Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08B1NVA4XW14VM4522QVSJ

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.001325
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door rattled under three sharp knocks, each one precise enough to make the deadbolts rattle in their frames. Rory wiped her hands on the tea towel, flecks of flour still clinging to her fingertips from shaping the dumplings she dropped onto the counter. Three more knocks hammered through the thin walls from Eva’s place above the curry house, steady and insistent, the kind of rhythm that didn’t beg—it demanded. She froze. The flat was quiet except for Ptolemy’s tail flicking across a stack of tarot cards on the table. His golden eyes locked onto the door with disdain, as if to say *not again*. Rory exhaled through her nose. No one knocked like that unless they meant business. Another set of knocks, sharper this time, punctuated by a voice low and smooth, sliding through the wood like a blade through silk. "You open up or do I have to threaten the cat?" Rory’s breath caught. She knew that voice. Knew the mocking lilt, the way it curled around words like a dare. Lucien. Here. On *Eva’s* doorstep. In *London*. Without invitation, without apology, like the last three years hadn’t happened. Her pulse spiked—not exactly from fear, though danger hummed beneath it. No, it was worse than fear. It was memory. The taste of absinthe in a dimly lit Marseille bar, his thumb brushing her wrist, the way his amber eye gleamed when he laughed at something only she found funny. The way he’d left. Without looking back. She marched to the door, wiped her hands once more for emphasis, and threw it open. Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate as ever in a charcoal suit tailored to perfection, an ivory-handled cane resting casually against his hip. His platinum hair was slicked back, catching the dim light of Brick Lane filtering up from below. One eye—amber, warm as brandy—locked onto hers. The other, black as ink, gleamed with quiet amusement. He looked at her like she was a puzzle he’d already solved. Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You know Eva’s out." "I didn’t come for Eva." His gaze dropped to her mouth, then flicked away, deliberate. Not a leer. Not even warmth. Just assessment. Like she was a tactical problem he’d already mapped. She felt it—the old pull, the one that made her hands want to reach for him before her mind caught up. "You haven’t changed," she said. "And you still answer doors like you own the place." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invite. His cane tip tapped the floor once. "May I?" She blocked the entry with her body. "No." The corner of his mouth twitched. "Always so stubborn." "Always so presumptuous." He exhaled through his nose, almost a laugh, and adjusted the cuff of his jacket. The movement revealed a sliver of his wrist—smooth skin, no marks, not like hers. She flexed her left arm instinctively, hiding the crescent scar beneath her sleeve. "You’re still here, in this flat over a curry house," he said, more observation than criticism. "Still delivering dumplings. Still pretending you’re not the sharpest mind in the room." She scoffed. "And you’re still showing up unannounced with your cane and your charm like it’s a personality." His black eye darkened with something like amusement. "Charm? I never claimed to have any." "Denial isn’t a river in Egypt." That got a real smirk. A dimple flashed in his left cheek, one she hadn’t noticed in years. Or maybe she just hadn’t let herself see it then. He shifted his weight, cane tapping again. "Fine. I’ll make this quick. I need to get out of the city. Tonight. And I need your help." Rory blinked. "My *help*?" "You’re resourceful. Connected. And you don’t brag about it." He tilted his head slightly. "It would be tragic if someone as clever as you wasted her talents on dumplings." She bristled. Not because it was untrue. But because it was *him* saying it. "You think a compliment will get you in?" "I think you’d rather stab me with a dumpling skewer than admit I’m right." Ptolemy chose that moment to slink over, tail high, purring like a motor. He rubbed against Lucien’s leg, weaving around the cane with deliberate insolence. Lucien reached down, stroking the tabby’s head with barely concealed surprise. "Even the cat likes me." "Ptolemy has terrible taste." Lucien looked up, met her eyes. The amber one held something softer now. Unreadable. But the black one was still a void, a quiet storm behind glass. "You always did have a way with words, Rory." The name hit like a punch—too intimate, too personal. He’d called her *Aurora* last time. In public. When they were hidden in a backroom in Marseille, drinking absinthe and talking about realms and bloodlines and things that shouldn’t exist. But he knew. He *knew* the balance between names, between identities, between masks. And now he was using the one that hurt least aloud. She stepped back, not enough to let him in, but enough to break the pressure. "I don’t know what game you’re playing, Lucien. But I’m not your contact anymore." "Not even for twenty thousand?" Her breath stopped. Twenty thousand. That wasn’t just a number. That was a bounty. A ransom. A life price. She stared at him. He didn’t flinch. Didn’t blink. "You’re being hunted?" she asked quietly. "By the same people I once did business with." He tapped the cane again. "I didn’t double-cross them. But I know things they don’t want known." She swallowed. "And you come to *me*?" "I come to *Rory*. The one who once talked her way out of a brothel in New Orleans with nothing but a stolen coat and a lie about a bishop." Her face burned. She remembered that night. She remembered the way he’d waited outside, leaning against a wrought-iron balcony, smirking like it was all a game. "You were the job," she said. "I wasn’t supposed to like you." "Curious how life works." His voice dropped, lower, velvet over steel. "I still need someone who knows the old routes. Who speaks Welsh and Mandarin and doesn’t blink at deadbolts or demonic runners." She looked past him, down Brick Lane, where neon signs flickered against the evening mist. London hummed—cars, voices, the distant thump of a bass line from a club she’d never step into sober. "You could’ve called." "I could’ve." He didn’t move. "But you hang up on unknown numbers. And I didn’t trust the line." She exhaled through her teeth. "So what’s the plan? We sneak out of the city like fugitives? Again?" "Only if you want to." His lips curved. Not a full smile. But it lingered. "Or I could tell you the truth." "Which is?" "That I missed your sarcasm. Your stubbornness. The way you bite your lip when you’re thinking too hard." He paused. "And that I haven’t forgotten the night you kissed me in the rain." Silence hung between them, thick and electric. Rory’s chest tightened. She hadn’t forgotten either. She’d replayed it a hundred times in the dark after Evan had shattered her ribs. The rain, the way her hands shook, the taste of him like dark honey and sin. She forced a laugh. "That’s sentimental for a half-demon." "Sentimentality is a luxury," he said softly. "But I’m running out of luxuries." A car horn blared below. A door slammed. Ptolemy wandered off, tail flicking in judgment. Rory rubbed her thumb over her scar, subconsciously. "If I help you," she said slowly, "you disappear after. No contact. No revisiting old... memories." "Done." "And you pay me in advance." His eyebrow arched. "Generous." "Fair." He reached into his jacket, pulled out a cream envelope, sealed with wax. No seal showed. No name. Just thickness. She didn’t take it. Not yet. "You trust me to open this without looking?" He almost laughed. "Rory. You never trusted anything without testing it first." She exhaled sharply, then plucked the envelope from his fingers. It was heavy. Real. Not a trick. As she turned back inside, Lucien followed without invitation, cane tapping once more on the threshold—a silent claim. She didn’t protest. The flat felt smaller with him in it. Denser. The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something wild, like ozone after a storm—settled in the air, clinging to the spines of books and the dust on the windowsill. She tossed the envelope onto the counter. It landed with a soft *thud*. "You have twelve hours to convince me," she said, crossing her arms again. "Otherwise—" "You’ll stab me in the thigh with a dumpling skewer, I know." She glared. He answered with a slow grin, the kind that promised trouble and warmth in equal measure. And for the first time in years, Aurora Carter let someone in.
created_at"2026-03-18T10:37:24.04Z" 3/18/2026, 10:37:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she asked quietly [quietly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.107
86.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"charm"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"lilt"
2"pulse"
3"flicked"
4"warmth"
5"charm"
6"weight"
7"unreadable"
8"velvet"
9"flickered"
10"silence"
11"electric"
12"shattered"
13"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords11
totalWords1464
ratio0.008
matches
0"not again"
1"Eva’s"
2"London"
3"help"
4"him"
5"Aurora"
6"knew"
7"me"
8"Rory"
9"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1021
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy3
Marseille2
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien6
Silence1
Evan1
Aurora2
Carter1
Rory7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Silence"
5"Evan"
6"Aurora"
7"Carter"
8"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like amusement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.683
wordCount1464
matches
0"not enough to let him in, but enough to break the pressure"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences173
matches
0"knew that voice"
1"chose that moment"
2"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean17.85
std14.36
cv0.805
sampleLengths
070
12
247
323
411
538
657
716
855
912
1012
115
1227
1321
145
1527
168
179
183
1942
2029
2118
2215
236
2428
2526
264
2729
2814
298
3014
3136
325
334
3427
359
3652
3711
3829
395
403
4116
429
436
4426
457
4630
4726
4812
4933
99.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences131
matches
0"was slicked"
1"were hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was using"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences173
ratio0.052
matches
0"Three more knocks hammered through the thin walls from Eva’s place above the curry house, steady and insistent, the kind of rhythm that didn’t beg—it demanded."
1"Her pulse spiked—not exactly from fear, though danger hummed beneath it."
2"One eye—amber, warm as brandy—locked onto hers."
3"She felt it—the old pull, the one that made her hands want to reach for him before her mind caught up."
4"The movement revealed a sliver of his wrist—smooth skin, no marks, not like hers."
5"The name hit like a punch—too intimate, too personal."
6"London hummed—cars, voices, the distant thump of a bass line from a club she’d never step into sober."
7"As she turned back inside, Lucien followed without invitation, cane tapping once more on the threshold—a silent claim."
8"The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something wild, like ozone after a storm—settled in the air, clinging to the spines of books and the dust on the windowsill."
94.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04642166344294004
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01160541586073501
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean8.46
std6.48
cv0.766
sampleLengths
019
125
226
32
418
515
65
79
823
911
103
114
1213
131
141
153
162
1711
1811
196
203
2130
224
233
2416
2522
2617
277
289
2912
308
314
325
3310
343
353
362
379
3821
395
4018
417
422
437
441
456
463
473
4815
4914
48.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3236994219653179
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences108
matches
0"His golden eyes locked onto"
1"She knew that voice."
2"Her pulse spiked—not exactly from"
3"It was memory."
4"She marched to the door,"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"He looked at her like"
7"His gaze dropped to her"
8"She felt it—the old pull,"
9"He stepped forward, not waiting"
10"His cane tip tapped the"
11"She blocked the entry with"
12"He exhaled through his nose,"
13"She flexed her left arm"
14"he said, more observation than"
15"His black eye darkened with"
16"He shifted his weight, cane"
17"He tilted his head slightly"
18"He rubbed against Lucien’s leg,"
19"He’d called her *Aurora* last"
ratio0.472
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences108
matches
0"The door rattled under three"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The flat was quiet except"
3"His golden eyes locked onto"
4"Rory exhaled through her nose."
5"Another set of knocks, sharper"
6"Rory’s breath caught."
7"She knew that voice."
8"Her pulse spiked—not exactly from"
9"It was memory."
10"The taste of absinthe in"
11"The way he’d left."
12"She marched to the door,"
13"Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate"
14"His platinum hair was slicked"
15"The other, black as ink,"
16"He looked at her like"
17"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
18"His gaze dropped to her"
19"She felt it—the old pull,"
ratio0.778
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"When they were hidden in"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three more knocks hammered through the thin walls from Eva’s place above the curry house, steady and insistent, the kind of rhythm that didn’t beg—it demanded."
1"When they were hidden in a backroom in Marseille, drinking absinthe and talking about realms and bloodlines and things that shouldn’t exist."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stepped, not waiting for an invite"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5300%