Run: 2026-03-18-01KM086MAHGX6KKDX7MDW5FBDY

Run Details

Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.001967
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker on Eva’s front door landed with a sharp *clack* that echoed down the narrow Brick Lane stairwell. Rory’s fingers tightened around the spine of the battered paperback she’d been pretending to read. Three deadbolts. Two slow breaths. The knock came again—insistent, not patient enough to wait. She slid the last bolt home and pulled the door open. Lucien stood framed in the dim hallway light, one hand braced against the doorframe, the other gripping the ivory handle of his cane. His tailored charcoal suit caught the dim glow of the stairwell bulb, the fabric shifting like smoke as he exhaled. One amber eye locked onto hers, the other—black as wet slate—aimed past her shoulder, taking in the cluttered flat in a single sweep. Ptolemy bolted from the windowsill, tail lashing, and wound around Lucien’s ankles before Rory could process the arrival. The tabby’s fur stood in a ridge down his back, a low growl vibrating in his throat. Lucien’s mouth twitched. “Still hate me, I see.” Rory leaned against the doorframe, blocking the entryway without blocking his view. “Didn’t know you hated cats.” “He’s not the one I was referring to.” The scent of lamb curry seeped up from downstairs, mingling with ink and candle wax. Eva’s latest stack of occult journals sat teetering beside the door, their spines cracked from overuse. The flat smelled exactly as it had when Rory last left—of decisions made and ones deferred. Lucien’s cane tapped once against the doorframe, a rhythm Rory recognized. He used it like punctuation when he was about to say something he knew would land hard. “Can I come in, Laila?” The alias made her knuckles whiten. He hadn’t called her that in over a year. Not since the night she’d cut her hair short in a Belfast bathroom and watched it pool in the sink like black water. Not since he’d shown up at the safe house with blood under his nails and a look that said *they both knew what this was.* Rory stepped back without answering, letting the door swing wider. The hinges creaked like old guilt. He crossed the threshold in two measured strides, his cane making no sound on the worn boards. The flat swallowed him whole—the ceiling lower than Rory remembered, the bookshelves sagging under scrolls and leather-bound grimoires, the coffee table buried under charms and half-empty teacups. Piles of research notes edged dangerously close to the gas heater. Lucien didn’t sit. He didn’t drape his coat. He simply stood in the center of the room, cane planted before him like a boundary line. His fingers flexed once—long, elegant, the knuckles just slightly too pronounced. A tell. He was nervous. “You look like hell.” “You look like you’re about to ask me to dinner.” He didn’t smile. “Both dreadful first impressions.” Rory set the paperback on the arm of the sofa. The spine bore a permanent crease from the last time she’d read *The Infernal Dictionary* cover to cover in one sitting. “What do you want, Luc?” His cane made a faint *click* as he loosened his grip. “Same thing I always want. Information.” “You could’ve phoned.” “Would you have answered?” She didn’t answer. The flat seemed to shrink around them, the afternoon light tilting sideways through the grimy windows. Brick Lane’s usual cacophony—a sitar blaring from the neighbor’s flat, a scooter backfiring three stories down—muted into a hush, as if the street itself held its breath. Lucien exhaled through his nose. The sound was almost a laugh, but not quite. “You never were one for pleasantries.” “And you never were one for honesty.” The words came out sharper than intended. Rory regretted them immediately, but the damage was done. Lucien’s jaw tightened, the amber eye sharpening like a blade catching light. Ptolemy, sensing the shift, leapt onto the windowsill and fixed Rory with a stare that said *fix this before I fix you.* She crossed her arms. “Fine. Talk.” Lucien took his time. He ran a finger along the edge of the nearest bookshelf, disturbing a cascade of loose notes. Ink bled across his cuff. He didn’t seem to notice. “There’s a collector in Mile End. Name’s Cross. Deals in pre-Avaric artifacts. Recently acquired a piece—an obsidian mirror, East Asian craftsmanship. It’s pulling memories out of people. Not just flashes. Whole lives. Faces. Names. It’s feeding on identity.” Rory’s stomach dropped, but she kept her face blank. “Sounds like a bad thrift store purchase.” “It’s dangerous, Rory.” His voice dropped, the French lilt bleeding into his vowels. “You know what happens when memories start to blur. People lose name, face, history. They become ghosts before they die.” She remembered the last time he’d said her name like that—soft, almost reverent. It had been in a safe house in Glasgow, rain lashing the windows, her ribs bruised from Evan’s last visit, Lucien pressing a glass of absinthe into her hands and saying *Rory, you don’t have to be afraid.* She wasn’t afraid now. Not exactly. But she was raw. Exposed. Rory reached for a chipped mug on the coffee table, turned it in her hands. The liquid inside had long since turned to cold tea. “And you need me why? I’m a bike courier, not an exorcist.” “Because you’re the only one who’s seen a mirror like that before.” He paused. Waited. The weight of the unspoken hovered between them—like smoke after a fire. Rory set the mug down too hard. Tea sloshed over the rim, staining the wood. “I told you. I never want to see another one.” Lucien’s cane made a soft *thud* against the floorboards as he shifted his weight. “You say that like it’s a choice.” “It *is* a choice.” “Is it?” His voice dropped, low and rough. “You don’t get to walk away from what you saw in that tomb, Rory. Not cleanly. Not safely. The mirrors remember. They call.” She laughed, short and bitter. “Spare me the poetic bullshit. I was twelve. I got scared. I ran. That’s not some grand destiny.” Lucien moved forward—one slow step, then another. He didn’t touch her. He didn’t need to. The air between them thickened, charged with something almost magnetic. “You didn’t run,” he said quietly. “You took a train to your grandmother’s. You stayed three weeks. You painted the entire attic dark blue. You wrote me a letter on lavender paper and burned it at midnight.” Rory’s breath hitched. The memory surfaced unbidden—her grandmother’s house in Conwy, the attic room smelling of old wood and linseed oil, the letter she’d written in careful script, each word a betrayal, each tear a stain. She’d burned it in the old iron stove while rain tapped the roof. She swallowed. “That was a lifetime ago.” “Was it?” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her left wrist, where the crescent scar gleamed pearly in the dim light. “People don’t just pick up and leave their pasts. They carry them like brands.” Rory tugged her sleeve down, but it was too late. He’d seen. Of course he had. Lucien’s fingers brushed the cane’s ivory handle. “You still wear the bracelet?” She stiffened. “What bracelet?” “The one made of black tourmaline and silver.” His voice was casual, but the amber eye sharpened. “The one I gave you after you got back from Conwy. The one you threw into the Thames at 3 AM on a Tuesday.” Rory’s mouth went dry. She remembered now—the Thames at low tide, the bracelet cold in her palm, the weight of it, the way the silver had snagged on her skin like a secret. She’d dropped it between two barges, watched it sink into the black water without looking back. She forced a shrug. “Thought I lost it.” “You didn’t lose it.” Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor, a slow metronome. “I found it. Three days later. Cleaned it. Kept it.” Silence settled, thick and heavy. The cat yowled outside in the stairwell, demanding entry. Somewhere below, a pot clanged, and the scent of curry deepened, almost cloying. Rory turned away, busying herself with aligning a stack of scrolls on the table. Her hands shook—just slightly. She felt Lucien’s presence like a shadow, close but not touching. He didn’t rush her. He never rushed. “Why now?” she asked finally, not looking up. “Because Cross is auctioning the mirror tonight. At midnight. In an old printworks off Cable Street.” Lucien paused. “And because I need someone who can handle a blade without flinching.” Rory finally looked at him. “You’re asking me to come back into the dark with you.” “I’m asking you to come with me tonight. Just tonight. We get in, we get the mirror, we get out. No ghosts. No grand revelations.” She wanted to refuse. Wanted to slam the door in his face and lock everything behind it—her fear, her past, the ghost of Evan, the weight of that bracelet sunk in the Thames. But Lucien wasn’t looking at her with pity or demand or even apology. He was looking at her like she was still Rory. Still valuable. Still *hers.* And that was the problem. She exhaled through her nose, slow and controlled. “I don’t have a spare blade.” Lucien’s smile was small, tight. “You always did.” He reached into his coat—tailored, charcoal, moving like liquid—and pulled out a small, worn leather sheath. He tossed it onto the coffee table between them. Inside lay a blade—simple, straight, the hilt wrapped in black leather, the steel unadorned. It looked like something a small child might use for craft projects. But Rory recognized it instantly. It was Eva’s boning knife from her old restaurant days. Lucien hadn’t come empty-handed. Rory picked it up. The weight was familiar. She tested the edge with her thumb—sharp enough to draw blood without pressure. Her breath caught. He’d kept it all this time. The bracelet. The knife. The memories. She looked up. “What do you want from me, Luc?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached out—just a finger’s width from her arm—and traced the air above the scar on her wrist, as if sensing warmth. “Not your forgiveness,” he said softly. “Not your trust.” She laughed, bitter and raw. “Then what?” “Your hand.” His voice dropped, rough with something she didn’t name. “For one night. Across the table. Across the page. Just enough to keep me steady.” The air thickened. The cat mewled outside. The scent of curry curdled into something sharp and metallic. Rory closed her hand around the knife. She was about to step back into the dark. And for the first time in years, it didn’t terrify her as much as the alternative—being alone with the silence she’d built around herself. “I’ll go,” she said. “But you walk behind me in the printworks. And if I say run, we run. No questions.” Lucien inclined his head once. A fraction. A treaty. She slid the knife into her belt. It fit snug, as if meant for her. Rory turned toward the bedroom to change her shoes. Her reflection in the cracked mirror above the sideboard caught her eye—pale face, bright blue eyes, black hair loose around her shoulders, the knife handle peeking over her hip. She looked ready. For the first time in a long time, she looked alive. Lucien watched her from across the room, his cane gleaming in the dim light, his heterochromatic eyes reflecting a past neither of them could outrun. But for tonight, maybe that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
49.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"Lucien’s cane tapped once [once]"
2"she asked finally [finally]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.264
leniency0.528
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.151
92.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"cacophony"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"weight"
count5
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"measured"
2"cacophony"
3"stomach"
4"lilt"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"charged"
8"magnetic"
9"silence"
10"familiar"
11"traced"
12"warmth"
13"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences149
matches
0"was nervous"
1"r with pity"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences149
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords27
totalWords1913
ratio0.014
matches
0"clack"
1"they both knew what this was."
2"The Infernal Dictionary"
3"click"
4"fix this before I fix you."
5"Rory, you don’t have to be afraid."
6"thud"
7"is"
8"hers."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1445
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien21
Rory24
Belfast1
Infernal1
French1
Glasgow1
Evan2
Waited1
Conwy1
Thames2
Silence1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silence"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Belfast"
3"Glasgow"
4"Conwy"
5"Thames"
globalScore0.67
windowScore0.667
64.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite"
1"looked like something a small child might"
2"as if sensing warmth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1913
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean23.05
std15.18
cv0.659
sampleLengths
049
111
266
335
48
517
68
747
828
95
1063
1116
1255
1341
144
1517
1636
1717
183
194
2046
2120
2235
2322
246
2531
2638
2716
2833
2951
3011
3137
3215
3312
3425
3521
364
3731
3823
3925
4037
4149
427
4333
4416
4512
464
4741
4849
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs254
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences188
ratio0.101
matches
0"The knock came again—insistent, not patient enough to wait."
1"One amber eye locked onto hers, the other—black as wet slate—aimed past her shoulder, taking in the cluttered flat in a single sweep."
2"The flat smelled exactly as it had when Rory last left—of decisions made and ones deferred."
3"The flat swallowed him whole—the ceiling lower than Rory remembered, the bookshelves sagging under scrolls and leather-bound grimoires, the coffee table buried under charms and half-empty teacups."
4"His fingers flexed once—long, elegant, the knuckles just slightly too pronounced."
5"Brick Lane’s usual cacophony—a sitar blaring from the neighbor’s flat, a scooter backfiring three stories down—muted into a hush, as if the street itself held its breath."
6"She remembered the last time he’d said her name like that—soft, almost reverent."
7"The weight of the unspoken hovered between them—like smoke after a fire."
8"Lucien moved forward—one slow step, then another."
9"The memory surfaced unbidden—her grandmother’s house in Conwy, the attic room smelling of old wood and linseed oil, the letter she’d written in careful script, each word a betrayal, each tear a stain."
10"She remembered now—the Thames at low tide, the bracelet cold in her palm, the weight of it, the way the silver had snagged on her skin like a secret."
11"Her hands shook—just slightly."
12"Wanted to slam the door in his face and lock everything behind it—her fear, her past, the ghost of Evan, the weight of that bracelet sunk in the Thames."
13"He reached into his coat—tailored, charcoal, moving like liquid—and pulled out a small, worn leather sheath."
14"Inside lay a blade—simple, straight, the hilt wrapped in black leather, the steel unadorned."
15"She tested the edge with her thumb—sharp enough to draw blood without pressure."
16"Instead, he reached out—just a finger’s width from her arm—and traced the air above the scar on her wrist, as if sensing warmth."
17"And for the first time in years, it didn’t terrify her as much as the alternative—being alone with the silence she’d built around herself."
18"Her reflection in the cracked mirror above the sideboard caught her eye—pale face, bright blue eyes, black hair loose around her shoulders, the knife handle peeking over her hip."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1469
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.035398230088495575
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008849557522123894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean10.18
std7.7
cv0.757
sampleLengths
020
115
22
33
49
511
623
720
823
918
1017
113
125
1312
145
158
1615
1716
1816
1911
2017
215
226
239
2423
2525
2610
276
2817
2927
3011
313
325
3317
3411
352
363
374
3813
394
4010
4121
425
4311
446
453
464
473
4816
4927
40.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2765957446808511
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners52
76.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Somewhere below, a pot clanged,"
2"Instead, he reached out—just a"
ratio0.023
55.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences131
matches
0"She slid the last bolt"
1"His tailored charcoal suit caught"
2"He used it like punctuation"
3"He hadn’t called her that"
4"He crossed the threshold in"
5"He didn’t drape his coat."
6"He simply stood in the"
7"His fingers flexed once—long, elegant,"
8"He was nervous."
9"He didn’t smile"
10"His cane made a faint"
11"She didn’t answer."
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He ran a finger along"
14"He didn’t seem to notice."
15"His voice dropped, the French"
16"She remembered the last time"
17"It had been in a"
18"She wasn’t afraid now."
19"His voice dropped, low and"
ratio0.412
24.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences131
matches
0"The brass knocker on Eva’s"
1"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
2"The knock came again—insistent, not"
3"She slid the last bolt"
4"Lucien stood framed in the"
5"His tailored charcoal suit caught"
6"Ptolemy bolted from the windowsill,"
7"The tabby’s fur stood in"
8"Lucien’s mouth twitched."
9"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
10"The scent of lamb curry"
11"Eva’s latest stack of occult"
12"The flat smelled exactly as"
13"Lucien’s cane tapped once against"
14"He used it like punctuation"
15"The alias made her knuckles"
16"He hadn’t called her that"
17"Rory stepped back without answering,"
18"The hinges creaked like old"
19"He crossed the threshold in"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The brass knocker on Eva’s front door landed with a sharp *clack* that echoed down the narrow Brick Lane stairwell."
1"Brick Lane’s usual cacophony—a sitar blaring from the neighbor’s flat, a scooter backfiring three stories down—muted into a hush, as if the street itself held i…"
2"Instead, he reached out—just a finger’s width from her arm—and traced the air above the scar on her wrist, as if sensing warmth."
3"Lucien watched her from across the room, his cane gleaming in the dim light, his heterochromatic eyes reflecting a past neither of them could outrun."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His voice dropped, the French lilt bleeding into his vowels"
1"she asked finally, not looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.9740%