| 49.06% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Lucien’s cane tapped once [once]" | | 2 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 3 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.151 | |
| 92.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1935 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.90% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1935 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "cacophony" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "lilt" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "magnetic" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "gleaming" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was nervous" | | 1 | "r with pity" |
| |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 188 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 1913 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "clack" | | 1 | "they both knew what this was." | | 2 | "The Infernal Dictionary" | | 3 | "click" | | 4 | "fix this before I fix you." | | 5 | "Rory, you don’t have to be afraid." | | 6 | "thud" | | 7 | "is" | | 8 | "hers." |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1445 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Lucien | 21 | | Rory | 24 | | Belfast | 1 | | Infernal | 1 | | French | 1 | | Glasgow | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Waited | 1 | | Conwy | 1 | | Thames | 2 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Belfast" | | 3 | "Glasgow" | | 4 | "Conwy" | | 5 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.67 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 64.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite" | | 1 | "looked like something a small child might" | | 2 | "as if sensing warmth" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1913 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 83 | | mean | 23.05 | | std | 15.18 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 49 | | 49 | 8 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 254 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "was looking" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 188 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came again—insistent, not patient enough to wait." | | 1 | "One amber eye locked onto hers, the other—black as wet slate—aimed past her shoulder, taking in the cluttered flat in a single sweep." | | 2 | "The flat smelled exactly as it had when Rory last left—of decisions made and ones deferred." | | 3 | "The flat swallowed him whole—the ceiling lower than Rory remembered, the bookshelves sagging under scrolls and leather-bound grimoires, the coffee table buried under charms and half-empty teacups." | | 4 | "His fingers flexed once—long, elegant, the knuckles just slightly too pronounced." | | 5 | "Brick Lane’s usual cacophony—a sitar blaring from the neighbor’s flat, a scooter backfiring three stories down—muted into a hush, as if the street itself held its breath." | | 6 | "She remembered the last time he’d said her name like that—soft, almost reverent." | | 7 | "The weight of the unspoken hovered between them—like smoke after a fire." | | 8 | "Lucien moved forward—one slow step, then another." | | 9 | "The memory surfaced unbidden—her grandmother’s house in Conwy, the attic room smelling of old wood and linseed oil, the letter she’d written in careful script, each word a betrayal, each tear a stain." | | 10 | "She remembered now—the Thames at low tide, the bracelet cold in her palm, the weight of it, the way the silver had snagged on her skin like a secret." | | 11 | "Her hands shook—just slightly." | | 12 | "Wanted to slam the door in his face and lock everything behind it—her fear, her past, the ghost of Evan, the weight of that bracelet sunk in the Thames." | | 13 | "He reached into his coat—tailored, charcoal, moving like liquid—and pulled out a small, worn leather sheath." | | 14 | "Inside lay a blade—simple, straight, the hilt wrapped in black leather, the steel unadorned." | | 15 | "She tested the edge with her thumb—sharp enough to draw blood without pressure." | | 16 | "Instead, he reached out—just a finger’s width from her arm—and traced the air above the scar on her wrist, as if sensing warmth." | | 17 | "And for the first time in years, it didn’t terrify her as much as the alternative—being alone with the silence she’d built around herself." | | 18 | "Her reflection in the cracked mirror above the sideboard caught her eye—pale face, bright blue eyes, black hair loose around her shoulders, the knife handle peeking over her hip." |
| |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1469 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.035398230088495575 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008849557522123894 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 188 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 188 | | mean | 10.18 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 27 |
| |
| 40.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2765957446808511 | | totalSentences | 188 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 76.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he had." | | 1 | "Somewhere below, a pot clanged," | | 2 | "Instead, he reached out—just a" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 55.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "She slid the last bolt" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit caught" | | 2 | "He used it like punctuation" | | 3 | "He hadn’t called her that" | | 4 | "He crossed the threshold in" | | 5 | "He didn’t drape his coat." | | 6 | "He simply stood in the" | | 7 | "His fingers flexed once—long, elegant," | | 8 | "He was nervous." | | 9 | "He didn’t smile" | | 10 | "His cane made a faint" | | 11 | "She didn’t answer." | | 12 | "She crossed her arms." | | 13 | "He ran a finger along" | | 14 | "He didn’t seem to notice." | | 15 | "His voice dropped, the French" | | 16 | "She remembered the last time" | | 17 | "It had been in a" | | 18 | "She wasn’t afraid now." | | 19 | "His voice dropped, low and" |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 24.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker on Eva’s" | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 2 | "The knock came again—insistent, not" | | 3 | "She slid the last bolt" | | 4 | "Lucien stood framed in the" | | 5 | "His tailored charcoal suit caught" | | 6 | "Ptolemy bolted from the windowsill," | | 7 | "The tabby’s fur stood in" | | 8 | "Lucien’s mouth twitched." | | 9 | "Rory leaned against the doorframe," | | 10 | "The scent of lamb curry" | | 11 | "Eva’s latest stack of occult" | | 12 | "The flat smelled exactly as" | | 13 | "Lucien’s cane tapped once against" | | 14 | "He used it like punctuation" | | 15 | "The alias made her knuckles" | | 16 | "He hadn’t called her that" | | 17 | "Rory stepped back without answering," | | 18 | "The hinges creaked like old" | | 19 | "He crossed the threshold in" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker on Eva’s front door landed with a sharp *clack* that echoed down the narrow Brick Lane stairwell." | | 1 | "Brick Lane’s usual cacophony—a sitar blaring from the neighbor’s flat, a scooter backfiring three stories down—muted into a hush, as if the street itself held i…" | | 2 | "Instead, he reached out—just a finger’s width from her arm—and traced the air above the scar on her wrist, as if sensing warmth." | | 3 | "Lucien watched her from across the room, his cane gleaming in the dim light, his heterochromatic eyes reflecting a past neither of them could outrun." |
| |
| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice dropped, the French lilt bleeding into his vowels" | | 1 | "she asked finally, not looking up" |
| |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.075 | | leniency | 0.151 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |