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Run: 2026-03-18-01KM087WVTEQNMD8RVMT8JXTSB
Run Details
Model:
GPT-5.4 Mini (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
30.8s
Cost:
$0.025241
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
95.35%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
74.43%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
55.85%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
46.32%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
22.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
78.50%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.7712%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The third deadbolt gave with
a sharp clack, and Lucien Moreau filled the doorway before Rory had the chain off.
She kept one hand on
the lock and the other on the edge of the frame, as if wood could help her hold him back.
His charcoal coat hugged his
shoulders, his ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh, and a dark stain spread across one cuff. Blood, fresh enough to shine.
His amber eye fixed on
her face, then the black one followed, cool and
unreadable
. Rory narrowed her eyes. "You've got a nerve."
Lucien lifted his chin by
a fraction. "And you have excellent timing." "You're at the wrong flat." "I am
precisely
where I intended to be." "Then you're intended to get lost."
He glanced past her, over
her shoulder, into Eva's cramped front room.
Books and folders crowded every
surface.
Scrolls lay half-unrolled beside a
laptop and a chipped mug with a crust of tea at the bottom.
Ptolemy, curled on a chair
beneath the window, rose with a low, offended growl and arched his back. Lucien's mouth twitched. "Ptolemy remembers me." "The cat has better judgement than most people." "That animal has always had a dramatic streak." Rory left the chain on. "Talk."
His gaze dropped to the
chain, then back to her eyes. "May I come in?" "No." "How like you." "How unlike you to ask." A beat passed.
He stood with that infuriating
calm, one hand resting on the cane, the other loose by his side.
The blood on his sleeve
made the whole picture worse.
He looked as if he
had stepped out of a salon in Paris, not out of whatever mess had splashed red across him.
Rory hated that the sight
hit her in the chest like a fist. "Your security has improved," he said. "My front door has three deadbolts for a reason." "A reason named Lucien, apparently."
She barked out a laugh
with no humour in it. "You flatter yourself."
His eyes slid to her
wrist. The crescent scar caught the light when she tightened her grip on the door. Something sharpened in his face, quick as a blade flash. "You still wear it." "My wrist? Yes. It has become a favourite feature." "The scar."
Her fingers curled hard enough
to ache. "What do you want?" Lucien answered at once. "Ten minutes. A chair. No questions until I finish." "Then you can keep standing in the corridor."
He leaned closer, enough that
she caught the clean edge of his cologne under iron and smoke. "There are men below who would love to see you refuse me." Rory held his stare. "You brought company." "I brought a problem. The company followed." Ptolemy let out a hiss that sounded far too close to a curse. Rory shot the cat a look, then back at Lucien. "Say it plainly." A small muscle jumped in Lucien's jaw. "Someone
traced
a sigil to this address." Rory went still. Lucien watched the shift, and that infuriating composure of his thinned just enough to show he had seen it land. "That got your attention." "Say the rest." "Not here." "Of course. Because that would be convenient." "Because there are ears in the building." "Brick Lane is full of ears." "Then keep your voice down."
She laughed again, once, sharp
and cold. "You show up unannounced, bleeding on Eva's carpet, and you order me about."
His gaze dropped to the
hall behind her, to the books and papers and all the clutter of Eva's life that Rory had no business touching. "If I wished to order you about, mon coeur, you would know." The old name caught under her skin. Not the words. The tone. Low,
velvet
-smooth, meant to calm and cut in the same breath. Rory placed her free hand against the door, ready to slam it. "Don't call me that." Lucien's face stayed blank, but his eyes shifted, amber and black, as if something beneath his skin stirred at the sound. "Rory, then." "Better." He did not smile. That made it worse. "Open the door." "No."
His gaze dipped to her
hand on the frame, then rose, slow and exact. "You are not afraid of me." That made heat spike through her, quick and ugly. "Don't mistake irritation for trust." "That was never your weakness." Her
pulse
kicked. She
hated that he
noticed. Hated more that he knew exactly where to put the knife. Rory tugged the chain free, then kept the door cracked only a hand's width. Lucien's attention followed the movement with that quiet, predatory patience of his.
He smelled like winter smoke
and expensive soap and trouble.
He stepped inside before she
chose to let him. "Lucien."
He stopped just beyond the
threshold, cane tapping once against the floorboards. "If I had desired a scene, I would have chosen your flat above the bar. The acoustics are better." "Get out of my house." "This is Eva's flat." "The sentiment remains." Ptolemy slunk off the chair and wound around Lucien's boots, tail high enough to brush his shin. Lucien looked down at the cat, then back at Rory. "I've missed your hospitality." "You've missed something. Hospitality isn't it." For the first time, the corner of his mouth lifted, brief and dark. "There you are." Rory hated that more than anything. The recognition. The ease with which he said it, as if he had gone looking for some hidden version of her and found it the second she sharpened her claws. She shut the door behind him, then turned the top lock with deliberate care. "Talk before I change my mind." Lucien removed his gloves one finger at a time. His hands looked careful. Long-fingered, elegant, and, if the knuckles said anything, used for violence often enough to keep the bones hard. He folded the gloves and tucked them into his coat pocket. "A man contacted me an hour ago," he said. "He asked for Aurora Carter." She did not move. "Bad idea." "His words, not mine." "Continue." "He knew your full name. He knew where you worked. He knew about the flat above the bar. He knew about Cardiff." Rory kept her face empty. It took effort. Her old life always sat too close to the surface, waiting for a careless hand. Lucien noticed the effort. He always had. "He knows a little. That makes him stupid, not dangerous." "That's optimistic." "That's experience." He stepped deeper into the room. Eva's flat narrowed around him, all book stacks and leaning piles and little corridors made by habit. Lucien moved through the clutter with uncommon grace, his cane never striking a shelf, his sleeve never brushing a page. Ptolemy watched him like a judge. Rory crossed her arms. "Who is he?" "I did not ask his name." "You don't speak to strangers unless they pay well or bleed on you." "Both conditions applied." Her eyes dropped to the dark stain on his cuff. "Show me." "No." "Lucien." He reached into his inner pocket and took out a black card, thick and matte, sealed with a smear of red wax stamped with a broken ring. He held it between two fingers. Rory stared at the mark before she took it. The wax looked fresh. She turned it over. One line of ink sat on the back in a sharp, slanted hand. RETURN THE GIRL Rory's mouth went dry. Lucien said, "He used your old name first. Then he used the one you left behind." Rory tightened her grip until the card bent. "Who sent him?" "Someone with a poor
sense of
self-preservation." "That narrows it down to half of London." "Half of London does not know your past." Her eyes snapped to his. "You don't get to say that." His face did not change. The room
seemed to
draw closer anyway, the books, the chair, the chipped mug on the shelf, all of it pressing in around the space between them. "I know what I am permitted to say." "You never cared about permission before." The words hung there, naked and pointed. Lucien's hand tightened once on the cane. "No, Rory. I cared about consequences." Something ugly
flickered
behind her ribs. Memory, sharp and unwanted. His mouth at her throat. His hand at her waist. The night he vanished with no note and no explanation, leaving her with a locked door, a shaking
pulse
, and a phone that never rang. She stepped closer before she realised she had moved. "That's rich coming from you." He looked down at her. The gap between them had vanished to nothing. She could see the fine line of a cut near his mouth, the shadow of bruising at his jaw, the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the hard black shine of the other. "You left." Lucien gave the smallest shake of his head. "No." Rory scoffed. "You vanished." "I was removed." "With no goodbye." His gaze dropped, just for a breath, to her mouth. When it lifted again, the air in the room had changed. "A goodbye would have made you feel better," he said. "I do not indulge comfort when truth will wound more cleanly." Rory went
very
still. "You arrogant bastard." "Among other things." Her laugh came out thin and angry. "You turn up here with blood on your sleeve and a murder note, and you expect me to stand still while you offer riddles?" "I expect you to listen." "I expect you to leave." Lucien's fingers rose,
not to touch her face, not yet, but to brush the inside of her wrist
where the crescent scar sat pale against her skin. He grazed it with one knuckle. Rory inhaled so hard it hurt. The touch lasted less than a second. It burned longer. His voice dropped. "The man below asked for that scar." Rory slapped her hand over his before he could pull back. His skin ran warm, nearly hot, under her palm. The air between them snapped taut. "Why." "He said the mark belonged to a key." Her
stomach
turned. "That's nonsense." "Everything useful sounds like nonsense at first." "Who is he?" "I told you, I did not ask." "You expect me to believe a stranger just wandered off the street, asked about my wrist, and you walked him out with a ribbon and a kiss?" A flash of something dark crossed his expression. "No," he said. "I cut his throat in an alley and left him breathing just enough to send a message." Rory stared at him. Ptolemy let out a furious yowl and bolted beneath the sofa. Lucien's thumb shifted once against her
pulse
, and she noticed the blood on his cuff had darkened. A thin line dripped from beneath the sleeve and tapped the floorboards. "You're injured." "Observant." "Sit down." "I have not come for your charity." "You came into Eva's flat bleeding on my floor." "It improves my case." She reached for his sleeve. He caught her wrist. The movement was swift, smooth, and close enough that her breath snagged. His hand closed around the scarred wrist as if he knew its shape from memory. Heat flared beneath his fingers. Rory's eyes
flicked
to his mouth and back up again, furious at herself for the mistake. Lucien noticed. Of course he noticed. "Still careless," he murmured. "Still unbearable." "Still affected." Rory tugged once, not enough to free herself. "Let go." He did, immediately, as if the command pleased him. The skin at her wrist felt cold where his hand had been. She
hated that the
absence registered. A thud hit the front door. Both of them stilled. The sound came again, heavier this time, a hard body striking wood. One of the deadbolts rattled in its frame. Ptolemy hissed from under the sofa. Rory turned her head towards the hallway. Another blow. The chain on the second lock rang out. Lucien
was already moving
. The cane came up in one smooth arc, and the ivory handle split with a metallic
whisper
. A thin blade flashed into his hand. Rory blinked once. "You carry that in a flat with books and a cat." His mouth tightened. "I contain multitudes." The front door shuddered under a fresh удар, enough to rattle the stack of folders on the side table. Something metallic scraped the outside lock. Lucien took one step in front of her. "Behind me." Rory stared at his back. "Get out of my way." "No." "Lucien, if you think I'm hiding while you play the noble martyr-" A voice came through the wood, rough and warped by the corridor. "Open up, Carter." Rory's
blood went cold
. Lucien's head turned a fraction. Not enough for her to see his face, just enough to know he had heard it too. The voice spoke again, lower this time, and the door bowed inward with a crack that sent splinters skittering across Eva's floor. "Last chance."
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latency
202
model_permaslug
"openai/gpt-5.4-mini-20260317"
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"OpenAI"
status
200
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
120
tagDensity
0.05
leniency
0.1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
95.35%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2151
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"precisely"
1
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
74.43%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2151
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"unreadable"
count
1
1
word
"traced"
count
1
2
word
"velvet"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
3
4
word
"sense of"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"stomach"
count
1
7
word
"flicked"
count
1
8
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"unreadable"
1
"traced"
2
"velvet"
3
"pulse"
4
"sense of"
5
"flickered"
6
"stomach"
7
"flicked"
8
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"blood ran cold"
count
1
highlights
0
"blood went cold"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
158
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
158
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
272
gibberishSentences
1
adjustedGibberishSentences
1
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
34
ratio
0.004
matches
0
"The front door shuddered under a fresh удар, enough to rattle the stack of folders on the side table."
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2151
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
25
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
55.85%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
63
wordCount
1487
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
1.88
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien
23
Moreau
1
Rory
28
Eva
4
Paris
1
Ptolemy
6
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Rory"
3
"Eva"
4
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Paris"
globalScore
0.559
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
103
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"smelled like winter smoke and expensive so"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
0.93
wordCount
2151
matches
0
"not to touch her face, not yet, but to brush the inside of her wrist"
1
"not yet, but to brush the inside of her wrist"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
272
matches
0
"hated that the"
1
"hated that he"
2
"hated that the"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
174
mean
12.36
std
12.39
cv
1.002
sampleLengths
0
20
1
66
2
4
3
4
4
12
5
5
6
8
7
6
8
54
9
3
10
3
11
8
12
8
13
6
14
15
15
1
16
3
17
5
18
54
19
13
20
6
21
9
22
5
23
13
24
30
25
4
26
9
27
2
28
11
29
13
30
8
31
29
32
7
33
7
34
23
35
3
36
14
37
3
38
20
39
4
40
3
41
2
42
7
43
7
44
6
45
5
46
20
47
38
48
23
49
16
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
158
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
251
matches
0
"was already moving"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
272
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1491
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
54
adverbRatio
0.03621730382293763
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.004024144869215292
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
272
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
272
mean
7.91
std
6.12
cv
0.773
sampleLengths
0
20
1
25
2
21
3
5
4
15
5
4
6
4
7
7
8
5
9
5
10
8
11
6
12
12
13
6
14
18
15
18
16
3
17
3
18
8
19
8
20
5
21
1
22
11
23
4
24
1
25
3
26
5
27
3
28
18
29
10
30
23
31
13
32
6
33
9
34
5
35
10
36
3
37
6
38
14
39
10
40
4
41
9
42
2
43
7
44
4
45
4
46
9
47
8
48
17
49
12
46.32%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.24632352941176472
totalSentences
272
uniqueOpeners
67
22.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"Of course he noticed."
ratio
0.007
78.50%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
52
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"She kept one hand on"
1
"His charcoal coat hugged his"
2
"His amber eye fixed on"
3
"He glanced past her, over"
4
"His gaze dropped to the"
5
"He stood with that infuriating"
6
"He looked as if he"
7
"She barked out a laugh"
8
"His eyes slid to her"
9
"Her fingers curled hard enough"
10
"He leaned closer, enough that"
11
"She laughed again, once, sharp"
12
"His gaze dropped to the"
13
"He did not smile."
14
"His gaze dipped to her"
15
"Her pulse kicked."
16
"She hated that he noticed."
17
"He smelled like winter smoke"
18
"He stepped inside before she"
19
"He stopped just beyond the"
ratio
0.354
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
136
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"The third deadbolt gave with"
1
"She kept one hand on"
2
"His charcoal coat hugged his"
3
"Blood, fresh enough to shine."
4
"His amber eye fixed on"
5
"Rory narrowed her eyes."
6
"Lucien lifted his chin by"
7
"He glanced past her, over"
8
"Books and folders crowded every"
9
"Scrolls lay half-unrolled beside a"
10
"Ptolemy, curled on a chair"
11
"Lucien's mouth twitched."
12
"Rory left the chain on."
13
"His gaze dropped to the"
14
"A beat passed."
15
"He stood with that infuriating"
16
"The blood on his sleeve"
17
"He looked as if he"
18
"Rory hated that the sight"
19
"She barked out a laugh"
ratio
0.925
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
147
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
62
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Lucien's face stayed blank, but his eyes shifted, amber and black, as if something beneath his skin stirred at the sound."
1
"His hand closed around the scarred wrist as if he knew its shape from memory."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences
120
tagDensity
0.05
leniency
0.1
rawRatio
0.167
effectiveRatio
0.017
85.7712%