| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.463 | | leniency | 0.927 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |
| 80.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "crystallized" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1528 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Walk, return, remember." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Eva | 7 | | Isolde | 15 | | Varga | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.663 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when Rory blinked" | | 1 | "as if creating a doorway" | | 2 | "not quite touching" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 5.236 | | wordCount | 1528 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a place, but as a living thing" | | 1 | "not steeply, but inevitably, like a breath held" | | 2 | "Not to a door, but to a feeling" | | 3 | "not wind, not animal, but something older" | | 4 | "not animal, but something older" | | 5 | "not flesh, but consciousness" | | 6 | "not into shadow, but into the air itself, its hunger dissolving like salt in wate" | | 7 | "not from the grove, but from somewhere else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 20.37 | | std | 15.19 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 240 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "“This is it,” Rory said, but her voice didn’t sound like her own—too thin, too bright, as though the air had turned glass." | | 1 | "Not leaves swaying, not wind-tossed grass—something deeper, something alive." | | 2 | "The air carried weight—sweet and thick, like warmed honey laced with iron." | | 3 | "The stone in her pocket—warm to the touch, though not from her body—pulsed steadily." | | 4 | "The flowers grew taller, their petals now translucent, preserving inside them shapes that weren’t grains of pollen or seeds, but tiny frozen moments—hands clasped, lips parted in song, a child’s laugh crystallized mid-air." | | 5 | "The trees grew taller, their tops lost in a sky that wasn’t quite dark, not quite light—a perpetual dusk that filtered through emerald leaves dusted with gold." | | 6 | "Yet each footprint would have been visible—clear indentations in the soft earth, rimmed with moisture—if she had walked normally." | | 7 | "Her voice was soft, melodic, but threaded with something deeper—like the hum of a plucked harp string." | | 8 | "“No.” Isolde’s eyes opened—pale lavender, endless." | | 9 | "Ice shot up her arm, but not pain—clarity." | | 10 | "A rustle passed through the oaks—not wind, not animal, but something older." | | 11 | "A sound emerged from the spiral path’s edge—a low, wet clicking, like bone on bone." | | 12 | "It was a figure at first—tall, gaunt, draped in robes that didn’t flutter or ripple, as if the wind refused to touch them." | | 13 | "Its face was hidden beneath a hood of living shadow, but beneath its voice was a chorus of whispers—dozens of muted cries, pleading, weeping, laughing." | | 14 | "Silas drew a knife from his boot—a plain, practical thing, but it gleamed with sudden firelight as if lit from within." | | 15 | "Rory felt it—the hunger radiating from the thing, a void that wanted to devour everything." | | 16 | "The thing recoiled with a shriek that wasn’t sound—it was felt inside the skull, a pressure that bent thought." | | 17 | "The figure shrieked again—a sound like a hundred mouths screaming at once—and then it dissolved, not into shadow, but into the air itself, its hunger dissolving like salt in water." | | 18 | "The sky rebalanced—less dusk, more twilight." | | 19 | "A wind—not from the grove, but from somewhere else—began to rise." | | 20 | "The world reordered itself: Richmond Park reappeared around them, the grove vanishing as if it had never been—except Rory could still see the glowing runes stamped on the inside of her eyelids." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1289 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "gnarled bark-black surfaces" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03413498836307215 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010861132660977503 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 9.2 | | std | 6.69 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 40.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3132530120481928 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Only Isolde seemed unharmed." | | 1 | "Somewhere beyond the Veil, something" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "He was right." | | 1 | "It settled in Rory’s lungs" | | 2 | "Her pulse slowed." | | 3 | "Her thoughts turned viscous, like" | | 4 | "She shook her head, blinked" | | 5 | "She pulled it out." | | 6 | "Their shadow curled like smoke" | | 7 | "She stepped through the standing" | | 8 | "It was a spiral." | | 9 | "Their whispers threaded into her" | | 10 | "She followed the pull of" | | 11 | "They rounded a bend in" | | 12 | "She wore a dress of" | | 13 | "She didn’t look up as" | | 14 | "Her voice was soft, melodic," | | 15 | "She looked at Rory directly" | | 16 | "She could see the threads" | | 17 | "It was a figure at" | | 18 | "Its face was hidden beneath" | | 19 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 44.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 1 | "The first one stood shoulder-high" | | 2 | "Eva reached out, then hesitated." | | 3 | "Rory said, but her voice" | | 4 | "Flowers bloomed in spirals along" | | 5 | "A single bluebell chimed softly," | | 6 | "Eva exhaled sharply." | | 7 | "Silas, his dark eyes wide," | | 8 | "He was right." | | 9 | "The air carried weight—sweet and" | | 10 | "It settled in Rory’s lungs" | | 11 | "Her pulse slowed." | | 12 | "Her thoughts turned viscous, like" | | 13 | "She shook her head, blinked" | | 14 | "The stone in her pocket—warm" | | 15 | "She pulled it out." | | 16 | "The Heartstone, warm as a" | | 17 | "Nyx whispered, their violet-glowing form" | | 18 | "Their shadow curled like smoke" | | 19 | "Rory didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 42.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones emerged from the mist without warning, their gnarled bark-black surfaces etched with spirals that seemed to shift when Rory blinked." | | 1 | "The first one stood shoulder-high and curved slightly inward, as if creating a doorway." | | 2 | "The path uncoiled inward, winding past trees that hummed when she brushed their bark." | | 3 | "The trees grew taller, their tops lost in a sky that wasn’t quite dark, not quite light—a perpetual dusk that filtered through emerald leaves dusted with gold." | | 4 | "Silas drew a knife from his boot—a plain, practical thing, but it gleamed with sudden firelight as if lit from within." | | 5 | "Rory felt it—the hunger radiating from the thing, a void that wanted to devour everything." | | 6 | "The trees groaned, their runes flaring white-hot for a heartbeat before fading back to silver." | | 7 | "The world reordered itself: Richmond Park reappeared around them, the grove vanishing as if it had never been—except Rory could still see the glowing runes stam…" |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, but her voice didn’t sound like her own—too thin, too bright, as though the air had turned glass" | | 1 | "Isolde’s eyes opened, endless" |
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| 52.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.415 | | leniency | 0.829 | | rawRatio | 0.235 | | effectiveRatio | 0.195 | |