Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08JMPEP5JGFV21KDDR1H10

Run Details

Duration:
12.2s
Cost:
$0.000815
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Before dawn, Rory crouched behind the last oak’s gnarled root, shoulders tense, breath shallow. The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone like a second heart, its warmth sharp enough to hurt. Around her, the grove exhaled. Trees breathed out silver mist that curled like smoke from a dying fire. Ahead, the circle of standing stones stood waist-high, veined with runes that glowed a faint, sickly green beneath the moon’s dying light. Eva gripped her shoulder. “It’s breathing. Rory, look.” The ground rose and fell in slow pulses, as if Earth itself were dreaming beneath them. A heartbeat the size of a city. Then Nyx stepped forward. The Shade didn’t walk—they flowed, a ripple through dark fabric that wasn’t quite solid. As they touched the first stone, the air split open like old fabric tearing. A thorny vine shot from the crack and wrapped around Nyx’s wrist. Nyx hissed and the vine recoiled, blackening to ash. “It knows you,” Isolde murmured from behind. Isolde’s silver hair floated even though there was no wind. She traced a finger through the mist and a path of frost bloomed in her wake, marking where to walk. Rory stood. The pendant flared red. She winced but didn’t look away. “Portal already opening?” Eva whispered. Nyx shook their head, now fully solid, purple eyes flickering. “This grove has been closed. It’s remembering. Opening is like waking someone too long asleep.” Isolde walked forward, bare feet making no sound on the dewless grass. “The door isn't meant for human feet. But some doors open for those who know how to knock.” Rory stepped between the stones. The shift was not a door but a deep inhale. The world stretched sideways, the trees tilting into spirals. The pendant burned so hot she almost cried out, but she clenched her teeth. The air tasted of copper and burnt honey. Below, shapes moved in the dark—the roots of the grove weren’t roots anymore. They were cables, pulsing with slow, golden light. The mist thickened into a living fog that clung to skin like silk. Eva grabbed her arm. “We’re inside the tree?” Nyx walked ahead, now a silhouette carved from smoke. “Deeper. It’s not a tree. It’s a bridge.” The ground became translucent. Beneath Rory’s boots, she saw vast chambers pulsing with light, like organs seen through flesh. A tidal rhythm shook the air—boom, boom—like a heart pumping sap through miles of living wood. “Oh,” Isolde said softly. “It’s a gatekeeper now.” The veins of light thickened near the center of the grove. Rory followed them inward, steps steady despite the vertigo. The air warmed. The pendant cooled. A scent like cinnamon and wet stone filled her nose. Then she saw it. A massive, smooth stone basin, black as volcanic glass, filled with liquid silver. It didn’t ripple. It vibrated, tuned like a plucked string. The silver rose and fell in slow, deliberate breaths. And beside it, a figure. Tall. Wearing robes of woven shadow. Face hidden in darkness. Rory froze. The pendant went cold. Nyx’s voice turned to frost. “That’s not possible.” The figure lifted a hand. A single perfect branch unfurled from their palm—ivy dripping dark fruit. “You’ve come early,” the figure said. Not a voice, but a vibration through bone. “The key is not ready.” Isolde stepped forward, hands trembling barely. “Belphegor.” Rory’s blood turned to ice. The Prince of Gluttony smiled. His teeth glowed like opals. “But you brought the child who bears the scar of memory,” he said, eyes locking onto Rory’s wrist. “The crescent. I remember.” Rory looked down. The pendant was black now. No glow. No warmth. Belphegor plucked a fruit from the branch. It dripped liquid shadow. He held it out. Eva stepped back. “Eat,” he said. “The path is long.” The silver basin pulsed once, twice— And the world lurched.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.118
92.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount643
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount643
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"pumping"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"lurched"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"traced"
3"silk"
4"pumping"
5"vibrated"
6"perfect"
7"lurched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount547
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Heartstone1
Earth1
Nyx6
Shade1
Isolde5
Prince1
Gluttony1
Eva4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Gluttony"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.677
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords3.13
wordCount639
matches
0"not a door but a deep inhale"
1"Not a voice, but a vibration through bone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean17.75
std17.45
cv0.983
sampleLengths
071
18
223
34
449
57
630
712
85
925
1030
115
1275
138
1417
1535
168
1736
184
1932
205
2110
226
238
2416
2519
267
275
2810
2922
3012
3115
323
337
346
354
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs108
matches
0"were dreaming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"The Shade didn’t walk—they flowed, a ripple through dark fabric that wasn’t quite solid."
1"Below, shapes moved in the dark—the roots of the grove weren’t roots anymore."
2"A tidal rhythm shook the air—boom, boom—like a heart pumping sap through miles of living wood."
3"A single perfect branch unfurled from their palm—ivy dripping dark fruit."
4"The silver basin pulsed once, twice—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount552
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03260869565217391
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007246376811594203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean7.61
std4.84
cv0.636
sampleLengths
014
117
25
313
422
54
64
716
87
94
1014
1114
1212
139
147
1510
1620
172
184
196
205
2110
2215
2312
2418
255
2610
279
2814
298
3013
318
3213
334
344
359
368
374
3815
3916
404
414
4211
439
443
453
4610
474
4813
493
61.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then Nyx stepped forward."
1"Then she saw it."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences66
matches
0"She traced a finger through"
1"She winced but didn’t look"
2"They were cables, pulsing with"
3"It didn’t ripple."
4"It vibrated, tuned like a"
5"His teeth glowed like opals."
6"he said, eyes locking onto"
7"It dripped liquid shadow."
8"He held it out."
ratio0.136
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences66
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"Trees breathed out silver mist"
2"Eva gripped her shoulder."
3"The ground rose and fell"
4"A heartbeat the size of"
5"The Shade didn’t walk—they flowed,"
6"A thorny vine shot from"
7"Nyx hissed and the vine"
8"Isolde murmured from behind"
9"Isolde’s silver hair floated even"
10"She traced a finger through"
11"The pendant flared red."
12"She winced but didn’t look"
13"Nyx shook their head, now"
14"Isolde walked forward, bare feet"
15"Rory stepped between the stones."
16"The shift was not a"
17"The world stretched sideways, the"
18"The pendant burned so hot"
19"The air tasted of copper"
ratio0.818
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Before dawn, Rory crouched behind"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ahead, the circle of standing stones stood waist-high, veined with runes that glowed a faint, sickly green beneath the moon’s dying light."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, eyes locking onto Rory’s wrist"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.235
80.8427%