Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08R3GK8YGCFD6TFJD0GZHP

Run Details

Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.001358
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low thrum of conversation and the clink of glasses behind the bar. Rory pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and pine cleaner wrapping around her like an old jacket. The green neon sign above the entrance flickered, casting jagged shadows on the floor. She didn’t drink much these days—not since Evan—but sometimes the weight of the hours between shifts pressed too hard. She scanned the room, eyes lingering on the familiar faces: the old guy in the corner with his newspaper, the couple whispering over pints, the bartender wiping down glasses with slow, methodical strokes. Silas wasn’t behind the counter. She should’ve known he wouldn’t be on duty this early. Rory slid onto a stool near the end of the bar, keeping her back to the wall. The bartender, a young guy with a sleeve of tattoos, nodded at her. “Evening. What’ll it be?” “Scotch. Neat.” He poured without another word. She took the glass, the amber liquid catching the dim light as she raised it. Not a toast. Just a quiet acknowledgment of the time it had been. Five years since she’d seen him. Five years since she’d crawled out of Cardiff with nothing but a duffel bag and a single number scribbled on a napkin. Silas’ number. The drink burned going down, sharp and welcome. Then the stool beside her shifted. A familiar weight settled, the slight creak of wood under someone tall. The air between them thickened before either spoke. She didn’t look. Couldn’t. Not yet. “Looking good, Rory.” She exhaled through her nose. That voice. Deeper now, rougher at the edges. Time had carved new lines into it. She set the glass down and turned. Silas. His auburn hair was more grey than she remembered, the streaks woven through like silver threads. The hazel eyes still sharp, though, still seeing too much. The limp was more pronounced too, a faint drag in his step when he walked. He wore a black T-shirt under a leather vest, sleeves rolled to the elbows, a silver signet glinting on his right hand. She let her gaze flick over him, slow, deliberate. “You too, Si.” A half-smile played on his lips. “Bullshit.” She laughed despite herself. “Okay, maybe not. But I meant it.” He leaned back, one arm resting on the bar. “You always were a terrible liar.” “And you always were an ass.” Silas chuckled, low and warm. The sound wrapped around her like a memory. “Still are. Some things don’t change.” She studied his hands—knuckles slightly crooked from old fights, nails trimmed short. No wedding ring. Hadn’t been one last she heard, but that was years ago. He’d retired from MI6 by then. Or so the whispers went. “You still run this place?” she asked. He nodded toward the door. “The Nest’s been my office, my home, my goddamn conscience for a while now.” He tilted his head. “You’re delivery for the Golden Empress these days, aren’t you?” She stiffened. “Eva talk?” “She came in last week. Said you’re doing well.” He paused. “Picking up routes, not clients.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “I don’t need her talking about me.” “She’s your friend. Worried.” “Worried?” Rory scoffed. “Since when do you care about worry?” Silas exhaled through his nose. “Since you left Cardiff without a word.” The silence between them settled like dust. She could feel the old wound reopen, the one that had festered every time someone in their circle mentioned her name. She took a slow sip. “You know why I left.” “I know what you told Eva. I don’t know what really happened.” Her jaw clenched. “You wouldn’t have believed me anyway.” “Try me.” She set the glass down hard enough to slosh liquid over the rim. The bartender shot her a look, but she ignored him. “Evan was—” “Your boyfriend.” “—a piece of shit who thought my body was his ledger.” Silas went very still. His eyes darkened, not with anger, but something colder. A quiet fury that never needed to shout. She continued, voice low. “I kept records. Dates. Times. Bruises. Nothing you could prove in court, but enough to know what he was. I got tired of being a walking cautionary tale for his next victim.” “You didn’t call the police?” “And say what? He never hit me in front of witnesses. Never left marks where anyone could see.” She rubbed her left wrist, the faint scar still there, pale against her skin. “I left when he wasn’t home. Took cash from his drawer. Left a note. Went to Eva.” Silas stared at the scar. His voice was quiet when he spoke. “He ever come after you?” “Once. In London. Cornered me outside the flat. I kneed him in the groin. Walked away while he curled up.” She shrugged. “Last I heard, he married some poor girl from his gym.” Silas exhaled slowly. “Jesus, Rory.” “Don’t. Don’t give me that look.” “What look?” “The one that says I should’ve known. Should’ve saved you.” She leaned in. “I didn’t need saving. I needed a way out. And you were never good at those.” He flinched the tiniest bit. The words landed like blows, not because they were cruel, but because they were true. He’d taught her how to pick a lock when she was twelve. How to hotwire a car when she was sixteen. How to disappear when she was eighteen. But when she’d finally needed to vanish for real, she’d done it alone. “I taught you too many ways to run,” he said softly. “Maybe that’s my fault.” She looked away. The neon sign buzzed, flickered. A customer laughed too loud in the corner. “Yeah. Maybe.” Silas pulled a set of keys from his pocket. “Got a minute? I want to show you something.” She eyed him. “It’s not a trap?” “When have I ever set a trap you didn’t walk into willingly?” She almost laughed. Almost. “You’re worse than a predator.” “Come on, Rory.” She followed. He led her past the bar, past the old men hunched over pints, past the couple still whispering over spilled drinks. He paused at the bookshelf behind the corner booth—always the third from the left, the one with the chipped spine. Pressed a knuckle into a hidden seam. The shelf swung inward. A rush of stale air and low light greeted them. Rory stepped inside. The hidden room was small, lined with file cabinets and a single desk. A single lamp cast long shadows. On the wall, a map of Europe with red pins marking obscure locations. Silas shut the door. “You ever wonder why I really opened a bar?” She looked around. “I assumed you got tired of the spy game.” He smiled, sad and knowing. “I did. But I didn’t do it by accident.” He gestured to the map. “Every pin is a safe house. A contact. A route out. Runaways, defectors, ghosts—I helped them vanish. Still do, when I can.” Rory’s throat tightened. She knew he’d been MI6. Knew he’d seen things. But this wasn’t just nostalgia. This was living proof of the world he’d built after Prague. “So you’re a ghostmaker now,” she said. “Someone’s got to be.” He walked to the desk, pulled out a file, tossed it on top. “Eva told me about your job. Delivery gig.” “Yeah. And?” “Ever make deliveries after midnight?” She stilled. “Sometimes. Why?” He tapped the file. “There’s a night route that starts near King’s Cross. Late deliveries. Unmarked packages. No questions asked.” Her stomach twisted. “Si—” “I’m not asking you to go back to that life.” He stepped closer. “I’m asking you if you want to.” She stared at the file. The paper was pristine, untouched. But she could see the weight in it—the unwritten rules, the silence expected. “You want me to be your courier?” she asked. “No. I want you to be you. The Rory who didn’t just survive—she adapted.” He nodded toward the file. “Read it. Think about it.” She didn’t touch it. “Why now?” she asked. “Because you’re here.” He met her gaze. “Because I’ve been watching. Because you’re the only one who ever kept up when I taught you lasagna.” She almost smiled. Silas opened the door. The music and noise rushed back in. “No pressure. Just… think about it.” She stood there in the doorway, bathed in the green neon glow. “Si,” she said. He paused. “I’m sorry I left without telling you.” He didn’t answer. Just nodded once, then stepped back into the light. Rory stayed a moment longer, breathing in the scent of old wood and secrets. Then she closed the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.029
79.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"methodical"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"jaw clenched"
count1
9
word"predator"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"familiar"
4"methodical"
5"glinting"
6"silence"
7"could feel"
8"jaw clenched"
9"predator"
10"stomach"
11"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences124
matches
0"t with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1447
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount933
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Rory7
Silas10
Europe1
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Europe"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.964
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.691
wordCount1447
matches
0"not with anger, but something colder"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean17.02
std15.98
cv0.938
sampleLengths
071
148
234
32
463
58
66
726
83
927
101
1163
1212
137
1411
1515
166
1719
1837
197
2033
214
2216
2313
244
2510
2612
2738
2812
299
302
3125
322
3311
3421
3536
365
3749
3817
3933
405
416
422
4329
4461
4515
4616
472
4818
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences178
ratio0.022
matches
0"She didn’t drink much these days—not since Evan—but sometimes the weight of the hours between shifts pressed too hard."
1"She studied his hands—knuckles slightly crooked from old fights, nails trimmed short."
2"He paused at the bookshelf behind the corner booth—always the third from the left, the one with the chipped spine."
3"But she could see the weight in it—the unwritten rules, the silence expected."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount588
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03231292517006803
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006802721088435374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean8.13
std6.11
cv0.751
sampleLengths
018
120
214
319
433
55
610
717
813
94
102
115
1215
133
1410
156
1622
172
188
196
2012
218
223
231
242
253
265
272
286
297
307
311
3216
3310
3415
3522
369
373
386
391
404
417
429
436
446
455
468
476
4812
493
54.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3539325842696629
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just a quiet acknowledgment of"
1"Then the stool beside her"
2"Just nodded once, then stepped"
3"Then she closed the door."
ratio0.037
36.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences107
matches
0"She didn’t drink much these"
1"She scanned the room, eyes"
2"She should’ve known he wouldn’t"
3"He poured without another word."
4"She took the glass, the"
5"She didn’t look."
6"She exhaled through her nose."
7"She set the glass down"
8"His auburn hair was more"
9"He wore a black T-shirt"
10"She let her gaze flick"
11"She laughed despite herself."
12"He leaned back, one arm"
13"She studied his hands—knuckles slightly"
14"He’d retired from MI6 by"
15"He nodded toward the door."
16"He tilted his head"
17"She could feel the old"
18"She took a slow sip."
19"Her jaw clenched."
ratio0.458
48.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences107
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Rory pushed through the door,"
2"The green neon sign above"
3"She didn’t drink much these"
4"She scanned the room, eyes"
5"Silas wasn’t behind the counter."
6"She should’ve known he wouldn’t"
7"Rory slid onto a stool"
8"The bartender, a young guy"
9"He poured without another word."
10"She took the glass, the"
11"The drink burned going down,"
12"A familiar weight settled, the"
13"The air between them thickened"
14"She didn’t look."
15"She exhaled through her nose."
16"Time had carved new lines"
17"She set the glass down"
18"His auburn hair was more"
19"The hazel eyes still sharp,"
ratio0.822
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She rubbed, the faint scar still there, pale against her skin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.2861%