Run: 2026-03-18-01KM092MY5PF30XKPN5TX6WRPG

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.007376
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest sat under a wash of green neon like it had been poured there. Inside, the air held old beer, wet wool, and something sharper—citrus oil rubbing into dark wood. Maps covered the walls in layered grids. Black-and-white photographs stared from frames that had dulled at the corners. A few patrons occupied the tables with the kind of quiet people carried into places that didn’t ask questions. Aurora Carter crossed the room like she already knew which corners counted. Her delivery jacket hung open over a dark top. She kept her shoulders steady when the floorboards complained under her step. Bright blue eyes scanned the bar, then the shelves behind it, then the signet ring on the man polishing the same glass again and again, as if the motion could scrub history clean. He didn’t look up at first. He just kept polishing until the glass flashed, then he turned his wrist and set it down with a soft click. When his gaze finally met hers, the expression on his face took time to arrange itself. Hazel eyes held her like a bookmark. His beard matched his grey-streaked auburn hair, neat and disciplined. The limp sat under his stance; it showed when he shifted his weight, not when he stood still. Aurora stopped with one hand still hovering near the strap of her bag. A crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light when she flexed. The man’s mouth opened, closed, then opened again. “Rory.” Aurora’s throat tightened around a laugh that didn’t arrive. She looked at the bar’s mirrors, then at him again, as if the room had lied about her being here. “You know my—” She cut herself off. “Silas.” His shoulders loosened a fraction. He wiped his hands on a towel that had seen years. “People call you Rory,” he said. “They used to. More than once, you signed things that way.” Aurora leaned against the edge of the bar. The green neon traced her cheekbones through the glass behind the bottles. She watched him instead of the room. She had the urge to check if he still had the same eyes that used to miss nothing. “I didn’t sign anything,” she said. “I handed over what I was told to hand over.” Silas let out a quiet breath through his nose, amused without warmth. “Still stubborn.” Aurora’s mouth twitched. “You remembered that too.” He finally pushed the towel away and rested his forearm on the bar. His signet ring sat on his right hand like it had always owned the space around it. “I remembered you,” he said. “That’s the problem.” The sentence landed harder than it should have. Aurora swallowed and kept her gaze anchored on his face, on the faint crease between his brows that didn’t belong to a man who only ran a bar. “How long has it been?” she asked. Silas’s eyes flicked toward the maps, then back. “Too long for an answer that makes sense,” he said. “You left. Then you vanished. Then London filled itself with noise and nobody I trusted had anything solid.” Aurora gave a short nod. She didn’t like how her chest pulled tight at the word vanished. “I didn’t vanish,” she said. “I ran.” Silas’s expression shifted—something like sympathy tried to stand up, then sat back down when it met the weight in her voice. “You ran because you had to,” he said. Aurora angled her head, studying the angle of his jaw, the way his hair had gone streaky grey, the way his hands moved with practiced economy. She’d imagined him older. She hadn’t prepared for him to look like someone who had survived himself. “You opened a bar,” she said. “Of course you did.” Silas’s eyes narrowed. Not at her—at the past. “I opened a front,” he corrected, then watched her reaction. “And I kept it.” Aurora laughed this time, a quick burst that didn’t soften anything. “Kept it like you kept everything else.” Silas’s fingers tightened on the ring and loosened again. He didn’t hide it. He let the moment show. “I kept what mattered,” he said. “I failed at what didn’t.” Aurora’s delivery bag slipped from her shoulder when she shifted. She caught it before it hit the floor. The strap creaked against the fabric. The sound gave her hands something to do. “Prague,” she said. Silas didn’t flinch. His gaze stayed steady. “You brought that up,” he said. “Like it’s a story you can pick apart.” “It’s a scar,” Aurora answered. She moved her left wrist, and the crescent mark on her skin flashed. “I keep mine out where I can see it. I don’t give myself the luxury of forgetting.” Silas studied her wrist without turning it into a performance. Then he looked at her eyes again. “Do you still work deliveries?” he asked. Aurora’s shoulders pulled in a fraction. “By day. The Golden Empress has shifts that don’t care if I show up late.” Silas nodded, as if he’d expected that detail. “Yu-Fei Cheung runs a tight ship,” he said. “Good people eat well there.” Aurora’s expression hardened. “You sound like you’ve been there.” “I pass by,” he said. “I don’t sit. I don’t linger. I don’t—” He paused. “I didn’t know what you’d want from me.” Aurora’s laugh faded into something flatter. “What I’d want. You always picked the safest questions.” His mouth tightened. “And you always demanded answers that cut.” Aurora leaned closer. Her voice stayed level, but her eyes burned with old familiarity. “I demanded because you didn’t tell me anything,” she said. “Back then, you acted like you were made of glass. You let me stand near you and never once explained what would shatter.” Silas’s gaze held hers. He let the silence stretch until the bar’s clinking glass and distant laughter returned to the foreground. “You wanted the truth,” he said. “I wanted out,” Aurora snapped. The word slipped out sharp and ugly. She steadied it. “But you treated leaving like it was an errand.” Silas’s eyes lowered briefly, and she noticed the way his left leg carried the stance. The limp didn’t announce itself—time did, in the small adjustments, in the careful weight distribution that didn’t happen when men were young. “I should’ve brought you in earlier,” Silas said. “Not later. Earlier. I should’ve—” Aurora cut in. “Don’t.” Silas’s jaw shifted. He shut his mouth and looked at her like she’d pushed him against a wall. “Don’t give me the middle part,” Aurora said, softer now but still hard. “Don’t talk around it like you can polish it into something easier to swallow.” Silas breathed once through his nose. His fingers tapped the bar, slow and measured. “I didn’t come looking,” he said. “I told myself it was because I didn’t have anything to offer. I told myself if I found you, it would drag you back into the same mess. But I liked not knowing.” Aurora stared at him. The admission didn’t fit the man she remembered from years ago, the one who had carried control like a coat. This version spoke like someone who’d run out of places to hide. “And you let me think you didn’t care,” Aurora said. Silas’s expression twisted—rage at himself, maybe, or grief given a shape. He shook his head once. “I cared,” he said. “I still do. It didn’t help. Caring didn’t rescue you from the things you ended up surviving.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around her bag strap again. The room swam for a heartbeat, then snapped back into focus. She’d thought running had made everything simple. She’d thought distance put a wall between her and whatever she’d lost. She blinked and looked at his hands. The signet ring caught the light each time he moved. “Do you remember the stairwell behind the old offices?” she asked. Silas’s eyes widened slightly. His face shifted into recognition so quick it looked like pain. “The one with the busted light,” he said. Aurora nodded. “You used to count the steps. Like you could predict the fall.” Silas smiled once, small and humorless. “I counted because my knee hurt,” he said. “Back then it didn’t show. I learned to plan for it.” Aurora’s mouth opened, then closed. She hadn’t remembered that detail. She had remembered his confidence, his sharpness, the way he had walked like his body belonged to someone else. “Your knee hurt and you still made me feel like I was the fragile one,” she said. Silas’s gaze held steady. “I pushed you hard. I thought it would make you durable.” Aurora’s voice went quiet. “It made me anxious.” Silas’s eyes softened, but he didn’t smooth anything over. “It made you alive,” he said. “I’m not proud of how.” Aurora’s throat tightened again. She lifted her chin and looked past him to the maps. A city grid filled one wall, pins stuck in places that used to be names to her. Her mind reached for the old vocabulary—safe houses, movements, contacts—and hit the snag of how those words now lived in her body as tension. “I stopped thinking about names,” she said. “I focused on deliveries and bills and not getting caught in the wrong street at the wrong time.” Silas nodded. “That worked.” “It kept me moving,” Aurora countered. “It didn’t heal me.” Silas shifted, and the limp tugged at his posture. He leaned one shoulder into the bar, careful. His signet ring rotated on his right hand as he held it in place. “You came up here because you’re not healed,” he said. Aurora didn’t deny it. She couldn’t. She set her bag down and let both hands rest on the wood. The bar surface felt solid under her palms, like it refused to carry secrets. “I came up here because Eva texted me,” she said. Silas’s face flickered at the name. “Eva.” Aurora nodded. “She said you were at the Nest tonight. She didn’t say why.” Silas’s mouth pressed into a line. “Eva always loved a door that opened both ways.” Aurora studied him. “She told you to look for me too?” Silas shook his head once. “She didn’t need to. You were in my orbit even after you ran.” Aurora let out a slow breath. The sound came out rough. “You watched.” “I didn’t stalk you,” Silas said. “I watched for patterns. For threats. For—” He stopped, then forced the sentence out. “For harm.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “That’s not different.” Silas held her gaze. “It is to me.” Aurora leaned back, then forward again, like her body couldn’t decide on a posture that matched her anger. “You retired,” she said. “That’s what you told people.” Silas’s smile went thin. “I told people what they needed.” “And I believed you,” Aurora said. Silas’s expression tightened. “You didn’t believe me because you trusted me. You believed because you had to. You were trying to build a life out of scraps.” Aurora flinched as if he’d reached into her bag and pulled out something private. She kept her voice steady anyway. “I built it,” she said. “Mostly alone.” Silas didn’t argue. He looked toward the bookshelf behind the bar, the one that hid the way into the secret room. Aurora followed his glance and resisted the urge to touch the trigger of old habits—checking exits, mapping routes. “You still keep that back room,” she said. “I keep it for people who don’t have the luxury of open conversations,” Silas replied. Aurora’s eyes caught on his face. “Were you going to pull me into it?” Silas didn’t reach for a justification. He simply answered. “No,” he said. “Not tonight.” Aurora let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Then she frowned at herself for the relief. “Why tonight?” she asked. “Why now, after years?” Silas’s fingers drummed once, then stopped. He looked older in that pause. “You walked in wearing a delivery jacket,” he said. “You held your bag like you expected the floor to betray you. You looked at the door twice before you found your way to this bar.” He met her eyes. “You still move like someone who has learned to survive a room that might turn.” Aurora’s throat bobbed. She didn’t like him describing her with that kind of precision. It felt like someone reading a bruise out loud. “I’m not a case study,” she said. “I know,” Silas replied. “I just recognize you.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. She glanced at the nearest patron—two men arguing quietly over football and another customer tapping ash from a cigarette into a tray. Ordinary noise filled the spaces between them. “I thought you’d moved on,” she said. Silas’s laugh held no comedy. “Moved on from what?” Aurora looked at him directly. “From me.” He held her gaze. For a moment his face went still, like he had reached a line he couldn’t cross without cutting himself. “I didn’t move on,” he said. “I adapted.” Aurora’s lips parted, then closed. She felt the old anger shift into something heavier, something that didn’t have a target. “Adapted into a bar,” she said, tasting the word like it might be stale. “Into maps and photographs.” Silas nodded once. “Into a place where people can come in without knowing they’re being measured. Into a place where I can offer a drink without offering danger.” Aurora studied him. She saw the discipline in his movements, the way he didn’t fidget, the way he kept his hands busy. She also saw the tiredness at the edges. Time had made a home there. “You didn’t want to be a villain anymore,” she said. Silas’s eyes stayed steady. “I didn’t want to be the man who caused injuries and called it necessary.” Aurora’s voice turned sharper again. “And what about the injury you caused me?” Silas stared at her, and the bar’s green neon made his hazel eyes look almost bright. “I didn’t mean to ruin your life,” he said. Aurora let out a sound that wasn’t quite laughter, wasn’t quite disbelief. “That’s the thing,” she said. “You always talked like you were stepping around accidents. Like you didn’t choose where the cuts landed.” Silas’s jaw flexed. His signet ring flashed as his right hand shifted on the bar. “I chose wrong,” he said. “I chose silence. I chose distance. I let regret do its slow work while I pretended it was strategy.” Aurora’s chest tightened at the honesty. She hated it for being so plain. She hated it because it made her feel seen. “And what did you want from me?” she asked. “Forgiveness? A clean slate? Another chance to stand in my past and call it professional?” Silas didn’t flinch. “I wanted you safe,” he said. “I wanted you alive. I wanted you to stop looking over your shoulder.” Aurora stared at him. Her voice turned quieter, rougher at the edges. “I still look.” Silas’s eyes softened, and he finally shifted his weight in a way that made the limp more obvious. He moved like pain had taught him a different rhythm, and he had accepted that rhythm instead of fighting it. “I know,” he said. Aurora’s fingers hovered over her scar without touching it. “You can’t undo what happened.” Silas’s gaze dropped to her wrist. His voice lowered. “I didn’t ask you to undo it,” he said. “I asked you to remember that you were never alone in it.” Aurora stared at him. The words hit somewhere behind her ribs, where she stored all the conversations she refused to have with herself. “Were you alone?” she asked. Silas didn’t answer at once. The bar noise filled the space while he chose his words. Finally he spoke. “I had people,” he said. “Contacts, partners, routines. But after Prague, it wasn’t companionship. It was management.” He paused. “It got me through. It didn’t get me free.” Aurora’s eyes stayed on his face. “So you still carry it.” Silas nodded once. “And I carry you with it. Not as blame. As consequence.” Aurora let the silence settle. She took a breath and tasted beer on the air. Then she straightened, like she’d decided something about her own posture. “I live above you,” she said. “You didn’t even have to chase.” Silas’s mouth twitched. “I didn’t chase. I listened.” Aurora raised an eyebrow. “You listened to what?” Silas’s gaze flicked up and down her with a quick, respectful attention. “To your footsteps,” he said. “To the way your door clicked. To whether you came home late. To whether you left in the morning with that same tight line in your shoulders.” Aurora’s face tightened. “So you heard.” “I heard,” he confirmed. “And I didn’t come down. I told myself you needed distance. I told myself I was giving you space.” Aurora’s laugh came out short and bitter. “You gave me absence.” Silas held her gaze. “Yes.” Aurora stared at him until her eyes went hot. She shifted her hand, and her left wrist caught the green light again. The scar looked almost like a punctuation mark. “You owe me,” she said. Silas’s throat moved as he swallowed. “I know.” Aurora leaned in. “Don’t make it speeches.” Silas’s expression tightened, then relaxed into something that looked like steadiness returning. “Then ask,” he said. Aurora opened her mouth and shut it again. The questions clustered and jostled—things about Evan, about the night she’d left, about the way some doors refused to open even when she kicked them with both feet. Instead she asked the one that fit the shape of the room. “Why did you keep the Nest?” she asked. “After you retired. After you took the safest path you could think of.” Silas glanced toward the maps, then back. “Because people came here,” he said. “And when people come, they leave something behind. A secret. A name. A chance to help without asking the world for permission.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “And you let me leave something behind too?” Silas’s voice came softer. “You did it without knowing.” Aurora’s fingers tightened on the edge of the bar. “What did I leave?” she asked. Silas looked at her for a long moment. Then he lifted his right hand slightly, the signet ring catching light as if it had its own pulse. “You left the part of me that still believed you could be more than what people did to you,” he said. “You left it in the stairwell. In the way you stood up when you should’ve stayed down.” His gaze stayed locked on hers. “And you left the regret that won’t stop chewing.” Aurora swallowed. She looked away for a second, at a photograph on the wall—two men in old coats, faces half-shadowed. Then she looked back at Silas. “You talk like that now,” she said. “Like you don’t want anything from me.” Silas held her gaze. “I didn’t want anything,” he said. “I wanted to admit something and get out of your way.” Aurora’s brows drew together. “Admit what?” Silas’s mouth pressed into a line, then loosened. “That I should’ve looked harder,” he said. “Not for a chance to pull you back. For a chance to keep you out of the harm that followed.” Aurora’s jaw worked. She stayed silent long enough that the bar’s clinks turned into a background rhythm. Then she pushed herself up from the bar, slow, controlled. Her delivery jacket slid on her shoulders. “You looked harder tonight,” she said. Silas’s eyes tracked her movement. “You walked in.” Aurora picked up her bag and adjusted the strap across her chest. The green neon painted the inside of her collar. “Eva texts,” she said. “You listen. That’s your whole plan.” Silas’s mouth turned up at one corner. “It’s not a plan. It’s habit.” Aurora looked at his leg, then his ring, then his face again. Her voice stayed flat but the edges of it trembled. “You’re changed,” she said. Silas didn’t deny it. “So are you.” Aurora’s eyes flashed. “I’m still the same person.” Silas shook his head, careful with the limp. “You don’t flinch the way you did,” he said. “You carry your anger with clean hands now. That’s new.” Aurora stared at him. She felt the old reflex to argue. It didn’t come. Instead she felt something like tiredness settle in her bones. She shifted her weight toward the door. The green neon tugged at her again, pulling her gaze to the entrance. “Alright,” she said. “You can admit your regret. I can admit I still remember.” Silas watched her like he wanted to say something and knew saying it would cost him. Aurora nodded once toward the bar shelves. “You’ve got a bookshelf back there.” Silas’s eyes cut to it. “You noticed.” “It’s hard not to,” Aurora replied. She adjusted her bag, then faced him fully. “If you’re going to talk, you talk now. No secret room. No disappearing act.” Silas held her gaze. His hand rested on the bar near the ring, but he didn’t touch it. “I can do now,” he said. “What do you want to know?” Aurora’s mouth opened. She stopped herself, looked at his face again, and let her next words come out clean. “I want you to tell me why you didn’t come down when I moved in above your bar,” she said. “After you heard my door. After you heard the mornings.” Silas’s expression tightened, and he looked away for half a beat—just long enough to feel like a confession caught in his teeth. Then he looked back at her. “Because I thought if I stepped into your life again,” he said, “I’d break whatever fragile thing you built.” He swallowed. “And I didn’t want to be the reason you had to run again.” Aurora stood still. Her blue eyes held his hazel ones without blinking. “You thought wrong,” she said. Silas’s jaw flexed. “I know.” Aurora took a breath, then let it out slow. She pointed at his signet ring. “And you wore that like armour,” she said. “So you wouldn’t have to touch the ugly parts.” Silas’s gaze dropped to the ring. He rolled his right hand slightly, and the ring rotated under the light. “I wore it because it kept me steady,” he said. Aurora leaned in a fraction, voice sharper now. “You wanted to stay in control,” she said. “Even when control got you people hurt.” Silas didn’t answer with a defence. He nodded once, accepting the hit. “Yeah,” he said. “I did.” Aurora straightened. She looked around the bar again, at the maps, the photographs, the quiet patrons who didn’t know they sat inside someone’s strategy. “Tell me,” she said. “Right now. Do you still keep a list?” Silas’s eyes narrowed, and his mouth tightened. “A list of what?” he asked. “A list of names,” Aurora replied. “The kind of names you used to pull from thin air like they were facts.” Silas stared at her, then exhaled through his nose. “Not tonight,” he said. Aurora’s face hardened. “You could’ve said that years ago.” Silas met her glare without flinching. “I said a lot of things,” he replied. “I didn’t say the important one. The one where I admit I messed up.” Aurora’s shoulders fell a millimetre. The anger shifted again, making space for something more complicated to breathe. “Fine,” she said. “Then admit it properly.” Silas’s signet ring caught light when his hand lifted and stopped halfway. “I messed up,” he said. “I left you with silence when you deserved presence. I chose my fear over your safety. I let time turn it into a story instead of a moment where I could’ve fixed something.” Aurora’s eyes burned. She forced herself to keep her voice steady. “And you didn’t,” she said. Silas looked at her like he wanted to argue, then decided against it. “No,” he answered. “I didn’t.” Aurora turned her head toward the entrance, toward the green neon and the street beyond it. Her jaw worked, grinding the inside of her mouth against words she refused to give shape to yet. Silas waited. His voice stayed quiet, but it didn’t shrink. “Do you want me to say it again?” he asked. Aurora didn’t look back at him at once. She adjusted her bag strap with careful hands, then faced him. “I wanted you to say it when it mattered,” she said. “Not when it turns into something I can’t unhear.” Silas nodded once, as if he’d expected that exact cruelty. Aurora held his gaze for a final beat, then spoke before the moment could curdle further. “Eva says you’re the person I should talk to,” she said. “So I’m here.” Silas’s expression softened, and the tilt of his head carried a weight he couldn’t polish away. “Then talk,” he said. “I’ll listen.” Aurora lifted her left wrist slightly, showing the crescent scar under the bar’s light. “Start with this,” she said. “Why did you keep quiet when I needed you most?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags103
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stopped then [then]"
dialogueSentences221
tagDensity0.466
leniency0.932
rawRatio0.01
effectiveRatio0.009
95.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4163
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4163
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count6
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"measured"
count2
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"warmth"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"measured"
7"tension"
8"flickered"
9"eyebrow"
10"footsteps"
11"pulse"
12"trembled"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count5
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences364
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences364
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences482
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4151
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions125
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions156
wordCount2594
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Aurora80
Silas72
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
67.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences182
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"something like sympathy tried to stand up, t"
1"looked like pain"
2"felt like someone reading a bruise out"
3"quite laughter, wasn’t quite disbelief"
4"quite disbelief"
5"looked like steadiness returning"
6"something like tiredness settle in her bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4151
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences482
matches
0"expected that detail"
1"remembered that detail"
2"accepted that rhythm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs248
mean16.74
std11.32
cv0.676
sampleLengths
069
166
227
351
426
58
61
729
88
916
1017
1145
1216
1312
142
157
1630
178
1836
197
208
2128
2217
237
2421
258
2643
2710
288
2914
3018
3118
3211
3332
343
357
3614
3735
3817
397
4021
418
4213
439
4423
4515
4610
4714
4833
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences364
matches
0"been poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs585
matches(empty)
71.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences482
ratio0.025
matches
0"Inside, the air held old beer, wet wool, and something sharper—citrus oil rubbing into dark wood."
1"The limp sat under his stance; it showed when he shifted his weight, not when he stood still."
2"Silas’s expression shifted—something like sympathy tried to stand up, then sat back down when it met the weight in her voice."
3"Not at her—at the past."
4"The limp didn’t announce itself—time did, in the small adjustments, in the careful weight distribution that didn’t happen when men were young."
5"Silas’s expression twisted—rage at himself, maybe, or grief given a shape."
6"Her mind reached for the old vocabulary—safe houses, movements, contacts—and hit the snag of how those words now lived in her body as tension."
7"Aurora followed his glance and resisted the urge to touch the trigger of old habits—checking exits, mapping routes."
8"She glanced at the nearest patron—two men arguing quietly over football and another customer tapping ash from a cigarette into a tray."
9"The questions clustered and jostled—things about Evan, about the night she’d left, about the way some doors refused to open even when she kicked them with both feet."
10"She looked away for a second, at a photograph on the wall—two men in old coats, faces half-shadowed."
11"Silas’s expression tightened, and he looked away for half a beat—just long enough to feel like a confession caught in his teeth."
93.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2610
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount123
adverbRatio0.047126436781609195
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.005747126436781609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences482
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences482
mean8.61
std5.76
cv0.669
sampleLengths
016
116
27
311
419
512
69
712
833
96
1021
1116
127
1310
1418
1513
1613
178
181
199
2020
217
221
235
2411
256
2611
278
2812
297
3018
316
3210
3312
342
353
364
3713
3817
395
403
418
4228
437
448
4510
4618
475
4812
495
42.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.14730290456431536
totalSentences482
uniqueOpeners71
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount11
totalSentences262
matches
0"Bright blue eyes scanned the"
1"Then he looked at her"
2"Then she frowned at herself"
3"Finally he spoke."
4"Then she straightened, like she’d"
5"Instead she asked the one"
6"Then he lifted his right"
7"Then she looked back at"
8"Then she pushed herself up"
9"Instead she felt something like"
10"Then he looked back at"
ratio0.042
93.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount83
totalSentences262
matches
0"Her delivery jacket hung open"
1"She kept her shoulders steady"
2"He didn’t look up at"
3"He just kept polishing until"
4"His beard matched his grey-streaked"
5"She looked at the bar’s"
6"She cut herself off"
7"His shoulders loosened a fraction."
8"He wiped his hands on"
9"She watched him instead of"
10"She had the urge to"
11"He finally pushed the towel"
12"His signet ring sat on"
13"She didn’t like how her"
14"She’d imagined him older."
15"She hadn’t prepared for him"
16"he corrected, then watched her"
17"He didn’t hide it."
18"He let the moment show."
19"She caught it before it"
ratio0.317
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount244
totalSentences262
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest sat under"
1"Maps covered the walls in"
2"Aurora Carter crossed the room"
3"Her delivery jacket hung open"
4"She kept her shoulders steady"
5"He didn’t look up at"
6"He just kept polishing until"
7"Hazel eyes held her like"
8"His beard matched his grey-streaked"
9"The limp sat under his"
10"Aurora stopped with one hand"
11"A crescent scar on her"
12"The man’s mouth opened, closed,"
13"Aurora’s throat tightened around a"
14"She looked at the bar’s"
15"She cut herself off"
16"His shoulders loosened a fraction."
17"He wiped his hands on"
18"Aurora leaned against the edge"
19"The green neon traced her"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences97
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs stared from frames that had dulled at the corners."
1"Bright blue eyes scanned the bar, then the shelves behind it, then the signet ring on the man polishing the same glass again and again, as if the motion could s…"
2"He wiped his hands on a towel that had seen years."
3"The limp didn’t announce itself—time did, in the small adjustments, in the careful weight distribution that didn’t happen when men were young."
4"She felt the old anger shift into something heavier, something that didn’t have a target."
5"Silas’s expression tightened, then relaxed into something that looked like steadiness returning."
6"Then he lifted his right hand slightly, the signet ring catching light as if it had its own pulse."
7"She looked around the bar again, at the maps, the photographs, the quiet patrons who didn’t know they sat inside someone’s strategy."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags103
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags96
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"Aurora snapped (snap)"
2"he confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences221
tagDensity0.434
leniency0.869
rawRatio0.031
effectiveRatio0.027
81.7774%