," | | 19 | "I checked my watch—11.47pm." |
| | ratio | 0.791 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "No matter how much WD-40" 1/1/2040, 12:00:00 AM |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant at my collarbone pulsed faintly against the damp fabric of my shirt, a warm thrum that shouldn't comfort me but did." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I called, trying to inject authority into my voice" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "he'd (would)" | | 2 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "I demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |