Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09518P02CXHK4GQQ8614AE

Run Details

Duration:
21.8s
Cost:
$0.001129
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest's door swung wide, carrying the wet bite of London night into its warm, amber glow. The usual Thursday crowd hummed—low laughter, clinking glass, the lazy shuffle of feet against worn floorboards. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, shaking rain from her black jacket before stepping inside. She hadn’t planned on stopping. Just needed a quick beer to shake the chill before heading back to the flat over this very bar. But the smell hit her first: stale beer, fried food from Golden Empress downstairs, and that faint, sharp tang of gun oil Silas swore wasn’t his anymore. Her eyes flicked to the long oak counter, half-expecting the old man in a rumpled waistcoat. His back was turned, pulling a glass from the shelf. No limp in his stride, though—too fluid, too practised. Then he turned, and she froze mid-step. The years had not just lined Silas Blackwood’s face. They had carved new shadows into it. The beard was greyer, streaked with silver, and his once-broad shoulders now carried a quiet weight, like a coat settled for long wear. His hazel eyes, still sharp as broken glass, locked onto hers before she could look away. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat but she lifted her chin. “Silas.” He didn’t speak. Not at first. Just set the glass down, wiped his hands on a towel, and looked at her—as if measuring the distance between then and now. “Rory,” he said finally. “Didn’t expect to see you here.” “Didn’t expect to be here,” she admitted. The bar’s green neon flickered like a dying heartbeat above the door. She felt every year between them press against her ribs. Silas leaned against the counter. “Still cutting through London like a shadow at midnight?” “Someone’s got to keep the wheels greased.” A dry smile touched his mouth. “Used to.” “Yeah. You too.” The silence settled again. Thick. Unspoken. She slipped onto a stool, peeled off her gloves. The scar on her wrist—small crescent moon—itched under her sleeve. Childhood. Before everything changed. Silas caught Eva’s eye at the far end of the bar. A silent nod. A moment later, a pint appeared in front of Rory—untouched, even unordered. She exhaled. “You remember my order.” “You haven’t changed it, have you?” “Guess not.” He poured his own drink—a neat whiskey, no water, no ice. The way he used to. The way no one else did. “Last time we spoke,” she said, “you told me never to come back.” “Did I?” “Said London was a viper’s nest and I was walking right into it.” Silas swirled the whiskey. “Sound advice.” “Didn’t take it.” “No. You never did.” The words hung. Not an accusation. Just fact. Rory wrapped her hands around the pint. “Eva told me you retired.” “Officially.” “Unofficially?” He tapped the counter. “Still dance with the devil when he comes calling.” “And he still comes?” “Every now and then.” She drank. The beer was cold, bitter. “That happen often?” “Less than it used to.” Another pause. A photo on the wall shifted slightly in the draft—a 1980s snapshot of a younger Silas with three others, all grinning, one holding a rifle. Rory stared. “You ever miss it?” she asked. “The life.” Silas took a slow sip. “Miss the cover of a mission? The rush of not knowing if I’d walk out alive?” He shook his head. “I miss being useful. After Prague, the world felt smaller. Quieter.” Rory traced condensation down her glass. “I ran.” “To London.” “From Evan.” Silas stilled. “The barrister’s son. The one who liked to throw his weight around.” “Used to.” “Used to?” A flicker of something dark crossed his face. “Still?” “No. But he didn’t take it well.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “I could’ve made sure he did.” She looked up. “You’ve still got the knife skills?” “Some.” “Not all?” “Knife’s for close work. Men like him…” He drummed fingers on the bar. “Leave scars. But they don’t always show.” Rory nodded. She knew. Silas leaned in. “You ever think about going back?” “To Cardiff?” “To finish what you started.” “Which was what? Another year in lectures? Another beating for standing up for myself?” She laughed, sharp. “I left because I didn’t want to be there. Because every day I stayed, I felt like I was shrinking.” Silas studied her. “Did you find what you wanted here?” She gestured around. “A flat. A job. A friend who didn’t flinch when I showed up at her door three days after arriving with nothing but a black eye and a suitcase.” “That’s something.” “It’s not…” Rory hesitated. “It’s not running a spy ring.” Silas chuckled. Low. Fond. “No. It’s not.” The weight between them shifted. Rory swallowed. “You ever wonder if we stayed on track, we’d be different? Better?” “Better than what?” “I don’t know. Two lonely ghosts in London, making do.” For a second, he looked older. Vulnerable. A man who’d seen too much to pretend life was simple. “Rory,” he said quietly, “life isn’t a straight line. It’s a mess of paths taken, doors closed, storms weathered. You didn’t stay. I didn’t quit. Maybe that’s the difference.” She traced the rim of her glass. “I used to think we were fearless.” “We were,” he said. “Just not in the way we thought.” Silas reached beneath the bar and pulled out a worn leather-bound book. Thick. Its cover cracked with use. “What’s that?” she asked. “Record. Every person who walked into The Raven’s Nest who didn’t want to be remembered.” He slid it toward her. “Names, faces, debts. Secrets kept.” Rory didn’t touch it. “You still keeping the world’s secrets?” “Only the ones worth keeping.” He tapped the cover. “Your name’s not in it. Never was.” She met his eyes. Clear. Steady. “Why not?” “Because you never belonged to the shadows. Even when you wanted to.” Silas closed the book and set it aside. He poured her another half-pint without asking. Outside, the rain had eased to a murmur on the pavement. Rory took a slow sip. The beer went down smooth. “You ever think about reopening the safe house?” she asked. Silas’s eyes gleamed. “Old habits die hard.” “Might need a runner.” “Or someone who knows London like the back of her hand.” She smirked. “You saying what I think you’re saying?” “Depends. You still got that delivery bike?” “Broke down twice last week.” “Two days ago, a van full of counterfeit bills rolled into Whitechapel.” Rory set her glass down. Silas added, “They’re using Golden Empress as the drop.” She didn’t blink. “Eva know?” “She called me.” A long breath. The neon sign buzzed. “Silas,” she said, “what are you asking?” He leaned in, voice low. “Same thing I always did.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.049
91.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"traced"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"flicked"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"dance"
8"traced"
9"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1123
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount621
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.58
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Thursday1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas16
Blackwood1
Eva1
Rory12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.212
windowScore0
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if measuring the distance between then and now"
1"appeared in front of Rory—untouched, even unordered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1123
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean11.82
std11.7
cv0.99
sampleLengths
051
167
226
355
412
529
610
729
814
97
108
113
126
1323
1426
156
166
172
1822
1913
202
2113
226
233
244
258
2612
271
281
2913
304
314
3210
335
3429
358
3636
378
382
392
4014
412
4211
437
449
459
461
472
4820
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"was turned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
23.10% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences167
ratio0.042
matches
0"The usual Thursday crowd hummed—low laughter, clinking glass, the lazy shuffle of feet against worn floorboards."
1"No limp in his stride, though—too fluid, too practised."
2"Just set the glass down, wiped his hands on a towel, and looked at her—as if measuring the distance between then and now."
3"The scar on her wrist—small crescent moon—itched under her sleeve."
4"A moment later, a pint appeared in front of Rory—untouched, even unordered."
5"He poured his own drink—a neat whiskey, no water, no ice."
6"A photo on the wall shifted slightly in the draft—a 1980s snapshot of a younger Silas with three others, all grinning, one holding a rifle."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount634
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"worn leather-bound book."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03943217665615142
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00473186119873817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean6.72
std5.77
cv0.858
sampleLengths
018
116
217
35
419
527
616
710
89
97
109
117
1223
1316
1411
151
163
173
1823
194
206
217
2212
2310
245
259
267
276
282
293
304
311
321
339
3410
351
363
3711
383
3912
402
414
426
432
4411
455
466
4713
482
4913
65.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.41916167664670656
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners70
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just needed a quick beer"
1"Then he turned, and she"
2"Just set the glass down,"
ratio0.041
83.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences73
matches
0"She hadn’t planned on stopping."
1"Her eyes flicked to the"
2"His back was turned, pulling"
3"They had carved new shadows"
4"His hazel eyes, still sharp"
5"He didn’t speak."
6"he said finally"
7"She felt every year between"
8"She slipped onto a stool,"
9"He poured his own drink—a"
10"He tapped the counter."
11"He shook his head"
12"She looked up."
13"He drummed fingers on the"
14"She laughed, sharp"
15"She gestured around."
16"he said quietly"
17"She traced the rim of"
18"Its cover cracked with use."
19"He slid it toward her"
ratio0.342
28.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Raven's Nest's door swung"
1"The usual Thursday crowd hummed—low"
2"Rory adjusted the strap of"
3"She hadn’t planned on stopping."
4"Her eyes flicked to the"
5"His back was turned, pulling"
6"The years had not just"
7"They had carved new shadows"
8"The beard was greyer, streaked"
9"His hazel eyes, still sharp"
10"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
11"He didn’t speak."
12"he said finally"
13"The bar’s green neon flickered"
14"She felt every year between"
15"Silas leaned against the counter."
16"A dry smile touched his"
17"The silence settled again."
18"She slipped onto a stool,"
19"The scar on her wrist—small"
ratio0.863
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Before everything changed."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She laughed, sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"Silas added (add)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.134
leniency0.268
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.073
83.3572%