Run: 2026-03-18-01KM096J2YRM0Z1Z5DNHPB433S

Run Details

Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.001463
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green sign flickered like a dying firefly as Rory pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest. The scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke hit her first—thick, familiar, ancient. She exhaled the evening’s damp London air behind her and let the door swing shut, seal away the cold. The bar hummed with the low thrum of hushed conversation and clinking glasses, the usual evening crowd—locals drowning their quiet sorrows or celebrating loud victories. Rory scanned the faces, half-expecting something, some ghost of memory, though she hadn’t set foot here in nearly four years. Not since she left Cardiff for good. Then she saw him. Silas stood behind the counter, wiping a glass with a rag that had seen better days. His auburn hair, now threaded with silver, caught the dim amber light like autumn leaves in twilight. His back was turned, shoulders broader than she remembered, but the limp was unmistakable—the slight drag in his step as he shifted his weight. She watched as he reached for a bottle on the top shelf, the movement effortless despite the years. Rory hesitated. The years had carved new lines into his face, deepened the ones she already knew. Time had been a sculptor with Silas—unrelenting, precise. She hadn’t planned to come in. She was just passing, heading upstairs to her flat above the bar, when the cold made her crave warmth. But now she stood frozen, the ghost of an old life wrapping around her ankles like a shroud. Silas glanced up, as if he’d felt the weight of her stare. Their eyes locked. A pause. Then recognition. His hand stilled on the rag. One eyebrow lifted, barely, a question already forming. Not of who she was—but of why she was here. After years. Rory swallowed. Her fingers curled into her palm, the old scar on her wrist pressing against her skin like a brand. She walked forward. The floorboards creaked under her boots, the sound too loud in the quiet between them. Silas set the glass down slowly. A customer at the bar—a broad-shouldered man in a leather jacket—glanced between them, then melted back into the haze of drink and smoke. “You’re late,” Silas said. Rory stopped a few feet from the counter. It sounded like an old joke. Like the world hadn’t shifted on its axis in the years they’d been apart. “I wasn’t coming to meet anyone,” she replied. A faint smile touched the corner of his mouth. “No. You never were.” Silence settled again, thick as the smoke curling from a forgotten ember. Rory pulled out a stool and sat, her coat rustling like autumn leaves against vinyl. She unzipped her jacket slowly, revealing a fitted black turtleneck beneath—simple, no nonsense. No flair. Not like she used to wear. Back then, she’d had a style, bright colors, bold prints. Now she dressed like she was trying not to be seen, even by herself. Silas leaned forward, hands planted on the bar. The silver ring on his right hand caught the light as he tapped it once against the wood, a rhythm she recognized. A code, a habit. “You look different,” he said. “You too.” “Not like that.” She exhaled through her nose. “I changed my name.” Silas tilted his head slightly. “Laila?” She nodded. “Rory the delivery kid doesn’t fit in London.” “No. You were always more than delivery.” “Was I?” That got his attention. His hazel eyes sharpened, like they used to when he was piecing together a fragment of intel. “You fled Cardiff in the middle of the night. Left law school. Left your father’s expectations. That takes a kind of clarity.” “Or cowardice.” He didn’t flinch. “Maybe both.” Rory looked down at the bar’s polished mahogany surface. A name was carved there—*Vivian, 1998*—her finger traced the grooves without thinking. “I didn’t just change my name,” she said quietly. “I changed everything.” Silas waited. She lifted her head. “I cut ties. All of them. Even—” The word stuck in her throat. Even Eva. Her best friend. The one who’d saved her, who’d said *Come to London, Rory, you don’t have to go back.* And she had. And then she’d vanished, rewritten herself, lost touch. No calls. No letters. Just silence. Silas didn’t push. He never did. Instead, he reached under the bar and pulled out two glasses. A familiar ritual. He poured two fingers of something dark into each. Whiskey. No ice. Ice kills the soul of the drink, he’d once told her. She didn’t disagree. He slid one her way. She took it. “To time,” he said, raising his glass just slightly. “Time,” she repeated, and they clinked glasses. The whiskey burned all the way down, like the echo of a mistake. She set the glass down. “I saw Evan.” Silas didn’t move. But the air between them grew denser, heavier. “Where?” “Cardiff. About a year ago. He was outside my old flat. I froze. He just looked... older. Softer. Not the monster I remembered.” “Monsters don’t stay monsters,” Silas said quietly. “They just learn better masks.” Rory stared into her glass. “I didn’t say anything. Didn’t call the police. I just walked away.” “Would it have changed anything?” “No.” “So why tell me?” “Because it still feels like a weight I’m carrying alone.” Silas exhaled, slow. “You were always good at carrying weights others couldn’t see. But you didn’t have to carry them forever.” She looked up sharply. “You don’t know that.” “I know you, Rory. Or—Rory. Or Laila. Or whatever name you go by these days.” She flinched at the name, the third one rolling off his tongue like an accusation. She curled her fingers around the glass again. “He said something. Evan. He said I ran because I was weak.” Silas’ expression darkened. “Bastard.” “No. He wasn’t lying. Not about that.” “Then he’s still hurting you.” “No,” she said. “I hurt myself. I left. Not him. Me. I let him define me for too long. And then I let fear define me after.” Silas exhaled like she’d taken the air from the room. “Fear’s a liar. Always has been.” “Not always.” “Yes. Even when it feels true.” She wanted to believe him. Wanted to let the words settle, melt into her bones. But the past was a room she’d locked and thrown away the key. She switched subjects abruptly. “Do you still run the back meetings? The ones with the agents and the cutouts?” Silas studied her. Then nodded. “Occasionally. When someone trusts the right shadows.” “You ever think about leaving it all behind?” He chuckled, low and rough. “And do what? Run a flower shop in Notting Hill? Teach knitting?” “It beats waiting for the past to bite you in the dark.” Silas turned to the shelf behind him, polished the same glass again. “The past doesn’t bite. It just watches. Always watching.” She shivered despite the heat of the bar. “Why’d you come tonight, Rory?” The name hung between them again, smaller now, almost tender. “I don’t know,” she said. “Maybe I was hungry.” He smirked. “You’re not here for food.” “No.” Silas leaned in, just slightly. “You want to know if it’s still there. The world you left. The person you were.” She didn’t answer. But her silence was answer enough. He folded the rag and placed it carefully on the bar. “It’s still here,” he said. “But not like you remember. Cardiff’s the same street angles, the same rain, the same ghosts. But you’re not the girl who walked those streets anymore. And that’s not a bad thing.” “Feels like forgetting.” “Not forgetting. Releasing.” She closed her eyes briefly. “You ever miss it?” she asked. “The life. The—what did you call it? The work.” Silas picked up his glass, swirled the whiskey. “Sometimes. The puzzle of it. The ones and zeros of truth. But not the price.” “What’s the price?” He looked at her then, really looked. “Losing pieces of yourself. Or realizing you already have.” The words settled into her like stones in a breast pocket. Above them, the green sign buzzed, flickering in rhythm with the pulse of blood in her ears. “You ever sleep?” she asked. “Some nights.” “Nightmares?” “Every night.” She almost laughed. “Same.” Silas reached out, not touching her, but close enough she could feel the warmth radiating off him. “You’re here now.” “I am.” “Does that mean something?” She picked up her glass, drained the last drop. “It means I’m not running,” she said. “Not tonight.” Silas nodded. Almost smiled. Behind them, a glass broke on the floor. Someone laughed. The world kept spinning. Rory stood, pulled on her coat. Silas watched. “You heading up?” he asked. She nodded toward the ceiling. “My flat’s still there.” “It’s yours as long as rent’s paid.” “Good to know.” She turned to leave. Silas cleared his throat. “Rory.” She paused. “You don’t have to stay in London.” She almost smiled. “Where would I go?” “Anywhere.” She thought of Cardiff’s damp stone streets, the taste of salt on the wind, the ghost of Evan’s voice in empty hallways. Thought of Eva’s laugh, still ringing in her memory like a lost bell. “Not yet,” she said. Silas dipped his chin. She pushed out into the cold, the green sign flickering behind her, dying, reviving, dying again. The night swallowed her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.049
74.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1566
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
3"carefully"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1566
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"weight"
4"effortless"
5"warmth"
6"eyebrow"
7"silence"
8"traced"
9"echo"
10"pulse"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords12
totalWords1556
ratio0.008
matches
0"Vivian, 1998" 1/1/1998, 12:00:00 AM
1"Come to London, Rory, you don’t have to go back."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1062
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Cardiff2
Silas22
Eva2
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.464
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like an old joke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.643
wordCount1556
matches
0"not touching her, but close enough she could feel the warmth radiating off him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs123
mean12.65
std13.78
cv1.089
sampleLengths
050
152
24
375
468
512
63
72
82
926
1021
113
1244
134
1428
158
1613
1712
1860
1934
205
212
223
239
246
2510
267
272
2843
292
305
3121
3212
332
3411
356
362
3737
386
3940
405
413
429
437
4413
458
4611
471
4823
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was just passing"
1"was trying"
2"was piecing"
31.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences206
ratio0.039
matches
0"The scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke hit her first—thick, familiar, ancient."
1"The bar hummed with the low thrum of hushed conversation and clinking glasses, the usual evening crowd—locals drowning their quiet sorrows or celebrating loud victories."
2"His back was turned, shoulders broader than she remembered, but the limp was unmistakable—the slight drag in his step as he shifted his weight."
3"Time had been a sculptor with Silas—unrelenting, precise."
4"Not of who she was—but of why she was here."
5"A customer at the bar—a broad-shouldered man in a leather jacket—glanced between them, then melted back into the haze of drink and smoke."
6"She unzipped her jacket slowly, revealing a fitted black turtleneck beneath—simple, no nonsense."
7"A name was carved there—*Vivian, 1998*—her finger traced the grooves without thinking."
90.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount965
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.05077720207253886
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010362694300518135
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean7.55
std5.99
cv0.794
sampleLengths
018
113
219
325
420
57
64
716
817
924
1018
112
1215
138
146
1519
1618
1712
183
192
202
216
228
2310
242
252
2619
273
2815
296
3023
314
328
336
3414
358
369
374
3812
3915
4013
412
426
4310
4414
458
4622
474
485
492
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32038834951456313
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners66
62.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Instead, he reached under the"
ratio0.019
55.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences107
matches
0"She exhaled the evening’s damp"
1"His auburn hair, now threaded"
2"His back was turned, shoulders"
3"She watched as he reached"
4"She hadn’t planned to come"
5"She was just passing, heading"
6"Their eyes locked."
7"His hand stilled on the"
8"Her fingers curled into her"
9"She walked forward."
10"It sounded like an old"
11"She unzipped her jacket slowly,"
12"She exhaled through her nose."
13"His hazel eyes sharpened, like"
14"He didn’t flinch."
15"she said quietly"
16"She lifted her head."
17"Her best friend."
18"He never did."
19"He poured two fingers of"
ratio0.411
48.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green sign flickered like"
1"The scent of aged whiskey"
2"She exhaled the evening’s damp"
3"The bar hummed with the"
4"Rory scanned the faces, half-expecting"
5"Silas stood behind the counter,"
6"His auburn hair, now threaded"
7"His back was turned, shoulders"
8"She watched as he reached"
9"The years had carved new"
10"Time had been a sculptor"
11"She hadn’t planned to come"
12"She was just passing, heading"
13"Silas glanced up, as if"
14"Their eyes locked."
15"His hand stilled on the"
16"Her fingers curled into her"
17"She walked forward."
18"The floorboards creaked under her"
19"Silas set the glass down"
ratio0.822
46.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Now she dressed like she"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.025
84.5374%