| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.304 | | leniency | 0.609 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "fluttered" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "shattered" | | 8 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1292 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "inward" | | 1 | "sucked" | | 2 | "through" | | 3 | "dilated" | | 4 | "knot" | | 5 | "them that open doors" | | 6 | "pulled" |
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| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The edges were still sharp, the ink wet enough that if Harlow breathed too hard, she swore she could catch the acrid tan…" |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 920 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 15 | | Quinn | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Met | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Eva | 10 | | Oliver | 1 | | St | 1 | | Dunstan | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Twelve | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Met" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Oliver" | | 6 | "Dunstan" | | 7 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.685 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like they’d been scribed by a hand" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1292 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 36.91 | | std | 30.08 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 131 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 95 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 82 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 83 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 6 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been scribed" | | 1 | "was woven" | | 2 | "were *dilated" | | 3 | "been labelled" |
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| 74.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "wasn’t laughing" | | 2 | "wasn’t calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit first—a reek of burnt copper and old wet earth—nothing she recognised from her twenty years on the force." | | 1 | "And there—spread out like a child’s forgotten toys—a scatter of items that made her stomach tighten: bundles of dried herbs tied with copper wire, flagons stoppered with wax that bled red, and in the centre, half-buried in grime, a brass compass the colour of a bruise, its face etched with sigils that looked like they’d been scribed by a hand that didn’t know fear." | | 2 | "The casing had the patina of verdigris but deeper, richer—something older than the green of copper." | | 3 | "The needle inside hadn’t settled; it juddered in place like a trapped thing." | | 4 | "DS Oliver had called it in: 22F, early twenties, found slumped against the emergency exit stairwell, skin tone ashen, pupils vertical slits in the dim light—cat’s eyes, they’d written." | | 5 | "The pupils weren’t just vertical—they were *dilated* vertically, two narrow flicks of pupil against milky sclera." | | 6 | "The edges were still sharp, the ink wet enough that if Harlow breathed too hard, she swore she could catch the acrid tang of ritual ink—bone ash and pomegranate." | | 7 | "Not a tattoo—burned in with a hot poker during the fire at St Dunstan’s." | | 8 | "The bodies had been labelled “precinct fodder” by her superiors—clean cases, no overtime." | | 9 | "Eva’s hand clamped her shoulder—gentle but urgent." | | 10 | "The spiral on her wrist pulsed—once, faintly—like a heartbeat just below the threshold of hearing." | | 11 | "The needle hung between two norths—human and other." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 938 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inside thin black nitrile," |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.02771855010660981 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005330490405117271 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 10.44 | | cv | 0.889 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 46.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.34545454545454546 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the dark, water" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "It shimmered when she passed," | | 1 | "She flexed her fingers inside" | | 2 | "She didn’t believe in overdoses" | | 3 | "She reached out, then stopped." | | 4 | "They were cracked *inward*, spirals" | | 5 | "She tapped a gloved finger" | | 6 | "She didn’t like the direction" | | 7 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 8 | "She didn’t like that Eva" | | 9 | "She walked toward the body." | | 10 | "She didn’t need to look" | | 11 | "It was woven *through* the" | | 12 | "She reached for her notebook" | | 13 | "Her pen hovered over the" | | 14 | "It was a *knot*." | | 15 | "She still had it in" | | 16 | "She’d filed those cases." | | 17 | "She stood, boots crunching on" | | 18 | "She picked it up between" | | 19 | "She snapped her notebook shut." |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 74.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 1 | "The smell hit first—a reek" | | 2 | "It shimmered when she passed," | | 3 | "She flexed her fingers inside" | | 4 | "She didn’t believe in overdoses" | | 5 | "The platform stretched in both" | | 6 | "Caution tape fluttered where it" | | 7 | "Harlow crouched, her knees popping," | | 8 | "The casing had the patina" | | 9 | "The needle inside hadn’t settled;" | | 10 | "She reached out, then stopped." | | 11 | "The sigils weren’t worn smooth." | | 12 | "They were cracked *inward*, spirals" | | 13 | "Eva’s voice came from behind," | | 14 | "Harlow didn’t turn." | | 15 | "Eva knelt beside her, her" | | 16 | "She tapped a gloved finger" | | 17 | "Harlow’s jaw tightened." | | 18 | "Eva’s green eyes locked onto" | | 19 | "Harlow stood abruptly, her leather" |
| | ratio | 0.77 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the police cordon like it was a suggestion, not a barrier, her polished shoes crunching on broken tiles that hadn’t seen day…" | | 1 | "Above, the ceiling of the abandoned Tube station flickered under streaks of emergency lighting, the bulbs coated in something that wasn’t dust." | | 2 | "And there—spread out like a child’s forgotten toys—a scatter of items that made her stomach tighten: bundles of dried herbs tied with copper wire, flagons stopp…" | | 3 | "They were cracked *inward*, spirals and star-points fracturing toward the centre like ice on a frozen lake that had been hit from underneath." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.087 | | leniency | 0.174 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |