Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08R6K09F2EHVPMZRX7H5QK

Run Details

Duration:
14.3s
Cost:
$0.001054
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying breath as the door swung shut behind Aurora. The weight of the evening hung heavy, pressing the scent of stale beer and old wood deeper into the floorboards. She hadn’t planned on stopping here tonight, hadn’t even meant to walk this way. But the weight of the last six months had carried her here, same as the argument she still couldn’t let go of. The bar was half-empty, the usual crowd of late-night stragglers hunched over their drinks, the clink of glasses lost beneath the hum of conversation. She didn’t recognize anyone—not until her eyes landed on the figure wiping down the far end of the counter. A gray-streaked auburn beard. A slow, steady hand. Silas. Time had carved new lines around his eyes, deepened the quiet authority in the way he held himself. The limp was still there—a subtle drag in his left leg—but it only made him move more deliberately, like a man who’d long since mastered patience. Aurora froze at the threshold. A memory surfaced: the two of them sitting on the roof of her student flat, passing a bottle of something cheap between them while Eva laughed from the kitchen below. Rory had been seventeen then, reckless and full of fire. Silas had been her father’s old friend, the one who always brought tiramisu to their house when Mum was drowning in lesson plans. She almost turned and left. But his eyes lifted before she could move, locking onto hers with unsettling precision. For a moment, neither spoke. Then he exhaled, a quiet *fuck*, and set the rag down. The door clicked shut behind her as she approached. Her boots scuffed against the worn carpet, the sound swallowed by the low murmur of the room. He didn’t stand when she slid onto a stool, but the way his fingers tapped once against the counter—once, like a heartbeat—told her everything. "You look like hell, kid," he said. Aurora smirked, but it didn’t reach her eyes. "Funny. I was just about to say the same." His laugh was low and rough, the kind that belonged in stories of men who’d seen things they couldn’t unsee. "Six years. Not since the funeral." She swallowed at that—six years since her father’s casket was lowered into the ground, six years since she’d pretended she wasn’t falling apart. "I know." Silas poured two fingers of whiskey without asking. She caught the amber liquid as he slid it toward her, his knuckles marked with old scars. "You still working the food deliveries?" "Part-time," she said. "Saves my sanity. Or sanity’s the last thing I’ve got left." He hummed, studying her—waiting. That was always how he did it, wasn’t it? Let the silence stretch until the truth came out in fragments. Aurora swirled the glass. "I ran into Eva last week." That got his attention. His eyebrows lifted just enough. "How is she?" "Alive. Surviving. Takes her shopping every Tuesday, for fuck’s sake." The words came out sharper than intended. "All these years, and she never told me about Evan." Silas exhaled through his nose, slow and measured. "Would it have changed anything?" "Maybe. Maybe I could’ve stopped it before it got so far." She flexed her left wrist absently, where the scar hid beneath her sleeve. Old damage, old choices. "Or maybe I’d have just run sooner." He didn’t argue. Didn’t offer empty words. Just reached into his pocket and slid a key across the counter—old brass, warm from his skin. Aurora stared at it. "What’s this?" "The back room," he said. "For when you need to disappear." She almost laughed. "You always carried a spare key like it was nothing." "Because it is nothing. A tool. Same as a phone. Same as a gun." Aurora wrapped her fingers around the key, the metal biting into her palm. "I’m not a field agent, Silas. I’m a delivery girl with a restraining order." "And yet," he murmured, nodding toward the shadowed hallway where the bookshelf led to the secret room, "here you are." The past sat between them like a third person—her younger self, the one who trusted, who loved reckless and fast. Who had trusted him, once. "You never told me he wasn’t who I thought," she said quietly. He didn’t flinch. Of course he didn’t. Silas had always been a vault. "I told Brenden. Told him to keep you safe. None of us could’ve known the devil would dress in law books." Aurora’s throat tightened. Her father—the barrister who’d defended truths for strangers—had been the one to tell her to trust Silas, that he knew things, could teach her things. And then he was gone, and she was alone, and all she’d had were the lies left behind. She downed the whiskey. Fire in her throat. "You could’ve said something," she said. "After. You could’ve told me the truth." "And what would that have changed?" His voice was steady, but his jaw tightened. "You’d have run sooner. Maybe wouldn’t have finished uni. Maybe Evan would’ve found you back then instead of later." Aurora swallowed the burn. "At least I’d have known the world wasn’t safe. Not the way I believed." Silas leaned forward, his elbow on the counter. The signet ring glinted under the dim light. "You still think the world’s safe?" She hesitated. Then shook her head. "Good," he said. "The second you believe that, you’re dead." She laughed once, dry and humorless. "Sounds like something Brendan would’ve said." His eyes glistened for a second, just a flicker. Then he reached for the bottle and poured another two fingers, sliding it toward her without a word. Aurora stared at the liquid. At the past shimmering in the amber. She thought of the deliveries, the rain-slicked streets, the way she’d learned to move unseen. She thought of the key burning in her pocket. "Does Eva know where you go when you vanish?" Silas shook his head. "Only if she needs to." Aurora slid the second glass back toward him. "I’m not asking for directions." He didn’t push. Just nodded, tucked the glass away, and drew a cloth across the counter in slow, deliberate circles. The floorboards groaned as someone shifted at a nearby table. She stood. The stool legs scraped the floor. Silas looked up—only briefly. Aurora met his gaze. Held it. "I’m not asking for directions," she repeated. "But I might need the room someday." He dipped his chin once. The green neon buzzed overhead, casting his face in flickering shadows. She turned toward the hall without another word. The door to the secret room creaked open on well-oiled hinges. Inside, the air smelled of old paper and faint cigarette smoke. A single desk lamp illuminated a map of London, pinpricked at various locations. A burner phone lay beside it. Aurora exhaled. She sat down. And for the first time in years, she allowed herself to hope she wasn’t too late to fix what was broken.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.054
95.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"the last thing"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"the last thing"
3"silence"
4"measured"
5"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1166
ratio0.001
matches
0"fuck"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount889
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora12
Eva1
Mum1
Silas9
Old1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.825
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1166
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean21.59
std15.68
cv0.726
sampleLengths
075
143
29
344
468
535
650
77
817
926
1025
1131
1214
1324
1410
1512
1627
1713
1835
1928
202
2111
2213
2314
2427
2520
2625
2712
2834
2946
308
3113
3233
3318
3422
356
3610
3712
3827
3936
409
419
4213
4330
448
454
466
4714
4816
498
94.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"been seventeen"
1"was lowered"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was drowning"
1"wasn’t falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences120
ratio0.075
matches
0"She didn’t recognize anyone—not until her eyes landed on the figure wiping down the far end of the counter."
1"The limp was still there—a subtle drag in his left leg—but it only made him move more deliberately, like a man who’d long since mastered patience."
2"He didn’t stand when she slid onto a stool, but the way his fingers tapped once against the counter—once, like a heartbeat—told her everything."
3"She swallowed at that—six years since her father’s casket was lowered into the ground, six years since she’d pretended she wasn’t falling apart."
4"He hummed, studying her—waiting."
5"Just reached into his pocket and slid a key across the counter—old brass, warm from his skin."
6"The past sat between them like a third person—her younger self, the one who trusted, who loved reckless and fast."
7"Her father—the barrister who’d defended truths for strangers—had been the one to tell her to trust Silas, that he knew things, could teach her things."
8"Silas looked up—only briefly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.037527593818984545
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006622516556291391
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean9.72
std6.73
cv0.693
sampleLengths
019
120
214
322
424
519
64
74
81
918
1026
115
1230
1310
1423
155
1614
175
1811
199
2017
2124
227
238
249
2520
266
2723
282
298
3017
316
323
3311
344
359
3611
374
386
394
405
413
4217
4310
448
455
4624
474
487
493
57.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then he exhaled, a quiet"
1"Just reached into his pocket"
2"Of course he didn’t."
3"Then shook her head."
4"Then he reached for the"
5"Just nodded, tucked the glass"
ratio0.072
89.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences83
matches
0"She hadn’t planned on stopping"
1"She didn’t recognize anyone—not until"
2"She almost turned and left."
3"Her boots scuffed against the"
4"He didn’t stand when she"
5"His laugh was low and"
6"She swallowed at that—six years"
7"She caught the amber liquid"
8"He hummed, studying her—waiting."
9"His eyebrows lifted just enough."
10"She flexed her left wrist"
11"He didn’t argue."
12"She almost laughed."
13"he murmured, nodding toward the"
14"she said quietly"
15"He didn’t flinch."
16"Her father—the barrister who’d defended"
17"She downed the whiskey."
18"His voice was steady, but"
19"She laughed once, dry and"
ratio0.325
68.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"The weight of the evening"
2"She hadn’t planned on stopping"
3"The bar was half-empty, the"
4"She didn’t recognize anyone—not until"
5"A gray-streaked auburn beard."
6"A slow, steady hand."
7"Time had carved new lines"
8"The limp was still there—a"
9"Aurora froze at the threshold."
10"A memory surfaced: the two"
11"Rory had been seventeen then,"
12"Silas had been her father’s"
13"She almost turned and left."
14"The door clicked shut behind"
15"Her boots scuffed against the"
16"He didn’t stand when she"
17"Aurora smirked, but it didn’t"
18"His laugh was low and"
19"She swallowed at that—six years"
ratio0.783
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The limp was still there—a subtle drag in his left leg—but it only made him move more deliberately, like a man who’d long since mastered patience."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.108
88.4885%