Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08DXBP7744168J6MHVW50J

Run Details

Duration:
25.2s
Cost:
$0.001796
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like bent fingers, their grey surfaces slick with something that wasn’t water. Rory kept her hand on the pendant beneath her jacket, feeling the faintest thrum against her palm. The silver chain burned cold where it touched her collarbone. She hadn’t asked to come here. But the pull had been irresistible—warm, insistent, like a thread running from her ribs to somewhere beyond the stones. It was past midnight when she left the flat above Silas’ bar. Eva had sent her a text—*Rory need to see you. It’s urgent*—but when Rory called back, the line went dead mid-ring. Dead air and Eva’s message deleted. The pendant had glowed then, deep crimson pulsing against her sternum. So she caught the last night bus to Richmond, then walked the empty park paths with her collar turned up against the damp October air. The path should have been familiar—Richmond Park at night, open grass and skeletal trees. But the standing stones weren’t part of the landscape in reality. No tourist photos showed them. No park wardens mentioned them. Eva had whispered about a place where the air tasted like copper, where time didn’t pass the way it should, when they were sixteen and drunk on cheap cider in a flat overlooking the Taff. *It’s somewhere in the park*, Eva had said, *but you’ll know when you’re there.* Rory knew now. The boundary wasn’t a door so much as a shift—a breath inward, a cold hand pressing between her shoulder blades. One step, and the quiet of London night gave way to something thick and breathing. The trees here didn’t sway with the wind; they shivered, every leaf trembling at once before falling still. The wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—pinks so vivid they hurt the eyes, purples that looked like bruises, yellows like rusted metal. Their perfume filled the air, cloying and wrong, like rotting fruit left too long in the sun. She unzipped her jacket enough to let the pendant breathe. The air around her torso warmed immediately, the gemstone’s pulse quickening to a slow, regular beat. *There*, the absence told her. A presence not quite there. A door not quite closed. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too soft, swallowed by the undergrowth. No answer came except the distant chime of a church bell—but not any church she knew. The hour was wrong. Or the place was. She stepped further in, conscious of how the ground beneath her boots no longer felt like earth. It had give, like walking on muscle. The standing stones loomed behind her, but when she turned to look, they seemed closer than they should be. Taller. Their surfaces pulsed with a faint iridescence, like oil on water. A laugh. High, childlike, coming from the direction she’d just left. Rory spun, jacket zipper rasping. The sound stopped. Silence pressed back at her, so thick it felt like breathing water. “Eva?” No use pretending this was normal. No use pretending she wasn’t alone. The pendant’s glow intensified, painting her fingers red in the dark. Something moved among the trees. Not walking. *Sliding.* Between trunks too wide, shadow pooled deeper than it should, shifting when nothing touched it. She held her breath. A voice—clear, almost in her ear—spoke a phrase in Welsh that made her skin crawl. The words weren’t English. They weren’t proper Welsh. They were made of syllables that bent the mouth trying to form them. *Ti a fi yn y glyn...* Not Welsh. Something older. Something that shouldn’t remember language at all. Her hands shook. She clenched them into fists, nails biting into palms. The pendant burned now, throbbing against her skin. She could feel it pulling her forward, toward the heart of the grove where the standing stones stood closest, where the air smelled like rust and wet wool. “Who’s there?” Her voice cracked. No answer. But the shadows between the stones rippled, like the world behind them breathed. She crept forward, boots sinking slightly with each step. The wildflowers here weren’t just blooming—they were *weeping.* Tiny droplets of clear fluid beaded at their petal edges, falling without wind to catch them. She reached down to touch one. Cold. Sticky. Smelled like spoiled milk. Her left wrist itched. The crescent scar there—a childhood accident with a broken beer bottle—stung as if freshly cut. She flexed her fingers. The skin beneath her fingers dimpled on its own, like unseen lips pressing against her veins from the inside. “Bloody hell.” She jerked her hand back. A twig snapped. Not underfoot. Behind. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She turned slowly. Nothing there. Just the standing stones and the pulsing wildflowers and the weight of the pendant dragging her forward. She took a step. Another laugh. Closer this time. Not human sound. *Almost* human. Like a child learning to mimic but never getting the mouth right. She broke into a run without meaning to, boots slipping on the unnatural ground. The pendant’s glow cast pulsing red light ahead, showing only trees and more trees and the standing stones always directly in front of her no matter how she angled her path. She wasn’t getting closer to any exit. Breath came in sharp gasps. Her scar ached as if the wound had reopened. She curled her fingers into her palm again, pressing hard, grounding herself. “Right,” she muttered. “Think. This is a Fae pocket. Time’s messed up here. Doesn’t mean anything unless I let it.” She forced herself to stop running. Stood still. Listened. Footsteps. Light. Almost like dancing. Coming from all sides. She squeezed her eyes shut. Counted her breaths. In for four. Hold for seven. Out for eight. When she opened them, the standing stones were closer. Much closer. A child stood between them. Tall as Rory’s waist. Thin. Pale. Hair long and dark, tangled with twigs. Eyes black as polished river stones. It wore a dress made of flower petals and old newspaper, bright colors peeling off in the damp air. It smiled. Not a nice smile. A smile that showed too many teeth. A smile that knew how long she’d been looking for this place. “Rory,” it said. Her name in its mouth sounded like a death sentence spoken backwards. The pendant burned white-hot against her chest. The child’s smile widened. Its fingers—too long, too jointed—twitched at its sides. Behind her, the undergrowth shifted. Something rose from the ground. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs bent like a broken marionette’s. She didn’t wait to see what it was. Rory turned and ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.857
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
90.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"footsteps"
8"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords28
totalWords1089
ratio0.026
matches
0"Rory need to see you. It’s urgent"
1"It’s somewhere in the park"
2"but you’ll know when you’re there."
3"There"
4"Sliding."
5"Ti a fi yn y glyn..."
6"weeping."
7"Almost"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1062
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Rory8
Richmond2
October1
Park1
Taff1
London1
Welsh3
English1
Tiny1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Welsh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"tasted like copper, where time didn’t pas"
1"looked like bruises, yellows like rusted"
2"felt like earth"
3"seemed closer than they should be"
4"felt like breathing water"
5"smelled like rust and wet wool"
6"sounded like a death sentence spoken backw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.67
std22.54
cv0.952
sampleLengths
071
175
284
33
491
541
634
755
82
929
1013
1111
1223
134
1436
156
1611
1748
185
1915
2045
2142
227
236
249
2519
264
2722
2845
297
3026
3120
329
335
344
3517
3611
375
3838
3925
403
4112
4219
4320
448
454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"were made"
93.05% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs187
matches
0"were *weeping"
1"weren’t just blooming"
2"wasn’t getting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences133
ratio0.09
matches
0"But the pull had been irresistible—warm, insistent, like a thread running from her ribs to somewhere beyond the stones."
1"Eva had sent her a text—*Rory need to see you."
2"It’s urgent*—but when Rory called back, the line went dead mid-ring."
3"The path should have been familiar—Richmond Park at night, open grass and skeletal trees."
4"The boundary wasn’t a door so much as a shift—a breath inward, a cold hand pressing between her shoulder blades."
5"The trees here didn’t sway with the wind; they shivered, every leaf trembling at once before falling still."
6"The wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—pinks so vivid they hurt the eyes, purples that looked like bruises, yellows like rusted metal."
7"No answer came except the distant chime of a church bell—but not any church she knew."
8"A voice—clear, almost in her ear—spoke a phrase in Welsh that made her skin crawl."
9"The wildflowers here weren’t just blooming—they were *weeping.* Tiny droplets of clear fluid beaded at their petal edges, falling without wind to catch them."
10"The crescent scar there—a childhood accident with a broken beer bottle—stung as if freshly cut."
11"Its fingers—too long, too jointed—twitched at its sides."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount97
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"irresistible—warm, insistent, like"
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.020618556701030927
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean8.19
std6.7
cv0.818
sampleLengths
019
117
210
36
419
512
610
711
86
911
1025
1114
1211
135
145
1535
1614
173
1820
1915
2018
2121
2217
2310
2416
255
265
275
2810
2916
304
314
3217
337
3419
351
3611
372
389
395
403
4112
427
436
4411
455
462
4716
484
4915
65.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners57
62.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just the standing stones and"
1"Almost like dancing."
ratio0.019
89.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences107
matches
0"She hadn’t asked to come"
1"It was past midnight when"
2"It’s urgent*—but when Rory called"
3"*It’s somewhere in the park*,"
4"Their perfume filled the air,"
5"She unzipped her jacket enough"
6"Her voice sounded too soft,"
7"She stepped further in, conscious"
8"It had give, like walking"
9"Their surfaces pulsed with a"
10"She held her breath."
11"They weren’t proper Welsh."
12"They were made of syllables"
13"Her hands shook."
14"She clenched them into fists,"
15"She could feel it pulling"
16"Her voice cracked"
17"She crept forward, boots sinking"
18"She reached down to touch"
19"Her left wrist itched."
ratio0.327
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences107
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory kept her hand on"
2"The silver chain burned cold"
3"She hadn’t asked to come"
4"It was past midnight when"
5"Eva had sent her a"
6"It’s urgent*—but when Rory called"
7"The pendant had glowed then,"
8"The path should have been"
9"Eva had whispered about a"
10"*It’s somewhere in the park*,"
11"Rory knew now."
12"The boundary wasn’t a door"
13"The trees here didn’t sway"
14"The wildflowers bloomed in impossible"
15"Their perfume filled the air,"
16"She unzipped her jacket enough"
17"The air around her torso"
18"*There*, the absence told her."
19"A presence not quite there."
ratio0.72
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones rose from the earth like bent fingers, their grey surfaces slick with something that wasn’t water."
1"The wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—pinks so vivid they hurt the eyes, purples that looked like bruises, yellows like rusted metal."
2"A voice—clear, almost in her ear—spoke a phrase in Welsh that made her skin crawl."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
79.3914%