| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said calmly [calmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.703 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |
| 69.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "lazily" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "charm" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 173 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "EK." | | 1 | "“You’ll never find me here, Har. It’s not safe.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Elias | 1 | | Carter | 14 | | Adam | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Compass | 3 | | London | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Tube" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "Harlow" | | 3 | "Quinn" | | 4 | "Elias" | | 5 | "Carter" | | 6 | "Adam" | | 7 | "Compass" | | 8 | "Kowalski" | | 9 | "Morris" | | 10 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.631 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing something" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 4.622 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "not electric, not exactly warmth, but a slow prickling, like pins" | | 1 | "not exactly warmth, but a slow prickling, like pins" | | 2 | "not from power loss, but as if something was blocking the current" | | 3 | "Not the sound of settling concrete, but something deeper" | | 4 | "not blood, not vomit, but smoke" | | 5 | "not vomit, but smoke" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 82 | | mean | 15.83 | | std | 16.92 | | cv | 1.069 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | |
| 62.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was blocking" | | 1 | "were shaking" | | 2 | "wasn’t just starting" | | 3 | "was ending" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 173 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "The overhead strip lighting flickered—once, twice—like a dying pulse." | | 1 | "Carter turned slowly, his narrow face caught between relief and something else—something cautious." | | 2 | "She didn’t need the Veil Compass here—her instincts were sharp enough." | | 3 | "She felt a faint tingle in her palms—not electric, not exactly warmth, but a slow prickling, like pins and needles from circulation returning." | | 4 | "Embedded in the woman’s chest was a small, yellowed token—carved, not cast." | | 5 | "From the woman’s earlobe hung a tiny silver charm—a crescent moon, worn thin with time." | | 6 | "The needle on the compass twitched violently—pulsing, as if sensing something." | | 7 | "Not the sound of settling concrete, but something deeper—like stone breathing." | | 8 | "The graffiti on the wall rippled, the paint shifting, forming new symbols beneath the spray—sigils Quinn hadn’t seen in years." | | 9 | "In the dark, Quinn heard a whisper—soft, female, familiar." | | 10 | "A laugh—light, amused." | | 11 | "The body of the young woman began to rise—slowly, as if lifted by unseen hands." | | 12 | "And from her lips poured not blood, not vomit, but smoke—black, writhing, forming shapes." | | 13 | "Quinn saw them all—flashbulbs of violence, of betrayal, of loss." | | 14 | "And then—Eva." | | 15 | "And Eva—Eva was the offering." | | 16 | "She holstered the compass and pulled out her radio—still dead." | | 17 | "She felt Eva’s presence like a wound—deep, familiar, aching." | | 18 | "And she knew—this wasn’t a message." |
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| 92.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1056 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.048295454545454544 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017992424242424244 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 173 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 173 | | mean | 7.5 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.814 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 53.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.3930635838150289 | | totalSentences | 173 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a single constable standing" | | 1 | "Then she saw the victim." | | 2 | "Just a body in a" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 99.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "She recognized DS Elias Carter" | | 1 | "she said, voice cutting through" | | 2 | "His Adam’s apple bobbed." | | 3 | "He didn’t laugh." | | 4 | "Her leather watch, its face" | | 5 | "She didn’t need the Veil" | | 6 | "Her left hand clutched a" | | 7 | "She unzipped her forensic suit" | | 8 | "She snapped on gloves." | | 9 | "She felt a faint tingle" | | 10 | "She pulled out the Veil" | | 11 | "Its needle spun wildly, then" | | 12 | "She stood, brushing dirt from" | | 13 | "She knelt again, closer." | | 14 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 15 | "She turned it over." | | 16 | "Her best friend’s initials." | | 17 | "She stood abruptly, the compass" | | 18 | "She holstered the compass" | | 19 | "Her pulse thudded in her" |
| | ratio | 0.301 | |
| 81.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "The Tube tunnels beneath Camden" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully" | | 2 | "The overhead strip lighting flickered—once," | | 3 | "Something was wrong before she" | | 4 | "She recognized DS Elias Carter" | | 5 | "she said, voice cutting through" | | 6 | "Carter turned slowly, his narrow" | | 7 | "His Adam’s apple bobbed." | | 8 | "He didn’t laugh." | | 9 | "Quinn stepped past him, boots" | | 10 | "Her leather watch, its face" | | 11 | "She didn’t need the Veil" | | 12 | "This wasn’t a normal murder" | | 13 | "A young woman, early twenties," | | 14 | "Blood pooled beneath her, dark" | | 15 | "Her left hand clutched a" | | 16 | "The casing had a greenish" | | 17 | "The needle spun lazily, as" | | 18 | "Quinn crouched, careful not to" | | 19 | "Carter said, kneeling beside her" |
| | ratio | 0.756 | |
| 40.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Now one had reached back." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 89.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment she did, the needle snapped to a sharp bearing northwest, toward the tunnels that led deeper into forgotten London." | | 1 | "The needle on the compass twitched violently—pulsing, as if sensing something." | | 2 | "Herself, kneeling in a cellar, pressing her partner’s chest, trying to restart a heart that stopped three years ago." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice cutting through the damp silence" |
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| 68.92% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.216 | | leniency | 0.432 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |