Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0810X0ERRH79G4PVH7S6S9

Run Details

Duration:
11.6s
Cost:
$0.000935
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain slashed sideways under the flickering streetlamps like blades thrown from an unseen hand. Detective Harlow Quinn’s coat clung to her shoulders, rainwater dripping from the brim of her hat onto the pavement as she kept her pace steady but urgent. She’d lost sight of the suspect a block back, but the trail of wet footprints leading down an alley hadn’t vanished. Not yet. She stepped off the curb into the alley’s grimy embrace. Cigarette butts glistened under the single working bulb above a boarded-up kebab shop. Stench of stale grease and something older hung in the air—damp concrete and rust. Her leather shoes splashed through a puddle that hadn’t been there a second ago. Too clean. Too forced. Quinn paused. The footprints stopped six feet ahead at a cracked drain cover, half-submerged in black water. No footprints beyond. No mud, no debris kicked aside. Just smooth, dry metal where water should ripple. She crouched, brushing her fingers over the edge. Cold iron, no rust. Too recent. Like someone had replaced a section of grate. A whisper of breath behind her. She twisted, hand reaching for her pistol. Tomás Herrera stepped from the shadows, hands raised, but not in surrender. His Saint Christopher medallion gleamed dully under the flicker of dying light. “You’re not supposed to be here,” he said softly, accent warm but strained. Quinn didn’t lower the gun. “Following a suspect. He came this way.” Tomás tilted his head toward the drain. “And so did he. But this isn’t your city anymore, Detective. Not down there.” The rain drummed harder. A car alarm wailed in the distance, then silence. Quinn stared down into the drain. No sound. No movement. Just darkness thick enough to suffocate. “He wasn’t human,” Tomás said. “The hell does that mean?” “It means you go in there, you might not come back out as yourself.” Footsteps echoed in an alley behind them—too deliberate, too close. Quinn’s pulse spiked. She spun, pistol up. A man in a long beige coat stood ten feet away. He wasn’t panting. His shoes weren’t wet. His skin looked waxy under the alley light. He smiled like he’d been waiting. Quinn leveled the gun. “Detective Quinn,” the man said. “I’ve been expecting you.” Tomás’s voice cut in, urgent. “He’s a handler. They traffic memories, identities—” The man flicked his wrist. Time stuttered. Quinn’s finger froze on the trigger. Air thickened. The man’s face blurred like a film strip tearing. Then the world snapped back. She fired. The shot ricocheted off the brick wall, screaming into the night. The suspect—no, the man in beige—was gone. Only the faintest whisper of cologne remained, something floral and wrong. Tomás grabbed her arm. “He’s leading you into the Veil Market.” Quinn jerked free. “The what?” “The underground. Where the real world doesn’t breathe the same air.” Up ahead, the drain cover shifted. Iron groaned. The edges glowed faintly green, like old neon under corrosion. He wasn’t luring her. He was inviting. Quinn holstered the pistol and pulled her gloves tighter. “You know the way in?” Tomás exhaled sharply. “I know every entrance. But it’ll cost you.” “Everything’s a debt.” Rain ran down her jaw. The drain yawned open, exhaling stale breath. She stepped up. The edge was warm beneath her fingertips. “Wait,” Tomás said. “Bone token. Only way across.” Quinn scoffed. “Give me the damn token.” Tomás hesitated. Then he reached into his coat and placed a small, yellowed bone disk into her palm. It smelled of dust and salt. “Hold it to the gate. Say the mark: ‘Beneath skin, beneath stone.’” Quinn repeated the words. The drain cover split vertically, peeling open like rotten fruit. A staircase spiraled downward into blackness roaring with noise—voices overlapping, laughter sharp as shattered glass, footsteps like rain on stone. A flicker of light below: a dim glow pulsing in time with her heartbeat. Tomás touched her shoulder. “You follow him down, you don’t control what happens. The Market trades in more than goods. It trades in souls.” Quinn stared into the depths. The suspect was down there. Alive. Breathing. “He murdered my partner,” she said. Tomás didn’t flinch. “Then you know what he’s capable of.” She stepped forward. The stair beneath her foot was dry. “Detective.” She paused. “Don’t breathe the air down there.” She descended. The moment her head cleared the drain rim, the world twisted. The ceiling vanished. The air tasted of ozone and copper. Hundreds of figures moved in a sprawl, their forms flickering between human and something else—limbs too long, faces stretched like wax. Colors bled like ink in water. Neon signs hung upside down, casting no light, only absorbing it. A market. Alive. Stalls lined cobbled alleys that shouldn’t exist beneath Camden. Vendors with too many eyes hawked bottles of swirling liquid, jars of floating eyes, wrapped parcels that breathed. The suspect stood twenty feet ahead, beside a stall draped in red velvet embroidered with gold thread—not from this world. Quinn’s bone token in her palm pulsed once, like a heartbeat. He turned. Saw her. Smiled. “Ah,” he said. “There you are.” Behind him, the alley sloped downward—forcing itself into the underground, into something older. Quinn tightened her grip. He gestured toward a stall with a voice like silk and poison. “Want to know how your partner died?” She didn’t answer. He tilted his head. “Then come closer.” The crowd pressed in. Feet shuffled. Breaths hissed. Quinn met his stare. And walked forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.071
89.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount920
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount920
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"roaring"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"flicker"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"flicked"
7"roaring"
8"shattered"
9"depths"
10"velvet"
11"pulsed"
12"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords912
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount739
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn15
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Footsteps1
Tomás10
Camden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Footsteps"
6"Tomás"
places(empty)
globalScore0.485
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
90.35% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.096
wordCount912
matches
0"not supposed to be here,” he said softly, accent warm but strained"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean13.41
std12.54
cv0.935
sampleLengths
065
155
234
322
46
57
624
713
812
921
1013
1116
125
135
1414
1517
1626
176
184
199
2012
2124
225
232
2411
2518
2611
275
2811
2918
304
313
3214
3311
343
3512
3610
378
387
3924
4012
414
4230
4314
4424
4512
466
4710
4810
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"wasn’t panting"
1"wasn’t luring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences135
ratio0.052
matches
0"Stench of stale grease and something older hung in the air—damp concrete and rust."
1"Footsteps echoed in an alley behind them—too deliberate, too close."
2"The suspect—no, the man in beige—was gone."
3"A staircase spiraled downward into blackness roaring with noise—voices overlapping, laughter sharp as shattered glass, footsteps like rain on stone."
4"Hundreds of figures moved in a sprawl, their forms flickering between human and something else—limbs too long, faces stretched like wax."
5"The suspect stood twenty feet ahead, beside a stall draped in red velvet embroidered with gold thread—not from this world."
6"Behind him, the alley sloped downward—forcing itself into the underground, into something older."
98.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04138851802403204
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009345794392523364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean6.76
std5.03
cv0.744
sampleLengths
015
127
221
32
410
513
614
714
82
92
102
1115
123
136
148
158
164
172
188
196
207
2112
2212
2313
245
257
267
2714
284
299
306
312
322
336
345
355
3614
3710
383
394
4011
413
424
438
446
454
465
474
485
497
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences85
matches
0"Just smooth, dry metal where"
1"Just darkness thick enough to"
2"Then the world snapped back."
3"Only the faintest whisper of"
4"Then he reached into his"
ratio0.059
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences85
matches
0"She’d lost sight of the"
1"She stepped off the curb"
2"Her leather shoes splashed through"
3"She crouched, brushing her fingers"
4"She twisted, hand reaching for"
5"His Saint Christopher medallion gleamed"
6"he said softly, accent warm"
7"She spun, pistol up."
8"He wasn’t panting."
9"His shoes weren’t wet."
10"His skin looked waxy under"
11"He smiled like he’d been"
12"He wasn’t luring her."
13"He was inviting."
14"She stepped up."
15"It smelled of dust and"
16"She stepped forward."
17"He gestured toward a stall"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"He tilted his head."
ratio0.235
30.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain slashed sideways under"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s coat clung"
2"She’d lost sight of the"
3"She stepped off the curb"
4"Cigarette butts glistened under the"
5"Stench of stale grease and"
6"Her leather shoes splashed through"
7"The footprints stopped six feet"
8"She crouched, brushing her fingers"
9"A whisper of breath behind"
10"She twisted, hand reaching for"
11"Tomás Herrera stepped from the"
12"His Saint Christopher medallion gleamed"
13"he said softly, accent warm"
14"Quinn didn’t lower the gun."
15"Tomás tilted his head toward"
16"The rain drummed harder."
17"A car alarm wailed in"
18"Quinn stared down into the"
19"Footsteps echoed in an alley"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Vendors with too many eyes hawked bottles of swirling liquid, jars of floating eyes, wrapped parcels that breathed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1988%