Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08MDWJ5R6ZHQYD7M4N118Y

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.001699
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed like sentinels dipped in silver, their ancient surfaces humming with a quiet vibration that made Rory’s teeth ache. She clenched the Heartstone in her fist, the pendant’s crimson pulse flickering through her fingers like a slow, reluctant heartbeat. Nyx stepped forward first, their shadowed form rippling as they crossed an invisible threshold. The air thickened around them, clinging like damp silk to Rory’s skin. "You feel that?" Rory’s voice came out harsher than she intended. The standing stones were tall enough to brush the underside of her chin, their angular surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to writhe when she blinked. Isolde moved beside her, silver hair catching a breeze that didn’t exist—or maybe it did. The Seer’s bare feet left no prints on the loamy soil, but the wildflowers at her hem quivered as if brushed by unseen hands. "The boundary is not a line," Isolde murmured, tracing a finger along the stone. A shimmer raced beneath her touch, a distortion that warped light into colors Rory’s eyes couldn’t name. "It’s a breath. A holding of the world between inhale and exhale." Rory exhaled sharply. "Can we get on with it before my head splits open?" Nyx’s laugh sounded like dry leaves skittering across pavement. "She’s right, though. You feel the pressure? Like the air’s thicker? That’s the Veil thinning. The Fae aren’t far." Rory squinted into the grove’s depths. The trees were wrong—not oaks, not elms, not any species she knew. Their bark shimmered pearlescent in the dim light, ridged like folded silk, and their leaves, if they could be called leaves, were long and segmented, each one darting in place like agitated silverfish. Among them, deeper into the glade, flowers pulsed with faint bioluminescence—soft blues and greens, winking on and off in slow, synchronous waves. "This place is alive," Rory said, stepping forward. Isolde followed without a word. Nyx dissolved into smoke for a moment before solidifying beside them, their violet eyes dim in the muted light of this place. The ground beneath Rory’s boots felt springy, resilient, as if she walked on a living mattress. Each footprint she made disappeared almost instantly, the soil knitting itself back together. She crouched, brushing her fingers over the earth. Tiny rootlets curled around her fingertips, testing her. "Doesn’t seem to like strangers," Nyx observed. Isolde knelt beside Rory, silver hair pooling around her knees. She reached out. Almost instantly, a flower stem bent toward her, offering a bell-shaped bloom that opened like a tiny mouth. Isolde whispered something—words Rory couldn’t catch—and the flower’s luminescence shifted to a soft gold. Rory’s breath hitched. "That’s new." "Magic responds to intention here," Isolde said. "Not all of it is dangerous. Some is merely... polite." Nyx shifted, their form thickening at the edges. "Or hungry." A rustle came from the undergrowth. Not leaves parting. Not branches groaning. Something deeper, more organic—a wet clicking, like mandibles adjusting. Rory’s skin prickled. She stood slowly, eyes scanning the luminous undergrowth. The sound stopped. Silence fell, thick and unnatural. Even the distant pulse of flowers faded into a dull murmur. Then—a melody. High, fluting, impossible. It rose from the heart of the grove, wrapping around Rory’s ribs like a living thing. She turned, drawn toward the sound. It wasn’t coming from any instrument she knew. It was the sound of wind through hollow reeds mixed with the cry of a distant bird—but alien, wrong, familiar in a way that made her stomach twist. Isolde’s face was unreadable, eyes half-lidded. "The song of the Veil’s thinning. Always sounds like that when a rift is near." Nyx tilted their head. "Or like a trap." Rory didn’t answer. She walked toward the sound, boots silent on the springy moss. The trees leaned inward slightly, as if bowing to something hidden in their center. A clearing opened before them. Not a sudden gap, but a gradual unfolding—a space where the bioluminescent canopy parted like curtains. In its center stood a pool of water so still it looked like a slice of night sky frozen in time. The surface reflected nothing. Not the trees. Not the sky. Not even Rory’s face. She knelt at the pool’s edge. The water was warm. Too warm for a pond. It pulsed. Rory dipped her fingers in. The surface didn’t ripple. It absorbed her touch, pulling her skin downward as if into silk. Then she saw it. Beneath the surface, shapes moved. Not fish. Not reflections. Fragments. Shards of memory. A hand grasping another. A sword flashing in moonlight. A crown of antlers. A city burning in the distance. Her breath stopped. Isolde stepped beside her, silver hair falling over one shoulder. "The Eternal Pool. It shows not what was, but what *could* be." Rory swallowed. "That’s not possible." Nyx crouched on Rory’s other side, their shadow stretching long and distorted across the moss. "Oh, it’s possible. Just not real. Not yet." Rory yanked her hand back. The water settled, opaque again, hiding the visions. "Then why show us that?" Isolde’s lips curled slightly. Not a smile. A recognition. "Because you asked about rifts. And because your pendant beats faster here." Rory touched her chest. The Heartstone pulsed in rhythm with the pool. Nyx’s voice dropped, urgent now. "The pendant reacts to Hel portals. And this grove sits on a fault where three realms bleed—Earth, Fae, Hel." A chill ran through Rory’s shoulders. She looked up at the canopy. The bioluminescence had dimmed. The clicking started again—closer. From multiple directions. Isolde closed her eyes briefly. When she opened them, her pupils had dilated, swallowing the lavender irises. "They’re coming." Rory stood, scanning the trees. "Who’s coming?" Nyx dissolved into smoke. "Not who. *What*." The first creature emerged from the undergrowth like a trick of the light—a thing made of bark and thorn and whispering vines. Its body was a shifting mass of writhing branches, but its face—a cluster of wooden nodules arranged in a rough oval—turned toward them with a sound like splintering wood. More followed. Dozens. The grove teemed with them now, creeping forward on root-feet, their limbs clicking and chittering. Rory’s hand went to the Fae blade at her belt. The cold of the moonsilver seeped through her palm. Isolde didn’t move. She simply raised a hand, and the nearest creature hesitated. "You’re trespassers in sacred time," it rasped, voice like cracking bark. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. "We didn’t mean to—" The lead creature cut her off. "The pool has spoken. You’ve seen the breaking. You’ve been seen." Nyx reformed beside Rory, solid and tense. "Seen by whom?" Isolde’s gaze flicked to the pool. The water rippled again—not with movement below, but with tension, like the surface of a shaken bowl. The creatures drew closer. Their thorned fingers twitched. Rory tightened her grip on the blade. "Stand back." The creatures didn’t retreat. They *laughed*, a sound like dry husks rattling in wind. Then, without warning, the world jerked. Time lurched sideways. One moment Rory stood in the grove. The next, the clearing had expanded impossibly, the trees stretching taller, the pool widening into a lake that reflected not a night sky, but a storm-wracked sea under a crimson moon. Isolde gasped. "We’ve overstayed." Nyx cursed. "The compulsion of this place—it lures, then entraps." Rory’s stomach lurched. The creatures were gone. In their place stood a figure draped in shifting darkness, tall and terrible, with eyes like twin voids. The air tasted of iron and burnt sugar. The figure spoke, and its voice was the chorus of all the rustling leaves in the grove. "You have glimpsed what must not be glimpsed. But you have also been seen." Rory’s fingers trembled. She raised the blade—not at the figure, but at the pool. The water hissed. Steam rose in writhing tendrils. The Heartstone in her chest burned like fire.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count3
3
word"silk"
count3
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count3
10
word"scanning"
count2
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count2
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"lurched"
count2
19
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"pulse"
3"silk"
4"quivered"
5"tracing"
6"raced"
7"depths"
8"shimmered"
9"pulsed"
10"scanning"
11"silence"
12"familiar"
13"stomach"
14"unreadable"
15"chill"
16"flicked"
17"tension"
18"lurched"
19"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1309
ratio0.002
matches
0"could"
1"What"
2"laughed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
17.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1096
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory29
Heartstone3
Seer1
Isolde13
Nyx11
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Seer"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.177
windowScore0.333
5.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"spirals that seemed to writhe when she blinked"
1"sounded like dry leaves skittering across"
2"as if bowing to something hidden in their center"
3"looked like a slice of night sky frozen i"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.82
wordCount1309
matches
0"Not a sudden gap, but a gradual unfolding"
1"not what was, but what *could* be"
2"not with movement below, but with tension, like the surface of a shaken bowl"
3"not a night sky, but a storm-wracked sea under a crimson moon"
4"not at the figure, but at the pool"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean20.78
std15.35
cv0.739
sampleLengths
042
126
237
339
443
514
628
773
88
927
1045
117
1245
135
1417
1510
1632
173
1816
1963
2021
218
2228
2356
2417
2521
264
2732
283
2922
305
3123
3218
3321
3412
3524
3623
3719
387
397
4051
4118
4219
4313
4411
4510
4617
4710
4823
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"wasn’t coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences156
ratio0.083
matches
0"Isolde moved beside her, silver hair catching a breeze that didn’t exist—or maybe it did."
1"The trees were wrong—not oaks, not elms, not any species she knew."
2"Among them, deeper into the glade, flowers pulsed with faint bioluminescence—soft blues and greens, winking on and off in slow, synchronous waves."
3"Isolde whispered something—words Rory couldn’t catch—and the flower’s luminescence shifted to a soft gold."
4"Something deeper, more organic—a wet clicking, like mandibles adjusting."
5"Then—a melody."
6"It was the sound of wind through hollow reeds mixed with the cry of a distant bird—but alien, wrong, familiar in a way that made her stomach twist."
7"Not a sudden gap, but a gradual unfolding—a space where the bioluminescent canopy parted like curtains."
8"The clicking started again—closer."
9"The first creature emerged from the undergrowth like a trick of the light—a thing made of bark and thorn and whispering vines."
10"Its body was a shifting mass of writhing branches, but its face—a cluster of wooden nodules arranged in a rough oval—turned toward them with a sound like splintering wood."
11"The water rippled again—not with movement below, but with tension, like the surface of a shaken bowl."
12"She raised the blade—not at the figure, but at the pool."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.034080717488789235
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008071748878923767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean8.39
std6.61
cv0.788
sampleLengths
022
120
214
312
411
526
615
724
814
917
1012
113
1211
139
1419
156
1612
1733
1822
198
205
2122
2216
2313
248
258
267
2710
283
2918
3014
313
322
337
3410
358
362
376
383
393
409
413
428
433
445
4511
462
473
4816
496
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2948717948717949
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences119
matches
0"Almost instantly, a flower stem"
1"Even the distant pulse of"
2"Too warm for a pond."
3"Then she saw it."
4"Then, without warning, the world"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences119
matches
0"She clenched the Heartstone in"
1"Their bark shimmered pearlescent in"
2"She crouched, brushing her fingers"
3"She reached out."
4"She stood slowly, eyes scanning"
5"It rose from the heart"
6"She turned, drawn toward the"
7"It wasn’t coming from any"
8"It was the sound of"
9"She walked toward the sound,"
10"She knelt at the pool’s"
11"It absorbed her touch, pulling"
12"Her breath stopped."
13"She looked up at the"
14"Its body was a shifting"
15"She simply raised a hand,"
16"it rasped, voice like cracking"
17"Their thorned fingers twitched."
18"They *laughed*, a sound like"
19"She raised the blade—not at"
ratio0.168
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences119
matches
0"The standing stones loomed like"
1"She clenched the Heartstone in"
2"Nyx stepped forward first, their"
3"The air thickened around them,"
4"Rory’s voice came out harsher"
5"The standing stones were tall"
6"Isolde moved beside her, silver"
7"The Seer’s bare feet left"
8"Isolde murmured, tracing a finger"
9"A shimmer raced beneath her"
10"Rory exhaled sharply."
11"Nyx’s laugh sounded like dry"
12"Rory squinted into the grove’s"
13"The trees were wrong—not oaks,"
14"Their bark shimmered pearlescent in"
15"Rory said, stepping forward"
16"Isolde followed without a word."
17"Nyx dissolved into smoke for"
18"The ground beneath Rory’s boots"
19"Each footprint she made disappeared"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The standing stones loomed like sentinels dipped in silver, their ancient surfaces humming with a quiet vibration that made Rory’s teeth ache."
1"The standing stones were tall enough to brush the underside of her chin, their angular surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to writhe when she blinked."
2"The Seer’s bare feet left no prints on the loamy soil, but the wildflowers at her hem quivered as if brushed by unseen hands."
3"The ground beneath Rory’s boots felt springy, resilient, as if she walked on a living mattress."
4"Almost instantly, a flower stem bent toward her, offering a bell-shaped bloom that opened like a tiny mouth."
5"It was the sound of wind through hollow reeds mixed with the cry of a distant bird—but alien, wrong, familiar in a way that made her stomach twist."
6"It absorbed her touch, pulling her skin downward as if into silk."
7"The grove teemed with them now, creeping forward on root-feet, their limbs clicking and chittering."
8"The next, the clearing had expanded impossibly, the trees stretching taller, the pool widening into a lake that reflected not a night sky, but a storm-wracked s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
72.6975%