Run: 2026-03-18-01KM07ZYJRNTN38VBZ4MZCJGEH

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.014402
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt gave with a hard clack. Then the second. Then the last. Aurora cracked the door open with her shoulder still braced against it, ready for the usual worst of Brick Lane after dark — drunk men, takeaway delivery mix-ups, Eva’s neighbours with the wrong key — and found Lucien Moreau standing on the landing as if he’d stepped out of a private dining room and not climbed three filthy flights of stairs. Rain slicked his platinum hair flat to his head. His charcoal suit held the dark sheen of damp wool across his shoulders. One amber eye fixed on her face. The other, black as polished glass, caught the bulb over the landing and held it like a shard. For a second, neither of them moved. Then Rory’s fingers tightened on the edge of the door. “You’ve got a nerve.” Lucien’s mouth tipped at one corner. Not quite a smile. Something leaner. “You used to find that appealing.” She looked him over once, slow and sharp, because looking anywhere else would have felt like losing ground. The ivory handle of his cane rested against his palm. His cuffs stayed clean despite the rain. Of course they did. Men like Lucien seemed to step through weather without letting it mark them. Ptolemy appeared behind Rory’s ankles, a tabby blur of judgement and fur. The cat peered round her shin, ears forward. Lucien’s gaze flicked down. “This one approves less than you do.” Ptolemy hissed. Rory pushed the door wider and kept one hand on it. “You’re wet.” “I noticed.” “That wasn’t an invitation.” “No, it was an observation. I’m still standing here.” She let out a short breath through her nose and held his stare. The landing light hummed above them. Somewhere below, someone shouted in the curry house kitchen, steel pans clanging against one another. The smell of cumin and fried onion drifted up through the stairwell and mixed with rain and damp wool and the faint metallic edge that always seemed to follow Lucien, as if he carried a blade under his skin. Which, she knew, he did. “You can’t just turn up,” she said. Lucien’s amber eye moved over her face, lingered at her mouth, then lifted again. “I did not come for a social call.” “That makes it better, does it?” “No.” He shifted his cane and rested it lightly against the wall beside the door. “It makes it honest.” “Funny. That’s not the word I’d use.” Ptolemy slipped through the gap and rubbed himself against Lucien’s shin with insulting ease. Lucien glanced down. “Traitor.” Rory almost smiled. She killed it before it showed. “You’re in the wrong building.” “I’m exactly where I meant to be.” “Eva’s flat is not a safe house for your dramatic entrances.” His gaze came back to her, steady and unreadable in that odd, split-colour way of his. “I did not come for Eva.” The words landed between them and stayed there. Rory held the door and stared at him, the stairwell light catching on the small droplets gathered at his collar. His face looked carved out of restraint, all sharp planes and expensive control, but she knew better than to trust that neat exterior. Underneath it, Lucien ran hot and dangerous, and he always had. He had kissed like he was making a bargain. He had touched like he’d already decided the answer. Then he’d walked away with half the truth still in his pocket. Her left wrist throbbed where the scar sat under her sleeve, a thin crescent she always seemed to notice around him, as if her body had kept score when her pride had refused to. “Well?” she said. “You’ve found me.” His jaw moved once. “May I come in?” Rory looked past him into the narrow landing. Empty. Then back to him. “No.” One brow rose. “You can stand there and explain yourself in the corridor like a normal nuisance.” His mouth pressed flat for the briefest instant, as if he’d bitten back a laugh or a curse. “You’ve become severe.” “I’ve become tired.” Something changed in his face at that. Not much. Just enough for her to feel it in her own ribs. He glanced once at the doorframe, at the deadbolts, at the narrow strip of light spilling across the hall from Eva’s cluttered flat behind her. “May I at least remove my shoes?” he asked. Rory blinked. “What?” “My shoes,” he repeated, drier now. “You appear ready to stab me, and I would prefer to do it in a dry pair of Oxfords.” She stared at him. He stared back, perfectly composed, rain dripping from one cuff. Against her will, a laugh escaped her, quick and sharp and gone as soon as it came. Lucien’s mouth shifted again, this time with something like victory. “Don’t look pleased with yourself,” she muttered. “I never did.” “You are literally standing there with that face.” “My face offended you enough to answer the door.” “You showed up on my doorstep like a debt collector in a storm.” “A debt collector would have been less polite.” He reached for the cane with both hands and leaned it neatly against the wall, then bent and slipped one shoe off, then the other, with infuriating care. Rory watched him without meaning to. The line of his shoulders under wet wool. The flex of one hand against the dark leather. The tiny pause when he straightened, as though the air in the corridor had thickened around him. He stepped over the threshold in stockinged feet. Rory closed the door behind him and slid the bolts home one by one. The sound came out louder in the flat than it should have, blunt and final. The place hit Lucien first, as it always did anyone who came in from the street. Stacks of books pressed against the sofa. Paper notes pinned and taped in layers across the table and the walls. Two half-burned candles on the mantel. A chipped mug with tea gone cold. A foil takeout tray balanced beside a stack of notebooks. The flat looked like a mind had spilled open and never got cleaned up. Lucien took it in with a single sweep. “You’ve made no progress in domesticity.” Rory shrugged off her coat and tossed it over the back of the nearest chair. “That’s rich coming from a man who dresses like he lives in a jewellery box.” He lifted one shoulder. “A stable environment matters.” “You’re in no position to talk about stability.” “No. I expect I am not.” The answer was quiet enough that it made her look at him again. He stood in the middle of the cramped room, water darkening the shoulders of his suit, his cane still against the wall by the door, and for once he seemed to have arrived without his usual easy command of a room. The flat pinched around him. The low ceiling. The mess. Ptolemy circling Lucien’s ankles with open suspicion. Rory hated that it made him look almost stranded. She hated more that it did something to her. “What do you want?” she asked. Lucien removed one cufflink, then the other, and set them side by side on the sideboard with exquisite precision. “Four minutes of your attention.” “You should have texted.” “I did.” Rory frowned and crossed to the kitchen counter, partly to put a barrier between them, partly because standing still in front of him had never worked in her favour. She reached for the kettle, filled it under the tap. “You sent one message at half past midnight three days ago that said, ‘Need to speak. Important.’ That’s not a request. That’s a threat with manners.” His black eye fixed on her hands. “And you ignored it.” “I was busy.” “With what?” She shut the kettle off harder than necessary. “Living.” Lucien’s silence lasted a beat. Then, “You always did prefer evasions with sharp edges.” Rory snorted and yanked two mugs from the drying rack. One had a chipped handle. Eva’s. The other matched it by accident and bad luck. “You didn’t come here to judge my correspondence.” “No.” She waited, keeping her back half-turned, because facing him head on while the old heat stirred under her skin felt like stepping too close to a fire she’d already been burned by. “Well?” she said. “Out with it.” “First, look at me.” Rory turned despite herself. Lucien had gone still. The rain had darkened the line of his hair at his temples. In the ugly yellow kitchen light, the amber of one eye shone warm and watchful while the black one stayed unreadable. His face carried no hint of apology. That was never his style. But something in his posture had changed; the easy elegance sat a fraction tighter, as if he’d braced for impact before stepping into the room. “I need information,” he said. “That’s your favourite thing.” “Not from you.” That hit harder than it should have. Rory set the mugs down with care she did not feel. “Then why are you here?” His gaze moved over her wrist when she reached for the kettle, and she saw the instant he caught sight of the crescent scar. He looked away fast enough to be polite and not fast enough to hide it from her. “Because,” he said, “you are the only person in London who knows the name I need.” Rory let the kettle click on. “And if I say no?” Lucien came one step closer. Not enough to crowd her. Enough to tilt the air. “You won’t.” She turned, elbows braced on the counter. “That sounded like confidence.” “It was memory.” A pulse jumped in her throat. She hated that he remembered things like that. Hated more that he knew she did too. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and settled there with his tail wrapped around his paws, watching them as if this whole arrangement offended him personally. Rory reached for the tea tin, bought herself a second by measuring the leaves. “You show up after weeks of silence,” she said, eyes on the tin, “and the first thing out of your mouth is that you need something.” “I did not say I liked the arrangement.” “That’s a comfort.” Lucien moved to the narrow space opposite her, close enough that she caught the rain on his clothes and the faint clean scent beneath it — soap, expensive cologne, something darker she would have recognised blindfolded. He rested one hand on the back of a chair and looked at her hands with that same unnerving attention he always gave as if every motion meant more than the motion itself. “You were not answering,” he said. “I had limited options.” “You had a phone.” “Phones can be ignored.” “Then try harder.” His mouth twitched once. “I did.” Rory slid hot water into the mugs and watched the leaves unfurl. “Why not come to Eva?” “Because Eva would have lied to me.” “She’d have enjoyed it.” “Yes.” That dragged a reluctant laugh from her again, and Lucien heard it. His expression shifted in a way she remembered too well, a softening at the edges that never lasted long enough to trust. He had always known how to pull a thread loose in her, get under the armour, make her forget the exact shape of her anger. She hated that he still could. “Sit down,” she said. Lucien looked past her to the only two chairs worth using, one buried under a sweater, the other tucked against a shelf of books. “You make hospitality sound like a disciplinary measure.” “It is, for you.” He moved the sweater from the chair with two fingers and took the seat carefully, cane laid across his lap. Rory stood on the other side of the counter, staring at him over the steam rising from the mugs. For a moment, neither spoke. The kettle hissed down. Ptolemy’s tail flicked once. Rory set one mug in front of him. “Don’t get comfortable,” she said. Lucien’s hand closed around the mug, long fingers pale against the ceramic, and he looked up at her with a quiet that made the room feel smaller. “I would not dare,” he said. “Not after the way you opened the door.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.181
leniency0.361
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2043
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"perfectly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2043
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"throbbed"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences147
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences147
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2046
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1591
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Lucien21
Moreau1
Rory20
Ptolemy6
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"One"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.84
windowScore0.667
23.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like losing ground"
1"appeared behind Rory’s ankles, a tabby blur of judgement and fur"
2"something like victory"
3"looked like a mind had spilled open and n"
4"felt like stepping too close to a fire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2046
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences214
matches
0"hated that it"
1"hated that he"
2"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs123
mean16.63
std18.7
cv1.124
sampleLengths
014
161
247
37
410
54
612
76
852
920
104
117
122
1313
142
154
169
1773
185
197
2022
216
2219
237
2414
254
269
275
287
2911
3022
318
3284
3334
346
358
3614
373
3814
3921
403
4145
429
433
4425
4514
4617
4710
487
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences147
matches
0"got cleaned"
1"been burned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs269
matches
0"was making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences214
ratio0.014
matches
0"Aurora cracked the door open with her shoulder still braced against it, ready for the usual worst of Brick Lane after dark — drunk men, takeaway delivery mix-ups, Eva’s neighbours with the wrong key — and found Lucien Moreau standing on the landing as if he’d stepped out of a private dining room and not climbed three filthy flights of stairs."
1"But something in his posture had changed; the easy elegance sat a fraction tighter, as if he’d braced for impact before stepping into the room."
2"Lucien moved to the narrow space opposite her, close enough that she caught the rain on his clothes and the faint clean scent beneath it — soap, expensive cologne, something darker she would have recognised blindfolded."
92.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1592
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount78
adverbRatio0.048994974874371856
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005653266331658292
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean9.56
std8.42
cv0.881
sampleLengths
08
13
23
361
49
513
67
718
87
910
104
116
124
132
146
1518
1610
177
184
1913
2012
218
224
237
242
2511
262
272
284
299
3013
316
3215
3339
345
357
3614
378
386
3915
404
417
4214
433
441
453
466
475
487
4911
46.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2616822429906542
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences127
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then the last."
2"Then Rory’s fingers tightened on"
3"Of course they did."
4"Somewhere below, someone shouted in"
5"Then he’d walked away with"
6"Then back to him."
7"Just enough for her to"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences127
matches
0"His charcoal suit held the"
1"She looked him over once,"
2"His cuffs stayed clean despite"
3"She let out a short"
4"He shifted his cane and"
5"She killed it before it"
6"His gaze came back to"
7"His face looked carved out"
8"He had kissed like he"
9"He had touched like he’d"
10"Her left wrist throbbed where"
11"His jaw moved once."
12"His mouth pressed flat for"
13"He glanced once at the"
14"he repeated, drier now"
15"She stared at him."
16"He stared back, perfectly composed,"
17"He reached for the cane"
18"He stepped over the threshold"
19"He lifted one shoulder."
ratio0.299
50.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences127
matches
0"The first deadbolt gave with"
1"Aurora cracked the door open"
2"Rain slicked his platinum hair"
3"His charcoal suit held the"
4"The other, black as polished"
5"Lucien’s mouth tipped at one"
6"She looked him over once,"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"His cuffs stayed clean despite"
9"Men like Lucien seemed to"
10"Ptolemy appeared behind Rory’s ankles,"
11"The cat peered round her"
12"Lucien’s gaze flicked down."
13"Rory pushed the door wider"
14"She let out a short"
15"The landing light hummed above"
16"The smell of cumin and"
17"Lucien’s amber eye moved over"
18"He shifted his cane and"
19"Ptolemy slipped through the gap"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora cracked the door open with her shoulder still braced against it, ready for the usual worst of Brick Lane after dark — drunk men, takeaway delivery mix-up…"
1"The smell of cumin and fried onion drifted up through the stairwell and mixed with rain and damp wool and the faint metallic edge that always seemed to follow L…"
2"But something in his posture had changed; the easy elegance sat a fraction tighter, as if he’d braced for impact before stepping into the room."
3"Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and settled there with his tail wrapped around his paws, watching them as if this whole arrangement offended him personally."
4"He rested one hand on the back of a chair and looked at her hands with that same unnerving attention he always gave as if every motion meant more than the motio…"
5"Lucien’s hand closed around the mug, long fingers pale against the ceramic, and he looked up at her with a quiet that made the room feel smaller."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.337
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.048
86.5412%