| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 867 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 867 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "cacophony" | | 9 | "fluttered" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 158 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 856 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "inward" | | 1 | "Malphora" | | 2 | "spoke" | | 3 | "“She’s here.”" | | 4 | "“She’s come back.”" | | 5 | "“She remembers.”" | | 6 | "waited" | | 7 | "Hel" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 818 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hadn | 1 | | Six | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Evan" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.828 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.18% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.168 | | wordCount | 856 | | matches | | 0 | "not in any language she knew, but in the way a voice in a dream communicates without words" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 12.78 | | std | 12.51 | | cv | 0.979 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "been swallowed" | | 1 | "was hidden" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 158 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the directions in her customer’s slip of paper—a woman called Isolde—right to this spot." | | 1 | "Not that customer—friend—Eva would approve." | | 2 | "Not like a door opening—like air turning solid behind her." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet in impossible colours—violets that glowed violet, poppies that pulsed crimson, roses striped black and silver." | | 4 | "Then—there." | | 5 | "Her left wrist—the scar from the childhood accident—was changing." | | 6 | "Now they *spoke*—not in any language she knew, but in the way a voice in a dream communicates without words." | | 7 | "Its glow was no longer faint—it burned like embers against her palm." | | 8 | "A cacophony of them—old and young, male and female, some guttural, some silken." | | 9 | "She could feel it now—not a heartbeat." |
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| 94.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.045838359469240045 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007237635705669481 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 158 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 158 | | mean | 5.42 | | std | 4.17 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 42.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3227848101265823 | | totalSentences | 158 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the silent stones." | | 1 | "Instead, a clearing stretched ahead," | | 2 | "Slowly, she turned." | | 3 | "More like the sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the directions in" | | 1 | "Her breath came in short," | | 2 | "She judged her for hesitating." | | 3 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 4 | "Her pulse spiked." | | 5 | "She whipped around." | | 6 | "She turned back." | | 7 | "They swayed, but no breeze" | | 8 | "She lifted the pendant." | | 9 | "She shoved it back into" | | 10 | "It moved when she didn’t." | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "She didn’t blink." | | 13 | "She forced herself forward." | | 14 | "They came from behind her." | | 15 | "She clutched the pendant tighter." | | 16 | "Its warmth seeped through her" | | 17 | "Her pulse roared in her" | | 18 | "She looked down." | | 19 | "Her left wrist—the scar from" |
| | ratio | 0.264 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory didn’t remember the last" | | 1 | "She’d followed the directions in" | | 2 | "Her breath came in short," | | 3 | "A delivery person’s side hustle." | | 4 | "Eva didn’t judge Rory for" | | 5 | "She judged her for hesitating." | | 6 | "Rory’s fingers closed around the" | | 7 | "The Heartstone’s inner glow thrummed" | | 8 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The moment her left foot" | | 10 | "Her pulse spiked." | | 11 | "She whipped around." | | 12 | "She turned back." | | 13 | "The path had vanished." | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet" | | 15 | "They swayed, but no breeze" | | 16 | "That wasn’t natural." | | 17 | "She lifted the pendant." | | 18 | "The gem’s deep crimson glow" | | 19 | "The woman at the restaurant" |
| | ratio | 0.709 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they *spoke*—not in any" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a clearing stretched ahead, ringed by towering oaks that stretched their gnarled branches into the night sky like skeletal fingers." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet in impossible colours—violets that glowed violet, poppies that pulsed crimson, roses striped black and silver." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |