| 77.55% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 2 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.265 | | leniency | 0.531 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |
| 83.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1520 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1520 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "effortless" | | 7 | "imposing" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "pang" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "loomed" | | 15 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1510 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Don’t" | | 1 | "Walk away." | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "clink" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1200 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Welsh | 2 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Elder | 1 | | Hollow | 1 | | Church | 1 | | Epping | 1 | | Forest | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Hollow" | | 2 | "Church" | | 3 | "Epping" | | 4 | "Forest" |
| | globalScore | 0.792 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile" | | 1 | "sounded like a closing door between them," | | 2 | "something like relief flickering across his" |
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| 67.55% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.325 | | wordCount | 1510 | | matches | | 0 | "not resolution, not forgiveness, but the tiniest crack in the dam she’d spent three years buildin" | | 1 | "not forgiveness, but the tiniest crack in the dam she’d spent three years buildin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 24.75 | | std | 17.96 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more—his pattern from before." | | 1 | "The deadbolts were a ritual; the first one slipped free with a grinding click, the second with a sharper tug." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers immediately, and Rory felt the old, familiar jolt in her chest, the one that had nothing to do with logic." | | 3 | "Scrolls spilled off the coffee table, textbooks on folklore stacked haphazardly on the floor, the tabby cat—*Ptolemy*—staring at him with unblinking disdain from his perch on a pile of Eva’s notes." | | 4 | "“It’s after midnight somewhere.” Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she caught the scent of him—sandalwood and something faintly smoky, like a dying ember." | | 5 | "Unrolled it just enough for her to see the strange, looping script—Elder Welsh, maybe, or something older." | | 6 | "The Hollow Church—the ruins on the edge of Epping Forest—had been a graveyard of whispers even before Eva started digging." | | 7 | "She looked up at him, really looked, and saw the truth in his eyes—whatever game he was playing, this wasn’t about revenge." | | 8 | "The parchment smelled of dust and something older—like burnt offerings and forgotten prayers." | | 9 | "“You can pretend all you want.” His fingers brushed her hair aside, just for a second—too brief to be anything but an accident." | | 10 | "And for the first time in years, she felt something shift inside her—not resolution, not forgiveness, but the tiniest crack in the dam she’d spent three years building." |
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| 87.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1215 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "below, lavender-scented cleaner," |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.047736625514403296 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013991769547325103 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 10 | | std | 6.86 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 59.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.37748344370860926 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she busied herself with" | | 1 | "Then he stepped back, retrieving" | | 2 | "Instead, she faced him again," | | 3 | "Just stood there, watching her" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 96.64% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood, joints popping, and" | | 1 | "She hesitated on the third," | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked" | | 4 | "he said, voice low, accented" | | 5 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 6 | "His gaze flicked past her" | | 7 | "She shut the door behind" | | 8 | "He stood near the armchair," | | 9 | "he noted, nodding toward her" | | 10 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 11 | "She gestured vaguely between them" | | 12 | "She filled the kettle, more" | | 13 | "She paused mid-pour." | | 14 | "She wanted to deny it." | | 15 | "He took it, fingers brushing" | | 16 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 17 | "He stepped up behind her," | | 18 | "His voice dropped, rougher." | | 19 | "She turned fast, nearly colliding" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 58.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at the" | | 1 | "The knowledge coiled in her" | | 2 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 3 | "Rory exhaled through her nose" | | 4 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 5 | "She stood, joints popping, and" | | 6 | "The deadbolts were a ritual;" | | 7 | "She hesitated on the third," | | 8 | "A voice in her head" | | 9 | "The third bolt slid aside." | | 10 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 11 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked" | | 12 | "he said, voice low, accented" | | 13 | "The corner of his mouth" | | 14 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 15 | "The space between them was" | | 16 | "Lucien didn’t flinch at the" | | 17 | "His gaze flicked past her" | | 18 | "Scrolls spilled off the coffee" | | 19 | "Rory stepped back, grudgingly, and" |
| | ratio | 0.804 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "To touch the parchment." | | 1 | "To see Eva’s handwriting in" | | 2 | "Before whatever had happened to" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien’s broad shoulders nearly brushed both sides of the doorway as he entered, and he moved with the effortless grace of someone who knew exactly how imposing…" | | 1 | "Just stood there, watching her with an intensity that made her skin prickle." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice low, accented" | | 1 | "He shifted, and the movement made the cane sway slightly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he observed (observe)" | | 1 | "he noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.122 | | leniency | 0.245 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |