| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "gloved fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.271 | | leniency | 0.542 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 89.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1472 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1472 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "shattered" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1458 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "dared" | | 1 | "ma chérie" | | 2 | "Months." | | 3 | "hate" | | 4 | "petite voyante" | | 5 | "secured" | | 6 | "dickhead" | | 7 | "afraid" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 15 | | Lucien | 16 | | One | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Evan | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "One" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Moreau" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.74 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1458 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 21.76 | | std | 16.06 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker had been silent; Lucien didn’t knock like a guest." | | 1 | "Eva’s flat was supposed to be sanctuary—three deadbolts, motion lights, a flatmate who could bench-press a refrigerator." | | 2 | "She yanked the chain, threw the door, and there he stood—tall, tailored, the charcoal suit cutting a shadow along Brick Lane’s peeling brickwork." | | 3 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with predatory focus." | | 4 | "The scent of bergamot and gun oil drifted in with him—always bergamot, always something lethal underneath." | | 5 | "She glimpsed the fire escape outside—rusted ladder, loose rungs, Eva’s blankets still pegged out from thatgoblin nonsense weeks ago." | | 6 | "“Still impulsive.” His gloved fingers closed around her wrist—light, almost gentle." | | 7 | "He held it out—wilted, slightly crushed where her palm had gripped the paper." | | 8 | "She remembered the lighter—brass, engraved with a serpent coiled around a dagger." | | 9 | "Eva’s eyes flicked from the broken cane to the rose—already shedding petals on the floor." | | 10 | "Eva’s fire escape ladder—usually kept retracted for “goblin insurance”." | | 11 | "A boot heel struck the pane once—twice—like a hammer." | | 12 | "The tall one stepped forward, fingers twitching at his wrist—tattoos glowing faintly in the dark." |
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| 90.88% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1071 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.05042016806722689 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006535947712418301 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 9.17 | | std | 6.51 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 61.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4025157232704403 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 64 | |
| 89.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the tabby knew." | | 1 | "Slowly, she slid the bolt" | | 2 | "Then he disappeared down the" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 66.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath lodged in her" | | 1 | "He knocked like a summons." | | 2 | "She had one hand on" | | 3 | "His words slithered through the" | | 4 | "She flinched, wrist already hovering" | | 5 | "She covered her mouth." | | 6 | "He always knew." | | 7 | "His amusement threaded through the" | | 8 | "Her fingers trembled around the" | | 9 | "She yanked the chain, threw" | | 10 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—locked" | | 11 | "They always had." | | 12 | "He knew she hated the" | | 13 | "He always teased her with" | | 14 | "She stepped back, heels scuffing" | | 15 | "He didn’t wait for invitation." | | 16 | "She glimpsed the fire escape" | | 17 | "She hadn’t kicked it up" | | 18 | "he murmured, gaze sweeping the" | | 19 | "Her gut dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.384 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung wide before" | | 1 | "Her breath lodged in her" | | 2 | "The brass knocker had been" | | 3 | "He knocked like a summons." | | 4 | "She had one hand on" | | 5 | "His words slithered through the" | | 6 | "She flinched, wrist already hovering" | | 7 | "Eva’s flat was supposed to" | | 8 | "She covered her mouth." | | 9 | "Ptolemy’s tawny eyes flashed from" | | 10 | "He always knew." | | 11 | "His amusement threaded through the" | | 12 | "Her fingers trembled around the" | | 13 | "Rage flared white-hot." | | 14 | "She yanked the chain, threw" | | 15 | "Platinum hair slicked back, catching" | | 16 | "His eyes—one amber, one black—locked" | | 17 | "They always had." | | 18 | "The name sliced her." | | 19 | "He knew she hated the" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva’s flat was supposed to be sanctuary—three deadbolts, motion lights, a flatmate who could bench-press a refrigerator." | | 1 | "Lucien straightened, dusting off his suit sleeve as if he were the one unwelcome." | | 2 | "Lucie grabbed Rory’s free hand and yanked her toward the narrow metal stairs that led to the loft hatch." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he murmured, gaze sweeping the room like he owned it," | | 1 | "Eva’s voice dropped, tone changed" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she lied (lie)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 3 | "Eva snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |