| 92.86% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.107 | |
| 86.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1475 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1475 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "lilt" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "charm" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "electric" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 173 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1464 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "not again" | | 1 | "Eva’s" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "help" | | 4 | "him" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "knew" | | 7 | "me" | | 8 | "Rory" | | 9 | "thud" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1021 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Marseille | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Lucien | 6 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Carter" | | 8 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like amusement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.683 | | wordCount | 1464 | | matches | | 0 | "not enough to let him in, but enough to break the pressure" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that voice" | | 1 | "chose that moment" | | 2 | "remembered that night" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 82 | | mean | 17.85 | | std | 14.36 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 99.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "were hidden" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 173 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Three more knocks hammered through the thin walls from Eva’s place above the curry house, steady and insistent, the kind of rhythm that didn’t beg—it demanded." | | 1 | "Her pulse spiked—not exactly from fear, though danger hummed beneath it." | | 2 | "One eye—amber, warm as brandy—locked onto hers." | | 3 | "She felt it—the old pull, the one that made her hands want to reach for him before her mind caught up." | | 4 | "The movement revealed a sliver of his wrist—smooth skin, no marks, not like hers." | | 5 | "The name hit like a punch—too intimate, too personal." | | 6 | "London hummed—cars, voices, the distant thump of a bass line from a club she’d never step into sober." | | 7 | "As she turned back inside, Lucien followed without invitation, cane tapping once more on the threshold—a silent claim." | | 8 | "The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something wild, like ozone after a storm—settled in the air, clinging to the spines of books and the dust on the windowsill." |
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| 94.38% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1034 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04642166344294004 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01160541586073501 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 173 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 173 | | mean | 8.46 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 48.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3236994219653179 | | totalSentences | 173 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "His golden eyes locked onto" | | 1 | "She knew that voice." | | 2 | "Her pulse spiked—not exactly from" | | 3 | "It was memory." | | 4 | "She marched to the door," | | 5 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 6 | "He looked at her like" | | 7 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 8 | "She felt it—the old pull," | | 9 | "He stepped forward, not waiting" | | 10 | "His cane tip tapped the" | | 11 | "She blocked the entry with" | | 12 | "He exhaled through his nose," | | 13 | "She flexed her left arm" | | 14 | "he said, more observation than" | | 15 | "His black eye darkened with" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, cane" | | 17 | "He tilted his head slightly" | | 18 | "He rubbed against Lucien’s leg," | | 19 | "He’d called her *Aurora* last" |
| | ratio | 0.472 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The door rattled under three" | | 1 | "Rory wiped her hands on" | | 2 | "The flat was quiet except" | | 3 | "His golden eyes locked onto" | | 4 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 5 | "Another set of knocks, sharper" | | 6 | "Rory’s breath caught." | | 7 | "She knew that voice." | | 8 | "Her pulse spiked—not exactly from" | | 9 | "It was memory." | | 10 | "The taste of absinthe in" | | 11 | "The way he’d left." | | 12 | "She marched to the door," | | 13 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculate" | | 14 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 15 | "The other, black as ink," | | 16 | "He looked at her like" | | 17 | "Rory crossed her arms, leaning" | | 18 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 19 | "She felt it—the old pull," |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "When they were hidden in" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Three more knocks hammered through the thin walls from Eva’s place above the curry house, steady and insistent, the kind of rhythm that didn’t beg—it demanded." | | 1 | "When they were hidden in a backroom in Marseille, drinking absinthe and talking about realms and bloodlines and things that shouldn’t exist." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, not waiting for an invite" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |