| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.297 | | leniency | 0.595 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |
| 95.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "the last thing" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1166 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Eva | 1 | | Mum | 1 | | Silas | 9 | | Old | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.825 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 21.59 | | std | 15.68 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been seventeen" | | 1 | "was lowered" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "was drowning" | | 1 | "wasn’t falling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t recognize anyone—not until her eyes landed on the figure wiping down the far end of the counter." | | 1 | "The limp was still there—a subtle drag in his left leg—but it only made him move more deliberately, like a man who’d long since mastered patience." | | 2 | "He didn’t stand when she slid onto a stool, but the way his fingers tapped once against the counter—once, like a heartbeat—told her everything." | | 3 | "She swallowed at that—six years since her father’s casket was lowered into the ground, six years since she’d pretended she wasn’t falling apart." | | 4 | "He hummed, studying her—waiting." | | 5 | "Just reached into his pocket and slid a key across the counter—old brass, warm from his skin." | | 6 | "The past sat between them like a third person—her younger self, the one who trusted, who loved reckless and fast." | | 7 | "Her father—the barrister who’d defended truths for strangers—had been the one to tell her to trust Silas, that he knew things, could teach her things." | | 8 | "Silas looked up—only briefly." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 906 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.037527593818984545 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006622516556291391 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 9.72 | | std | 6.73 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he exhaled, a quiet" | | 1 | "Just reached into his pocket" | | 2 | "Of course he didn’t." | | 3 | "Then shook her head." | | 4 | "Then he reached for the" | | 5 | "Just nodded, tucked the glass" |
| | ratio | 0.072 | |
| 89.88% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t planned on stopping" | | 1 | "She didn’t recognize anyone—not until" | | 2 | "She almost turned and left." | | 3 | "Her boots scuffed against the" | | 4 | "He didn’t stand when she" | | 5 | "His laugh was low and" | | 6 | "She swallowed at that—six years" | | 7 | "She caught the amber liquid" | | 8 | "He hummed, studying her—waiting." | | 9 | "His eyebrows lifted just enough." | | 10 | "She flexed her left wrist" | | 11 | "He didn’t argue." | | 12 | "She almost laughed." | | 13 | "he murmured, nodding toward the" | | 14 | "she said quietly" | | 15 | "He didn’t flinch." | | 16 | "Her father—the barrister who’d defended" | | 17 | "She downed the whiskey." | | 18 | "His voice was steady, but" | | 19 | "She laughed once, dry and" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 68.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon above the" | | 1 | "The weight of the evening" | | 2 | "She hadn’t planned on stopping" | | 3 | "The bar was half-empty, the" | | 4 | "She didn’t recognize anyone—not until" | | 5 | "A gray-streaked auburn beard." | | 6 | "A slow, steady hand." | | 7 | "Time had carved new lines" | | 8 | "The limp was still there—a" | | 9 | "Aurora froze at the threshold." | | 10 | "A memory surfaced: the two" | | 11 | "Rory had been seventeen then," | | 12 | "Silas had been her father’s" | | 13 | "She almost turned and left." | | 14 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 15 | "Her boots scuffed against the" | | 16 | "He didn’t stand when she" | | 17 | "Aurora smirked, but it didn’t" | | 18 | "His laugh was low and" | | 19 | "She swallowed at that—six years" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The limp was still there—a subtle drag in his left leg—but it only made him move more deliberately, like a man who’d long since mastered patience." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.216 | | leniency | 0.432 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |