Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09AX9BQ5A9964DXE0HD4D1

Run Details

Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.006802
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had worried the streets above until they shone like bruised metal. Down below, the air changed. It carried that damp, old-stone smell that lived in tunnels and refused fresh air. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through the taped-off mouth of an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden and let her gaze run the platform. The posters that had once promised destinations curled from the tiles. A strip of emergency lighting flickered in jagged pulses along the wall, throwing thin shadows across the tracks. Someone had moved a cluster of evidence bags and a portable lamp straight into the middle of the platform as if they expected the room to behave like a normal crime scene. It didn’t. Quinn’s boots struck loose grit and she held her body still for half a second, listening. The station held silence the way a fist held fingers—tight, controlled. No wind. No distant train. Only the distant drip of water, counted by the light. A thin chalk ring sat near the far end of the platform, almost neat enough to belong to someone tidy. Around it, the surface of the track showed scuffs where metal hadn’t touched. Bits of paper lay scattered like they’d been flung and dropped again, not torn away by weather. Quinn lifted her worn leather watch hand closer to the lamp. The face caught a little glare and then swallowed it. Military precision came from how she didn’t rush the next step. It came from the way she looked at things twice before she asked anyone to explain. “Quinn,” said her colleague, the only person who’d managed to get lower than the platform without sounding like they wanted out. Detective Sergeant Malcolm Venn stood near the evidence bags, collar up, jaw clenched. He leaned into the light as though it could defend him. “We got a body. Unidentified. No ID. No witnesses. You’re here because it doesn’t line up.” Quinn didn’t look at him. She looked at the chalk ring first. “Show me,” she said. Venn gestured toward the far end. His hand hovered over the scene, then stopped short. He kept his distance like the air itself might be fragile. A shape lay beyond the chalk line. The body had been covered with a plastic sheet that clung to the surface of the platform like skin. Someone had tried to fold it away from the face and failed; the edges tugged back, not by wind, but by resistance. Quinn stepped to the chalk. She didn’t cross it. “Why the ring?” she asked. Venn exhaled through his nose. “Standard. Preserve trace. You know the drill.” “That’s not an answer.” Quinn leaned slightly, letting her eyes catch the chalk from an angle. The ring had more than one colour. White chalk at the outer edge. A dull, greenish dust on the inner side, like verdigris scraped from old metal. Quinn pointed. “That.” Venn followed her finger, hesitated, and then nodded. “I thought it looked like mould. Camden’s damp. It gets weird.” Quinn lowered her hand. She’d seen mould ruin scenes. She’d never seen it arrange itself like a boundary. “Any prints?” she asked. “None worth booking.” Venn tilted his head toward a stack of evidence bags. “We did swab everything you’d expect. The scene’s… clean. Too clean.” Quinn finally looked at him. His eyes carried a kind of irritation, like he already disliked whatever she’d find. “Tell me what you think happened,” she said. Venn moved his weight and the lamp cast a long, thin stripe across his shoes. “Someone brought them here. Staged the scene. Then left. No struggle marks. No defensive wounds. No signs of forced entry into the station.” “You didn’t mention the entry,” Quinn said. Venn’s mouth tightened. “Because the entry doesn’t exist. There’s no access point. No one saw anyone come in.” Quinn didn’t ask why he sounded annoyed at that. She watched him anyway. He kept glancing at the far end, where the body lay. Like he wanted to get back to it and like it had started to occupy his mind. A motion caught her eye—small, careful. One of the uniform officers had stepped closer to the evidence bags, then froze. Quinn saw the officer’s attention snag on something near the chalk ring. The officer’s head turned slowly, as if he’d heard a sound no one else had. Quinn walked to the nearest bag. The bag contained a scrap of paper. On it, printed letters ran across the surface in a tight, formal script. Quinn took a gloved finger and lifted the edge of the paper without tearing it. The print looked like standard pamphlet type until she held it under the lamp. Then she saw the shift. The ink didn’t sit on the fibres like normal ink. It looked etched into them. Under the light, thin lines formed and re-formed, like the words were deciding where to land. Venn leaned in behind her shoulder. “That’s nothing. Old flyers. Someone’s been here before.” Quinn tilted the scrap again. Letters came back into focus—addresses, dates, and a phrase repeated at odd intervals. Not in English. Not in any alphabet she wanted to admit she recognised. She could tell it wasn’t printed by a human hand. The spacing felt wrong, like an attempt at imitation. “Where did this come from?” she asked. Venn blinked. “From the ground. We saw it scattered.” “No one’s pocketed paper like that,” Quinn said. “That kind of scrap doesn’t fall like litter. It loses something when it breaks.” “Breaks,” Venn repeated, and there it was—his first real doubt. “So you think—what? A portal? A rift? You’ve been reading too much of those occult blogs.” Quinn’s eyes stayed on the paper. The edges glinted under the lamp, and the glint wasn’t from damp. It was from something thin and metallic lodged between fibres, like someone had pressed foil into the paper while it was still soft. She turned toward the body. The plastic sheet moved under her gaze. Not from wind. From a tension that had direction. Quinn reached for the cover with the back of her glove and drew it aside in a controlled motion. The face beneath looked pale in a way that wasn’t only death. The skin had a dull sheen, as if it had been wiped down. The eyes remained closed, but the lashes looked too neat. Like someone had arranged them. Quinn leaned closer without crossing the chalk ring. She didn’t need to. The throat showed a mark. It ran in a straight line, not a bruise. A thin cut. No blood pooled. No blood smear on the platform. “How long?” Quinn asked. Venn moved beside her, watching her expression like it was a verdict. “Estimated same night. Body’s cold. But it’s… off.” Quinn pointed to the mark. “A knife cut would leave blood.” “No,” Venn said quickly, too quickly. “Or it all dried. The station’s damp. That’s not weird.” Quinn held her gaze on the cut. “Blood dries. It stains. It clings. There isn’t a stain. There’s an absence.” Venn opened his mouth, then shut it again. He glanced toward the chalk ring, the green dust, the scuffed track. Quinn’s attention slid to the body’s left hand. Fingers curled naturally at the knuckles, then tightened as she stared. The hand adjusted under the cover’s shadow, like it had reacted to being exposed. Not a twitch. Not a last spasm. A response. Quinn straightened. Her jawline stayed sharp, her breathing calm. “Bag the paper. Take it away from the platform. Now.” Venn hesitated. “That’s not protocol.” “It’s not standard,” Quinn said. “Do it anyway.” An officer stepped forward to grab the evidence bag. The bag’s seal caught for a second, then slid closed with a stubborn friction that made the officer curse under his breath. Quinn watched the officer’s hands; he didn’t look at the bag again. He looked at the chalk ring like it might lunge. Quinn moved back to the track. The scuff marks along the rail didn’t match boot wear. They weren’t dragging patterns. They sat in narrow bands, as if something had kissed the metal, lifted, then kissed again. In one spot, the scuff carried a sheen. Verdigris. The same dull green dust that lay inside the chalk ring. Quinn crouched. She didn’t touch the dust; she observed the way it sat on the concrete. It hadn’t spread. It sat in a line, and the line curved toward the platform’s edge. A spot where the tiles dipped slightly under the lamp’s angle. Quinn’s voice stayed level. “The ring and the dust aren’t accidental.” Venn crouched too, but he kept a respectful distance from her line of sight. “So what. They used alchemical powder to mark it. That would explain the green.” Quinn looked at him. “You’ve got a colleague’s habit of shrinking mysteries until they fit on a form.” Venn’s cheeks tightened. “You’re the one who thinks everything is supernatural.” Quinn stood and turned her head slowly, letting the station’s details press into her mind. There were no tracks where they should have been. Not physically—everything was still where it belonged—but the arrangement felt wrong. The lamp illuminated a section that shouldn’t have been lit by that power source. The light buzzed in a rhythm that didn’t match the emergency system above. Her partner’s face flashed in her mind for a moment and then backed away, like it had heard her thoughts and refused to come close. She pushed the memory down by focusing on present mechanics. “Where’s your perimeter?” Quinn asked. Venn gestured toward the entrance stairs. “Outside the station. No one’s gone in. No one’s come out.” Quinn nodded once. “Then how did we get access to this place?” Venn looked away. That was the only answer he gave. Quinn watched the motion of his eyes and then followed it. The chalk ring sat near the far wall. Behind it, something dark and narrow ran along the tile gap between wall and floor. Not a crack. Not a stain. A seam. It looked like a join in the world. Quinn stepped toward it. Venn’s hand shot out, not quite grabbing her arm. “Don’t cross,” he said. Quinn stopped short and leaned in, eyes narrowing. “That’s why you made the ring.” “It’s what you do at scenes,” Venn said. His voice carried a defensive edge now. “You don’t go poking at… at seams.” Quinn’s gaze traced the seam’s edge. The seam didn’t shimmer. It didn’t glow. It remained stubbornly real, but around it, the lamp’s beam bent a fraction, like glass. A subtle distortion. Quinn reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small flashlight with a metal casing. She clicked it on, held it near the seam, and watched the beam. The light didn’t scatter. It curved, sliding along the seam like a finger along fabric. “Okay,” Venn murmured. Quinn didn’t answer. She shifted her wrist and brought the leather watch against the light. The watch face caught a greenish tint, a reflection that didn’t belong to the lamp. She turned the flashlight off, then on again, faster this time. The seam absorbed the light, and when Quinn blinked, the seam looked deeper. Quinn exhaled. She hated how her pulse behaved under stress. She controlled it anyway. “Where did the Chalk ring get its green dust?” she asked. Venn swallowed. “When we found the body. It was already there.” Quinn lifted her hand and pointed at the body’s throat mark again. “The cut leaves a missing stain. The dust lines match the scuffs. The seam bends light. Someone staged this using a method that removed traces instead of hiding them.” Venn’s mouth worked. “You think whoever did it… cleaned it with magic.” Quinn shook her head once. “I think whoever did it had access to tools that work on physics instead of blood.” Venn stared at the seam. “Those things don’t exist.” Quinn stepped back and let her eyes take in the entire platform. Near the far wall, between two pillars, sat a small object on the tile. It hadn’t been in view until she’d stopped looking like she was hunting and started looking like the station wanted her to see. A brass compass, patinaed with green. It sat as if it had been dropped, face up. Quinn’s stomach tightened. The watch on her wrist felt heavier than it should. She walked to the object. Venn moved with her this time, close enough that his breath fogged slightly in the damp air. The compass didn’t have a protective glass cover. Its surface wore protective sigils that looked etched deeper than the casing’s patina. The needle trembled. Not from vibration. It trembled as Quinn got closer, pointing toward the seam. Quinn crouched and hovered her gloved hand over it without touching. “Don’t,” Venn said again, harsher. Quinn looked up. “You brought it here.” Venn’s eyes flashed. “I didn’t. The uniforms called you first. Then you asked about evidence.” Quinn returned her gaze to the compass. “Then who did.” Venn’s jaw clenched like it had teeth. “Someone found it on the platform near the body.” Quinn’s voice dropped lower. “Found it and left it face up.” Venn swallowed. “Maybe they didn’t want to touch it.” Quinn’s glove finally touched the compass casing. The metal felt warm. Not body-warm. Warm like it had been held by a living hand. Her palm tingled at the point of contact. The needle spun once. Then locked, pointing not exactly at the seam, but slightly past it, like the seam hid something deeper behind it. Quinn stood slowly. Venn’s eyes tracked the needle movement, and she watched him lose control of his own face—colour draining from his cheeks. “Say it,” Quinn said. Venn’s voice came out small. “That’s… that’s a shadow compass.” Quinn didn’t turn toward him. She kept the compass in both hands like a fragile piece of evidence that could also cut. “You know it.” Venn nodded, then shook his head, then nodded again. “I read about it. Veil Market. Shade artisans. It points toward rifts.” Quinn held the compass steady and moved her stance, testing the needle’s claim. The needle remained consistent, pointing with stubborn certainty toward the seam. This wasn’t a normal crime scene. This wasn’t even a crime scene that had stayed put. It had followed a schedule. It had moved. It had existed beneath the city like a thought you couldn’t shake. Quinn looked back at the seam and felt the air thicken around it, even though nothing changed on the surface. Her skin tightened as if it had learned a new warning. “What happened to the person?” she asked. Venn’s hands hovered near his pockets, useless. “Cause of death says—no blood loss. No trauma beyond the throat cut. It looks staged. Like they wanted it staged.” Quinn lowered the compass slightly toward the green dust line along the concrete. Her breath hitched once, then settled. Verdigris glittered under her light, forming a faint arc that pointed back to the chalk ring and then to the compass. Someone had used the compass to find the seam’s nearest rift, then used the rift to remove what would normally make a body confess itself. She looked at the body’s face one more time. The closed eyes didn’t look calm. They looked paused. Quinn turned to Venn. “Tell me what you did when you arrived.” Venn’s eyes darted toward the entrance stairs. He seemed to calculate distances and blame. “I walked the perimeter. I briefed the uniforms. I didn’t touch anything inside the chalk. I watched the body. I—” “You looked at it,” Quinn interrupted. Venn hesitated. “Yeah.” Quinn’s stare held. “You stood there and looked straight at the throat cut. You didn’t see anything out of place. Then you glanced at the cut and your expression changed.” Venn’s throat bobbed. “How do you know that?” Quinn raised the compass. “Because your eyes kept going back to the seam, then away. You felt the wrongness without naming it.” Venn’s shoulders dropped an inch, like he’d been carrying tension he couldn’t admit. He nodded once. “The cut wasn’t bleeding. It didn’t… it didn’t behave like it should.” Quinn stepped around the chalk ring without crossing it. The seam sat behind her now in her peripheral vision. She didn’t need to touch it. She needed to read what it offered. “Your initial report,” she said. “You wrote ‘no forced entry.’” Venn nodded. “There isn’t one.” Quinn pointed at the entrance. “From outside, you locked down the stairs. You never saw someone come in. So either the station spawned us inside like a trick, or someone used an entry method that doesn’t look like entry.” Venn’s hands curled into fists. “The Veil Market doesn’t use doors.” Quinn met his gaze. “You’re catching up.” Venn’s eyes went to the compass and flinched. “You’re taking it.” “It points to the nearest rift,” Quinn said. She swallowed the urge to sound triumphant. She didn’t have time for emotions that got in the way. “Someone wanted us to find it.” Venn leaned forward. “So you think this is bait.” Quinn watched the lamp’s glow along the seam again. It bent toward it like iron to a magnet. She remembered DS Morris—how he’d looked at a case and insisted the evidence behaved like it had intentions. She remembered the day after, when people described him as though he had been a story that walked away from them. She didn’t let the memory steer her. She used it like a compass itself: a direction for what mattered. “It wasn’t bait for us,” Quinn said. “It was bait for the rift. It set a marker that tells someone where to return.” Venn frowned. “Return?” Quinn didn’t answer him right away. She turned her head slightly and listened again. The station held silence, but now she heard something layered beneath the drip. A faint, rhythmic tapping. Not on metal. Not on stone. On paper. Quinn’s gaze snapped to the scattered flyers on the tiles. Several scraps lay face down. Now, one corner lifted as if a draft moved it. Another scrap slid a few inches, dragging its own dry edge across the grit. The tapping came from among them. Venn stepped back half a pace, and his voice sharpened with panic he couldn’t hide. “That didn’t happen earlier.” “No,” Quinn said, and she didn’t look away from the scraps. She moved the compass needle with her thumb, just enough to see if the needle’s insistence matched the flyers’ movement. The needle stayed locked on the seam. The scraps shifted again, forming a loose line. Letters pressed into the air in black grooves along the tile. Words assembled from ink inside the fibres, as if the paper could write itself when it sensed the right energy. Venn’s breath caught. “They’re—spelling.” Quinn watched the newly formed line. The letters crawled into a phrase she didn’t want to read aloud in her head. Her eyes tracked from the phrase to the green dust arc on the concrete and to the seam again. The logic tightened into a single shape. “Eva,” Quinn said suddenly, and the name left her mouth like a rule. Venn blinked. “What?” Quinn turned to him with the compass still in her hands. “Your report. Did you mention anyone else on the site?” “No one,” Venn said. Quinn’s jaw set. “No one you saw.” A uniform officer, pale, held up a phone with a shaking hand. “Detective Quinn. Your colleague—Detective—left a message. Earlier. Before you came down.” Quinn took the phone from him. The screen showed a text thread with one number. She didn’t open it yet. She felt the message in her bones before she read it, because the station had started responding to things it recognised. Venn leaned in. “What does it say?” Quinn stared at the screen. Her thumb hovered above the message preview. Then the tapping stopped. Every scrap of paper on the platform settled flat again, like an animal returning to stillness. The lamp flickered once, then stabilised into a steady glow that made the chalk ring look too bright. Quinn finally opened the message. The text wasn’t long. It pointed her attention past the body, past the seam, toward something she hadn’t seen because she’d been focused on the wrong wrongness. A bone token sat beside one of the evidence bags, half under the platform’s edge where the shadows pooled. It hadn’t been in Quinn’s first sweep. It hadn’t been near enough for the lamp to catch. Now it sat in plain sight, pale and matte, with a notch carved for a purpose. A Veil Market entryRequirement. Quinn’s throat tightened. She stared at the bone token, then at Venn. “You didn’t ask how we got access,” she said. Venn’s face went blank. “We didn’t.” Quinn picked up the bone token with the tip of her glove. It didn’t feel dusty. It felt handled. Her thumb turned it, and a faint etched mark caught the light—an artisan stamp shape that matched nothing on police inventory labels. Venn’s voice came out rough. “So you think the clique—” Quinn cut him off. “I think the case didn’t end. It relocated.” She held the bone token up beside the compass. The compass needle shifted, just a hair, like it approved of the match. Quinn stepped closer to the chalk ring again and looked down at the chalk dust line. She didn’t touch it. She didn’t need to. The arc now pointed not only to the seam, but to the exact spot where the body’s throat cut faced the platform. The cut faced the seam. The person had died with their intention aligned toward a return point. Quinn’s voice stayed controlled, but the steadiness carried edge now. “Someone brought them here because the rift wanted a witness. They didn’t remove blood. They removed the evidence of violence. They left the action itself.” Venn swallowed hard. “Then what do we do?” Quinn lifted the compass and angled it toward the seam until the needle aligned precisely. The brass casing sat heavy in her hands. The sigils looked darker under the lamp, as if they drank the light. She didn’t cross the chalk ring. She didn’t need to. She scanned the platform edges for anything that could move the story along—tools, footprints, a trace someone had missed while they stared at the body. Her eyes found it at the base of the pillar closest to the seam: a faint indentation in the tile, like a heel mark that had pressed into soft matter and then rebounded. In that indentation, a thin sliver of brass caught the light. Quinn crouched, reached for it, and pinched it free carefully. She held it up. It wasn’t a fragment of the compass. It looked like a hinge piece, small, delicate, with sigils etched along the edge. A part of a mechanism. Venn’s breath came in fast. “What is it?” Quinn turned it in her glove, aligning it with the seam’s light-bend. The sigils on the sliver mirrored the protective patterns on the compass casing. “This station wasn’t abandoned,” Quinn said. “It moved people through it. It used pieces like this to open and close.” Her phone buzzed again in her hand. A new message arrived, same sender. Quinn looked at Venn instead of reading it yet, because she needed to hear his next words to know if the scene had started to chase her. Venn’s eyes stayed on the seam. His voice shook, but he tried to keep it firm. “Quinn, don’t.” Quinn brought her gaze back to the seam. The chalk ring’s green dust line quivered, as if something on the other side had leaned closer. Then the seam exhaled a thin breath of cold air that carried ink smell and old paper. The compass needle snapped toward the seam as if tugged by a hand only it could feel. Quinn didn’t step forward. She didn’t put the sliver back. She read the new message on her phone while the station listened, while Venn stood rigid, while the needle insisted. And the words on the screen named the rift location beneath Camden with a precision that didn’t belong to anyone who’d guessed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Quinn leaned slightly [slightly]"
1"Venn said quickly [quickly]"
2"Venn said again [again]"
3"Quinn said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences104
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.077
82.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4045
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count6
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"quickly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"suddenly"
4"precisely"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4045
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"jaw clenched"
count2
3
word"standard"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count4
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count2
12
word"calculate"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"aligned"
count2
15
word"scanned"
count1
16
word"quivered"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"jaw clenched"
3"standard"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"glint"
7"tension"
8"traced"
9"pulse"
10"stomach"
11"trembled"
12"calculate"
13"rhythmic"
14"aligned"
15"scanned"
16"quivered"
17"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences370
matches
0"d with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences370
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"tried to"
2"started to"
3"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences443
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4031
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions44
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions158
wordCount3243
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn90
Tube1
Camden2
Detective2
Sergeant1
Malcolm1
Venn56
English1
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Malcolm"
4"Venn"
5"Morris"
places
0"English"
globalScore0.112
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences230
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like standard pamphlet type until"
1"looked like a join in the world"
2"not quite grabbing her arm"
3"looked like a hinge piece, small, delicat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords0.744
wordCount4031
matches
0"not by wind, but by resistance"
1"not exactly at the seam, but slightly past it, like the seam hid something deeper behind"
2"not only to the seam, but to the exact spot"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences443
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs219
mean18.41
std13.38
cv0.727
sampleLengths
053
161
22
342
450
548
661
712
84
926
1048
119
125
1312
1443
153
1619
1718
184
1924
2019
218
2238
237
2418
2541
2647
276
2849
295
3031
3114
3218
333
3410
3519
367
379
3822
3926
4041
415
4235
4340
4412
4526
464
4720
4811
4916
98.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences370
matches
0"been flung"
1"been covered"
2"been wiped"
3"been lit"
4"been dropped"
5"been held"
6"been focused"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs621
matches
0"were deciding"
1"weren’t dragging"
2"was hunting"
65.46% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences443
ratio0.027
matches
0"The station held silence the way a fist held fingers—tight, controlled."
1"Someone had tried to fold it away from the face and failed; the edges tugged back, not by wind, but by resistance."
2"A motion caught her eye—small, careful."
3"Letters came back into focus—addresses, dates, and a phrase repeated at odd intervals."
4"“Breaks,” Venn repeated, and there it was—his first real doubt."
5"Quinn watched the officer’s hands; he didn’t look at the bag again."
6"She didn’t touch the dust; she observed the way it sat on the concrete."
7"Not physically—everything was still where it belonged—but the arrangement felt wrong."
8"Venn’s eyes tracked the needle movement, and she watched him lose control of his own face—colour draining from his cheeks."
9"She remembered DS Morris—how he’d looked at a case and insisted the evidence behaved like it had intentions."
10"Her thumb turned it, and a faint etched mark caught the light—an artisan stamp shape that matched nothing on police inventory labels."
11"She scanned the platform edges for anything that could move the story along—tools, footprints, a trace someone had missed while they stared at the body."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2493
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same dull green dust"
adverbCount97
adverbRatio0.03890894504612916
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.008824709185720016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences443
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences443
mean9.1
std5.94
cv0.652
sampleLengths
012
15
214
322
411
518
632
72
816
911
102
113
1210
1320
1413
1517
1611
1710
1811
1916
2021
2113
2211
2316
245
257
264
276
289
2911
307
3119
3222
335
344
355
365
377
3816
397
406
4114
422
431
448
4511
464
475
489
494
41.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.17607223476297967
totalSentences443
uniqueOpeners78
50.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences328
matches
0"Only the distant drip of"
1"Then she saw the shift."
2"Then locked, pointing not exactly"
3"Then the tapping stopped."
4"Then the seam exhaled a"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount90
totalSentences328
matches
0"It carried that damp, old-stone"
1"It came from the way"
2"He leaned into the light"
3"She looked at the chalk"
4"His hand hovered over the"
5"He kept his distance like"
6"She didn’t cross it."
7"She’d seen mould ruin scenes."
8"She’d never seen it arrange"
9"His eyes carried a kind"
10"She watched him anyway."
11"He kept glancing at the"
12"It looked etched into them."
13"She could tell it wasn’t"
14"It was from something thin"
15"She turned toward the body."
16"She didn’t need to."
17"It ran in a straight"
18"He glanced toward the chalk"
19"Her jawline stayed sharp, her"
ratio0.274
17.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount290
totalSentences328
matches
0"Rain had worried the streets"
1"It carried that damp, old-stone"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through"
3"The posters that had once"
4"A strip of emergency lighting"
5"Someone had moved a cluster"
6"Quinn’s boots struck loose grit"
7"The station held silence the"
8"A thin chalk ring sat"
9"Bits of paper lay scattered"
10"Quinn lifted her worn leather"
11"The face caught a little"
12"Military precision came from how"
13"It came from the way"
14"Detective Sergeant Malcolm Venn stood"
15"He leaned into the light"
16"Quinn didn’t look at him."
17"She looked at the chalk"
18"Venn gestured toward the far"
19"His hand hovered over the"
ratio0.884
30.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences328
matches
0"Now, one corner lifted as"
1"Now it sat in plain"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences143
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It carried that damp, old-stone smell that lived in tunnels and refused fresh air."
1"Verdigris glittered under her light, forming a faint arc that pointed back to the chalk ring and then to the compass."
2"She remembered the day after, when people described him as though he had been a story that walked away from them."
3"The lamp flickered once, then stabilised into a steady glow that made the chalk ring look too bright."
4"Her thumb turned it, and a faint etched mark caught the light—an artisan stamp shape that matched nothing on police inventory labels."
5"Her eyes found it at the base of the pillar closest to the seam: a faint indentation in the tile, like a heel mark that had pressed into soft matter and then re…"
6"The chalk ring’s green dust line quivered, as if something on the other side had leaned closer."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Venn said again, harsher"
1"Quinn said suddenly, and the name left her mouth like a rule"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags29
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Venn repeated (repeat)"
1"Venn murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences104
tagDensity0.279
leniency0.558
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.058
84.6596%