Run: 2026-03-18-01KM08YXGHNKR5CC6WN68YKF6P

Run Details

Duration:
15.8s
Cost:
$0.013787
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the last of the yew branches and stepped into the clearing with her breath caught high in her chest. Richmond Park had gone quiet behind her. Not empty. Quiet, which was worse. The city’s noise had thinned mile by mile until only her boots on damp earth and the faint rasp of leaves rubbing together remained. Now even that seemed to have been taken from her. The grove held its own hush, dense as wool. She stood still beneath the standing stones and listened. Nothing. Then, far off, a bird gave a single broken note and stopped as if something had snapped its neck mid-call. Rory tightened her grip on the strap of her bag and turned in a slow circle. Wildflowers spread across the clearing in pale drifts, white and blue and yellow under the moon, too vivid for November, too alive for a place hidden this deep inside the park. The ancient oak stones rose from the earth in a rough ring, their bark knotted and dark, like old hands half-buried in soil. She had seen photos. She had followed directions. She had read the note twice, then a third time on the bus when her hands started going cold. Come alone. After dark. Bring the pendant. Her fingers slid into the pocket of her coat and touched the chain there. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her palm, tiny and heavy, warmer than it had any right to be. “That’s a charming welcome,” she muttered to no one. Her voice landed wrong in the clearing. Too thin. Like the place had taken the body of it and left the rest behind. Rory lifted her chin and stepped forward. The grass curled under her boots. A scent rose from it, sharp and green, with a sweetness underneath that made her think of bruised apples left too long in a bowl. She stopped at the centre of the ring and looked down. The earth there had been smoothed, almost swept clean. No roots, no stones, only a shallow dip in the soil where rainwater gathered into a black sheen. She crouched and held the pendant above it. The crimson gem gave a faint pulse. Warmth moved through the chain and settled in her palm. Rory exhaled through her nose. “All right. That’s something.” She opened her bag, fumbled past her torch, notebook, and the half-crushed packet of mints she kept forgetting to throw out, then pulled free the folded scrap of paper she’d brought from the flat. The handwriting on it looked slanted and hurried, as if the person had written while walking. If the stone warms, you’re near the breach. Do not linger if the grove goes still. Do not answer if you hear yourself called. She stared at the last line long enough for the words to lose shape. A breeze moved through the clearing. Rory looked up. The flowers bent as one. Their stems bowed away from the centre, then sprang back, though no branch had stirred above her. The standing stones did not move. The trees beyond the ring did not move either. Yet the air had shifted, as if something large had passed close enough to drag its weight through it. She straightened, the note clenched in one hand. “Nice,” she told the dark. No reply. Only the soft pressing hush of leaves. The pendant warmed again. Not enough to burn. Enough to remind her it was there. Rory turned and took three steps toward the northern edge of the grove. The moon had caught on the bark of the boundary stones, laying pale stripes across their rough faces. One of them, the tallest, had a split down its centre like a healed scar. She squinted at it, then frowned. The split looked deeper than before. She had not noticed that when she entered. A low sound brushed the edge of hearing. She stilled. It came again. Not quite a whisper. Not quite breath. A wet little click, like a tongue working at a tooth. Rory kept her eyes on the tree line. “Who’s there?” Nothing. The sound did not repeat. Instead, from somewhere behind her, came the tiny crunch of a footstep in dry leaves. She spun so fast her shoulder jarred. The clearing sat empty. Her pulse pushed against her throat. She scanned the grass, the stones, the black mouths between the trunks. Nothing moved. The wildflowers trembled where the wind had passed, and that was all. “Very funny,” she said, but the words came out tight. The moon slid behind a cloud. The clearing dimmed at once, every shape flattening into dark. Rory reached into her bag and drew out her torch. The beam cut across the grass, bright and narrow. In its light the flowers glittered with moisture, and beyond them the trees stood so close together they seemed stacked rather than rooted. She played the light along the far side of the ring. A shape stood between two stones. Rory froze. It was only there for a blink. Tall and narrow, with a head tilted sideways. The beam snapped over it and found nothing but bark. Her mouth went dry. She swung the torch back. “No.” The word came out before she knew she’d spoken. The clearing remained empty. She forced herself to breathe in through her nose and out through her mouth, the way Eva had shown her after the first time Rory had woken from a nightmare with her nails dug bloody into her palms. Count the things you can see, Eva had said, sitting on the edge of the bed with her coffee gone cold in her hand. Ground yourself. Don’t let your head run off without you. Rory counted. Standing stones. Flowers. Trees. Torch. Pendant. Note. Six. Her torch beam drifted over the circle again. On the seventh sweep, something pale flashed at the very edge of light near the eastern stones. Not a body. Not a face. Just a sliver of brightness, gone before she could fix on it. She snapped the beam over there. Empty. Rory stared at the place until her eyes watered. Then, from behind the nearest stone, a soft tap sounded. Tap. Tap. Like knuckles on wood. Her grip tightened until the torch creaked under her fingers. “I’m not in the mood.” The tapping stopped. The silence that followed was worse, because it felt deliberate, held in place. Waiting. Then a voice rose from the far side of the grove. “Rory.” She nearly dropped the torch. The call came in her own voice. Same roughness at the edges. Same flat Cardiff turn when she was tired. It drifted over the grass from somewhere she couldn’t see, soft and patient. Her skin went cold from her neck to her wrists. “No,” she said to the dark, to herself, to whatever had made that shape. “No, you don’t get to do that.” The voice came again, closer this time. “Rory.” Her torch beam shook. She forced it steady and swept it toward the sound. The light snagged on the space between two stones, and for one hard second she saw a face pressed against the bark. Not a full face. Just enough to catch the impression of a mouth stretched too wide, lips pale and wet, one eye gleaming from deep inside the shadow. It vanished as fast as it had appeared, slipping behind the stone with a scrape like fingernails dragged down wood. Rory backed up until her heel hit the centre dip in the earth. Heart pounding, she clapped her free hand over the pendant in her pocket. The stone pulsed. Warmth bloomed in her palm. The note had said the pendant would warm near a breach. She had expected a hidden arch, a shimmer in the air, some fairy-tale crack between worlds. Not this. Not a thing in the trees wearing her own voice like a stolen coat. Another whisper moved through the clearing. This time it did not say her name. It said her old one. The one no one in London used unless they knew her before she left Cardiff. The one that made her think of her father’s study, of polished wood and legal textbooks, of a life that had felt arranged by someone else’s hands. Laila. Rory’s stomach folded in on itself. “No,” she said again, sharper. “You’re not getting that one.” The clearing answered with a rustle along the trees. Not wind. Too many leaves shifting at once. A circling sound. Something moved just beyond the torchlight. She turned, slow enough to keep from losing herself. A figure stood at the edge of the flowers. It looked like a woman from a distance. Tall, bare-armed, hair hanging loose and dark against her shoulders. Rory’s first stupid thought was that someone had come to meet her after all, some other fool with a note and a torch. Then the figure lifted its head. The face blurred in and out, as if the moon could not decide what shape to lay over it. One moment it held smooth skin and a mouth. The next, only a pale oval where the features had shifted aside like wet paint dragged by a hand. Rory took one step back. The figure copied her. She stopped. It stopped. The torch beam steadied on it, and for a heartbeat the thing stood entirely still in the flowers, as though it had learned the posture of a person from a long distance away. Then it smiled. The mouth stretched too far, not tearing, simply opening wider than any human mouth should have managed. Rory could see no teeth, only blackness packed behind the grin. She could have run then. The thought arrived clear and cold. Run now, straight through the trees, don’t look back. Instead she lifted the torch and shouted, “Get out of here!” The thing tilted its head. A voice came from it, layered and soft. “Rory.” The sound landed behind her left shoulder. Her body reacted before her mind caught up. She whirled so hard she stumbled. The torch beam flashed across the stones, and for one instant she saw a second figure at the northern boundary, bent nearly double as if listening through the wood. Its hands rested against the bark. Long fingers. Too many joints. Then the light flicked away and it was gone. Her breath came in sharp pieces. The grove had changed. She felt it before she understood it. The air had thickened, gone damp and close. The flowers around her bowed their heads all at once, as if something invisible had moved over them. The standing stones seemed taller now, their tops lost in the dark. Even the moon looked wrong, too distant, like a lamp seen through deep water. Rory reached into her pocket and drew out the pendant at last. The silver chain slid over her fingers. The Heartstone glowed from within, a dark red ember cupped in metal. It throbbed in her palm. The figure in the flowers made a small sound at the sight of it. Not a growl. Not a hiss. A hungry little exhale. Rory looked from the pendant to the thing and back again. “All right,” she whispered. “So that’s what this is.” The note had said bring the pendant. Not use it. Not hold it up. She had not known what else to do, though, and she was done standing in the middle of a trap while her own voice called to her from the dark. She lifted the pendant slowly. The crimson glow deepened. A tremor ran through the ground under her boots. The flowers quivered. One of the standing stones gave a low groan, old timber under strain. Then the clearing answered with her father’s voice. “Rory, love, over here.” Her lungs seized. Brendan Carter had always spoken like that when he wanted her to listen. Calm. Measured. A little tired. She had not heard it in years, not since she’d left Cardiff with one bag and a cheap ticket and a mouth full of blood where she’d bitten through her own cheek to keep from screaming in front of Evan. The sound came from the trees behind her, warm as a hand at the back of her neck. She did not turn. The pendant burned in her palm now, not with pain but with insistence, a live coal shoved under skin. The glow spread across her fingers, painting the knuckles red. Rory held her breath and stepped toward the centre dip in the earth. The thing in the flowers moved with her. A twig cracked somewhere to her right. Then another voice, closer than the rest, slid out of the dark in Eva’s accent, dry and sharp. “Don’t look at it.” Rory shut her eyes at once. The clearing did not go still. It breathed around her. A cold rush moved over her face, carrying the smell of wet soil and sweet rot. The pendant jerked in her hand as if something had tugged the chain from the other side. Rory opened her eyes just enough to see the crimson light spilling into the dip in the ground. The earth there had begun to shine. Not bright. Not clean. A narrow red seam formed in the soil, split thin as a cut lip, and warmth spilled out from it in a slow pulse. She swallowed hard. “This is the breach,” she breathed. The whisper came from right beside her ear, soft enough to raise the hairs on her neck. “Yes.” Rory turned on instinct and saw only the dark between the stones, but the answer had not come from there. It had come from everywhere at once, wrapped around the clearing like vine. Her torch dropped from her fingers and struck the grass. Its beam spun wildly across the flowers before settling on the ground at her feet. In that wavering light, a second set of footprints appeared around her own. Bare feet. Long. Pressed deep into the wet earth where no one had stood a moment before. Rory stared down at them. Then she looked up, slow as a held breath, and found the thing waiting in the moonless gap between the stones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.095
93.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2373
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2373
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"quivered"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"weight"
3"whisper"
4"scanned"
5"trembled"
6"silence"
7"gleaming"
8"pounding"
9"pulsed"
10"stomach"
11"flicked"
12"throbbed"
13"quivered"
14"measured"
15"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences252
filterMatches
0"think"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences265
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2373
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount2313
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
November1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Eva3
Rory24
Cardiff3
London1
Carter1
Evan1
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"One"
places
0"Park"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
87.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences161
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed stacked rather than rooted"
1"looked like a woman from a distance"
2"as if listening through the wood"
3"seemed taller now, their tops lost in the dark"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.421
wordCount2373
matches
0"not with pain but with insistence, a live coal shoved under skin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences265
matches
0"made that shape"
1"was that someone"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs138
mean17.2
std18.29
cv1.064
sampleLengths
022
156
29
31
420
597
67
732
89
923
1049
1135
127
1310
149
1550
1624
1714
186
193
2056
218
225
239
2415
2558
268
278
282
2921
308
312
321
3320
347
354
3632
3710
3858
3911
406
412
4225
434
446
459
464
4772
482
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences252
matches
0"been taken"
1"been smoothed"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs368
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences265
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2318
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Tall, bare-armed, hair"
adverbCount94
adverbRatio0.04055220017256255
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0060396893874029335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences265
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences265
mean8.95
std7.15
cv0.799
sampleLengths
022
17
22
34
424
510
69
79
81
920
1016
1131
1223
134
144
1519
162
172
183
1914
2018
219
227
232
2414
257
266
2725
2811
299
3018
318
327
3310
345
354
3634
3716
388
398
408
4114
426
433
445
4517
466
479
4819
498
41.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.26037735849056604
totalSentences265
uniqueOpeners69
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount17
totalSentences215
matches
0"Then, far off, a bird"
1"Only the soft pressing hush"
2"Instead, from somewhere behind her,"
3"Just a sliver of brightness,"
4"Then, from behind the nearest"
5"Then a voice rose from"
6"Just enough to catch the"
7"Too many leaves shifting at"
8"Then the figure lifted its"
9"Then it smiled."
10"Instead she lifted the torch"
11"Too many joints."
12"Then the light flicked away"
13"Even the moon looked wrong,"
14"Then the clearing answered with"
15"Then another voice, closer than"
16"Then she looked up, slow"
ratio0.079
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences215
matches
0"She stood still beneath the"
1"She had seen photos."
2"She had followed directions."
3"She had read the note"
4"Her fingers slid into the"
5"she muttered to no one"
6"Her voice landed wrong in"
7"She stopped at the centre"
8"She crouched and held the"
9"She opened her bag, fumbled"
10"She stared at the last"
11"Their stems bowed away from"
12"She straightened, the note clenched"
13"she told the dark"
14"She squinted at it, then"
15"She had not noticed that"
16"It came again."
17"She spun so fast her"
18"Her pulse pushed against her"
19"She scanned the grass, the"
ratio0.27
80.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount163
totalSentences215
matches
0"Rory pushed through the last"
1"Richmond Park had gone quiet"
2"The city’s noise had thinned"
3"The grove held its own"
4"She stood still beneath the"
5"Rory tightened her grip on"
6"Wildflowers spread across the clearing"
7"The ancient oak stones rose"
8"She had seen photos."
9"She had followed directions."
10"She had read the note"
11"Her fingers slid into the"
12"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
13"she muttered to no one"
14"Her voice landed wrong in"
15"Rory lifted her chin and"
16"The grass curled under her"
17"A scent rose from it,"
18"She stopped at the centre"
19"The earth there had been"
ratio0.758
46.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences215
matches
0"Now even that seemed to"
1"If the stone warms, you’re"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences89
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Then, far off, a bird gave a single broken note and stopped as if something had snapped its neck mid-call."
1"The silence that followed was worse, because it felt deliberate, held in place."
2"The one that made her think of her father’s study, of polished wood and legal textbooks, of a life that had felt arranged by someone else’s hands."
3"The torch beam flashed across the stones, and for one instant she saw a second figure at the northern boundary, bent nearly double as if listening through the w…"
4"The flowers around her bowed their heads all at once, as if something invisible had moved over them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, but the words came out tight"
1"she said again, sharper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she lifted (lift)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.381
86.5329%