| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1142 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "tinged" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "dance" | | 10 | "dances" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "flicked" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" | | 2 | "clenched her jaw" | | 3 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1129 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Hel | 1 | | Prince | 4 | | Belphegor | 4 | | Isolde | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Seer" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.459 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to shift when stared at too long" | | 1 | "not quite blood, but close" | | 2 | "as if conserving energy" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.886 | | wordCount | 1129 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite blood, but close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 20.16 | | std | 13.37 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of crushed green leaves and something metallic underneath—not quite blood, but close." | | 1 | "Not a fall, not a shift of balance—more like the ground itself had become part of a pendulum swinging through the wrong axis." | | 2 | "Leaves never fell—they simply weren’t shed, growing ever larger, waxy, their edges tinged with gold even in seasons that shouldn’t have gold." | | 3 | "Not sound exactly—more like the feeling of standing too close to a power line, the air thick with static." | | 4 | "The bloom pulsed with its own inner light—soft lavender shifting to lilac and back again." | | 5 | "The trail ahead split—one path winding downhill through ferns taller than Rory, their fronds tickling her arms as she passed." | | 6 | "The chime resolved into a melody—too intricate to be human, too precise to be natural." | | 7 | "The moss undulated like water, forming waves that crested into shapes—arms, legs, faces Rory recognised even as the ground reshaped them." | | 8 | "The face in the moss opened its mouth and spoke—a voice made of rustling leaves and flowing water." | | 9 | "The gemstone cast crimson light across her hands—presence of raw Hel energy." | | 10 | "A figure emerged from the trees ahead—tall, broad-shouldered in a leather coat that might once have been black." | | 11 | "The Prince’s coat rippled as something behind him stirred—souls, bound and screaming, forming into a grotesque crown around his brow." | | 12 | "Not earth opening—time splitting." |
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| 98.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 770 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.04155844155844156 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003896103896103896 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 9.41 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 47.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.325 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the ground trembled." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She clenched her jaw until" | | 1 | "It glowed brighter for a" | | 2 | "She grabbed the chain, yanked" | | 3 | "His eyes burned with the" | | 4 | "he said to Isolde" | | 5 | "His smile widened." | | 6 | "she asked, voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.08 | |
| 11.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Rory slowed her pace, fingers" | | 2 | "The gem vibrated once, faint" | | 3 | "Nyx materialised beside her in" | | 4 | "The air smelled of crushed" | | 5 | "Isolde wasn’t with them yet." | | 6 | "The Seer had insisted they" | | 7 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The world tilted." | | 9 | "She clenched her jaw until" | | 10 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 11 | "Isolde’s silver hair caught morning" | | 12 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 13 | "The trees stretched too tall," | | 14 | "Leaves never fell—they simply weren’t" | | 15 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 16 | "Isolde’s laughter chimed like wind" | | 17 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 18 | "A hum, low and resonant," | | 19 | "Isolde plucked a wildflower from" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their grey surfaces etched with spirals and sigils that seemed to shift when stared at too long." | | 1 | "The Seer had insisted they enter separately, her voice trailing behind them like swirling mist." | | 2 | "The trees stretched too tall, their canopies forming a vaulted ceiling of interlaced branches that swallowed the sky." | | 3 | "The trail ahead split—one path winding downhill through ferns taller than Rory, their fronds tickling her arms as she passed." | | 4 | "The moss-face dissolved into dew that sizzled against the warmed earth." | | 5 | "A figure emerged from the trees ahead—tall, broad-shouldered in a leather coat that might once have been black." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, voice steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |