| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 92.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 643 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 643 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "pumping" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 639 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 547 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Prince | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Gluttony" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.677 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 3.13 | | wordCount | 639 | | matches | | 0 | "not a door but a deep inhale" | | 1 | "Not a voice, but a vibration through bone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 17.75 | | std | 17.45 | | cv | 0.983 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 75 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade didn’t walk—they flowed, a ripple through dark fabric that wasn’t quite solid." | | 1 | "Below, shapes moved in the dark—the roots of the grove weren’t roots anymore." | | 2 | "A tidal rhythm shook the air—boom, boom—like a heart pumping sap through miles of living wood." | | 3 | "A single perfect branch unfurled from their palm—ivy dripping dark fruit." | | 4 | "The silver basin pulsed once, twice—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 552 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.03260869565217391 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007246376811594203 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 7.61 | | std | 4.84 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 61.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4166666666666667 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Nyx stepped forward." | | 1 | "Then she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She traced a finger through" | | 1 | "She winced but didn’t look" | | 2 | "They were cables, pulsing with" | | 3 | "It didn’t ripple." | | 4 | "It vibrated, tuned like a" | | 5 | "His teeth glowed like opals." | | 6 | "he said, eyes locking onto" | | 7 | "It dripped liquid shadow." | | 8 | "He held it out." |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "Trees breathed out silver mist" | | 2 | "Eva gripped her shoulder." | | 3 | "The ground rose and fell" | | 4 | "A heartbeat the size of" | | 5 | "The Shade didn’t walk—they flowed," | | 6 | "A thorny vine shot from" | | 7 | "Nyx hissed and the vine" | | 8 | "Isolde murmured from behind" | | 9 | "Isolde’s silver hair floated even" | | 10 | "She traced a finger through" | | 11 | "The pendant flared red." | | 12 | "She winced but didn’t look" | | 13 | "Nyx shook their head, now" | | 14 | "Isolde walked forward, bare feet" | | 15 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 16 | "The shift was not a" | | 17 | "The world stretched sideways, the" | | 18 | "The pendant burned so hot" | | 19 | "The air tasted of copper" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Before dawn, Rory crouched behind" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the circle of standing stones stood waist-high, veined with runes that glowed a faint, sickly green beneath the moon’s dying light." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, eyes locking onto Rory’s wrist" |
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| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |